00:27 caned: ey manj
00:28 caned: got any maps u wanna do m4m on
00:28 caned: lookin for good mods :d
00:28 kwk: uhh if you want to have a try at
00:28 *kwk is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1085673 yuikonnu - Uchouten Vivace]
00:28 caned: cool
00:28 *caned is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1145009 RD-Sounds (Meramipop) - Wind God [Brave Girl]]
00:28 kwk: but i dont think you like this style xd
00:28 caned: i'll take a look
00:33 caned: pretty set
00:33 caned: i can try to mod it but i don't think i can do such a good job
00:34 caned: i will give it a shot though
00:34 kwk: kk
00:34 kwk: i'll get around to yours when i get bored of mapping this
00:35 caned: oki
00:47 kwk: do u want to irc it since im free now
00:48 caned: irc?
00:48 kwk: this chat
00:49 caned: sure
00:50 kwk: lmk when ur ready
00:51 caned: aaa
00:51 caned: i choked that song for the 40th time
00:51 caned: guess i'm ready
00:51 kwk: well firstly
00:51 kwk: ctrl+shift+a
00:52 kwk: delete the first green line and shift volume using the red line
00:53 kwk: wrong sampleset as well?
00:54 kwk: 05:20:521 - volume is different between red/green
00:54 caned: i thought it sounded better with soft samples
00:54 kwk: you hve it on normal
00:54 kwk: in the first section
00:54 kwk: besides custom hitsounds pls
00:54 caned: oh right
00:54 kwk: bbbbb.png delete this too
00:55 kwk: and combo colors
00:55 kwk: and maybe countdown
00:56 kwk: metadata should be Meramipop-Fujin[Brave Girl]
00:57 caned: where
00:57 caned: that's the artist?
00:57 caned: or the romanised title
00:57 kwk: Meramipop should be artist
00:58 kwk: romanised title should be Fujin [Brave Girl]
00:58 kwk: usually singer is artist and u put circle in tags
00:58 caned: ok
00:58 kwk: and i think that should be all the housekeeping done
01:02 kwk: 00:15:339 - in this section i think it plays better if you prioritise the beat when the chord is played over the vocals
01:02 kwk: eg 00:15:339 (1,2) -
01:03 kwk: i would change the rhythm to
http://puu.sh/sDN7Z/d74724bbef.png01:04 kwk: 00:14:051 (1,2) - this bit here i think its better to change have the slider where (1) is and skip over the vocals
01:04 kwk: to have the slider*
01:05 kwk: like the emphasis doesnt seem correct with what you have atm
01:08 caned: ok cool
01:08 caned: changed the part at 15 secs to the rhythm u suggested
01:09 kwk: it pops up later in the same section so make sure its consistent
01:09 caned: 00:14:051 (1,2) -
01:09 caned: keeping this the same
01:09 caned: it's like the crash cymbal into the singing
01:09 caned: makes sense to me anyway
01:10 kwk: its cause of ur hitsounding thats theres a crash in the first place;;
01:11 caned: xd
01:11 kwk: 00:40:002 (7) - remove repeat and move to the white tick
01:12 kwk: i wouldnt change the rhythm by having a clickable there
01:13 kwk: 00:39:818 (6) - maybe better if u change this to a 1/1 slider
01:15 kwk: 00:45:339 (2,3) - you sure you dont want to split these into two notes each instead?
01:15 kwk: i think it fits vocals a lot better
01:17 caned: ye that;s cool
01:18 kwk: 01:01:168 (1,2,1) - your following vocal here
01:18 kwk: 01:03:376 - but u skip this
01:19 kwk: 01:04:112 - i would switch back to 1.2x here
01:20 kwk: 01:06:137 (4) - 1/2 slider here and delete the next note
01:20 kwk: 01:06:689 (6) - 2 notes here instead
01:20 kwk: follows vocal better
01:21 kwk: since that seems to be what ur mapping to
01:21 kwk: like just in general but when your mapping decide on what you want to prioritise
01:22 kwk: seems like your switching between following the vocal/drums a bit
01:23 kwk: 01:09:082 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm here
01:24 kwk: 01:14:419 (1,2,3,4) - i think you can improve aesthetics here
01:25 kwk: 01:20:309 (1) - flows better off the previous pattern if you ctrl+g
01:26 kwk: 01:29:879 (5,1) - im suprised that this is your biggest jump so far
01:27 caned: oh ye
01:27 caned: moved the 5
01:27 caned: to just below the 2
01:28 kwk: going back a bit cause apparently i zoned out here
01:28 kwk: 00:53:438 (6) - NC here instead
01:28 kwk: 00:53:806 (2) - i would split this into two notes
01:30 kwk: 01:37:793 (1,2) - same thing here as in previous section
01:30 kwk: 01:43:683 (1) - dont skip this white tick
01:30 caned: ye i already changed that while changin the other one
01:31 caned: 02:02:272 (6) -
01:31 caned: changed this too
01:32 caned: you see a back/forth slider here but changed like previous section
01:32 kwk: 01:48:284 - i think this section might be cool if you follow the guitar
01:33 kwk: so you can do 01:49:020 (3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm here
01:34 kwk: and 01:50:309 (8) - repeat here instead
01:35 kwk: 01:51:229 (1,2) - repeat here maybe
01:35 caned: hold
01:35 caned: i'm stickin to following the vocals here
01:36 caned: i can't wrap my head around following the guitar in this section
01:36 kwk: up to you
01:36 caned: i don't think it'd fit with the rest of the map anyway
01:36 caned: i gave it a go but it sounds weird to me
01:36 kwk: 01:52:517 (1) - 1/2 slider here and a note at 01:52:885 -
01:38 kwk: you can try to use triples to help blend the sounds together
01:38 kwk: for example here
01:38 kwk: 01:55:462 (5) -
01:39 kwk:
http://puu.sh/sDOvR/17176c9986.png01:39 kwk: this rhythm
01:39 kwk: instead of 01:55:278 (4,5,6,7) -
01:40 kwk: since you skip over some rather significant beats
01:40 kwk: with the sliders you have atm
01:40 kwk: 01:57:119 (1) - better if u split this into 3 notes
01:41 kwk: so you can add emphasis on vocals
01:42 caned: ok
01:43 kwk:
http://puu.sh/sDODu/7463eab517.png this rhythm is better i think
01:43 kwk: 01:57:119 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:44 kwk: 02:10:922 (7) - nc here
01:45 caned: oh ye
01:48 kwk: 03:35:769 (1,2) - dont use extended sliders when u skip over significant beats
01:48 kwk: i would 1/2 slider + a note on the blue tick
01:50 kwk: 03:56:014 (4) - 1/2 slider works better here i think
01:51 kwk: i dont think the note quite reflects the guitar properly
01:53 caned: nice
01:53 caned: that's actually way better
01:53 kwk: 04:07:241 significant beat here
01:55 kwk: 04:16:996 (4) - maybe remove repeat and have a 1/4 slider where repeat was
02:00 kwk: 04:21:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this rhythm
http://puu.sh/sDPjx/f43b3fbe1e.png02:00 kwk: it feels like a lot of your triples are just randomly placed
02:06 kwk: 05:13:683 (3) - i would 1/2 slider here and instead and reduce spacing on the last bit tbh
02:06 kwk: oh god theres shit after the spinner
02:07 caned: xd
02:07 kwk: 05:25:993 note here since ur following vocals in this section
02:08 kwk: 05:30:352 (1) - i would 1/1 slider here instead and have another 1/1 slider after it
02:09 caned: done
02:10 kwk: 05:32:497 (1) - i would just stick to following vocals here
02:10 kwk: dont jump between what your following in the same sections
02:10 kwk: you will have to time that orz
02:10 kwk: 05:34:640 - spinner start here instead
02:10 caned: ><
02:11 kwk: and thats everything for rhythm