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07th Expansion - Dread of the grave -More fear-

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Lanttu
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Lanttu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17. tammikuuta 2012 at 23:00:46

Artist: 07th Expansion
Title: Dread of the grave -More fear-
Source: Umineko no Naku Koro ni
Tags: chiru YUNE Mukku theowest
BPM: 156
Filesize: 4489kb
Play Time: 02:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.98 stars, 380 notes)
  2. Mukku's Easy (1.6 stars, 127 notes)
  3. Normal (3.82 stars, 167 notes)
  4. theowest's Hard (4.85 stars, 264 notes)
Download: 07th Expansion - Dread of the grave -More fear-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beware of the HORRIBLY ~*~*ANTI-CLIMATIC*~*~ ENDING. >:(

Janurary 17th; Edit.
Last edited by Lanttu , edited 28 times in total.
Void
108 posts
Joined August 2008
Void
Slow down there.

I can't hold all of these seacats.
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Lanttu
y u no can hold all these kawaii seakitties? >:V

<3
Crow302
5 posts
Joined March 2011
Crow302
Too hard for me, but it looks really fun ♪ Ending seems rather anticlimactic, though. If your other maps are any indicator I'll be looking forward to the other difficulties ★
Nico Nico Douga
128 posts
Joined March 2011
Nico Nico Douga
nice map in ctb 8-)
Red_old
158 posts
Joined July 2009
Red_old
nice song nice map :)
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
S t a r~
heintsi
1,126 posts
Joined January 2009
heintsi

Lanttu wrote:

AM I MAPPING FAST AND INSANE ENOUGH YET?
juu. tähden saat :D taitaapi olla sun vaikein mappi ikinä..
Lanttu
860 posts
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Lanttu

heintsi wrote:

Lanttu wrote:

AM I MAPPING FAST AND INSANE ENOUGH YET?
juu. tähden saat :D taitaapi olla sun vaikein mappi ikinä..
Hahaaa, mission accomplished! \o/ kiits<3
Natteke
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Natteke
I say it in red... This map is good!
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
★
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
MORE 07TH EXPANSION PLS


Tää on niin hyvä.
Bessy
145 posts
Joined September 2009
Bessy
:) star
theowest
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Joined January 2009
theowest
I'm here to tell you that I'll be making the Hard (called theowest's Hard) and that I just irc modded you and want kudosu. :D
I'm done with it tomorrow.

Edit: Here it is! http://puu.sh/2tVK:D
Update: http://puu.sh/2tXn
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Shiirn
theowest's diff is shit

general
blah

insane
01:41:881 (1) - the breaks here are bugged, reset them
as others mention the end is kind of anti-climatic

theowest's hard
clean up the timing sections
00:49:573 (1) - new combo
01:50:343 (1,2) - suddenly much shorter spacing, also, plop breaks into the silences since you seem to enjoy copying the insane tit for tat

Normal
01:28:035 (3) - are there notes missing around here? hell, the whole area is bugged
Lanttu
860 posts
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Topic Starter
Lanttu

Shiirn wrote:

theowest's diff is shit ;_;

general
blah I wonder what this means.. ;u;

insane
01:41:881 (1) - the breaks here are bugged, reset them Nope, they're like that on purpose, lol blah, ok then. OTL
as others mention the end is kind of anti-climatic Well, nothing much I can do about it when the song is like this.. ;u;

Normal
01:28:035 (3) - are there notes missing around here? hell, the whole area is bugged
Now I only need to get that normal finished. =u=;
...It's not ready yet~
Thanks~
Last edited by Lanttu , edited 1 time in total.
theowest
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theowest

Shiirn wrote:

theowest's diff is shit

theowest's hard
clean up the timing sections
00:49:573 (1) - new combo
01:50:343 (1,2) - suddenly much shorter spacing, also, plop breaks into the silences since you seem to enjoy copying the insane tit for tat
Ok. But maybe you can tell me what makes it shit? The much shorter spacing by its ½ is for all streams longer than 3 notes, this includes sliders too. The breaks were discussed with Lanttu.

Lanttu, you can fix the new combo.

Update: http://puu.sh/2xMg
Fixed some stuff.
Shiirn
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Shiirn
Your difficulty is obviously copied almost directly from an insane; you simply made the insane less streamy and jumpy, and that annoys me since each difficulty should be made on their own rather then directly making another difficulty easier.
theowest
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theowest

Shiirn wrote:

Your difficulty is obviously copied almost directly from an insane; you simply made the insane less streamy and jumpy, and that annoys me since each difficulty should be made on their own rather then directly making another difficulty easier.
Ehm.. I didn't copy a single thing. I made everything myself. This is my mapping style. I put the hitsounds to what I thought sounded the best. I did not copy any of this... GladiOol and Lesjuh's got similar mapping styles for example. When I map hard, this is how it looks like. I hate copy and paste and too much symmetrical btw. Lanttu tends to like symmetrical in hard, etc sometimes, I don't. Look at it.. Compare this to one of her hards. I don't copy. She also usually puts beats or sliders under previous sliders. I never do this. I always try to put my beats away from the previous ones with the current distance snap I have. And if I made an insane it would look more like the insane's I make. Which is this hard but harder, more streams and jumps.
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
Yaoi!

... I mean.. What?

Download: 07th Expansion - Dread of the grave -More fear- (Lanttu) [Mukku's Easy].osu
Lanttu
860 posts
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Topic Starter
Lanttu

Mukku wrote:

Yaoi!

... I mean.. What?
Where? *looks around*

..I see nothing. ;_;
theowest
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theowest
OMG. UPDATE. http://puu.sh/34gU
UnderminE
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UnderminE
Come, Battler! Star.
y u c a
844 posts
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y u c a
:)
Kiiwa
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Kiiwa
o:
_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
more fear~~ ;)
theowest
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theowest
..So when will this get ranked..? :c

Go ask for MAT requests gurl~
Lanttu
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Lanttu
lol, but I must get some mods first, right? ;u;

AAAARGH MORE TEXT TO THIS MESSAGE!
theowest
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theowest

Lanttu wrote:

lol, but I must get some mods first, right? ;u;

AAAARGH MORE TEXT TO THIS MESSAGE!
I don't think so. :v
Lanttu
860 posts
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Topic Starter
Lanttu

theowest wrote:

Lanttu wrote:

lol, but I must get some mods first, right? ;u;

AAAARGH MORE TEXT TO THIS MESSAGE!
I don't think so. :v
B-but I think so~ ;_;
theowest
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theowest

Lanttu wrote:

theowest wrote:

I don't think so. :v
B-but I think so~ ;_;
ask one more modder than you ask a mat. DEAL?
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Silly IRC mod + star. I can't find anything wrong with the guest diffs, so I think this is clearly ready to be checked by a MAT.

SPOILER
16:37 <Fuuko> : 00:26:112 (3) - Two grids down?
16:38 <Lanttu> : ok
16:38 <Fuuko> : ...Actually three.
16:38 <Lanttu> : gaaah
16:38 <Fuuko> : 00:26:881 (1) - One grid up.
16:38 <Fuuko> : 00:27:650 (2) - Two grids up, one grid right.
16:39 <Lanttu> : ok
16:39 <Fuuko> : 00:28:419 (1) - One grid up, one grid right.
16:40 <Fuuko> : 00:37:266 - Lower the volume of this part to about 60%
16:41 <Lanttu> : ok
16:42 <Fuuko> : 01:23:420 (1) - Teehee.
16:42 <Lanttu> : ehhehehe
16:42 <Fuuko> : 01:32:650 (1) - This is nice though.
16:43 <Lanttu> : yay~
16:43 <Fuuko> : 01:34:573 (2) - One grid down.
16:43 <Fuuko> : 01:36:881 (2) - ^
16:44 <Fuuko> : 01:41:881 (1,1) - Uh... Centered? Looks boring.
16:45 <Lanttu> : it does not... ;u;
16:46 <Fuuko> : It is, really. I'd rather play something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124618
16:46 <Lanttu> : ..gahhh >:
16:47 <Lanttu> : well, I guess Í could do something about it later
16:47 <Lanttu> : I still kind of like it the way it is...
16:47 <Fuuko> : Good girl. <3
16:47 <Lanttu> : bad boy. ;_;
16:47 <Fuuko> : W-why? çwç
16:48 <Lanttu> : fot not liking my centered notes~
16:48 <Lanttu> : ..for
16:48 <Fuuko> : ...That's the lamest reason I've ever see.
16:48 <Lanttu> : ehhehe *u*
16:48 <Fuuko> : This diff feels more like a hard to me.
16:49 <Lanttu> : gahhh >:
16:49 <Lanttu> : it feels too easy to be a hard for me
16:49 <Fuuko> : 02:42:650 (5) - Two grids down, one grid right.
16:49 <Fuuko> : The spacing is too big for a normal.
16:49 <Lanttu> : GAAAAHHHHHH
16:50 <Fuuko> : Seriously, it's big. :i
16:50 <Lanttu> : it's only 1 >:
16:52 <Fuuko> : It's still big.
16:52 <Lanttu> : can't do anything about it, though ;u;
16:53 <Fuuko> : You can reduce it. :i
16:53 <Lanttu> : no way I'll do that ;_;
16:53 <Lanttu> : it takes forever
16:53 <Fuuko> : Or make the AR +2, HD +2, OD +2. And rename it to hard.
16:54 <Fuuko> : Feels much better to me.
16:54 <Lanttu> : but it's a normal! ;_______________________;
16:54 <Fuuko> : Well, sure... :i I'll still keep thinking of it as a hard.
16:54 <Fuuko> : Anyways, enough of it.
16:55 <Fuuko> : At least make the AR +1 to read the patterns better.
16:55 <Lanttu> : oki..
17:00 <Fuuko> : Those centered notes for insane too. :p
17:01 <Fuuko> : 02:03:612 (1) - icwudt lazie~ <3
17:01 <Lanttu> : what ;___;
17:01 <Lanttu> : there's nothing better to map there
17:01 <Fuuko> : 02:22:650 (1,2) - Three grids up.
17:02 <Fuuko> : 02:23:804 (3) - ^
17:03 <Fuuko> : 02:28:035 (1) - A bit worried about the spacing here... But I guess it shouldn't be that much of a problem.
Regou
1,927 posts
Joined July 2010
Regou
Mod mod mod~~~ :)
(Sorry that I don't get any kudosu to star this :cry: )

[Easy]
HP drain -1
01:01:481(1) This slider looks weird
01:20:343(1) Remove the clap hitsound at the start of the slider?
01:25:728(3) Add finish here?
01:37:266,01:38:804(3) Use finish hitsound here and remove the clap hitsound
02:27:266(3)Make it like this?
SPOILER
02:40:343(1) Same as 01:01:481(1)

[Normal]
OD+1?

[Hard]
00:33:227(3,4)May be a bit hard for hard difficulty.
00:36:496(1)Remove new combo.
(1,2,1)Spacing.
00:48:804(3) 2 grids up.
01:12:266(5,1) Spacing.
01:27:554(3) Remove the clap hitsound.
01:30:631(3) ^
01:31:881(7) ^
01:32:226(8) Add clap hitsound here
01:32:650(9) Add new combo here and remove the new combo at 01:34:189(1)
01:50:343(1,1,1)Same as 00:36:496(1,2,1) and remove the new combo at 01:50:727(1)
02:48:804(5) Change it like this? Sounds better
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:29:766(1,2)Maybe don't overlap these two circles? I feel a bit hard to see the second one.
02:18:804(6,7) ^

Lanttu
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Topic Starter
Lanttu

Regou wrote:

[Insane]
00:29:766(1,2)Maybe don't overlap these two circles? I feel a bit hard to see the second one.
02:18:804(6,7) ^
But I kind of like them being stacked, just because it gets little harder to read them.. >u<;
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
SPOILER

Regou wrote:

Mod mod mod~~~ :)

[Easy]
HP drain -1 Eh, why?
01:01:481(1) This slider looks weird I think it looks awesome
01:20:343(1) Remove the clap hitsound at the start of the slider? I guess it makes more sense. Done
01:25:728(3) Add finish here? Done. I like it
01:37:266,01:38:804(3) Use finish hitsound here and remove the clap hitsound
02:27:266(3)Make it like this? Nah.

02:40:343(1) Same as 01:01:481(1) Looking great
Thanks

Download: 07th Expansion - Dread of the grave -More fear- (Lanttu) [Mukku's Easy].osu
theowest
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theowest

Regou wrote:

[Hard]
00:33:227(3,4)May be a bit hard for hard difficulty. Well you do know that mean I should change that for the rest of the beatmap? No way hosay. It's not too hard. It's HARD.
00:36:496(1)Remove new combo. True.
(1,2,1)Spacing. Ok, sure.
00:48:804(3) 2 grids up. Ok, sure.
01:12:266(5,1) Spacing. Ok, sure.
01:27:554(3) Remove the clap hitsound. Ok, I'll just remove them all.
01:30:631(3) ^
01:31:881(7) ^
01:32:226(8) Add clap hitsound here No.
01:32:650(9) Add new combo here and remove the new combo at 01:34:189(1) Ok.
01:50:343(1,1,1)Same as 00:36:496(1,2,1) and remove the new combo at 01:50:727(1) Ok.
02:48:804(5) Change it like this? Sounds better ok.
SPOILER
[attachment=0:65385]screenshot003.jpg[/attachment:65385]
Here's the update:

http://puu.sh/5zpW

Y U NO TELL ME OF THAT MOD?!
Lanttu
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Topic Starter
Lanttu

theowest wrote:

Y U NO TELL ME OF THAT MOD?!
I'M SORRY I FORGOT ;___;
theowest
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theowest

Lanttu wrote:

theowest wrote:

Y U NO TELL ME OF THAT MOD?!
I'M SORRY I FORGOT ;___;
it's okay <3
Shadow
188 posts
Joined March 2010
Shadow
[Mukku's Easy]

Wow <3 this diff

00:49:189 (x) - Hitcircle with clap sounds epic imo. uh, and doesn't look to bad if you place it like this

SPOILER

01:13:804 (x) - hitcircle with clap again, to keep ^ in sync with above suggestion unsure about this one's placement =p but here is a suggestion.

SPOILER

01:20:343 (1) - I like the idea here, but try this.. is just a scaled version (50%) and added a few more way-points & "fits" (for the lack of a better word, dunno how to explain it in English) that particular part of the song, try it before you dish it at least. The slider might need a little more tweaking, but that's the best I could get it. (I'm bad at slider art D:)

SPOILER

Slider code:
SPOILER
360,300,80343,6,0,B|340:324|312:292|312:292|280:324|264:316|256:300|256:300|248:316|232:324|200:292|200:292|172:324|156:300,1,240,0|8

01:24:958 (3) - It seems like you trying to keep "it" easy, but I think you should repeat the slider once.. :O sounds soo much better.

01:41:881 (1) - For the following finish repeats, increase volume a little bit a time, for impact.

02:21:496 (5) - whistle (the custom hitsound) on the first white tick too, listen to it at 75% speed then at 100%

Yea, very very enjoyable easy.! and it looks sexy.

[Normal]

00:56:881 (2) - hmhm yea, this should totally end on the white tick, sounds bad on blue.
00:58:420 (2) - this fits the music :3
00:59:958 (2) - but this, and 00:56:881 (2) - sounds... wrong. White tick please orz.

Later in the beatmap, you have a few more of these, sure it might look cool, but it just sounds wrong and feels awkward to play. I'd highly recommend you try something else here.

- Personal Placement Suggestion: -feel free to ignore-
01:12:650 (1) - following the music, this pattern fits better, but this is my opinion

SPOILER

01:20:343 (1) - swop 2/3 places and fix the spacing/hitsounds of course (just follows the music better imo, as above, feel free to ignore)

SPOILER

[Normal] & [Insane] hitsound suggestions
SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
23420,384.615384615385,4,1,2,40,1,0
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172650,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
172843,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0

[theowest's Hard]

01:38:804 (1) - for the following finish repeats, make each one a little louder, for impact.

[Insane]

01:47:650 (1) - Please remember give this one a volume bump, if you decide to keep hitsound suggestions.
orz

02:41:112 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - <3 this
theowest
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theowest
and what he said is now done

http://puu.sh/5A6p

:arrow: :arrow: :arrow: :arrow: :arrow: :arrow:
Birdy
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Joined April 2011
Birdy
I guess I could do CTB mod if you still need/want any.
theowest
osu! Alumni
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theowest

2nnt wrote:

I guess I could do CTB mod if you still need/want any.
CTB mod? wat...
Birdy
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Joined April 2011
Birdy

theowest wrote:

2nnt wrote:

I guess I could do CTB mod if you still need/want any.
CTB mod? wat...
Map that is available to only Catch The Beat or something. I suck on standard mode.
theowest
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2009
theowest

2nnt wrote:

theowest wrote:

CTB mod? wat...
Map that is available to only Catch The Beat or something. I suck on standard mode.
But there are no CtB diffs!!
Birdy
5,741 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy

theowest wrote:

But there are no CtB diffs!!
Yeah I meant I could do that. I just messed up those words. Seriously I still don't know anything about this game, forgive a newbie :C
theowest
osu! Alumni
6,891 posts
Joined January 2009
theowest

2nnt wrote:

theowest wrote:

But there are no CtB diffs!!
Yeah I meant I could do that. I just messed up those words. Seriously I still don't know anything about this game, forgive a newbie :C
...No, she won't allow any CtB only diffs. And since your so new, I hardly think she'll have someone with 0 mapping experience with the regular osu!
Birdy
5,741 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy

theowest wrote:

...No, she won't allow any CtB only diffs. And since your so new, I hardly think she'll have someone with 0 mapping experience with the regular osu!
Ohhh okay.
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku

ShadowLord wrote:

[Mukku's Easy]

Wow <3 this diff

00:49:189 (x) - Hitcircle with clap sounds epic imo. uh, and doesn't look to bad if you place it like this Ooh, very nice.

SPOILER

01:13:804 (x) - hitcircle with clap again, to keep ^ in sync with above suggestion unsure about this one's placement =p but here is a suggestion. Done with my own placement.

SPOILER

01:20:343 (1) - I like the idea here, but try this.. is just a scaled version (50%) and added a few more way-points & "fits" (for the lack of a better word, dunno how to explain it in English) that particular part of the song, try it before you dish it at least. The slider might need a little more tweaking, but that's the best I could get it. (I'm bad at slider art D:) Tried it out. TBH I prefer the way it was. I think the look of your slider doesn't fit in with all the other sliders in this map very well.

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Slider code:
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360,300,80343,6,0,B|340:324|312:292|312:292|280:324|264:316|256:300|256:300|248:316|232:324|200:292|200:292|172:324|156:300,1,240,0|8

01:24:958 (3) - It seems like you trying to keep "it" easy, but I think you should repeat the slider once.. :O sounds soo much better. Sounds nice. Done.

01:41:881 (1) - For the following finish repeats, increase volume a little bit a time, for impact. Done.

02:21:496 (5) - whistle (the custom hitsound) on the first white tick too, listen to it at 75% speed then at 100% Done.

Yea, very very enjoyable easy.! and it looks sexy. Thank you so much :D
A very nice mod I say!

Download: 07th Expansion - Dread of the grave -More fear- (Lanttu) [Mukku's Easy].osu
Lanttu
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Lanttu
AAARGHHHGHDFADSFKL. Sorry guys it look me so long. ;_______; I've been busy with irl..

ShadowLord wrote:

[Normal]

00:56:881 (2) - hmhm yea, this should totally end on the white tick, sounds bad on blue. What, I think it sounds great. ;_; But arranged some stuff.
00:58:420 (2) - this fits the music :3
00:59:958 (2) - but this, and 00:56:881 (2) - sounds... wrong. White tick please orz. ;________;

Later in the beatmap, you have a few more of these, sure it might look cool, but it just sounds wrong and feels awkward to play. I'd highly recommend you try something else here.

- Personal Placement Suggestion: -feel free to ignore-
01:12:650 (1) - following the music, this pattern fits better, but this is my opinion I was trying to avoid 1-grid-overlay, but yeah, it looks better that way.

01:20:343 (1) - swop 2/3 places and fix the spacing/hitsounds of course (just follows the music better imo, as above, feel free to ignore) Ahh, I can't get it to fit. ;_;

[Normal] & [Insane] hitsound suggestions
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[TimingPoints]
23420,384.615384615385,4,1,2,40,1,0
24958,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
25054,-100,4,1,2,40,0,0
36496,-100,4,1,2,50,0,0
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55727,-100,4,1,2,40,0,0
61112,-100,4,1,2,50,0,0
61496,-100,4,1,2,60,0,0
61881,-100,4,1,1,75,0,0
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73323,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
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86689,-100,4,1,2,75,0,0
87170,-100,4,1,2,62,0,0
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88131,-100,4,1,2,75,0,0
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88900,-100,4,1,2,75,0,0
89477,-100,4,1,2,60,0,0
89670,-100,4,1,2,75,0,0
91016,-100,4,1,2,78,0,0
91208,-100,4,1,2,75,0,0
91785,-100,4,1,2,80,0,0
91977,-100,4,1,2,75,0,0
94093,-100,4,1,2,65,0,0
94285,-100,4,1,2,75,0,0
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95054,-100,4,1,2,75,0,0
95631,-100,4,1,2,80,0,0
95823,-100,4,1,2,75,0,0
96400,-100,4,1,2,80,0,0
96593,-100,4,1,2,75,0,0
98708,-100,4,1,2,40,0,0
101785,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
104862,-100,4,1,1,65,0,0
107939,-100,4,1,1,75,0,0
108708,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
109477,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
109862,-100,4,1,1,75,0,0
110246,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
110631,-100,4,1,1,85,0,0
111112,-100,4,1,1,75,0,1
113323,-100,4,1,1,57,0,1
113708,-100,4,1,1,67,0,1
114093,-100,4,1,1,83,0,1
114285,-100,4,1,1,75,0,1
116400,-100,4,1,1,57,0,1
116785,-100,4,1,1,67,0,1
117170,-100,4,1,1,85,0,1
117362,-100,4,1,1,75,0,1
119477,-100,4,1,1,57,0,1
119862,-100,4,1,1,67,0,1
120246,-100,4,1,1,85,0,1
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121400,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
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122170,-100,4,1,1,75,0,1
123323,-100,4,1,1,95,0,1
123420,-100,4,1,1,75,0,0
123612,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
129573,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
135920,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0
136400,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
136593,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0
139477,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
139670,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0
142554,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
142746,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0
145631,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
145823,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0
147939,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
162554,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
162746,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
172650,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
172843,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
OK~

[Insane]

01:47:650 (1) - Please remember give this one a volume bump, if you decide to keep hitsound suggestions. Hee, I think it sounds good enough like this also.
orz

02:41:112 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - <3 this <3
Thank you and sorru again for being so late~ orz
Niva
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Niva
Hya Lanttu :3
Saw this in #modReqs

[General]
-> "SB" in tags... As far as I know the osu! search bar won't search for 2 chars word, so maybe remove it?

[Insane]
-> OD-1 ?
00:48:035 (1,2,3) - I still think it looks weird in play mode. Manual stacking here by moving (2) and (3) few grids apart is better imo
00:58:420 (4) - The clap sounds weird imo, I think with lower volume it would be better
01:19:477 (2,3,4) - I found the app. circle color blends with the BG (at first thought I think it would be a slider here orz). Not a big problem though
01:33:420 (2) - imo, rather than a repeat slider, remove the repeat and add note at 01:33:804 and 01:33:996 better
02:01:112 (3) - CTRL+R here plays better imo because of the next (4). Not something you have to do though
02:19:093 (7) - Hard to guess the rhythm >< Combine this note with (6) to be a slider would be better imo
02:48:227 (7,8) - Tricky enough. I suggest to alter 02:47:650 (4,5,6,7,8) to a star-shaped jump

[theowest's Hard]
00:33:516 (4) - Make this into a 1/2 slider maybe? :3
00:42:650 (7) - I'd rather stack this to (5)'s end but it plays fine too this way xD
00:55:727 - Unused inherit section here, delete?
01:22:650 (7) - Add clap on repeat?
01:25:343 (7) - I think it's better to place clap on this slider's start rather than on the (6)'s end
01:38:996 - Unused inherit section here, delete?
02:21:496 (7) - You could try adding clap on the slider's end

[Normal]
00:29:766 (1) - I don't think 3/4 is friendly for a Normal here... (my intuition says it is 1/2 lol)
00:55:727 (1) - Weirdly touches the HP bar, but it plays fine
01:23:420 (1) - I'm sure this could be curved neater ><
01:55:727 (1) - Remove whistle from slider's start?

[Mukku's Easy]
00:24:958 (1) - You could set S-75% on the timing section and delete the inherit section here (:
00:48:035 (3) - Curve it a bit to the left? Would be more flowy imo
01:31:112 (2) - Convert this into 1/1 slider?
02:02:266 (3) - Add clap hitsound here?
02:28:035 - Drag break here?

Good luck Lanttu~
Hope my mod helps you again this time :3
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