m4m
00:05:875 (9) - NC
00:01:418 (8) - NC here instead of 00:01:932 (1) - (or you can keep this NC because you repeated this look afterwards)
00:08:189 (5) - I think this would work better as a stream because of the music
00:11:361 (5) - I dont know how I feel about these sliders you put here, because there is a drum beat in the middle and it feels and sounds awkward. I can see why you put these here but I think they would work better as return sliders.
00:14:104 (2) - ^
00:14:790 (3) - ^
00:16:847 (5) - ^
00:17:532 (8) - ^ (Also no hitsound in the middle? Kind of throws you off)
00:19:590 (1) - These streams are one of the few exceptions to not NCing in the middle, well done
00:20:961 (17) - NC here instead though
Overall I can see so far you are using NC very peculiarly, I think this might be a gimmick?
00:27:132 (9) - NC here because the change in timing, you should always NC when changing timing or SV
00:29:704 (1,2,1) - This NC looks weird, un-NC 00:29:875 (1) -
00:35:618 (3,5) - Weird overlap, looks ugly
00:38:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you should slightly shrink these stacks
00:43:504 (8) - Odd timing on a blue tick to be changing direction of stream, should be to music not just random like this
00:47:875 (6,7,8) - please dont do this
01:22:332 (10,11,12,2,3,4) - These are a little too close imo, should be spaced like 01:21:990 (7,8,9,10,11,12) -
01:27:304 (10) - These is a blatant sound in the middle of this slider and it throws everything off
01:53:190 (1) - This whole next section is really cool, I like it
02:24:390 (9) - I see what you are trying to do here with the guitar, but I think they should be streams personally. You could still justify these though.
02:44:961 (1) - This is very clearly a triple and it should be one.
I think this map is cool and I can see the gimmicks you are trying to use, and I wish you luck with the ranking process!
00:01:418 (8) - NC here instead of 00:01:932 (1) - (or you can keep this NC because you repeated this look afterwards)
00:08:189 (5) - I think this would work better as a stream because of the music
00:11:361 (5) - I dont know how I feel about these sliders you put here, because there is a drum beat in the middle and it feels and sounds awkward. I can see why you put these here but I think they would work better as return sliders.
00:14:104 (2) - ^
00:14:790 (3) - ^
00:16:847 (5) - ^
00:17:532 (8) - ^ (Also no hitsound in the middle? Kind of throws you off)
00:19:590 (1) - These streams are one of the few exceptions to not NCing in the middle, well done
00:20:961 (17) - NC here instead though
Overall I can see so far you are using NC very peculiarly, I think this might be a gimmick?
00:27:132 (9) - NC here because the change in timing, you should always NC when changing timing or SV
00:29:704 (1,2,1) - This NC looks weird, un-NC 00:29:875 (1) -
00:35:618 (3,5) - Weird overlap, looks ugly
00:38:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think you should slightly shrink these stacks
00:43:504 (8) - Odd timing on a blue tick to be changing direction of stream, should be to music not just random like this
00:47:875 (6,7,8) - please dont do this
01:22:332 (10,11,12,2,3,4) - These are a little too close imo, should be spaced like 01:21:990 (7,8,9,10,11,12) -
01:27:304 (10) - These is a blatant sound in the middle of this slider and it throws everything off
01:53:190 (1) - This whole next section is really cool, I like it
02:24:390 (9) - I see what you are trying to do here with the guitar, but I think they should be streams personally. You could still justify these though.
02:44:961 (1) - This is very clearly a triple and it should be one.
I think this map is cool and I can see the gimmicks you are trying to use, and I wish you luck with the ranking process!