Yonezawa Madoka - Shiny GEMS · forum

narakucrimson

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narakucrimson 2011-05-27T20:38:28+00:00

Hi there! Here it goes:

[Easy]

I think that slider tick rate 1 would be better on all difficulties. It helps in the slow parts, makes them a little more readable.
See, you don't have to delete the empty .osb file

[Easy]

I'm not a fan of x0,5 timing sections on Easy diffs. But it's at least readable here. I'm just saying this so that you're careful in the future, remember this is made for people that just started playing.

[Normal]

00:43:048 (6) - The way this is overlapped by (5) isn't really good... Could you, perhaps, try to "open" this up to the right, like moving it and redesigning the slider?
This is pretty good :3

[Hard]

00:50:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You know, having the volume so low on this combo doesn't really help while playing. I usually know when I hit a circle by the sound. I thought I had missed when I played... Please get the volume up a little. Also, you didn't lower the volume on the other diffs so doing this fix would be totally logical xD

That's all! I think the map is very good, and I did like how you handled the hitsounds.
Great job! Have my star!

sherrie__fay

437 posts

Joined October 2010

sherrie__fay 2011-05-28T04:54:46+00:00

公事公办
我是来射星的:D

AKB-KaSAi

23 posts

Joined May 2011

AKB-KaSAi 2011-05-28T05:03:15+00:00

dont know anything about modding. :J
H diff is awesome

its too hard for me,though.

Roddie

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Roddie 2011-05-28T21:33:48+00:00

Hi.

Easy

01:28:266 (4)-Add a finish?
01:31:309 (2)-Add a whistle on the end?
01:35:657 (4)-Add a whistle or a finish??
01:53:483 (5)-I think a finish would sound more better than a whistle.
01:53:918 (1)-Add a finish or a whistle here??

Normal

01:53:918 (1)-Add a finish or a whistle here??

Hard

01:10:005 (4)-I don't like this kind of slider you've created. The player won't know which direction the slider ball will go to. I strongly suggest you create something else.
01:24:353 (4)-This isn't acceptable. Sliders can't overlap themselves. Create a different slider formation.
01:53:918 (1)-Add a finish or a whistle here??
02:53:048 (1)-Put a new combo here???

And that's it. Good luck!

Star!

Lucy_Heartfilia_old

554 posts

Joined March 2010

Lucy_Heartfilia_old 2011-05-29T05:05:53+00:00

图已经改到这地步了，像我这种不是灰常细心的，已经找不到什么可以帮助了。
就说下感觉吧，Easy和Normal灰常好。Hard这距离略触，其他都好。射星

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

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Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2011-05-29T09:55:54+00:00

Fixed some
Thanks your modding and star

ken710

145 posts

Joined February 2009

ken710 2011-05-29T14:07:52+00:00

Hard太難了..
Insane都沒這麼難

可以考慮再做個難度
不然大部分人大概只能玩Normal了

star~

Shino

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Joined April 2010

Shino 2011-05-30T05:09:04+00:00

Star. Especially Hard was very good.

Tashi_Scarlett[x]

54 posts

Joined April 2009

Tashi_Scarlett[x] 2011-05-30T17:31:18+00:00

nice star

jameskong1

403 posts

Joined December 2008

jameskong1 2011-05-30T18:08:41+00:00

[General]
Nice song and mapset <3
star >.0

[Easy]
Found nothing

[Normal]
00:23:048 (1) - Add a note or whatever
03:08:556 (1) - New combo

[Hard]
00:12:324 (4) - Maybe move to 00:12:396? just a minor suggestion.ignore if you want
01:10:005 (4) - A bit confusing some Sb words can help
01:24:353 (4) - ^
02:17:831 (2-3) - Fine for me.Dunno what others think

pianiac

93 posts

Joined May 2011

pianiac 2011-05-31T08:23:02+00:00

INSANE MOD INSANE MOD!!

Nixnez

295 posts

Joined April 2010

Nixnez 2011-05-31T08:56:13+00:00

拖了两星期多，抱歉。

[General]
- (Very minor issue) System prompt me to save after resnapping all notes.
- Rank mp3最高bitrate只能是192kbps，找人帮忙降低吧。
- Slider开端和结尾重叠。。。Hmm，是在某些ranked map看到，等MAT/BAT的意见吧。我本身是觉得ok。

[Easy + Hard]
- 大致上ok。

[Normal]
- 00:23:048 - 这里加个拍？
- 00:30:005 - ^ (其他相似区都有拍，只有这里特别停顿)

没什么好挑的图。送星闪人~

YaMaO04

214 posts

Joined June 2010

YaMaO04 2011-05-31T15:55:23+00:00

YinXL

7 posts

Joined January 2011

YinXL 2011-06-01T12:50:02+00:00

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OzzyOzrock

5,185 posts

Joined August 2010

OzzyOzrock 2011-06-02T00:31:42+00:00

so moe ><

can I taiko? :<

xinhe

116 posts

Joined February 2010

xinhe 2011-06-02T06:24:51+00:00

以下均为意见
[EZ]
nice
[NOR]
AR+1?感觉从NOR过度到hard速度突然快好多
[HARD]
00:44:353 (1) - 不要藏在6下面会不会好点
03:09:570 (1,2,3,4) - 1和绿色的2分开一点～4个NOTE也分开点会不会更舒服一点

差不多就这些啦～
NICE MAP

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2011-06-02T13:21:42+00:00

~mod~

[general]
mp3 @ 320 kbps? Compress to 128~192

[Hard]
00:37:251 (6) - remove clap?
01:10:005 (4) - not sure, but the initial and final position of slider should not completely overlap, otherwise denote the direction by SB?
01:24:353 (4) - ^
02:26:382 (6) - clap here?

[Normal]
00:30:440 (1,2) - stack?

no problem with me, really good song ^^

Hushu_old

207 posts

Joined October 2010

Hushu_old 2011-06-03T11:46:43+00:00

Hi ther. I'll recheck but I won't give a star yet~ I'll see if you will fix the most of the stuff I've said - and give star for that if you did.

Easy:
Turn up the volume by 10%
0:23:483 - This is the only 3/1 long slider till the break so it feels very awkward. Place one more slider this lenght or remove this one. For the first option, the best place is 0:30:440. Alas, fix the shape with the Delicious slider guide
0:28:701 - Switch (3) with (4)
2:18:266 - Finish or whistle
2:40:440 - Remove

Normal:
0:26:092 - Fix shape by copying slider (5) and turning it 90 anti clockwise then distant snapping.
1:51:309 - Space it so that (3) is at the same X as (1) is.

Hard:
1:15:657 - You shouldn't place sliders so that they go over themselves. Check if rankable~
1:50:874 - Fix shape with the delicious sliders guide.
2:55:512 - New combo here not 1/3 later?

Last edited by Hushu_old 2011-06-05T12:27:28+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

wcx19911123

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Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2011-06-05T06:31:49+00:00

Fixed some
Thanks you all

SPOILER

About mp3 : I think it is 169 kbps , do you believe a 3 mins long 320 kbps mp3 only cost 4MB ?

About 2 sliders in Hard : 01:10:005 (4) and 01:24:353 (4) , I know this 2 sliders are unreadble , but it's playable , you can hold it without moving mouse even don't know which side it go , it's playable at all even you hold HardRock mod or in Taiko/CTB mode , so I don't know why they are unrankble. If it's a LAW , I'll fix it

pianiac

93 posts

Joined May 2011

pianiac 2011-06-05T07:40:08+00:00

star

veoliouy

44 posts

Joined January 2011

veoliouy 2011-06-06T16:10:34+00:00

给神触支持!

Kei

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Joined May 2010

Kei 2011-06-07T16:44:04+00:00

Hi! I couldn't find anything wrong in your map . Sorry .-.
The only thing I would change if I where you is the Slider Tick Rate of the Easy Difficulty to 1.

Nice beatmap! n-n ~Star

Kenezz

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Kenezz 2011-06-08T00:57:15+00:00

Heey o/
Kenezz's Bakamod~~

Hard

01:10:005 (4) - Unrankeable, I think at first sight is impossible to know in which direction you move this slider...trying to fix it?
01:24:353 (4) - ^

That's all~
Good map and moe song <3
Starred~

Faust

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Faust 2011-06-08T07:02:59+00:00

Easy: I'd ask that you turn up the spacing by 0.2 and increase the AR by 1 tick.

Normal: Not much fault here. Maybe a little bit linear for a song of this pace.
I think it's fine as it is.

Hard: Fun and consistent movement. I think you pulled off the calmer parts generally well and the
jumps nearing the end were intuitive to follow.

- 00:15:114 - Hmm, would be nice if you made usage of the selectable combo colors.
Here is my suggestion:

SPOILER

Try doing the same for all similar note pairings throughout the map.

- 00:33:701 - Stack this note on top of (1)

- 01:09:135 - Oh, this entire thing is fantastic. I like it a lot.

- 01:24:353 - I don't think this is allowed. I can't say much, I do like it but I don't know if I can condone it.

Enjoyable.

All the best. A bubble shouldn't be hard to snag.

Sakura

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Sakura 2011-06-11T05:37:46+00:00

[Hard]
Notes feel kinda cramped, consider increasing approach rate.
00:50:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Things like this are kinda mean for a Hard difficulty, they are pretty hard to follow specially with all the approach circles going on at the same time.
01:10:005 (4) - Slider start and end are overlapping, this is unrankable
01:24:353 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:21:309 (5) - Slider doesnt fit this part of the music, instead split into 2 notes, so that you can keep (5) as an slider?
00:36:527 (6) - I really would like you to reverse the direction of this slider, but it may break the spacing too badly.
01:43:773 (2,3) - The change of direction here is breaking the beatflow, i recommend you reverse direction the slider and rearrange the notes so that spacing doesnt break.

[Easy]
I dont recommend using slow down on this difficulty, first of all because newbies normally cant follow a slider speed change in mid beatmap, and second because the map is already slow enough as it is.
03:02:614 (5) - Short repeat sliders arent recommended on Easies, because newbies cant tell how long they should hold.
03:09:570 (5) - ^

Pretty unique map i must say, i like it!

whymeman

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whymeman 2011-06-12T20:13:55+00:00

[Hard]

01:10:005 (4) - I thought you fixed this slider. The two ends should NEVER overlap over each other because of the fact you won't know where the silderball is going to go.
01:24:353 (4) - ^

wcx19911123

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Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2011-06-13T03:01:12+00:00

Fixed 0.0

whymeman

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whymeman 2011-06-13T18:31:46+00:00

Alright, now it looks better.