SCREEN mode - Reason Living (TV Size)

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MisakiAN

Lefia wrote:

Hi from my queue

[General]
- buat ukuran filenya terlalu besar, coba kecilin kapasitas videonya saya akan mencoba edit lagi videonya..g pandai ngedit :'u tapi..saya akan berusaha
- widescreen supportnya dimatiin karena widescreen support dipakai saat ada storyboard doang Okay
- buat timing point bakal banyak perubahan :
o BPM 164 offsetnya 218
o BPM 183 offsetnya 6071 Menurut saya,ketukannya jadi sedikit lebih telat..saya pikirkan dulu
Gak perlu make timing point lain (bagusnya ngubahnya pas siap nyelesain mod yang dibawah biar gak repot)

[Hard]

00:11:295 (1,2) bagusnya diganti sama 1/1 & circle sih soalnya kalau dua 1/2 slider kurang masuk ke lagunya, lagian itu juga masih intro jadi masih calm gitu Baiklah
00:12:606 (1,2) ^ ^
00:21:786 (1,2) ^ ^
00:13:917 (1,2,3) kalau emang aku rokemendasikan buat ganti, karena ritme disini emang udah beda, coba tukar sama dua 1/1 slider & circle atau kalau bingung bisa lihat ini biar lebih masuk juga ke vocalnya okay
00:23:098 (1,2,3,4) gak cocok sama ritmenya, gimana kalau gini ini saya g ingin mengubah yg disini, karena bagian sini 00:23:120 - ada strong beat di setiap white tick nya
kalau disini 00:30:333 (3,4,5) - sepertinya udah cukup bagus buat saya,karena slider pertama di 1/1 di tick putih kemudian 1/1 di tick merah,tapi saya g mau mengubah 00:31:316 (5) - menjadi circle karena ada vokal yg panjang disini

01:00:966 tambahin cirlce disini karena udah satu kata sama yang diawal kiai akan saya tambahkan

Saran buat kiainya divariasikan ritmenya biar playernya gak bosen
akan saya usahakan
yang lainnya udah bagus


Good Luck!
Thanks for your mod~ :)
JeirYagtama
Yo
00:10:803 (2,1) - Fix OVerlap
00:44:573 (2,3,4,5,1) - somehow star pattern doesnt look perfect imo
00:55:884 (1,2) - blanket circle slightly off
00:55:884 (1,5) - - hmmm since im a bit nitpicky at overlaps just slightly fix it for neatness
01:13:425 (2,4) - overlap 2 with the slider end of 4

Welp cant mod the other diffs cos I suk
Goodluck
Topic Starter
MisakiAN

JeirYagtama wrote:

Yo
00:10:803 (2,1) - Fix OVerlap FIx
00:44:573 (2,3,4,5,1) - somehow star pattern doesnt look perfect imo too lazy at making it in polygon tool :'u but Fixed
00:55:884 (1,2) - blanket circle slightly off Fix
00:55:884 (1,5) - - hmmm since im a bit nitpicky at overlaps just slightly fix it for neatness Fix
01:13:425 (2,4) - overlap 2 with the slider end of 4 Fix too

Welp cant mod the other diffs cos I suk its okay
Goodluck
Thanks for your mod~
Fursum
Hello from my queue.

Here are my first tries on some difficulties. (Did not try low diff) I left a note on the filename that shows which one was my first difficulty, and so on.

Sorry for the short mod, solid map, good luck on ranking!

[arknes_33's Easy]

00:21:131 (3,1) - This blanket is a little off. Polish.

00:21:786 (1,2) - ^

00:55:885 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]

00:45:720 (2) - I don't know if you need a red dot on this slider. It looks off because of it.

[Insane]

00:00:204 (1,2) - Missed a blanket opportunity.

00:05:325 (2,1) - ^

00:24:409 (1) - Coming with the circular momentum, I was expecting the sliders head would be on its end. Ctrl-G in short :p
pinataman
Hi. Here from my queue. Hope this helps!

[Insane]

00:10:640 (1,2) – These notes in the map have very different emphasis on them. When I see the spacing into (1), I see that it's not emphasized all that much, so I use that as a baseline to judge the next note. This makes me feel like (2) couldn't be a ½ note after (1) since that defies the baseline set up from the (1) note. So try doing ctrl + G on these notes (maybe that becomes a bit too big, but you get the idea, just nerf that a bit.)

00:16:868 (2,4) – This isn't really a blanket because the (2) slider doesn't have enough cruve to it, where as something like this will make the design stand out more: http://puu.sh/vywyy/090eaf2eaf.jpg

00:17:852 (1,2,3) – Would look nicer if the visual spacing between these guys were the same, i.e, (2,1) should be the same DS as (1,3) like: http://puu.sh/vywMW/7ca12510c8.jpg

00:31:294 (5,6,7,1) – Try to make the visual spacing between these the same: http://puu.sh/vywRy/9f754673b9.jpg

00:40:966 (4,5,1) – I feel very doubtful today, so I feel like I shouldn't post this, but honest feedback is better than apathy. The angle between (4,5,1) is pretty linear, and imo, that doesn't emphasize the (5) note all that well and plays kind of weird. A stronger angle might offer a more pronounced flow, so try stacking (1) on 00:39:983 (1) – like: http://puu.sh/vyxeC/ebded57bca.jpg

01:07:687 (1,2) – blanket can be better

[Hard]

00:22:442 (5,2) – Overlap looks bad. Try moving (5) here-ish: http://puu.sh/vyxxF/f1214b598e.jpg
00:47:032 (5,1) - ^ . Just blanket these.

00:50:310 (4) – why not hitsound this like you did 00:42:442 (7) – or 00:35:065 (2) -

01:01:130 (1,3) – you can get this to blanket: http://puu.sh/vyxM3/506398b8aa.jpg . Do ctrl + G on (1). Then rotate slider by selection center 13 degrees. Do the same thing for the (2) slider to keep the symmetry.

[Yahuri's Existential Crisis]

00:24:409 (1) – The loop at the end can be more circular or something.

01:19:491 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) – This felt like it could use a moment of rest to let certain notes have more emphasis. So what I'm trying to get at is something like this: http://puu.sh/vyyzc/bfa20c44d5.jpg . By not stacking (1,3), you are able to make the note into (3) more restful to allow more of the jump be on to the strong cymbals at (4) etc.

Good luck!
Yahuri

pinataman wrote:

Hi. Here from my queue. Hope this helps!
[Yahuri's Existential Crisis]

00:24:409 (1) – The loop at the end can be more circular or something. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7940464 did this
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01:19:491 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) – This felt like it could use a moment of rest to let certain notes have more emphasis. So what I'm trying to get at is something like this: http://puu.sh/vyyzc/bfa20c44d5.jpg . By not stacking (1,3), you are able to make the note into (3) more restful to allow more of the jump be on to the strong cymbals at (4) etc. yeah, the jumps into the regular claps could be lower. but i think the pattern you suggested doesnt work that well here since i don't have any patterns visually similar to it except for here 00:48:015 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i've ctrl+g'd all of the sliders instead.

Good luck!
Thanks!
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318,222,38999,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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251,317,44901,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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152,260,58507,6,0,P|191:293|240:310,1,103.499996841431,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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44,253,59654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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216,192,61130,6,0,P|228:117|295:194,1,230,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,61622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,232,61786,1,2,0:0:0:0:
387,364,61950,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,84,62114,2,0,P|302:134|297:191,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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166,150,63097,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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388,366,64573,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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429,234,65227,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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259,22,68834,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,104,71539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,71622,6,0,P|305:45|365:41,1,115,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,170,71950,2,8,P|218:116|257:71,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,85,72278,1,2,0:0:0:0:
417,219,72442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
233,277,72605,2,8,P|206:227|202:167,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,354,72933,5,6,0:0:0:0:
417,219,73097,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,378,73261,2,8,P|245:332|233:274,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,219,73589,1,2,0:0:0:0:
382,354,73753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,176,73917,2,8,P|245:220|233:278,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,86,74245,5,6,0:0:0:0:
318,51,74409,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,230,74573,2,8,P|177:264|235:276,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,127,74901,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,92,75064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
334,230,75228,2,8,P|289:264|231:276,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,1,75556,5,6,0:0:0:0:
103,159,75720,1,2,0:0:0:0:
259,363,75884,2,0,P|344:366|414:319,1,172.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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463,193,76375,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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398,79,76704,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,67,76786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,83343,12,0,88671,0:0:0:0:


I've remapped the first set of kiai
second set of kiai 01:01:130 - uses mostly radial symmetry and lots of slidertail stacks. this demonstrates the discovery of "reason for living", by focusing on certain locations on the grid for each pattern, having a clear destination (the slidertail stacks)
first set of kiai 00:11:295 - avoids the patterns i used in the second set of kiai. there arent super obvious center points, so its less predictable
basically its having a clear purpose in life (second kiai) vs. wandering around aimlessly (first kiai)
00:19:163 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - i will need to fix this later tho lmao
everything else - just follows my "regular" mapping style i guess, nothing specific
Topic Starter
MisakiAN

Fursum012 wrote:

Hello from my queue.

Here are my first tries on some difficulties. (Did not try low diff) I left a note on the filename that shows which one was my first difficulty, and so on.

Sorry for the short mod, solid map, good luck on ranking!

[Hard]

00:45:720 (2) - I don't know if you need a red dot on this slider. It looks off because of it. i want to make the end go straight, :\

[Insane]

00:00:204 (1,2) - Missed a blanket opportunity. dont want to make this blanked X'd

00:05:325 (2,1) - ^ ^

00:24:409 (1) - Coming with the circular momentum, I was expecting the sliders head would be on its end. Ctrl-G in short :p Okay~
Thank you :D
Topic Starter
MisakiAN

pinataman wrote:

Hi. Here from my queue. Hope this helps!

[Insane]

00:10:640 (1,2) – These notes in the map have very different emphasis on them. When I see the spacing into (1), I see that it's not emphasized all that much, so I use that as a baseline to judge the next note. This makes me feel like (2) couldn't be a ½ note after (1) since that defies the baseline set up from the (1) note. So try doing ctrl + G on these notes (maybe that becomes a bit too big, but you get the idea, just nerf that a bit.) okay i get it.:)

00:16:868 (2,4) – This isn't really a blanket because the (2) slider doesn't have enough cruve to it, where as something like this will make the design stand out more: http://puu.sh/vywyy/090eaf2eaf.jpg fix blanked

00:17:852 (1,2,3) – Would look nicer if the visual spacing between these guys were the same, i.e, (2,1) should be the same DS as (1,3) like: http://puu.sh/vywMW/7ca12510c8.jpg i dont really get it,but it looks fine for me.i try to fix it

00:31:294 (5,6,7,1) – Try to make the visual spacing between these the same: http://puu.sh/vywRy/9f754673b9.jpg Okay

00:40:966 (4,5,1) – I feel very doubtful today, so I feel like I shouldn't post this, but honest feedback is better than apathy. The angle between (4,5,1) is pretty linear, and imo, that doesn't emphasize the (5) note all that well and plays kind of weird. A stronger angle might offer a more pronounced flow, so try stacking (1) on 00:39:983 (1) – like: http://puu.sh/vyxeC/ebded57bca.jpg after i fix it,the flow looks comfortable.So YES ^^
01:07:687 (1,2) – blanket can be better Okay then

[Hard]

00:22:442 (5,2) – Overlap looks bad. Try moving (5) here-ish: http://puu.sh/vyxxF/f1214b598e.jpg Fix
00:47:032 (5,1) - ^ . Just blanket these. Okay

00:50:310 (4) – why not hitsound this like you did 00:42:442 (7) – or 00:35:065 (2) - whops i forgot ;-;

01:01:130 (1,3) – you can get this to blanket: http://puu.sh/vyxM3/506398b8aa.jpg . Do ctrl + G on (1). Then rotate slider by selection center 13 degrees. Do the same thing for the (2) slider to keep the symmetry. Okay~ yeah,it looks more symmetrycal xd


Good luck!
Thank you for your mod~ :)
Yahuri
head bandages and patch missing from Insane bg

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392,320,59573,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,320,59655,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,320,59737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,64,59819,1,12,0:0:0:0:
392,64,60638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,64,60720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,60802,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61130,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,64,61293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,61457,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,61785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,62113,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,62441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,62605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,62769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,63097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,63425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,63752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,64080,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,64736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,65064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,65392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,65556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,65638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,65720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,65802,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,65884,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,65966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,66048,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,66129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,66212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,66293,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66375,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,64,66539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,66703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,67031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,67195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,67359,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,67687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,67851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,68015,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,68179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,68261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,68343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,68425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,68507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,68589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,68670,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,68752,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,68834,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,68998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69162,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,64,69326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,69408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,69490,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69654,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,64,69818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,69900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,69982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70146,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,64,70310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,70392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,70474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70638,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,64,70802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,70966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,71048,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,71130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,71211,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,71293,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,71375,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,71457,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,71539,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71622,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,64,71785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,71949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,72277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,72441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,72605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,72933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,73097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,73261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,73589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,73753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,73917,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,74244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,74408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,74572,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,75064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,75228,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,75556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,75720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,75884,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,76048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,76130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,76212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,76294,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,76376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,76540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,76621,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,320,76703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,76867,5,12,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,77195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,77851,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,78179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,78507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,83261,1,12,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
MisakiAN

Yahuri wrote:

head bandages and patch missing from Insane bg
The bandage is flying behind dazai =w=
I forgot the patch ._.
Gonna fix that
Mitkoff
Hello
Nm from my q
sry for my English.... (

[General]
  1. BG DedZai.jpg unused file


[arknes_33's Easy]
  1. 00:12:934 (2) - fix spacing
  2. 00:15:885 (4,2) - fix stack, after check 00:18:180 (2,2) - too
  3. 00:14:573 (2,1) - ^
  4. 00:21:131 (3,1) - ds again jumps higher , also might fix 00:21:131 (3,1) - blanket
  5. 00:36:049 (1,1) - ds 00:38:835 (2) -
  6. 00:42:442 (2,3) - You might stack it, as You did before
  7. 00:48:016 (1,4) - will be great if You can avoid touching
  8. 00:55:228 (3) - better avoid this kind of overlaps in easy, because its hard to read for newbs, if You wish overlaps might make half overlap on 00:55:556 (4) - like http://puu.sh/vFoOe.jpg . It's will support your half overlap concept a bit better.
  9. 00:55:556 (4,2) - If You applied to previous suggestion , might stack http://puu.sh/vFoTS.jpg
  10. 01:06:376 (1,4) - maybe also avoid this overlap and replace it with 01:06:376 (1,1) - stack , cause it's a bit away from your usual overlaps
  11. 01:08:999 (1) - 2 dots enough http://puu.sh/vFp2g.jpg also fix ds, 0.85 now
    Unusuall easy, i like it


[Mir's Normal]
  1. 00:32:934 (2) - imo a bit too much, for what making more intense rhythm? And also You did problem with reading on swapping rhythms polarity for 3 objects then swap back to usual 1/1 gap again... Make no sense for me. Suggestion: make simply 1 slider https://puu.sh/vFpQy.jpg
  2. 00:37:032 (4,1) - might use 5 SL since visible by AR zero stacks looks poorly in low diffs (Hard have SL 7 or smthing)


[Hard]
  1. 00:13:590 (4,1) - blanket?
  2. 00:17:852 (1) - 1.15 as before?
  3. 00:32:114 (1,2) - questionable spacing if considering on 00:32:770 (3,4) - like same sounded claps with different spacing
  4. 00:51:786 (4) - make silence (okay i hear it) really low beat clicable not really good idea... Suggestions: https://puu.sh/vFs3K.jpg or https://puu.sh/vFs7D.jpg closer to instrumets (it's about rhythm not pattering)
  5. 00:53:261 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - instruments there kinda too strong, i suggest make rhythm more closer to it. i'd imagine https://puu.sh/vFskr.jpg for 00:53:917 (3,3) - making extra emphasis on these beats as most hyped ones (by 00:54:081 - silence this one)
  6. 01:12:769 (4) - ds too high on weak beat , it kinda strange after common attention for 01:08:671 (7) - strong beat or 01:14:081 (4) -
  7. Btw ds 01:04:901 (4) - strange too, hmm at least make all of them consistent pls.
  8. 01:14:081 (4,3) - avoid if possible (overlap) it's inconsistent with diff
  9. 01:14:573 (2,1) - stack
  10. 01:14:245 (1,4) - ^


[Shira's Light Insane]
  1. 00:08:671 (1,2,3) - try code https://puu.sh/vFtKm.jpg
    412,291,8671,6,0,B|365:255|312:268|312:268|408:251|434:210|433:6|300:97|246:69|61:141|315:218|319:304|254:317|88:366|69:295|85:169|152:177,1,796.249975700379,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:13:262 (3) - better avoid it . it's too much off screen.
  3. 00:50:392 (5,1) - a bit too high ds, You have 4.0 in kiai and 4,5 here :o imo
  4. 01:15:556 (1,2) - why You dnd't map vocal as before? it feels inconsistent
  5. 01:22:605 (2) - i guess buff ds here will be good as it's really strong beat http://puu.sh/vFuZw.jpg


[Insane]
  1. 00:14:081 (2,3) - 00:15:065 (4,2) - 00:23:754 (1,1) - stacks
  2. 00:24:409 (1) - ds
    btw https://puu.sh/vFw8A.jpg
    362,118,24409,6,0,B|310:52|310:52|304:128|304:128|253:129|220:149|220:149|217:172|217:172|185:213|92:213|92:213|115:221|115:221|133:246|133:246|197:269|239:248|239:248|263:350|263:350|319:366|356:351|375:311,1,805,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:43:097 (2,4,5) - make same ds and angles 00:43:097 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - https://puu.sh/vFwk4.jpg also on 1 line without overlaps
  4. 00:45:228 (1,2) - stack?
  5. 00:45:228 (1,2,3,6) - or overlaps https://puu.sh/vFwq6.jpg for consistency
  6. 00:51:130 (2,4) - if it's supose to be so it's bad idea cause fully overlaps pretty bad for watching...
  7. 00:55:884 (1,2,3) - sinse it's calm part maybe >_> http://puu.sh/vFwCi.jpg
  8. 00:57:032 (4,5,6) - make isosceles triangle pls
  9. 01:02:442 (1,2) - blanket
  10. 01:02:114 (4,2) - suggestion for pattern equivalency https://puu.sh/vFwL8.jpg
  11. 01:14:737 (2,3,4,5) - suggestion for flow, also your overlap is out of place https://puu.sh/vFwRd.jpg


Yahuri's maps are too good for me... Anyway i'm a bit tired and don't see somthing really usefull... so yeeaa... Nothing about Extra.
[]
That's it. Hope You'll find smthing usefull.
GL~

P.S.
And... Can anyone tell me what this anime is about? Story line i mean... Worth it for watching?
Topic Starter
MisakiAN

Mitkoff wrote:

Hello
Nm from my q
sry for my English.... (

[General]
  1. BG DedZai.jpg unused file
opsie ;; i forgot


[Hard]
  1. 00:13:590 (4,1) - blanket? yes
  2. 00:17:852 (1) - 1.15 as before? :\ okay
  3. 00:32:114 (1,2) - questionable spacing if considering on 00:32:770 (3,4) - like same sounded claps with different spacing Fixed
  4. 00:51:786 (4) - make silence (okay i hear it) really low beat clicable not really good idea... Suggestions: https://puu.sh/vFs3K.jpg or https://puu.sh/vFs7D.jpg closer to instrumets (it's about rhythm not pattering) okay.i pick this one https://puu.sh/vFs3K.jpg C:
  5. 00:53:261 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - instruments there kinda too strong, i suggest make rhythm more closer to it. i'd imagine https://puu.sh/vFskr.jpg for 00:53:917 (3,3) - making extra emphasis on these beats as most hyped ones (by 00:54:081 - silence this one) changing this 00:54:245 (4) - into circle isnt a good idea :\ there a sound in here too 00:54:409 -,and i dont think i wanna change this
  6. 01:12:769 (4) - ds too high on weak beat , it kinda strange after common attention for 01:08:671 (7) - strong beat or 01:14:081 (4) - Fixed :")
  7. Btw ds 01:04:901 (4) - strange too, hmm at least make all of them consistent pls. i try :")0FF00]i try :")[/color]
  8. 01:14:081 (4,3) - avoid if possible (overlap) it's inconsistent with diff okayor=#00FF00]okay[/color]
  9. 01:14:573 (2,1) - stack okay
  10. 01:14:245 (1,4) - ^ ^



[Insane]
  1. 00:14:081 (2,3) - 00:15:065 (4,2) - 00:23:754 (1,1) - stacks Okay :")
  2. 00:24:409 (1) - ds okay :")
    btw https://puu.sh/vFw8A.jpg
    362,118,24409,6,0,B|310:52|310:52|304:128|304:128|253:129|220:149|220:149|217:172|217:172|185:213|92:213|92:213|115:221|115:221|133:246|133:246|197:269|239:248|239:248|263:350|263:350|319:366|356:351|375:311,1,805,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    the dogie looks cool :o , i use it,thanks~~~ XD
  3. 00:43:097 (2,4,5) - make same ds and angles 00:43:097 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - https://puu.sh/vFwk4.jpg also on 1 line without overlaps Okay
  4. 00:45:228 (1,2) - stack? i try ;-;
  5. 00:45:228 (1,2,3,6) - or overlaps https://puu.sh/vFwq6.jpg for consistency Fix
  6. 00:51:130 (2,4) - if it's supose to be so it's bad idea cause fully overlaps pretty bad for watching... Fix ;-;
  7. 00:55:884 (1,2,3) - sinse it's calm part maybe >_> http://puu.sh/vFwCi.jpg YES
  8. 00:57:032 (4,5,6) - make isosceles triangle pls idk if its perfect or not,because i want to make this 00:55:884 (1,5) - stack and this too 00:56:540 (3,6) - but i try :")
  9. 01:02:442 (1,2) - blanket Maybe
  10. 01:02:114 (4,2) - suggestion for pattern equivalency https://puu.sh/vFwL8.jpg i change it a bit,but okay
  11. 01:14:737 (2,3,4,5) - suggestion for flow, also your overlap is out of place https://puu.sh/vFwRd.jpg change


That's it. Hope You'll find smthing usefull.
GL~

P.S.
And... Can anyone tell me what this anime is about? Story line i mean... Worth it for watching?
its from anime Bungou Stray Dogs.. actually this song from the Season 2 Opening...
its WORTH! Just Watch It XD
Thank you for your mod~
- Frontier -
before i'm gonna mod this

Ranking Criteria wrote:

  1. A mapset cannot have just one Taiko or osu!mania difficulty. If you decide, for example, to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty. However having only one CtB difficulty is fine.
Make sure if you're gonna add more taiko diff, it shouldn't make by Yahuri again. If then, Yahuri would have more difficulties in this mapset than the creator which is unrankable~
Yahuri

- Frontier - wrote:

before i'm gonna mod this

Ranking Criteria wrote:

  1. A mapset cannot have just one Taiko or osu!mania difficulty. If you decide, for example, to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty. However having only one CtB difficulty is fine.
Make sure if you're gonna add more taiko diff, it shouldn't make by Yahuri again. If then, Yahuri would have more difficulties in this mapset than the creator which is unrankable~
im not a serious taiko mapper, so that's just there for fun
Topic Starter
MisakiAN

- Frontier - wrote:

before i'm gonna mod this

Ranking Criteria wrote:

  1. A mapset cannot have just one Taiko or osu!mania difficulty. If you decide, for example, to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty. However having only one CtB difficulty is fine.
Make sure if you're gonna add more taiko diff, it shouldn't make by Yahuri again. If then, Yahuri would have more difficulties in this mapset than the creator which is unrankable~
Actually,im not gonna put taiko diff in here,it just for fun.im remove it later
Mir
Fixed from that other guy's mod. Reapply hitsounds if you can, please.

https://puu.sh/vHqkE/1b4f481764.osu
Kyousukee
Hi , Thanks for mod my map :)

General:
  1. Please disable " Widescreen Support " Since you're not make any storyboard ><
  1. 00:49:819 (6,1) - Distance it a little for stream after the circle 1
  2. 00:49:819 (6,1) - Overlap
  3. 00:33:753 (2,4) - Ctrl+G ? Nice flow at there !
  1. 01:00:638 (2,3,4) - Stacked this ?
  2. 01:12:441 (4) - I think u can stack this on 01:11:950 (2) -
  3. 01:17:523 (3,4) - Ctrl+G . Really got a nice flow
  1. 00:47:360 (4) - This slider have a drum sound , i think u can make this as reverse slider
  1. 00:21:131 (1) - Not stacked properly


As my Conclusion , You map is totally good ! I can't detect any problem , it's really clean but very tricky ^^

Yeah , i think this map will be ranked in the future :)

Goodluck with the set ~
Yahuri

Kyousukee wrote:

  1. 00:49:819 (6,1) - Distance it a little for stream after the circle 1 that doesn't tell me why you want the DS to be bigger
  2. 00:49:819 (6,1) - Overlap there isn't an overlap here
  3. 00:33:753 (2,4) - Ctrl+G ? Nice flow at there ! the resulting DS would make the flow too choppy imo
no changes, but thanks for taking a look!
hanyuu_nanodesu
hello
well, it's been year since you requested my mod but I love this song so I'll mod anyway
lol, I'm a terrible person

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[General]
  1. For the combo colors, I think you used too much similar colors, I mean they are all shades of gray. I know you're trying to fit the background or something but you can use different kind of colors that still fit the background like dark red (just like dazai's cape) or dark purple or any shade of dark colors really.
  2. I love how you use the video from the first 4 episodes *V* such nostalgia


[arknes_33's Easy]
  1. I have to say that in Easy, distance snap must always be activated. I see that your spacing are kinda inconsistent so make sure to check it again.
  2. 00:00:204 (1,2) - See how the head, reverse, and tail covered different sound. Since there's three similar sounds here 00:01:667 00:02:399 00:03:130 - , you can try doing the rhythm like this https://puu.sh/w9uJY/bb1f06c05f.jpg it will fit better.
  3. 00:06:049 (1,1) - try to make these looks neater https://puu.sh/w9uYJ/3f90d2e01e.jpg https://puu.sh/w9uZG/e7cb98bffa.jpg
  4. 00:11:295 (1,2,3) - the rhythm seems kinda unfit here. See the vocal have pause between "agaite" and "aganai" so they should be separated in rhythm too while now they are connected. I'm bad at explaining so I think you can just try this rhythm https://puu.sh/w9v9l/e47a8ec2ba.jpg
  5. 00:12:606 (3,3) - If you don't fix above, this will have terrible overlap so you better fix this one. It will be automatically fixed if you fix above tho *v*
  6. 00:14:573 (2,3) - Fix blanket, lol
  7. 00:16:540 (1,2) - Same thing as 00:11:295 (1,2,3) - basically.
  8. 00:18:180 (2) - Either you fix above of not, I think you better end this slider here 00:18:672 because the stream and vocal lands there. Ending it at where it is now seemed so extra. It's okay to have polarity problem sometime as long as the spacing is good.
  9. 00:20:475 (2) - Keep following the big sound, again, polarity problem is sometimes alright.
  10. 00:29:655 (1,2,3) - I know you want to make pattern, but because of the ds restriction this one looks too close to each other that it turned out ugly :( I suggest to use other pattern like https://puu.sh/w9vs7/81c4960af0.jpg or anything else.
  11. 00:31:622 (3) - If you don't apply above ^, this one is not perfectly parallel with others.
  12. 00:33:426 (1,3) - Try to make these the same shape for repeating pattern to make the echo effect better.
  13. 00:37:032 (2) - I know you're trying to avoid polarity problem but the sound here 00:37:524 is much better if clickable imo because the sound there is huge. But you still can keep.
  14. 00:39:819 (4,1,2,1,2) - need total remake. First, move 00:40:147 (1) - so it starts here 00:39:983 - , delete 00:39:819 (4) - , give up the polarity here. Extend 00:39:983 (1) - to the next white tick here 00:40:474 - . End 00:40:803 (2) - here 00:41:294 - . Move 00:41:622 (1) - here 00:41:622 - . Move 00:42:278 (2) - here 00:42:278 then extend it so it ends at big white tick. Would fit better. Other story if you prefer to follow the percussion tho because this rhythm mainly follows vocal, but this rhythm will really fit the big sounds better.
  15. 00:43:426 (1) - What? why reverse at red tick tho, there's no sound there. Better extend the slider so the reverse fall on big white tick to follow vocal then delete (2)
  16. 00:45:065 (2) - Nah, the sound here 00:45:228 is way too big to be ignored, there are huge vocal and cymbal there. Better give the polarity up and map the big sound properly. Same case here 00:46:704 (3) - If you want to emphasize the big sound properly, use this rhythm https://puu.sh/w9vWg/78fbdaa52d.jpg if you want to avoid polarity tho, you might try this https://puu.sh/w9vYD/b24fdbb635.jpg I suggest the first option tho.
  17. 00:48:016 (1,4) - bad touching. Maybe just curve (4) and make a blanket pattern. https://puu.sh/w9w3i/faf5593e6a.jpg you can make the next notes like this https://puu.sh/w9w5V/48a16ee195.jpg since I don't really support the overlap here 00:49:983 (5,2) - either.
  18. 00:53:262 (1,3) - bzzzt, nope. Try to make a triange shape with (1), (2), and (3) https://puu.sh/w9w9K/ac60aea23c.jpg looks much better that way and no, it's not ruining the flow.
  19. 00:59:163 (2,1) - I don't really recommend to use this pause pattern on Easy tho.
  20. 01:04:409 (2,3) - Why they so close, re-space them.
  21. 01:04:409 (2,4) - Naaahhh, same thing as this 00:53:262 (1,3) - , make a triangle pattern. https://puu.sh/w9whJ/c28daf1a91.jpg don't talk about flow, slider leniency will do its thing
  22. 01:14:245 (1,2) - Kinda broken flow, maybe you could try something like this instead https://puu.sh/w9wkB/ba6807a1b6.jpg it looks better too, imo
  23. 01:18:180 (3,4) - Because the sound here is different from here 01:12:934 (3,4) - And so on, maybe you could try to use different pattern here, like two 1/1 sliders or something https://puu.sh/w9woF/0ebb265f02.jpg
  24. Mostly fine. My tip is to give up on polarity sometimes and focus on mapping the big sound better :)


[Mir's Normal]
  1. 00:15:229 (4,5,6) - I think this one is too much for Normal xD This part don't need this much emphasizing too tho so I think you better use simpler rhythm here like 1/1 reverse slider.
  2. 00:50:474 (1) - I think you better start the slider here 00:50:638 I mean the violin (?) sound there is much bigger than the vocal you're following right now. It even have cymbal and stuff. You can stuff the vocal sound here 00:50:474 with circle, it would make a nice lead up too :3
  3. 00:55:720 (1) - ^
  4. 01:05:064 (4,5,6) - Same thing as before
  5. 01:09:983 (3,5) - bad overlap :( maybe you could use blanket pattern instead https://puu.sh/w9wDd/7cb62bef4b.jpg
  6. 01:20:474 (3,5) - ^ are you doing this on purpose? If so, I think it's better not to.
  7. Yep, the rest are fine, nice diff ^^


Well, it's already taken a lot of time, so I think I'll end this here ^^
Good luck~~~~
Topic Starter
MisakiAN

Kyousukee wrote:

Hi , Thanks for mod my map :)

General:
  1. Please disable " Widescreen Support " Since you're not make any storyboard >< whoops,i forgot
  1. 01:00:638 (2,3,4) - Stacked this ? yeah
  2. 01:12:441 (4) - I think u can stack this on 01:11:950 (2) - it would make this 01:12:278 (3,4) - more far away than 01:12:441 (4,5) - .this has a strong beat in here 01:12:605 (5) -
  3. 01:17:523 (3,4) - Ctrl+G . Really got a nice flow no,i dont want to change it.it looks akward in here 01:17:851 (4,1) -
  1. 00:21:131 (1) - Not stacked properly fix


As my Conclusion , You map is totally good ! I can't detect any problem , it's really clean but very tricky ^^

Yeah , i think this map will be ranked in the future :)

Goodluck with the set ~
Thanks for your mod~~
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