Raging Bull wrote:

Hi, mods are just suggestions.


Beginner:
00:36:504 (2,3) - Not sure why you mapped here slightly different than the previous parts. I think perhaps you should map previous sections like here as you have been following the main beat the whole time and 00:26:704 (2) and 00:29:904 (2) feels weird that it skips a strong beat. Was mapped differently before. Was a reverse slider which skipped the beat where the circle is. Overall the way it is now I think it suits better.
*Your little message thing about that mod. I personally think the way you mapped it is fine. My opinion doesn't hold as well as someone who actually did struggle on this map. How bout something like this for the timeline? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6859916 Seeing as you did introduce clicking 1/2 already early on, it may not be too difficult. Think that's a bit too much after all. I tried to have a not too dense gameplay for the easiest difficulty. It was kinda hard to keep it to a minimum for this song as it's pretty overwhelming in sounds and vocals.

Intermediate:
00:27:704 (4) - Any difference between this and 00:30:904 (4) - ? Personally I think it should be mapped as 1/1 repeat slider. I'm not really hearing any changes in the background for that kind of slider. Ye but it's purposefully mapped to match the vocal, not anything else and a reverse is definitely more appropriate to play for this level.
01:08:904 (3,4,5,6) - This part *could* be confusing. You have clumped up notes and also a stacked note. I would probably make it less clumped up imo. (Clumped up as in they are all around slider 2's end.) Considering that they might also play with SB, it might be quite confusing to see it clearly. I know but since I declared this an intermediate level it can be more challenging regarding placement too. The way it is now it's harder than a Normal due to the BPM and sound density. It's hard to map this easy without leaving out important notes. I reversed it anyway. Will probably be more "readable".

Advanced:
00:28:504 (1,2) - I feel like these note should be spaced slightly farther apart (or at least (2)) as these are strong beats. Which btw, you should remove NC for your consistent NC pattern. Removed NC but kept spacing. I don't want to add more spacing for these drums since they are a beat apart in the timeline which makes them slower to play.
00:54:704 - Curious why didn't you map a 1/1 slider here on the red tick? You did it for the next part at 01:01:104 (1) and 01:13:904 (1) which matches vocals pretty nicely. Good one. Once of the reason is to make it have more variation since the rhythm would otherwise be too linear and repetitive. Another is to represent the vocals better - to "fuse" the echo and syllables which creates a pretty good transition too.
01:08:904 (3) - I think 1/1 slider here would match well like the previous pattern. 01:05:704 (3). You can make it a repeat or not, but the vocals here seem to match well the 3 sliders. I feel like those should be single clickables. It's sung with stuttering.
01:10:104 (1,2,3) - I would increase spacing here also. I feel like they are pretty important as she's about to sing the final line for the chorus so it will emphasize the final line better imo. Same as before
01:13:304 - Add note? Feels quite empty. Matches the snares if you want to add note. Actually I did reverse the slider one more time since it's sung cap-ab-le which I feel like should be one element. Noticed that just now lol. Was a circle before but it's better with another reverse. Makes the 3 beat mapped too.

ezek wrote:

~Boobie~

Pentori wrote:

hello o/
[General]
Added white outline to skin elements and converted mp3 file.

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[Beginner]
01:15:904 (2) - i dont think u need this beat here. the song ends quite abruptly so having a circle for the vocal kinda ruins that effect All difficulties end at the same time. Circle is needed for consistent conclusion.

[Advanced]
00:28:504 (7,8) - the normal samplesets feel pretty random in play, since you didn't repeat it at 00:31:704 - or 00:32:104 . i would just stick with drum finishes at 00:28:504 (7,8) Yea.. that was an accident. Was intended to be placed for each measure to accentuate the drums properly. Glad you noticed. Fixed all.

Bonsai wrote:

but could you maybe not make me seem like an asshole in the description when I already tried apologizing to you and explained that it was a major  misunderstanding / miscommunication xd