ForewordThis map is looking pretty good!
So this mod will focus primarily on Object Placement and a little bit of Rhythm.
Rhythm00:00:410 (1) - if you're going to hitsound this sliderend into a strong sound this beat should be clicked.
00:11:552 (5) - this goes for the entire section, i dont think this beat should be ignored because its so loud, in fact i think it should be clicked
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7013962 i suggest this rhythm because it emphasizes all of the correct beats
00:14:124 (2) - same
00:14:810 (3) - same
For this entire section really
The guitar is not some holy grail that has to be mapped as a slider, 00:12:752 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - just look at how you treated the guitar sounds here!
This is way better than long sliders during an intense section
Definitely an interesting suggestion I am considering but I also think how it currently is is fine. Will change it if more people told me to do so.00:23:895 (10,11,12) - i think these should be circles as there is no strong sound on either of the ticks to warrant using a kickslider, using circles would make it more interesting and it would fit the song better.
Done.00:25:267 (5,6,7) - same
^00:38:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why are these circles even though the earlier 1/6 was in sliders?
Use either sliders or circles for ALL 1/6 in the entire map (i suggest using circles)
People in mods told me it would be better to use sliders first to indicate the use of 1/6th rhytm in the song and that it will be used later. But maybe you're right. 01:02:124 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is fine
00:44:981 (6,7,8) - kiclsliders again
Changed to regular stream like ^.04:28:352 (6) - you're ignoring a very strong beat here
Mapped some jumps instead of the slider here.04:55:267 (1,4) - same
Mapped the guitar here though.i wont point this out more, you get the idea
Object Placement00:18:067 (5,1) - why is the distance between these so different from 00:18:752 (3,4) - ?
Rotated the entire section a bit and then increased the spacing between 00:18:495 (2,3) - 00:21:667 (9) - The guitar goes into really high pitch here, i would suggest NC here and have 00:21:667 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - be way more spaced out
It actually goes high pitched at 00:20:981 (1) - and lowers at 00:21:667 (9) - . Good suggestion but I'll change it according to what I said. Also changed NC like you said.00:43:438 (1) - you can clearly hear that the strong beat where the stream should turn is not here but here 00:43:610 (3) -
There is a strong sound there but where the stream turns now it turns at the beat where drums goes from snare drum to bass drum. I think your suggestion is good though so what I'll do is I'll decrease the spacing gradually with these 3 00:43:352 (6,1,2) - and then make the turn at 00:43:610 (3) - where you suggested.00:50:295 (2) - i feel like this isnt spaced out enough, the rest of this section is rather spaced
Increased the spacing and changed 00:49:781 (1) - accordingly for good flow. 00:54:495 (8) - this is not where the stream should change because you have been changing streams on the strong sounds, not before the strong sounds and the strong sound here is clearly 00:54:580 (9) -
Fixed, changed at 9 now.00:56:895 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - this could be spaced out a lot more, as it is now its too easy for the intensity of the song
Spacing increased.01:05:381 (7) - i feel like this deserves a NC
Done.01:16:524 (9) - strong beat is here, not 01:16:352 (7) -
Changed the same way as above.01:32:124 (3,4) - this spacing is just way too small for this section
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7014016 think in these scales
01:33:495 (3,4) - same
i get that it might be your concept but i dont feel like it reflects the music correctly
01:34:867 (3,4) - same
01:36:924 (3,1) - the spacing suddenly changed for the better here, nice!
01:38:295 (3,1) - and back to worse
01:39:667 (3,4) - same
02:14:810 (1,2) - same
Fixed all.02:25:781 (1) - why does this start on a white tick but 02:20:552 (2) - starts on a blue tick? Consistency (use white tick pls)
when i say this i mean consistency throughout the entire map.
02:25:781 (1) - The stream starts here so it's on this tick. 02:20:552 (2) - This is wrong though but what you said isn't correct either. The stream starts on the red this but that was the slider end of 02:20:124 (1) - . I changed it now so this slider ends on the blue tick and the stream starts on the red tick.02:51:838 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - the strong notes here are on every 4th beat not every third
I'm pretty sure this is correct.02:58:010 (9) - NC and spacing increase because guitar pitch
Done.03:03:067 (4,6,8) - All of these should be NC'd to indicate the SV change
Done.03:16:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - why is this NC'd? Also the angle and spacing are a bit too tame and easy
Removed nc's and spiced up the spacing.03:39:667 (6,1) - spacing
03:43:095 (6,1) - same
03:44:467 (6,7) - same
Done x3.03:46:009 (9) - Strong beat should be emphasized, not the one before it
Fixed.03:46:695 (1) - spacing should start here, not 03:46:867 (3) -
Done.03:49:267 (2,3) - these should be a kickslider so you could NC 03:49:438 (4) - and emphasize it correctly
Done.03:54:495 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - this just looks really ugly, please clean it up a little
Okay.03:56:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is it just me or is the spacing in this stream inconsistent?
It was, fixed.04:00:066 (14) - NC
Done.04:09:324 (2) - slider should start here, not 04:09:152 (2) - "why" is obvious
04:09:152 (2,3) - this spacing is way too small
04:09:152 (2,4) - this overlapping looks bad, please space out 04:09:838 (4) - more
Changed this entire section. ^^04:22:352 (12) - NC
Done.04:22:524 (1) - no NC
Done.04:39:495 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - no NC
Fixed NC's around this part.04:39:667 (3,1) - increase spacing between these to look more like 04:39:324 (7,1) -
Done.04:43:609 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i get the idea but this is very hard to read
If more people tell me to I'll change it.05:08:981 (7) - NC and make into a slider that ends where the guitar ends, also silence the sliderend
it gives more character to and end
I don't think a slider fits because the guitar ends on the blue tick before the next white tick. That would mean the slider would have to be either quite long or short and slow. Long just doesn't look right. Short does but slow wouldn't fit with the intensity. Added NC though.