Lilu
Thanks for the mod![ Lilu ] wrote:
Hey there! :3
Extra Stage
00:01:675 (11,12,13) - Spacing is inconsistent here, maybe move 12 and 13 away from the end of the stream just a tad so it looks separate, and not like its an inconsistent stream https://puu.sh/sYBkf/19c84dd4ee.jpg alternatively, you can nc on 12. The spacing is inconsistent because 12 and 13 are not actually part of the stream but part of the triple-with-a-slider-at-the-end pattern that happens at this part and throughout the map. Nothing changed.
00:15:304 (4,1) - large spacing, you could melt the slider end into the stream for better flow. Done, slider end now has the same spacing as the circles in the streams.
00:27:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i played the map once before modding, and boy were all of these just ridiculous to play. idk if it was me being shit at playing or the map, I think its just because 4 stacks on 1/6 aren't really all that comfortable to play. maybe if it were a triple then smol slider? (apply this suggestion wherever there is those, in case you do agree with me) I think it's fine. It fits the music.
00:54:475 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - with this sectrion of the stream, i think the whole thing could be rotated a little, The stream goes from clockwise motion to linear (for notes 7,8 and 9) then back to clockwise. if 7,8 and 9 were a little more rounded, and the rest of the stream a little bit rotated, you could eliminate that linear motion. Done.
02:21:132 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - this boring linear motion doesn't suit the wild guitar its mapped to, spice it up a little maybe? (dont make it linear, maybe make it more curved) Done, added curve.
02:50:704 (1,1) - there is a really big jump in the middle of these back and forths, maybe move some sliders around so its more consistent. Done, made the spacing consistent between the kicksliders.
02:51:732 (4,1) - spacing here is bigger than it needs to be Done, decreased spacing a bit.
03:07:332 (6,7) - 6 to 7 doesnt look very nice maybe just reshape it a little so the 7 isnt completely overlapped. Done.
03:47:961 (32) - 32? maybe add a nc in that stream somewhere Oops, forgot to fix combo here after applying a mod. Fixed now.
03:59:818 (13,14,15,16,17) - spacing in this stream is a bit wonky Fixed.
04:43:675 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - THINK OF ALL THE HIDDEN PLAYERS MY MAN! Im kidding but still i think the slider stacked ontop of the stream is a bit hard to read, maybe move the stream out from under there Screw hidden players. Nah jk. I like this a lot though so I'm keeping it. I'll consider changing it though if more people tell me to.
The rest looks pretty good to me!
It was also really fun to play
Good luck with future mods and possibly getting it ranked!
Azulae
Thanks for the mod.Azulae wrote:
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M4M
[General]
Use more combo colours that fit to the background image Done, added white.
Activate widescreen support Done.
I am not sure if the title is correct or incorrect. Ask someone to check it I hope it's correct or other maps are wrong too
[Extra Stage]
00:07:504 (2) - Why dont you use the same slider as 00:07:247 (1)
00:08:189 (5) - ^ No reason to use the same slider, no reason to use a different one either. I don't think it matters much.
00:16:847 (5) - Bad slider curve Changed the slider.
00:23:704 (9) - New combo
00:24:390 (1) - Remove combo I think this one and ^ are fine.
00:22:332 - 00:44:275 has weird new combos Changed some combo's around.
00:56:447 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do it like this http://puu.sh/sYGS5/bfb1568115.jpg Done.
01:01:761 (1,2,3,4) - 1/6 very bad readable because of the overlaps Removed overlaps.
01:04:847 (1) - Dont start at 5% volume. You can start at 30%. Done, changed it here and on other parts of the map.
02:56:961 (5) - New combo because of the pattern. Why a combo of 1, and what pattern?
A really nice map! Good luck with it.
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