Sieg wrote:

Most likely it says that drum-hitwhistle.wav is unused because to use it you should set green line to D1 not just D as it is rn

TheKingHenry wrote:

If not instructed otherwise, you mod first, but only after I have accepted your request

Mcen314 wrote:

All of your choices are >5min one-diff map and most of them are so high at star rating. So I suggest you giving other mappers a full set choice

Mcen314 wrote:

Hi! M4M from your queue. For my a little poor play ability, I choose the easiest one. All of your choices are >5min one-diff map and most of them are so high at star rating. So I suggest you giving other mappers a full set choice
But your map is seemed too good to mod. Here is some suggestions.
01:09:165 (1,2) - The slider's radius is a little short that they're overlapped. But I don't have any good solution. If you want to only change CS to avoid overlapping, the map needs at least CS5. Looks fine, I actually like it this way better, the objects feel closer to each other (well, duh, they are)
01:13:902 (1,2,3,4) - I can't hear the sound difference between 4 timeline. you needn't have made them in different sv. Arguably there aren't much changes in there (though surely some differences) and it's more accentuate the echo effect of the repeating sounds, so when it first comes it's fast but then it comes 2nd time as "echo" and I make it slow instead (as if it would be circle only) then kicks off again with the "new" sound and same repeats. Basically more than the changes in the sounds themselves, it's basing on how the musical structure emphasises the sounds (casual 4/4 here results as this).
02:22:980 (1,2,3) & 03:39:558 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - not a problem. But it may be gimmicky for the diff. you can change it into 1/3 slider and a note or with 1 return Nah not necessary, better this way. It's not too gimmicky really, it's fairly simple way of mapping the rhythms in question (whether you considering the rhythms themselves gimmicky or not is another topic) there more gimmicky stuff all around the map than this. Since in my opinion adding sliders would also diminish the effect of the rhythm, the emphasis it gets and so on, I don't see it worth changing when it's current state shouldn't really be a problem.
04:11:926 (6) - can be taken apart into 2 notes shit u right I wonder why I haven't
For mathematical "3 point to 1 circle", I give you some exacter blanket point

blanket point

01:09:955 (2) - (184,403) presume you meant 304 instead
01:16:665 (4) - (105,235) moved the slider instead to preserve stacks
02:38:375 (2) - (293,132) done
02:38:572 (3) - (385,325) for some reason this wasn't like this already even though the following supposedly stacked slider was lol
02:44:690 (2) - (152,183) done

1. 00:33:245 (4,5,6) - spacing here is really misleading, makes it look like your 1/2 gaps. compare to 00:39:560 (4,5,6) - .
2. 00:35:613 - Since this is a strong note for the instrument introduced at 00:31:271 - , possibly consider making it clickable for variety where the song has a bit of variety instead of following exactly what you did before.
   > 00:41:929 - same.
3. 00:55:646 - remove clap
4. 01:13:113 (2) - 02:41:533 (2) - I don't see why these are extended to the 1/4 so deliberately you even put a greenline there, when at second, extremely similar, points 01:19:428 (2) - 02:47:848 (2) - they end on the 1/1s. Plus, the ones that end on 1/1 look cooler due to how they end inside of the circular sliders around them.
5. 01:17:849 (2,2) - Maybe make these the same angle, so it's kinda like a broken up continuous line surrounded by the circular sliders? would be cool. (also 01:11:534 (2,2) - are similar to that)
6. 01:37:586 (1,2,3) - cute pattern!
7. 01:48:639 (5,6) - blanket here is notably off due to how close the objects are, compare to the well done 01:54:954 (5,6) -
8. 03:20:216 - I don't think you meant to have this set to default hitsounds on the timing line here
9. 04:01:663 (3) - I think this would be more fitting as a 1/1 slider, due to how the guitar is continued until 04:02:058 - , even if the vocal ended a bit earlier.
10. 04:35:018 (3,4,5) - uneven spacing...
11. 04:46:070 (2,3,4) - The spacing in this pattern starts out pretty big, a bit bigger than similar patterns in other kiais, and as a result 04:46:465 (4,5,6) - doesn't feel like as much of as an increase as it could be. I suggest lowering the spacing here 04:45:478 (1,2) - and 04:46:070 (2,3) - here a tad bit.
12. 04:56:531 (1) - cute slider!

Noffy wrote:

For some reason this song reminds me of https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ygr71M-y-Pc from mabinogi so now I really wanna play mabinogi... lol


...Goodness gracious, so many greenlines. It's not a problem, but maybe next time you do this kind of hitsound pattern, just make the hitnormal and sliderslide 69s like, normal sampleset 2 instead...? And set the sampleset of the objects to normal, addition set to soft or drum (where you used additions that is)
Putting down greenlines for everything seems like such...
a waste of effort to be honest.
it also makes it hard to tell which are for svs and which aren't Dunno rly, I think it's fairly clear to see which greens are for what (basing on specific things) but that's probably just cuz I know this map fairly well lol; It might be more effort but I like to do it this way more so it's easier to locate all changes when most of it is done with green lines (like for example where I use specific hitsounds, since I can't find set-changed objects like that); well, all in all, not like it matters anymore here anyways ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

soft-hitfinish2.wav is pretty loud and distracting during 04:18:637 - this part where it's used fairly frequently. Possibly a.) lower the volume of the greenlines during this section, or create an alternate finish hs just for this part. Because it's ok when used occassionally as it was for most of the map, but this section it's ehh. Hm. Why not; applied set 3 for that section with slightly lower volume finish for it

[Forbidden Fruit]

1. 00:33:245 (4,5,6) - spacing here is really misleading, makes it look like your 1/2 gaps. compare to 00:39:560 (4,5,6) - . Should be fine. The rhythmics of this intro section are introduced in the first segment (with spacing lining up with snaps) and from that section on it's using more differentiation for emphasis and so on, for example this section here from 00:31:271 - on has so far only the spaced out 1/4 for the progression from the first section, but the one you linked at 00:39:560 (4,5) - is done with no spacing to emphasis the last sequence of this section building to the next (so like, slowing it down for the last stretch of this section). And since both examples/spacings of this rhythm are introduced at this point and the rhythm itself should be familiar to the player I don't see it being problem.
2. 00:35:613 - Since this is a strong note for the instrument introduced at 00:31:271 - , possibly consider making it clickable for variety where the song has a bit of variety instead of following exactly what you did before. Could, but I'll prioritize the guitar
   > 00:41:929 - same. yeah same; have to mention about that introduced instrument overall; it's true it's melody instrument here, but it's not very dominant and considering it lines up with the guitar for the most part, it's better to keep it at the guitar all the time rather than jump around here for the occasional melodies when the guitar base rhythm is more logical to follow for the player here
3. 00:55:646 - remove clap no >.< there's soft snare roll with the drums here, but since it's not actual crisp rhythms it's not mapped but the sound is accentuated with the similar sounding clap hitsound here; it's not loud enough to distract anyone but I think it's nice little touch
4. 01:13:113 (2) - 02:41:533 (2) - I don't see why these are extended to the 1/4 so deliberately you even put a greenline there, when at second, extremely similar, points 01:19:428 (2) - 02:47:848 (2) - they end on the 1/1s. Plus, the ones that end on 1/1 look cooler due to how they end inside of the circular sliders around them. They are shorter for little break time for the 1/4 and also little break for more movement from the patterns before (you see they ain't moving a lot, most of the movement goes around in circles and not progressing. From which we come to partly why I don't want to shorten them more, that'd remove some of the little of movement progression we have at the moment. Also as said the gap is compromise, more lengthened sliders fit the sounds better imo (like, stickier continuation like how the sounds connect to each other in the music)
5. 01:17:849 (2,2) - Maybe make these the same angle, so it's kinda like a broken up continuous line surrounded by the circular sliders? would be cool. (also 01:11:534 (2,2) - are similar to that) Cool idea actually, but it's not really implement in the latter ones either (so like the first one is pretty much only with similar) since most of them are having the following sliders according to the angles of the circled slider (which changes) and thus the direction changes
6. 01:37:586 (1,2,3) - cute pattern!
7. 01:48:639 (5,6) - blanket here is notably off due to how close the objects are, compare to the well done 01:54:954 (5,6) - u right, moved
8. 03:20:216 - I don't think you meant to have this set to default hitsounds on the timing line here tru, and it was missing whistle too and the volume was fucked up aaaaand I wonder what that was about even? Probably copied wrong greenie there
9. 04:01:663 (3) - I think this would be more fitting as a 1/1 slider, due to how the guitar is continued until 04:02:058 - , even if the vocal ended a bit earlier. It's indeed for the vocal emphasis, similarly to how the following object it (since, well, vocals are the only part there so I changed to emphasis them from here already; guitar indeed ends later than red tick, but this ain't unfit for guitar either since it has 2 sounds white tick and red tick and thus this also ends on the latter guitar sound even if the sound itself continues on for a while (which is imo even better since now it ends on distinct sound from the instrumentalisation too instead of the fairly ambiguous option of the sound ending somewhere along the way.
10. 04:35:018 (3,4,5) - uneven spacing... u right, changed according to x and y coordinates
11. 04:46:070 (2,3,4) - The spacing in this pattern starts out pretty big, a bit bigger than similar patterns in other kiais, and as a result 04:46:465 (4,5,6) - doesn't feel like as much of as an increase as it could be. I suggest lowering the spacing here 04:45:478 (1,2) - and 04:46:070 (2,3) - here a tad bit. Fair enough. Due the strict placements of 2 and 4 I just moved 3 stacked with sliderend 1 so that the spacing of the first 3 circles is lower (spacing from 1 to 2 stays but it's fine since it's from slider to circle and thus more lenient)
12. 04:56:531 (1) - cute slider!

neat map
call me back yea

-Mo- wrote:

00:55:646 - Is this clap supposed to be here? Yes I believe this to be explained in previous mods too (simply put it's for the sound there in the music)

Also the pure white combo colour goes against the "don't use >220 lum during kiai" guideline. had little talk, I'll change this to 219 (lol)

Sinnoh wrote:

if there's anything you want to fix in the next 24 hours you can ask for it to be unranked since the qualification system kinda broke and it was ranked after 6 minutes of being qualified