Hi there~
Sorry for the late mod, but here you go:
[Easy]
0'11''309 - Maybe add a whistle at the end also?
0'14''788 - ^
0'19''135 - ^
0'39''135 - ^
0'43''483 - ^
1'14''788 - ^
1'18''266 - For this one, try a finish.
2'58''266 - Like the rest, add a whistle at the end.
Mostly, it's the same mod: add a whistle at the chorus part. I just think it sounds better that way.
Everything else is OK, nice diff!
[Normal]
0'50''440 - Move the clap from the reverse to the beginning of the slider.
1'08''701 - I think you should combine sliders [1] and [2] here into a 3-times reverse slider, like so ->
Sounds better with Ui singing, and not too sudden. Also, if you choose to do this, don't forget to add claps at the first reverse
and the end.
2'18''266 - Add a finish at the beginning.
Also a nice diff!
[Hard]
Why do I get an image of hippies doing the square-dance while watching your map play? (@.@)
0'49''425 -> 0'51''309 - As lovely as the pattern here might be, the subsequent notes are a bit hard to see, with the combobursts from the earlier notes blocking them. You may have to rearrange them a bit.
1'24''353 - Erm, is this slider rankable? Since the beginning and the end overlap. I can't remember, but you need to ask a more experienced mapper or a MAT for confirmation.
2'16''092 - Maybe you should reverse this note (Ctrl+R)?
Your maps are always nice, wcx19911123, and hearing Ui sing a folksy song is just overkill. So, a blue star and a pink star to you~
All the best in getting this ranked!
Sorry for the late mod, but here you go:
[Easy]
0'11''309 - Maybe add a whistle at the end also?
0'14''788 - ^
0'19''135 - ^
0'39''135 - ^
0'43''483 - ^
1'14''788 - ^
1'18''266 - For this one, try a finish.
2'58''266 - Like the rest, add a whistle at the end.
Mostly, it's the same mod: add a whistle at the chorus part. I just think it sounds better that way.
Everything else is OK, nice diff!
[Normal]
0'50''440 - Move the clap from the reverse to the beginning of the slider.
1'08''701 - I think you should combine sliders [1] and [2] here into a 3-times reverse slider, like so ->
Sounds better with Ui singing, and not too sudden. Also, if you choose to do this, don't forget to add claps at the first reverse
and the end.
2'18''266 - Add a finish at the beginning.
Also a nice diff!
[Hard]
Why do I get an image of hippies doing the square-dance while watching your map play? (@.@)
0'49''425 -> 0'51''309 - As lovely as the pattern here might be, the subsequent notes are a bit hard to see, with the combobursts from the earlier notes blocking them. You may have to rearrange them a bit.
1'24''353 - Erm, is this slider rankable? Since the beginning and the end overlap. I can't remember, but you need to ask a more experienced mapper or a MAT for confirmation.
2'16''092 - Maybe you should reverse this note (Ctrl+R)?
Your maps are always nice, wcx19911123, and hearing Ui sing a folksy song is just overkill. So, a blue star and a pink star to you~
All the best in getting this ranked!