1. BlausIllusoryWorld (5.22 stars, 701 notes)
2. Virtual (5.58 stars, 943 notes)

SPOILER

This map was supposed to be a Diff for Monstrata's Shelter map, I loved the song and decided to map a diff for his mapset. The only problem is that I have NO clue how this mapping stuff works (What a GD is, what a mod is, how to become mod), and I apparently didn't even tell him or ask him that I was making a diff for him. I downloaded it when only VINXIS's Diff was there, but it took me too long (2 days) to finish mapping this, even with errors. But its 5 minutes and im not willing to make another Diff D: I changed the BG and plan to hitsound this, but my main focus would be having this in a rankable state and having no timing/placement errors.
Edit (Like two weeks before finish, I forgot to put a date D:): added hitsounds on 50% of the beatmap
Edit (10/30/16): Finished hitsounding, If some parts arn't hitsounded or the hitsounds sound off pls tell
Edit (11/4/16) (Or 11/5/16, it just turned midnight for me as I'm updating): Attempted to Fix 'Irregular Rythem' with sliders until 42.8% (I'm updating because I don't want it to go to the graveyard)
Edit (11/5/16): Attempted fixing more irregular rythem until 73.5 (Updated this incase I need to spec someone play it)
Edit (11/5/16): More Nerfing and decresing spacing, seems more and more like a 'map' now.
Edit (11/6/16): More Nerfing, Fixed Slider speeds (Only 3 different velo's, apart from the sliderheart at the end.) and Kiai time, even tho AiBot Says kiai time is more then 1/3, i don't feel Like I should change it since i put it in all the correct areas.
Edit (11/7/16): Got timing for piano from Monstrata (THANK YOU SO MUCH ) And Fixed BPM on some parts, replaced slow slider with actual mapping on some parts, fixed/added combo colors till 64%. Will plan to finish tomarrow...Then it should be done?
Edit (11/8/16): Finally decided to Fix BPM, need to finish that and fix custom combo colors from 49.7. High Shoutout to BlaumacherXY For making Guest Diff (I guess this is a collab'd map?) and huge mods and advice, I couldn't have done it without you <3
Edit (11/9/16): Finished Combo Colors, Blue, Green, And Pink are used for non kiai time, and Red, Violet, and Red-pink is used for Kiai time, some combos were adjusted to look good.
Edit (11/10/16): Added following circles, should be rankable right now, right? (Whoops! forgot to edit ar from 8.5 to 9.3. fixed it. (now 9)) Changed CS (increase) because map looked like the CS was too high. Added different background, one that looks better in my opinion (Its in like the first 10 seconds, but I can see why it would be called 'spoilers')
Edit (11/11/16) : Added Blau's GD, removed stuff in mine diff, it looks different now right? (I downloaded the old one incase blau doesnt like it)
Edit (11/14/16): Attempted to remake map after watching pishifats vids, decided to upload what i have right now
Edit (11/17/16): 50% Remapped, kinda hard to remap stuff from scratch with distance snap and rules from pishifat's videos.
Edit (11/22/16): 100% Remapped, combo colors kindaish added, kiai time 'fixed' and small hitsounds added on some parts
Edit (11/24/16): Added Blau's Diff. hopefully I can get help on this beatmap
(12/17/16): I should've said this earlier, but I gave up on this map. It won't ever get ranked and I need help on my mapping

BlaumacherXY wrote:

First of all read that: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria



Hello!!!! I am not sure if you still want to get this map ranked or anything but i love this song truly too so I'll try to ... help i guess? ^^
Please don't flame me in any way! I never said I am good at mapping!!! I do but theres a good chance it won't happen

So to start off i think you should change the BPM to 100 (that's the BPM monstrata uses and the one I think is right too) Whats wrong with 200 BPM then? Its just faster sliderspeeds and the timing is still fine... I don't want to change it to 100BPM because then I would have to Re-map and re-hitsound EVERYTHING.

A formal thing! you should try to use if possible not more than 3 slider speeds! (or at least not if there's no good reason to them! And dude your sliderspeeds are rainbows >.>) I'll fix that tomarrow...Also they're rainbows because Its supposed to be like that, like kanpan or notch hell (well not THAT fast)

Oke let's go!!

Why do you have 3 Timing sections? One is enough with 100 BPM!!! Sliderspeeds, volume, alot of reasons. I'll try to organize that tomarrow.

general stuff

If you change the slider speed the player has to get it of the song otherwise he will be suprised / out of the flow xP If you are talking ab out the slow sliders, then I already have it planned to change them to regular ones tomarrow.

Take care that the sliderends are okay (meaning not in the rythm) ????

Don't just put random jumps everywhere if you are out of ideas!!! (at ca. 01:06:742) Those are what I call 'jump solos' and they are supposed to be like that in that tone that repeats. but I plan to add sliders to the ones (Or place then notes at the exact same area) that are faster, like the one that is 1/2 jump and then there is a 1/4 jump, I'll put a slider in the first two jump solos and then I'll add the notes in the same areas. but yeah I like jumps that make you wanna rage ;3

The change in distances is a bit very ... inconsistent. I am not saying that's like always bad but here I think if you can't really "hear it from the music" it's no good in my opinion. I can't hear it in the music, I can't exactly read music and find out how exactly far I have to put a jump, but I try ti put them in the same area Or jumping larger, I planned to fix placements tomarrow and sunday, as well as adding touches like fixing random daidai gerome jumps

These streams are weird if you use new combos on every single circle. I think you should not do that! Its just personal style, it shouldn't be unrankable but if it becomes too much of a deal i'll fix it when I start working on combo colors and kiai time

Oke honestly i think you're mapping it too fast >.> I mean i tried it and it just doesn't fit the song like it's fast map to a slow song! Not exactly sure what you meant by that, but I did map it too fast (one to make it high star rating, two because I over-estimated the song I guess) and I should fix that this weekend, but otherwise its fine.

When the piano piece starts: Forget mapping that part if you can't time it the right way! It's really difficult to time a solopiano part so dont do it!!! (look at Roose from Lan Wings ... not sure if I wrote it right sorry ^^) What do you mean? Its timed good to me, every note is on the piano in 25%, and sounds fine in 100%

My modding is based on my own opinoion and personal assumptions / ideas!!! Please don't get mad or anything I am just trying to help :3 I feel like you are insulting me jkilytysm

Oke you really should consider starting anew. With these sections of sliderspeed everywhere modding and trying to understad the map gets seriously annoying! When you do that dont change how loud each part is at the beginning already you can do it later! And iI think you might shoud try to get the map mapped with as less slider speed changes as possible!So basically you want me to delete the map and remap a map that took me days to map.....Not sure about that. Myself im selfish and lazy because I don't want to re-map it, but Just because my style is fast and jumpy doesn't mean it doesn't have to be deleted! Some maps can sound very fast and makes no sense on an Eazy Diff, and this is no exception. I guess this would be an Arles type of map, but It isn't at the same time. I'm not exactly sure about mapping speed of songs because I don't have experience in that yet. If I have to start anew i'm just gonna choose a new song than...

Shiirn wrote:

stop giving kudosu to everyone that posts, that's not how kudosu works. One kudosu per person per map that gives direct advice on how to improve your map. That's how kudosu works. If one person helps more than once, they only get the first kudosu.

I'll call a BN/GMT to clean this up.