Siti Badriah - Mama Minta Pulsa (Speed Up Ver.) [OsuMania]

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Frim4503

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7
NM
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General

  1. no hitsound
  2. gap between hard and greget is too big

Greget

  1. 00:17:422 (17422|1) -prefer to make this double same sound as 00:17:510 (17510|3,17510|2) -
    ^00:18:833 (18833|2) -etc…
  2. 00:17:157 (17157|3,18216|0) -this is should double too. Considering you make double for whistle 00:17:510 (17510|3,17510|2,18039|2,18039|1) -
  3. 00:18:569 (18569|1,19628|2) -etc…
  4. 00:40:981 (40981|2,40981|1,40981|3,40981|0) -this is too much. Considering after this you only use double
  5. 00:04:451 -why don’t you make something like this http://puu.sh/sqNpJ/b280c36c2c.png
  6. 00:24:392 (24392|2) -move to 3. You know 00:24:392 (24392|2,24569|2,24745|2) -a bit heavy on col. 3
  7. 00:26:686 (26686|2,26686|3,26686|0,27039|1,27039|0,27039|3,27216|2,27216|3,27216|0) -you can make this 4 note if you want
  8. 01:24:745 -why not map this as well ?
  9. 01:25:098 -^

Hard

  1. 00:06:392 (6392|1,6392|3) -idk what youre following here, if you say clap better to map this as well 00:07:098 -
  2. 00:07:804 (7804|3,7804|2) -^etc…
  3. 00:06:745 (6745|0) -I recommend you to make this to double same like 00:05:334 (5334|2,5334|0) -ti will be better and more consistent
  4. 00:14:686 (14686|3,14686|0) -why only this double ? I think you should make other part double too like 00:14:510 (14510|1,14863|2,15039|0) -also it will cover the 1/8 sound better

Just quick
Good luck
Mod Done
Topic Starter
Draftnell

Frim4503 wrote:


Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7
NM
Support this by mod it https://osu.ppy.sh/b/977863

General

  1. no hitsound
  2. gap between hard and greget is too big

Greget

  1. 00:17:422 (17422|1) -prefer to make this double same sound as 00:17:510 (17510|3,17510|2) -
    ^00:18:833 (18833|2) -etc…
  2. 00:17:157 (17157|3,18216|0) -this is should double too. Considering you make double for whistle 00:17:510 (17510|3,17510|2,18039|2,18039|1) -
  3. 00:18:569 (18569|1,19628|2) -etc…
  4. 00:40:981 (40981|2,40981|1,40981|3,40981|0) -this is too much. Considering after this you only use double
  5. 00:04:451 -why don’t you make something like this http://puu.sh/sqNpJ/b280c36c2c.png
  6. 00:24:392 (24392|2) -move to 3. You know 00:24:392 (24392|2,24569|2,24745|2) -a bit heavy on col. 3
  7. 00:26:686 (26686|2,26686|3,26686|0,27039|1,27039|0,27039|3,27216|2,27216|3,27216|0) -you can make this 4 note if you want
  8. 01:24:745 -why not map this as well ?
  9. 01:25:098 -^

Hard

  1. 00:06:392 (6392|1,6392|3) -idk what youre following here, if you say clap better to map this as well 00:07:098 -
  2. 00:07:804 (7804|3,7804|2) -^etc…
  3. 00:06:745 (6745|0) -I recommend you to make this to double same like 00:05:334 (5334|2,5334|0) -ti will be better and more consistent
  4. 00:14:686 (14686|3,14686|0) -why only this double ? I think you should make other part double too like 00:14:510 (14510|1,14863|2,15039|0) -also it will cover the 1/8 sound better

Just quick
Good luck
Mod Done
ok update ~~~
Shurelia
ya ampun
Topic Starter
Draftnell

Shurelia wrote:

ya ampun
Uhuhuheeee xD
Alsty-
Wah revived, jejak ah :u
[ Ari Knight ]
eh btw bapak gw demen banget main ini map pas lagi minjem nih lepi LoL
Asherz007
Yo Dell o/

I know you req'd a check from me, but don't you think you should get a couple more mods on this first? I mean, the GD Normal diff doesn't seem to have been modded at all (and OD7 HP5 is fairly clear evidence of that).

Might be a popular song, but that doesn't mean it's that urgent to rank it quickly?

Feel free to call me back when this has a few more mods for all diffs, but I'll hold off for the time being.
Topic Starter
Draftnell

Asherz007 wrote:

Yo Dell o/

I know you req'd a check from me, but don't you think you should get a couple more mods on this first? I mean, the GD Normal diff doesn't seem to have been modded at all (and OD7 HP5 is fairly clear evidence of that).

Might be a popular song, but that doesn't mean it's that urgent to rank it quickly?

Feel free to call me back when this has a few more mods for all diffs, but I'll hold off for the time being.
Hmm kk
Alsty-
will do a recheck tmr
- Ly0572 -
allllooooo my master :D/

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00:05:334 (5334|0,5598|3) - hey how about making it a jack since its the same
00:06:745 (6745|2,7010|0) - ^
00:08:157 (8157|2,8422|0) - ^
00:09:569 (9569|3,9833|1) -
00:10:981 (10981|2,11245|3) - ^
00:12:039 - suggestion for this part~
for variation

00:13:804 - ^^


00:17:333 (17333|0) - i dont understand why is this a ln ~
if u keep that then u should change all the same parts like
00:18:745 (18745|0,20157|3,21569|1,22981|1,24392|2,25804|0) -

00:45:039 - suggestion again ~ changing to something like this for comfortability


00:49:804 - missed a note here~ pretty sure theres a mappable sound~

00:50:686 - suggestion


01:03:216 (63216|0,63481|3) - same as 00:05:334 (5334|0,5598|3) -
u actually did it here 01:04:628 (64628|1,64892|1,66039|2,66304|2) -
00:15:922 (15922|2) - would change this to a ln as the echoe ends here 00:16:451 -
00:52:539 - missed a note i believe
00:53:951 - ^^
00:55:363 - ^
00:15:922 (15922|2) - same as what i said for hard dif


GL~ :D
Alsty-

- Ly0572 - wrote:

allllooooo my master :D/

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00:05:334 (5334|0,5598|3) - hey how about making it a jack since its the same
00:06:745 (6745|2,7010|0) - ^
00:08:157 (8157|2,8422|0) - ^
00:09:569 (9569|3,9833|1) -
00:10:981 (10981|2,11245|3) - ^// sorry its inteded , im kinda feel it just must be a single jump instead of jack on lowest diff
00:12:039 - suggestion for this part~
for variation // a bit change

00:13:804 - ^^


00:17:333 (17333|0) - i dont understand why is this a ln ~
if u keep that then u should change all the same parts like
00:18:745 (18745|0,20157|3,21569|1,22981|1,24392|2,25804|0) - // nice catch , scaled

00:45:039 - suggestion again ~ changing to something like this for comfortability// i kinda dont understand


00:49:804 - missed a note here~ pretty sure theres a mappable sound~ // all part similliar to that is empty tho

00:50:686 - suggestion


01:03:216 (63216|0,63481|3) - same as 00:05:334 (5334|0,5598|3) -
u actually did it here 01:04:628 (64628|1,64892|1,66039|2,66304|2) -
00:15:922 (15922|2) - would change this to a ln as the echoe ends here 00:16:451 -
00:52:539 - missed a note i believe
00:53:951 - ^^
00:55:363 - ^
00:15:922 (15922|2) - same as what i said for hard dif


GL~ :D
thanks for mod lyo
update https://puu.sh/xDrlY/8bcc86ea95.osu , adjusted OD and HP to 6
GL om draft owo)b
Sarahkuai
FAST MODS *lel*
osakmj..
pakai bahasa banjar gaul lah :u
  1. 00:05:598 (5598|0,5598|1) - jadikan LN sampai 00:05:775 -
    00:07:010 (7010|0,7010|1) - ^ to 00:07:186 -
    00:08:422 (8422|3,8422|2) - ^ to 00:08:598 -
    00:11:245 (11245|1,11245|0) - ^ to 00:11:510 -
  2. 00:17:775 - , 00:18:128 - , 00:18:481 - di tambahi 1 note biar ada effect teretetnya. contoh *terserah hndk menuruti atau kd*
    00:20:951 - , 00:21:304 - ^
  3. 00:52:098 (52098|2,52275|3,52451|2,52628|1,52804|0,53157|0,53333|2,53510|1,53686|0,53863|1,54039|2,54216|3,54392|2,54569|0,54745|2,54922|3,55098|2,55275|1,55451|0,55628|2,55804|3,55981|2,56157|3) - ini kd diisi HS soft-whistle (yg sebelum diisi hs drum) kh? *yg bunyi kelenting"/bel, cari hitsoundnya lg. contohnya di bm Completeness Under Incompleteness/Chant du Cygne. pokoknya kek itulah* berlaku juga utk Hard
  4. 01:13:628 (73628|0,73716|1,73804|2) - , 01:15:039 (75039|2,75128|1,75216|2,75392|3,75569|1,75745|2,75922|3,76098|0) - , 01:15:039 (75039|2,75128|1,75216|2,75392|3,75569|1,75745|2,75922|3,76098|0) - , 01:19:275 (79275|1,79363|2,79451|3,79628|0,79981|3) - kenapa gk dijadiin LN ja? kan suara flutenya kedangaran banar. LN nya 1/4 atau 1/6 atau 1/8 kh *biar nyaman acc kena klo di LN akan* :roll::?: :thonkang:

keseluruhannya sdh ena patternnya, di diff Hard & Normal nya kdd yg aneh patternnya. pas aja
ya mungkin itu sadja mod dari saia feel free to rejected if u think it doesn't help
Gud Lak :3
_VianK_
OwO

1|2|3|4

Als' normal

00:17:333 (17333|0) - ini ngapain beda sendiri lel ?

00:42:039 (42039|3,42392|2,42392|0) - kalo kayak ginian gak kesusahan yah buat diff normal? menurut ane satu aja cukup sih.. tapi ini cuman saran ya. lagian impact nya kagak gede amat kok

01:03:216 - add 1 note lagi,

01:24:392 (84392|2,84392|1) - hapus satu ea


hard

00:05:334 (5334|2,5334|1,5334|0) - ini nggak kebanyakan yah?


greget

00:39:039 (39039|0,39098|1) - ctrl +j



ini dah bagus banget mah.....

GOOD LUCK

OSU NEEDS MORE DANGDUT <3
Alsty-

Ridho 2307 wrote:

OwO

1|2|3|4

Als' normal

00:17:333 (17333|0) - ini ngapain beda sendiri lel ? //fixed

00:42:039 (42039|3,42392|2,42392|0) - kalo kayak ginian gak kesusahan yah buat diff normal? menurut ane satu aja cukup sih.. tapi ini cuman saran ya. lagian impact nya kagak gede amat kok https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9126445 udah di nerf? biar konsisten kok

01:03:216 - add 1 note lagi, // ok added

01:24:392 (84392|2,84392|1) - hapus satu ea //keep , bagian paling akhir dan ga terlalu susah kok


hard

00:05:334 (5334|2,5334|1,5334|0) - ini nggak kebanyakan yah?


greget

00:39:039 (39039|0,39098|1) - ctrl +j



ini dah bagus banget mah.....

GOOD LUCK

OSU NEEDS MORE DANGDUT <3
thanks for mod
update
https://puu.sh/xDyrH/5eab83688c.osu
Topic Starter
Draftnell

Ridho 2307 wrote:

OwO

1|2|3|4



hard

00:05:334 (5334|2,5334|1,5334|0) - ini nggak kebanyakan yah?


greget

00:39:039 (39039|0,39098|1) - ctrl +j



ini dah bagus banget mah.....

GOOD LUCK

OSU NEEDS MORE DANGDUT <3

- Ly0572 - wrote:

allllooooo my master :D/

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00:15:922 (15922|2) - would change this to a ln as the echoe ends here 00:16:451 -
00:52:539 - missed a note i believe
00:53:951 - ^^
00:55:363 - ^
00:15:922 (15922|2) - same as what i said for hard dif


GL~ :D
Really big thx for lyo and ridho >< sorry seems mod has a reject but seems helpfully enough
and sorry cant reply your mod guyss :3
UPDATE
Asherz007
Motivation is uh...

[General]
Wat is dis beegee lul

raika pls ._.



I mean it's still rankable, but would be nice not to have the slight delay...

Those odhp values are kinda questionable? Thought you'd kinda go for something like...
Normal: od7.5 hp7
Hard: od8 hp 7.5
Insane: od8.5 hp8

1|2|3|4 (just in case)

Those LNs...

  1. 00:27:392 (27392|1) - Cap this LN please. There's a note on the release so it's probably useful to put a note there. Likely in col 4.
  2. 00:58:981 (58981|2) - You're kidding me, right? You have this nice buildup here and you kinda butcher it with this massive 4/1 LN. Could do something like this which goes off of the pattern in the measure beforehand.
  3. 01:00:745 - Not acknowledging the clap here?
  4. 01:21:569 (81569|2,82981|0,82981|3) - Might be a good idea to do something more interesting here.
Unusual layering, but I can't really challenge much of it I guess...

  1. 00:38:510 (38510|1,38598|0,38686|1) - Oh man, the burst was super rolly until this OH minitrill here. I mean, fine if you want to keep it, but I'd do something like this.
  2. 00:50:686 (50686|0,50775|1,50863|0) - Are these mini-trills just an intentional thing, or is it just me being mean or something?
  3. 00:59:157 (59157|2,59245|3,59333|2,59863|3,59951|2,60039|3,61628|0,61716|1,61804|0) - I dunno. These OH minitrills just feel like they don't belong in the map with what you're trying to do. Just a gut feeling I guess.


That's it I guess? Might wanna check jack balance, I dunno.
What does this word even mean? I've seen it on a couple of maps so pls tell me uwu

Oh man, those bursts are ugly. (Also please no 1/4 double to triples... it's not a jack-based map so I don't think it's a good idea having them here)

  1. 00:14:569 - I feel like you're trying to kill someone with the snaps here...
    1. OH trills really don't work here. Like, they make this burst much more awkward than it needs to be.
    2. 1/6? Seriously? The accurate snap is 1/8, so I honestly don't know what convinced you to do this bizarre simplification.
  2. 00:27:833 (27833|0) - The 1/4 minijacks like this aren't really appropriate in a map like this imo, so I'd suggest removing this note. (See top of box)
  3. 00:38:510 - Okay. Again with 1/6? Plus this 234323432 thing doesn't look nice, play nice, or really just generally fit with the mapstyle.
  4. 00:46:186 (46186|3) - Y'know...
  5. 01:00:392 - This is 1/8 too... At least the patterning looks a little better for this. No idea how it would play being 33% faster though.
  6. 01:14:422 (74422|0) - Y'know...
  7. 01:21:569 - This jumpstream burst just felt uncomfortable. I don't really know whether you can really do anything about it. Only thing I could suggest would be to do a slight repattern with 01:22:275 (82275|0,82275|3,82981|1,82981|3,83686|0,83686|3) being just singles. That way you're emphasising the bell and snare with doubles while keeping all the other notes which all have kicks singles.


Well, at least it was consistent, even with the errors. The simplification issue needs to be fixed before this mapset can go anywhere though.


So yeah, uh, sort problems pls I really need to think of something to put here. Maybe not cus moddingv2 aaaaaaaaa

Also if you can find some sources for that metadata that would help whoever's checking out a lot.
Alsty-

Asherz007 wrote:

Motivation is uh...

[General]
Wat is dis beegee lul

raika pls ._.



I mean it's still rankable, but would be nice not to have the slight delay...

Those odhp values are kinda questionable? Thought you'd kinda go for something like... // ill leave that to draftnell decision tho
Normal: od7.5 hp7
Hard: od8 hp 7.5
Insane: od8.5 hp8

1|2|3|4 (just in case)

Those LNs...

  1. 00:27:392 (27392|1) - Cap this LN please. There's a note on the release so it's probably useful to put a note there. Likely in col 4. // re-arrange with butter placement
  2. 00:58:981 (58981|2) - You're kidding me, right? You have this nice buildup here and you kinda butcher it with this massive 4/1 LN. Could do something like this which goes off of the pattern in the measure beforehand.
  3. 01:00:745 - Not acknowledging the clap here?
  4. 01:21:569 (81569|2,82981|0,82981|3) - Might be a good idea to do something more interesting here. // okay its 1/2 with some short trill to express the percussion, its not random at all fyi :3


Also if you can find some sources for that metadata that would help whoever's checking out a lot. // its quite hard to find it i think , i found the studio records but you cant find anything from it , here's the official web of the official song LINK
i'm not sure this is helping or not but all metadata and tags is right and all of those tags is related to the song,
thanks Asherz owo)b

edit: owo forgot the update.
om draft tolong di part akhir di kasih HS :'v 00:58:981 - 01:21:569 - https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BxSdX ... 3RPUks0dXM
Topic Starter
Draftnell

Asherz007 wrote:

Motivation is uh...

[General]
Wat is dis beegee lul random pick bg lul

raika pls ._.



I mean it's still rankable, but would be nice not to have the slight delay...

Those odhp values are kinda questionable? Thought you'd kinda go for something like...
Normal: od7.5 hp7
Hard: od8 hp 7.5
Insane: od8.5 hp8
forget to set up >< but its change now
1|2|3|4 (just in case)


Unusual layering, but I can't really challenge much of it I guess...

  1. 00:38:510 (38510|1,38598|0,38686|1) - Oh man, the burst was super rolly until this OH minitrill here. I mean, fine if you want to keep it, but I'd do something like this. hmm, about burst i want to make the burst balancing possible. so, i want keep it. but if next BN notice this burst maybe i change mind xD
  2. 00:50:686 (50686|0,50775|1,50863|0) - Are these mini-trills just an intentional thing, or is it just me being mean or something? lul okk re-arranged that
  3. 00:59:157 (59157|2,59245|3,59333|2,59863|3,59951|2,60039|3,61628|0,61716|1,61804|0) - I dunno. These OH minitrills just feel like they don't belong in the map with what you're trying to do. Just a gut feeling I guess. well re-arranged for balance hand


That's it I guess? Might wanna check jack balance, I dunno.
What does this word even mean? I've seen it on a couple of maps so pls tell me uwu lul xD greget is Indonesian slang language has other meanings such as diff insane, expert, etc

Oh man, those bursts are ugly. (Also please no 1/4 double to triples... it's not a jack-based map so I don't think it's a good idea having them here)

  1. 00:14:569 - I feel like you're trying to kill someone with the snaps here...
    1. OH trills really don't work here. Like, they make this burst much more awkward than it needs to be.
    2. 1/6? Seriously? The accurate snap is 1/8, so I honestly don't know what convinced you to do this bizarre simplification. lol i know u will notice that...well before i put 1/8 in here, but some modders tell me its 1/6. Because I'm still hesitant. then, i put 1/6 xD
  2. 00:27:833 (27833|0) - The 1/4 minijacks like this aren't really appropriate in a map like this imo, so I'd suggest removing this note. (See top of box) hmm really ?? the reason i put jack there because there is between kick(drum) like 00:27:392 - and finish(drum)+snare(drum) triple note for consistency. and, most other beatmaps also use a pattern like this to balance the play of the players. So, u know xD ^^
  3. 00:38:510 - Okay. Again with 1/6? Plus this 234323432 thing doesn't look nice, play nice, or really just generally fit with the mapstyle. honestly, I'm still confused this 1/6 or 1/4 ?? and if you can give me advice with this part
  4. 00:46:186 (46186|3) - Y'know...same ^
  5. 01:00:392 - This is 1/8 too... At least the patterning looks a little better for this. No idea how it would play being 33% faster though. aye sir ~~
  6. 01:14:422 (74422|0) - Y'know...i know xD
  7. 01:21:569 - This jumpstream burst just felt uncomfortable. I don't really know whether you can really do anything about it. Only thing I could suggest would be to do a slight repattern with 01:22:275 (82275|0,82275|3,82981|1,82981|3,83686|0,83686|3) being just singles. That way you're emphasising the bell and snare with doubles while keeping all the other notes which all have kicks singles. well re-arraanged and seems idea xD


Well, at least it was consistent, even with the errors. The simplification issue needs to be fixed before this mapset can go anywhere though.


So yeah, uh, sort problems pls I really need to think of something to put here. Maybe not cus moddingv2 aaaaaaaaa

Also if you can find some sources for that metadata that would help whoever's checking out a lot. [/color]
really big thx ^^ lovee u asheerz >w<
umm about metadata i agree with Alsty- because this map from song Indonesian...and we know the metadata of the song from where cause we from Indonesian to xDD but if u need a metadata for make sure, i can gave u information : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TWY4x52p05o and http://nagaswara.co.id/artis/lyric/243/ ... inta-pulsa


well if u want IRC for next v2 mod xD u can poke me when i online to ><
Asherz007
Man, lyricist must've had a writers' block to have to repeat the same words this many times in a song...

Should Endang Raes be in the tags since they're the composer?

[Hitsounds]
Just a couple of imported claps missed towards the end of the kiai I think?

Normal
00:59:333 (59333|2,60039|1,60745|1) - should these be claps as well?

Hard and Greget
00:59:333 -
01:00:039 -
01:00:745 -
01:01:451 - claps here?

[Moar note placement stuffs...probably]
Just checking one thing: 01:21:569 (81569|2,81569|1) - how come this one's a double?

nice butter placement btw owo)b

Uh... idk. I'm hungry and I want food uwu



Mmmm... cake...
So, did you make those patterns bad so that I would spot it xD

  1. 00:38:863 (38863|2,38951|1,39039|3,39039|2,39128|1,39128|0,39216|2,39216|3) - I'm thinking maybe ctrl+h this for a little bit less strain on the right hand?
  2. 01:20:157 (80157|2,80333|3,80510|2,80510|3,80686|2,80863|2,80863|3,81039|3,81216|2,81392|3,81392|2) - Might wanna check hand balance in this measure.
  3. 01:21:569 - ...which leads into the burst which also feels a little RH-heavy. (Like, especially with 01:22:981 (82981|3,83157|3,83333|3,83510|3,83686|3) as well as most of the movement happening in RH)


Call me back (again) whenever you're done.
Topic Starter
Draftnell

Asherz007 wrote:

Man, lyricist must've had a writers' block to have to repeat the same words this many times in a song...

Should Endang Raes be in the tags since they're the composer?

[Hitsounds]
Just a couple of imported claps missed towards the end of the kiai I think?

Normal
00:59:333 (59333|2,60039|1,60745|1) - should these be claps as well?

Hard and Greget
00:59:333 -
01:00:039 -
01:00:745 -
01:01:451 - claps here?
all okey and added metadata to

[Moar note placement stuffs...probably]
Just checking one thing: 01:21:569 (81569|2,81569|1) - how come this one's a double? this might be a transmission between 1/2 and 1/4 by alsty xD

nice butter placement btw owo)b

Uh... idk. I'm hungry and I want food uwu



Mmmm... cake...uhh make me hungry to
So, did you make those patterns bad so that I would spot it xD

  1. 00:38:863 (38863|2,38951|1,39039|3,39039|2,39128|1,39128|0,39216|2,39216|3) - I'm thinking maybe ctrl+h this for a little bit less strain on the right hand? auto ok xD
  2. 01:20:157 (80157|2,80333|3,80510|2,80510|3,80686|2,80863|2,80863|3,81039|3,81216|2,81392|3,81392|2) - Might wanna check hand balance in this measure. re-arranged that
  3. 01:21:569 - ...which leads into the burst which also feels a little RH-heavy. (Like, especially with 01:22:981 (82981|3,83157|3,83333|3,83510|3,83686|3) as well as most of the movement happening in RH)wuu stack x.x ok re-arranged for this


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