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small fish
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, November 20, 2016 at 3:19:59 PM

Artist: itsue
Title: Goodbye, maboroshi
BPM: 90
Filesize: 6542kb
Play Time: 04:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Goodbye (3.84 stars, 509 notes)
  2. Normal (1.37 stars, 92 notes)
Download: itsue - Goodbye, maboroshi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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:)

normal WIP, goodbye ready for modding.

if you're feeling nice, take a look at my progress on the normal and let me know if you notice any major flaws. I don't really understand low difficulty rhythm density\note placement very well.
Nostalgic
Hello! Quick mod from #modreqs before I sleep.

[-Goodbye, maboroshi-]
  1. OD -0.5
  2. No hitsound?
  3. Please fix all those unsnapped objects!
  4. Need to resize your bg
  5. No preview point
  6. Need normal/easy diffs if u are going for ranked
  7. 00:16:153 (2,3) - not fully stacked.
  8. 01:02:270 (2,3) - ctrl g?
  9. 01:05:937 (10) - Wrongly snapped? Should be on blue tick.
  10. 01:33:826 (4) - Overmapping? If not it shouldn't be snapped on the 1/3.
  11. 02:03:270 (1,4) - Why do they end at 1/3 tick?
  12. 02:08:604 (5) - ^
  13. 02:10:604 (3) - ^
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
small fish

Nostalgic wrote:

Hello! Quick mod from #modreqs before I sleep.

[-Goodbye, maboroshi-]
  1. OD -0.5 done
  2. No hitsound? i don't have any custom hitsounds, are you saying the hitsound volume is too quiet?
  3. Please fix all those unsnapped objects!fixed
  4. Need to resize your bg updated
  5. No preview point added
  6. Need normal/easy diffs if u are going for ranked when i'm happier with this difficulty i will start on easy\normal (or maybe get gds?)
  7. 00:16:153 (2,3) - not fully stacked. i'm planning on leaving that, slightly easier to read if it's not a perfect overlap
  8. 01:02:270 (2,3) - ctrl g? this is a huge improvement :)
  9. 01:05:937 (10) - Wrongly snapped? Should be on blue tick. i might have fixed this with resnap?
  10. 01:33:826 (4) - Overmapping? If not it shouldn't be snapped on the 1/3. intentional overmap, not sure if that makes it acceptable though. feel free to follow up on it if you don't think it's fitting.
  11. 02:03:270 (1,4) - Why do they end at 1/3 tick? i feel like the extended sliders help add emphasis to the guitar in this section. the guitar doesn't have a hard stopping sound and i was trying to express that.
  12. 02:08:604 (5) - ^
  13. 02:10:604 (3) - ^
Good luck! :)
thanks for the mod, really appreciate it.
iiBehe
Please dont kill me... ;-;

1. Try making the CS into 3.7
2. Add hitsounds, i feel like Empty... ;-;

00:01:270 (3) || New combo i think...
00:02:604 (3) || ^^
00:05:048 (5) || ^^
00:18:048 (7) || ^^
00:25:937 (5) || ^^
00:51:270 (4) || ^^
01:16:604 (4) || ^^
01:33:826 (4) || Try making this long by 1, not so near the other slider...
02:03:270 (1) || make this slider a little bit small by 1...
02:04:604 (4) || same ^^
02:08:604 (5) || Same ^^
02:10:604 (3) || Same ^^ || if you want to make a slider that will reach like a sonic speed to the other circle, consider the circle to be next to it...
02:36:604 (4) || New combo please...
02:53:937 (1,2,3,4) || Awkward mapping, and also the Jump is too fast for me... consider it please...
03:09:604 (6) || Make it near to this 03:08:937 (5) slider, but NOT TO CLOSE... :3
03:15:604 (2,3,4,5,6,7) || make this stream straight please :)
03:17:048 (2,3,4,5,6) || Make it near to the Reversed Slider
03:22:604 (1) || make it more near to the circle, i repeat not so CLOSE ENOUGH!
03:37:937 (6) || New combo :)
03:46:381 (3) || try making it close to the slider end
04:04:270 (4) || New combo please! :)
04:06:604 (6) || same ^^

What a good map, Relaxing... :) <3
Topic Starter
small fish
SignOfAge

SignOfAge wrote:

Please dont kill me... ;-;

1. Try making the CS into 3.7 i don't think this improves the map, it just makes it easier. i will consider this if i need to lower the difficulty for spread reasons
2. Add hitsounds, i feel like Empty... ;-; i'll work on that.

00:01:270 (3) || New combo i think... these 3 feel like nc spam, patterns are basic enough to read without nc
00:02:604 (3) || ^^
00:05:048 (5) || ^^
00:18:048 (7) || ^^ added
00:25:937 (5) || ^^ added
00:51:270 (4) || ^^added
01:16:604 (4) || ^^ nc spam
01:33:826 (4) || Try making this long by 1, not so near the other slider... extending it made it sound worse, replaced kickslider with circle.
02:03:270 (1) || make this slider a little bit small by 1... i talked about the reasoning behind extending these in my other mod
02:04:604 (4) || same ^^
02:08:604 (5) || Same ^^
02:10:604 (3) || Same ^^ || if you want to make a slider that will reach like a sonic speed to the other circle, consider the circle to be next to it... i reduced the spacing a bit here.
02:36:604 (4) || New combo please...added
02:53:937 (1,2,3,4) || Awkward mapping, and also the Jump is too fast for me... consider it please... i reduced the spacing here, but i don't really understand what's awkward. it's a basic triangle pattern with a jump at the end.
03:09:604 (6) || Make it near to this 03:08:937 (5) slider, but NOT TO CLOSE... :3 i don't think this jump is out of line with the rest of the map, it emphasizes a very strong vocal and reducing the spacing here would reduce the impact of that.
03:15:604 (2,3,4,5,6,7) || make this stream straight please :) done
03:17:048 (2,3,4,5,6) || Make it near to the Reversed Slider done
03:22:604 (1) || make it more near to the circle, i repeat not so CLOSE ENOUGH! changed slider angle to make this jump a bit more natural
03:37:937 (6) || New combo :) added
03:46:381 (3) || try making it close to the slider end done
04:04:270 (4) || New combo please! :) done
04:06:604 (6) || same ^^ done

What a good map, Relaxing... :) <3
Hollow Delta
From #modreqs doing m4m.

Goodbye.
SPOILER
00:03:270 (1) - I can see here you switched the direction of the flow, which is okay because of the strong beat, but then you completely contradict that with 3 facing the opposite direction. It's a kick slider so it really doesn't take any motion to do, but it still looks better to have it somewhat structured in my opinion.
00:51:937 (2,4) - I recommend you fix these overlaps.
00:59:270 (5,7) - The flow here isn't very good because with how slow and long the sliders are, the player has to quickly change speed to catch up, and the song doesn't suggest enough intensity to do that, so I suggest re-arranging the sliders so they flow better.
01:31:270 - I recommend you start the kiai here instead, as the chorus kicks in.
02:12:270 (3) - Because there isn't a strong enough beat to reverse the direction of the flow, it would play better if this slider extended towards the borders instead of towards the center.
Topic Starter
small fish

Bubblun wrote:

From #modreqs doing m4m.

Goodbye.
SPOILER
00:03:270 (1) - I can see here you switched the direction of the flow, which is okay because of the strong beat, but then you completely contradict that with 3 facing the opposite direction. It's a kick slider so it really doesn't take any motion to do, but it still looks better to have it somewhat structured in my opinion. adjusted this entire section. the first slider should now fit better into the previous pattern and the rest should flow into eachother more smoothly.
00:51:937 (2,4) - I recommend you fix these overlaps. done
00:59:270 (5,7) - The flow here isn't very good because with how slow and long the sliders are, the player has to quickly change speed to catch up, and the song doesn't suggest enough intensity to do that, so I suggest re-arranging the sliders so they flow better. adjusted this section
01:31:270 - I recommend you start the kiai here instead, as the chorus kicks in. done
02:12:270 (3) - Because there isn't a strong enough beat to reverse the direction of the flow, it would play better if this slider extended towards the borders instead of towards the center. done
Mahm0ud
Hey! from #modreqs doing M4M!

Goodbye
00:07:826 (3) - I suggest to remove this slider and put two hit circles at the end of the last slider (2) like this http://prntscr.com/d93uga
00:50:492 (2) - Remove this and put just a normal hit circle at - 00:50:604 - it fits much better
01:04:604 (8) - NC
01:24:381 (2 3 4 5 6 7) - This is uuh.. well for me, it doesn't fit here at all, if you listen carefully to the song you'll notice that you started the stream like two notes before, and you also ended it earlier so fix it please
I hope it helps you! here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/533613 give it a shot and good luck ;D
Topic Starter
small fish

Mahm0ud wrote:

Hey! from #modreqs doing M4M!

Goodbye
00:07:826 (3) - I suggest to remove this slider and put two hit circles at the end of the last slider (2) like this http://prntscr.com/d93uga changed this to something similar
00:50:492 (2) - Remove this and put just a normal hit circle at - 00:50:604 - it fits much better done
01:04:604 (8) - NC done
01:24:381 (2 3 4 5 6 7) - This is uuh.. well for me, it doesn't fit here at all, if you listen carefully to the song you'll notice that you started the stream like two notes before, and you also ended it earlier so fix it please adjusted this section
I hope it helps you! here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/533613 give it a shot and good luck ;D
thanks for the mod~
Olegase
Hello! M4M
[General]
  1. I advise you to read these topics. Usefully
  2. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/208596
  3. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/495246?hilit=Ensure+that+your+combos
[Goodbye]
  1. 00:00:604 (1,2,3,4) - I think it should be repeated. 00:01:937 (1,2,3,4).
  2. 00:03:270 (1,2,3) - Arrange the notes in a straight line.Because there is sound enhancement. Example https://puu.sh/sohjB.png.
  3. 00:05:715 (6) - I think it should be put in front slider. And add NC. https://puu.sh/sohE6.png
  4. 00:05:937 (1) - delete NC.
  5. 00:08:159 (5) - make blanket.
  6. 00:08:604 (1) - Positioned opposite the. https://puu.sh/soi02.png
  7. 00:08:159 (5,6,1) - I think it should be repeated. 00:09:048 (2,3,4). https://puu.sh/soi23.png
  8. 00:10:604 (1,2,3) - to increase the spacing.
  9. 00:11:270 (1,2,3,4) - Ugly, change. https://puu.sh/soikg.png or https://puu.sh/soip4.png.
  10. 00:12:604 (5) - NC.
  11. 00:13:937 (1,2,3,4) - Loss of rhythm, to replace. https://puu.sh/soiup.png
  12. 00:15:270 (5) - NC.
  13. 00:15:937 (1,2,3) - to increase the spacing.
  14. 00:17:492 (5,6) - I think you need to put so. https://puu.sh/soiF5.png
  15. 00:18:826 (1) - delete NC.
  16. 00:19:492 (4) - NC.
  17. 00:19:492 (4,5) - I think it should be repeated. 00:20:159 (6,7). https://puu.sh/soiLY.png
  18. 00:21:270 (4,5,6) - Replace the triangle. Example. 00:10:604 (1,2,3) .
  19. 00:26:826 - You can make a beautiful pattern with recurrent sliders. https://puu.sh/sojdG.png
  20. 00:29:270 (1,2,3) - to increase the spacing.
  21. 00:32:604 (1,2,3,4) - Loss of rhythm, to replace. https://puu.sh/sojmE.png
  22. 00:36:270 (2,3) - It looks better that way. https://puu.sh/sojqw.png
  23. 00:38:937 (6,7,1) - It looks better that way. https://puu.sh/sojB6.png
  24. 00:42:937 (1,2) - Put like this, there is a continuation of the triangle. https://puu.sh/sojJS.png or https://puu.sh/sojKL.png.
  25. 00:49:604 (1) - make blanket. https://puu.sh/sojNO.png
  26. 00:51:270 (1,2) - make return slider. https://puu.sh/sojTz.png
  27. 00:53:604 (1) - replace on note. Or to lengthen the slider. https://puu.sh/sojYn.png
  28. 00:54:937 (3,4) - make blanket.
  29. 00:57:604 - make this NC.
  30. 00:57:937 - delete NC.
  31. 00:58:937 (5,6) - delete overlap.
  32. 00:57:604 (7) - NC.
  33. 01:01:937 (1) - delete NC.
  34. 01:02:937 (4) - rotate the slider.https://puu.sh/sokfJ.png
  35. 01:06:937 - Loss of rhythm, to replace. https://puu.sh/sokug.png
  36. 01:16:604 (4,5,6) - It looks better that way. https://puu.sh/sokzE.png
  37. 01:19:270 (2,3) - I think you need to do the anti-jump. https://puu.sh/sokHi.png
  38. 01:21:604 (3,4,5) - Repeat as before. https://puu.sh/sokO4.png
  39. 01:23:937 (1) - delete NC.
  40. 01:24:604 (2) - NC.
  41. 01:28:604 (6) - NC.
  42. 01:29:270 (1) - delete NC.
  43. 01:31:270 (7) - NC.
  44. 01:32:270 (1) - delete NC.
  45. 01:31:937 (8,1) - replace on slider.
  46. 01:33:270 (3,4) - turn. https://puu.sh/sol8R.png
  47. 01:35:937 (1,2) - Loss of rhythm, to replace. https://puu.sh/sole9.png
  48. 01:39:270 (2,3) - make return slider. https://puu.sh/soljR.png
  49. 01:41:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Loss of rhythm, to replace. https://puu.sh/solrZ.png
  50. 01:47:270 (2,3) - ^. https://puu.sh/solvb.png
  51. 01:53:937 (3,4) - make blanket.
  52. 01:58:937 (2) - ^.
  53. 01:59:270 (3) - It looks better that way. https://puu.sh/solHw.png
  54. 02:03:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. https://puu.sh/solW0.png
  55. 02:05:937 (1) - make return slider. https://puu.sh/solYe.png
  56. 02:08:604 (5) - Loss of rhythm, shorten the slider.
  57. 02:10:604 (3) - ^.
  58. 02:12:270 (3) - maybe so? https://puu.sh/som8f.png
  59. 02:30:604 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - To make the spacing steadily increased or was at the same level.
  60. 02:39:270 (3,4) - make return slider. https://puu.sh/somhH.png
  61. 02:41:270 (7,8) - ^.
  62. 02:43:270 (2,3) - ^.
  63. 02:47:270 (3,4) - It looks better that way. https://puu.sh/somtw.png
  64. 02:48:270 (5,6) - ^
  65. 02:49:270 (1,2) - make return slider.
  66. 02:56:770 (6) - ^
  67. 03:02:604 (2,3,4,5,6) - to make symmetrical 03:05:770 (5,6,7,8,9).
  68. 03:06:937 (1,3) - make blanket.
  69. 03:10:604 (1) - delete NC.
  70. 03:10:937 (2) - NC.
  71. 03:10:937 (2,3,4) - Loss of rhythm. https://puu.sh/son0p.png.
  72. 03:12:604 - beginning spinner.
  73. 03:16:604 - LOST rhythm all. https://puu.sh/soneu.png https://puu.sh/sonhh.png https://puu.sh/sonjz.png https://puu.sh/sonmN.png https://puu.sh/sonsM.png https://puu.sh/sonxY.png.
  74. 03:25:937 (1) - delete NC.
  75. 03:26:381 (2) - NC.
  76. 03:31:937 (3,4) - replace on slider.
  77. 03:35:715 (2) - replace on note.
  78. 03:53:604 (7,8) - From the previous pattern, I think it should be put below. https://puu.sh/sonNP.png
  79. 03:54:937 (1,2) - ^.
  80. 03:54:937 (1,2,3) - lost rhythm. https://puu.sh/sonUK.png
  81. 03:57:937 (5) - make return slider.
  82. 04:04:604 (2) - replace on note.
PS: This song is beautiful. And I had to work really hard to make this work. All I'm asking is worthy to appreciate it ( maybe 2 kudosu :) )
Good luck with rank! ;)
Topic Starter
small fish
mod

Olegase wrote:

Hello! M4M
[General]
  1. I advise you to read these topics. Usefully
  2. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/208596
  3. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/495246?hilit=Ensure+that+your+combos
[Goodbye]
  1. 00:00:604 (1,2,3,4) - I think it should be repeated. 00:01:937 (1,2,3,4). i adjusted the spacing on the second pattern to match the first more closely.
  2. 00:03:270 (1,2,3) - Arrange the notes in a straight line.Because there is sound enhancement. Example https://puu.sh/sohjB.png. done
  3. 00:05:715 (6) - I think it should be put in front slider. And add NC. https://puu.sh/sohE6.png disagree, i feel like it fits better flowing out of 00:05:048 (5) - and belongs a part of that pattern.
  4. 00:05:937 (1) - delete NC.
  5. 00:08:159 (5) - make blanket. done
  6. 00:08:604 (1) - Positioned opposite the. https://puu.sh/soi02.png not sure i understand this, the current map looks identical to your picture.
  7. 00:08:159 (5,6,1) - I think it should be repeated. 00:09:048 (2,3,4). https://puu.sh/soi23.png i don't understand that change you want here either :?
  8. 00:10:604 (1,2,3) - to increase the spacing. done
  9. 00:11:270 (1,2,3,4) - Ugly, change. https://puu.sh/soikg.png or https://puu.sh/soip4.png. done
  10. 00:12:604 (5) - NC. done
  11. 00:13:937 (1,2,3,4) - Loss of rhythm, to replace. https://puu.sh/soiup.png adjusted
  12. 00:15:270 (5) - NC. done
  13. 00:15:937 (1,2,3) - to increase the spacing. disagree
  14. 00:17:492 (5,6) - I think you need to put so. https://puu.sh/soiF5.png changed
  15. 00:18:826 (1) - delete NC.
  16. 00:19:492 (4) - NC. done
  17. 00:19:492 (4,5) - I think it should be repeated. 00:20:159 (6,7). https://puu.sh/soiLY.png done
  18. 00:21:270 (4,5,6) - Replace the triangle. Example. 00:10:604 (1,2,3) . done
  19. 00:26:826 - You can make a beautiful pattern with recurrent sliders. https://puu.sh/sojdG.png remapped section
  20. 00:29:270 (1,2,3) - to increase the spacing. slightly increased
  21. 00:32:604 (1,2,3,4) - Loss of rhythm, to replace. https://puu.sh/sojmE.png adjusted, kept extended sliders.
  22. 00:36:270 (2,3) - It looks better that way. https://puu.sh/sojqw.png done
  23. 00:38:937 (6,7,1) - It looks better that way. https://puu.sh/sojB6.png i changed this, but putting this where you suggested makes the jump between 7 and 1 way bigger than the song calls for.
  24. 00:42:937 (1,2) - Put like this, there is a continuation of the triangle. https://puu.sh/sojJS.png or https://puu.sh/sojKL.png. done
  25. 00:49:604 (1) - make blanket. https://puu.sh/sojNO.png done
  26. 00:51:270 (1,2) - make return slider. https://puu.sh/sojTz.png done
  27. 00:53:604 (1) - replace on note. Or to lengthen the slider. https://puu.sh/sojYn.png done
  28. 00:54:937 (3,4) - make blanket. done
  29. 00:57:604 - make this NC.
  30. 00:57:937 - delete NC. done
  31. 00:58:937 (5,6) - delete overlap. disagree
  32. 00:57:604 (7) - NC. done
  33. 01:01:937 (1) - delete NC.
  34. 01:02:937 (4) - rotate the slider.https://puu.sh/sokfJ.png done
  35. 01:06:937 - Loss of rhythm, to replace. https://puu.sh/sokug.png done
  36. 01:16:604 (4,5,6) - It looks better that way. https://puu.sh/sokzE.png done
  37. 01:19:270 (2,3) - I think you need to do the anti-jump. https://puu.sh/sokHi.png changed a bit
  38. 01:21:604 (3,4,5) - Repeat as before. https://puu.sh/sokO4.png done
  39. 01:23:937 (1) - delete NC. done
  40. 01:24:604 (2) - NC. done
  41. 01:28:604 (6) - NC. done
  42. 01:29:270 (1) - delete NC. done
  43. 01:31:270 (7) - NC. done
  44. 01:32:270 (1) - delete NC. done
  45. 01:31:937 (8,1) - replace on slider. done
  46. 01:33:270 (3,4) - turn. https://puu.sh/sol8R.png done
  47. 01:35:937 (1,2) - Loss of rhythm, to replace. https://puu.sh/sole9.png done
  48. 01:39:270 (2,3) - make return slider. https://puu.sh/soljR.png done
  49. 01:41:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Loss of rhythm, to replace. https://puu.sh/solrZ.png done
  50. 01:47:270 (2,3) - ^. https://puu.sh/solvb.png done
  51. 01:53:937 (3,4) - make blanket.done
  52. 01:58:937 (2) - ^. done
  53. 01:59:270 (3) - It looks better that way. https://puu.sh/solHw.png done
  54. 02:03:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. https://puu.sh/solW0.png done
  55. 02:05:937 (1) - make return slider. https://puu.sh/solYe.png done
  56. 02:08:604 (5) - Loss of rhythm, shorten the slider. disagree. these two are extended to emphasize the extended guitar notes.
  57. 02:10:604 (3) - ^.
  58. 02:12:270 (3) - maybe so? https://puu.sh/som8f.png diagree
  59. 02:30:604 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - To make the spacing steadily increased or was at the same level. adjusted, should increase over time.
  60. 02:39:270 (3,4) - make return slider. https://puu.sh/somhH.png done
  61. 02:41:270 (7,8) - ^. done
  62. 02:43:270 (2,3) - ^. done
  63. 02:47:270 (3,4) - It looks better that way. https://puu.sh/somtw.png done
  64. 02:48:270 (5,6) - ^ done
  65. 02:49:270 (1,2) - make return slider. done
  66. 02:56:770 (6) - ^ done
  67. 03:02:604 (2,3,4,5,6) - to make symmetrical 03:05:770 (5,6,7,8,9). done
  68. 03:06:937 (1,3) - make blanket. done
  69. 03:10:604 (1) - delete NC. disagree
  70. 03:10:937 (2) - NC.
  71. 03:10:937 (2,3,4) - Loss of rhythm. https://puu.sh/son0p.png. done
  72. 03:12:604 - beginning spinner. done
  73. 03:16:604 - LOST rhythm all. https://puu.sh/soneu.png https://puu.sh/sonhh.png https://puu.sh/sonjz.png https://puu.sh/sonmN.png https://puu.sh/sonsM.png https://puu.sh/sonxY.png. while this would have been a different way to map this section, I
    am happy with the way it is right now. I transition from the drums a bit early to start on the main guitar riff which i feel is the main focus of this section of the song. I might revisit this later, but for now I will be leaving this as is.
  74. 03:25:937 (1) - delete NC. disagree
  75. 03:26:381 (2) - NC.
  76. 03:31:937 (3,4) - replace on slider. done
  77. 03:35:715 (2) - replace on note. disagree, this is mapped to the vocals.
  78. 03:53:604 (7,8) - From the previous pattern, I think it should be put below. https://puu.sh/sonNP.png done
  79. 03:54:937 (1,2) - ^. done
  80. 03:54:937 (1,2,3) - lost rhythm. https://puu.sh/sonUK.png done
  81. 03:57:937 (5) - make return slider. done
  82. 04:04:604 (2) - replace on note. disagree, this is mapped to the vocals.
PS: This song is beautiful. And I had to work really hard to make this work. All I'm asking is worthy to appreciate it ( maybe 2 kudosu :) )
Good luck with rank! ;)

thanks for the mod, big ones like this take a lot of time and i appreciate it! i think i addressed everything.
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