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jericho2442

-Lennox- wrote:

[Fine dude's Insane]

01:15:871 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/1V4o nah
01:17:145 (2,3,4) - Don't really fit here srry dont agree xD
01:18:844 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:23:517 - Add note?
01:25:216 - ^
01:26:915 - ^ that would break the timing pattern i was after
02:25:534 (1) - Don't like the finish at the end ~_~ if you silence the spin it sounds better imo yup sounds better


~

Pereira006 wrote:

[Jericho2442's Rave]

00:28:295 (7) - Grid 2 dowm tbh sure, looks nice
00:43:375 (1) - New combo? breaks my combo pattern
Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [jericho2442's Rave!!].osu
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

this just my suggestions

[easy]

00:21:074 (5) - Grid 1 dowm fixed~
00:52:508 (1) - Grid 1 up fixed~
00:56:756 (3) - Grid 1 left fixed~
01:53:676 (5) - Stack with 01:51:977 (3) ? No :3

perfect diff





[hard]

+1 Appreach Rate? Hmh .. Ya i think that's better <3

00:15:021 (2) - Incorrect spacing fixed~
00:15:977 (5) - grid 1 dowm fixed~
00:44:225 (5) - Stack with the end slider 00:43:587 (4) ? No :3

01:24:366 (3) - Grid 1 right fixed~
Berncastell
z
Andrea
[Overall]

Disable the Letterbox During Breaks on every difficulty, since you've a storyboard.

Try to find a better background, the one you have now is a little bit suggestive as well. (Me and jericho agreed about that)

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

00:34:667 (4) - New combo.
01:38:384 (3) - ^
02:17:463 (3) - ^


[Lucifer's Normal]

Adjust the Audio Lead-In through the file .osu to 2000.

Most of the hitsounds on this difficulty are too quiet. Try to increase the volume or something.


02:25:747 (1) - This spinner should end at 02:27:021 like the other difficulties.

[Firce777's Taiko]

Disable the storyboard on this difficulty, doesn't suit at all. Try to find a TaikoBG for this instead.


00:15:869 (1) - Unsnapped.
00:15:975 (2) - ^
01:00:046 (1) - ^
01:00:152 (2) - ^
02:10:453 (3) - ^
02:27:233 (1) - Remove this spinner, doesn't suit at all.


[Hard]

00:38:278 (3) - Add a Finish at the end of this slider.
00:55:481 (7) - New combo.
00:55:694 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:57:180 (7) - New combo.
00:57:605 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:03:446 (3) - Hidden repeat is completely hidden due to the hitburst from 02:02:384 (7).
02:06:844 (4) - Add a Finish.
02:23:835 (7) - New combo.
02:24:472 (1) - Remove new combo.


[jericho2442's Rave!!]

01:10:348 (7) - New combo.
01:10:773 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:22:030 (8) - New combo.
01:59:198 (3) - New combo due to the jump.


Overall you did a good job, but I think you could ask some more modding before asking me for a recheck... I especially suggest you to ask some Taiko modders since that difficulty could use some improvements imo. Can't star atm due to the many fixes >_< Good luck :3
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Disable the Letterbox During Breaks on every difficulty, since you've a storyboard. Fixed

Try to find a better background, the one you have now is a little bit suggestive as well. (Me and jericho agreed about that) I will do that :3 Edit : Done

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

00:34:667 (4) - New combo. Fixed
01:38:384 (3) - ^ ^
02:17:463 (3) - ^[/color] ^

[Firce777's Taiko]

Disable the storyboard on this difficulty, doesn't suit at all.
Disabled !

[Hard]

00:38:278 (3) - Add a Finish at the end of this slider. Done
00:55:481 (7) - New combo. Fixed ~
00:55:694 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
00:57:180 (7) - New combo. ^
00:57:605 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
02:03:446 (3) - Hidden repeat is completely hidden due to the hitburst from 02:02:384 (7). ^
02:06:844 (4) - Add a Finish. ^
02:23:835 (7) - New combo. ^
02:24:472 (1) - Remove new combo.[/color] ^

Overall you did a good job, but I think you could ask some more modding before asking me for a recheck... I especially suggest you to ask some Taiko modders since that difficulty could use some improvements imo. Can't star atm due to the many fixes >_< Good luck :3 Thx :3
p3n
[Easy]
nothing 8-)

[Lucifer's Normal]
00:30:844 - to silence the spinner ENDING use this timestamp instead of 00:30:738
01:15:021 - ^ instead of 01:14:915

[Hard]
00:28:083 (1) - add finish to spinner
00:36:154 (1) - move to 356/184 to make it symmetrical
00:40:189 (2,3) - switch slider and circle to fit the song
01:12:260 (1) - add finish to spinner
01:49:428 (4) - add new combo!!!

[Jericho2442's Rave!!]
nothing :|

Very good job!
~star
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

p3n wrote:

[Easy]
nothing 8-) :P

[Hard]
00:28:083 (1) - add finish to spinner Done .. but i don't know if that sounds so good ..
00:36:154 (1) - move to 356/184 to make it symmetrical Done
00:40:189 (2,3) - switch slider and circle to fit the song Done
01:12:260 (1) - add finish to spinner Done
01:49:428 (4) - add new combo!!! Uhm No ?:3

~star
Piotrekol
i just love it so what i can do?
star~
FireballFlame
[Lucifer's Normal]
There is basically nothing wrong with this map, but couldn't you make it a bit more interesting? There isn't much happening until 2:13 and until then it feels quite similar to the Easy diff.

[Hard]
00:45:711 (1,8,7,7) - Sieht nicht sonderlich schön aus; kannst du's so einrichten, dass die alle an der selben Stelle sind?

[jericho2442's Rave!!]
00:27:446 (6) - I wouldnt expect a 2nd reverse there, maybe remove it?
00:51:021 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9), 00:58:242 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Eww. Are those shapes really necessary? :/

Anyway, star.
OzzyOzrock
moe bg >///<

[Easy]
Good, but try making the sliders you make change direction at the beat, though, it's not necessary, I just like that :3

01:17:570 (4) - doesn't look right o.o
01:20:968 (4) - should look more like this one :3

hmm, I don't like some sliders, but they play through out the whole song so it's fine :3
[Lucifer's Normal]
gj :3
[Firce's Taiko]
Aah Firce thanks for color coding ><

lol I'd want some megadons/katus emphasizing the 'aah' in the chorus :3
but not really
lol you made this hard, at least there are no firce doomstreams ;_;
[Hard]
gj :3
[jericho's rave]
00:51:021 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is the only stream I didn't like, sort of throws my aim off, but eh

star~ :3
Firce777

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Firce777's Taiko]

Disable the storyboard on this difficulty, doesn't suit at all. Try to find a TaikoBG for this instead.
added
00:15:869 (1) - Unsnapped.
00:15:975 (2) - ^
01:00:046 (1) - ^
01:00:152 (2) - ^
02:10:453 (3) - ^
02:27:233 (1) - Remove this spinner, doesn't suit at all.
removed
thanks for advice :3



Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [Firce777's Taiko].osu
ratstar
nice map ,star~ ^^)ノ~☆
Jenny
After looking at the Hard- and Rave-diffs i can't complain about anything except one thing and that's not a big one:

[Rave]
Decrease the overall difficulty by 1 (so it's 7 then).

[Hard]
Maybe you could also change the tripples so that they are not all on the same spot and have a little movement; me likez it more that way, but that's just my opinion.


-> I just gave this a star^^
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Broetchen8441 wrote:

[Hard]
Maybe you could also change the tripples so that they are not all on the same spot and have a little movement; me likez it more that way, but that's just my opinion. No
Tony
[Easy]
00:34:667 (1) - clap C2?
00:41:463 (1) - ^
00:47:410 (1,1,1) - combo spamming, i hate this
00:54:207 (1) - remove NC
00:57:605 (1) - ^
01:18:844 (1) - clap C2?
01:25:640 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:45:711 - 00:58:667 : try adding some shapes at those sliders ..
01:29:888 - 01:42:844 : same here ^

i was lazy :(
anyways god job :O
star for this elppa dab !
Hyguys
''Baby Alice''
okayface.png
HERE WE GO
Blue is suggestion!
Red is error!you must fix!
Black is nazi. 8-)

:arrow: General
Make clap noticeable

:arrow: EASY
The hell you are getting better on mapping ;_; Soon you will be mapping better than everyone olololo
SPOILER
00:47:410 Remove that damn new combo and third control point , 2 grids down and 1 left

00:49:110 New combo
00:50:809 ^
00:53:357 Clap
00:55:906 Remove new combo ... = =
00:59:304 ^
01:17:570 http://puu.sh/1YHO
01:36:685 BLARGHAKDLÇAKSÇLDKASÇLDA http://puu.sh/1YHW and clap
01:38:384 ^Cpypast dat slider and then ctrl + h
01:50:702 http://puu.sh/1YI6 =.=
01:52:402 ^Cpypast dat slider and then ctrl + h
02:06:844 =_= http://puu.sh/1YIn i'm gettin enough of your bad sliders
Ok other diffs are fine
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Tonoicutzu wrote:

[Easy]
00:34:667 (1) - clap C2? ya
00:41:463 (1) - ^ ya
00:47:410 (1,1,1) - combo spamming, i hate this sry x) changed combo
00:54:207 (1) - remove NC ya
00:57:605 (1) - ^ ya
01:18:844 (1) - clap C2? ya
01:25:640 (5) - ^ ya

[Hard]
00:45:711 - 00:58:667 : try adding some shapes at those sliders .. i edited some sliders
01:29:888 - 01:42:844 : same here ^ ^

i was lazy :(
anyways god job :O
star for this elppa dab !

Hyguys wrote:

:arrow: EASY
]00:47:410 Remove that damn new combo and third control point , 2 grids down and 1 left
[/color] ya
00:49:110 New combo ya
00:50:809 ^ ya
00:53:357 Clap ya
00:55:906 Remove new combo ... = = ya
00:59:304 ^ ya
01:17:570 http://puu.sh/1YHO No
01:36:685 BLARGHAKDLÇAKSÇLDKASÇLDA http://puu.sh/1YHW and clap No
01:38:384 ^Cpypast dat slider and then ctrl + h No
01:50:702 http://puu.sh/1YI6 =.= No
01:52:402 ^Cpypast dat slider and then ctrl + h No
02:06:844 =_= http://puu.sh/1YIn i'm gettin enough of your bad sliders[/spoilerbox] fixed
Ok other diffs are fine
jericho2442

osuplayer111 wrote:

[jericho2442's Rave!!]

01:10:348 (7) - New combo. nope that would break the combo pattern
01:10:773 (1) - Remove new combo. same
01:22:030 (8) - New combo. yea tbh i dont remember having that so long.....
01:59:198 (3) - New combo due to the jump. tru i guess, but its not a jump ;p

FireballFlame wrote:

[jericho2442's Rave!!]
00:27:446 (6) - I wouldnt expect a 2nd reverse there, maybe remove it? nope it is needed
00:51:021 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9), 00:58:242 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Eww. Are those shapes really necessary? :/ yup they are normal not bland as hell streams ;p

Anyway, star.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[jericho's rave]
00:51:021 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is the only stream I didn't like, sort of throws my aim off, but eh look above ;p

Broetchen8441 wrote:

[Rave]
Decrease the overall difficulty by 1 (so it's 7 then).nah that would destroy the maps feeling i want
Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [jericho2442's Rave!!].osu
OnosakiHito
Taiko Mod:
01:02:596~01:04:826 - kdd kdd kdd kdd kdd > kkd kdd k ddd d kdd kdk
01:09:286~01:11:623 - kdd kdd kdd kdd kdd > kdd kkd k ddkdk ddk kdd
02:21:711(3) - kat
02:22:136(3) - don?
02:22:986(1) - delete (there are similiar points the whole song, maybe make it like that?)
02:26:915(2) - delete?

Overall 8/10 Really nice~


And here the requested Taiko_BG

TorNis
Suggestions:

[Easy]
01:50:702 (2) - Decrease slider for 2 ticks
01:51:552 - Add Circle
01:52:402 (5) - Decrease slider for 2 ticks
01:53:251 - Add Circle
That way it sound better imo

02:14:065 (1,2,1,2) - Kinda dissapointed to see in the end simple sliders especially when you have very nice at the other parts :)

[Lucifer's Normal]
00:03:658 - Feels a missing note especially since next combos have that note in form of slider
01:57:499 - Unnecessary timing points?

Your diff is quite easy for normal. I would loved to see vocal line traps in "Pina Colada"/"Whooo~pa" parts like this for example 02:13:640
But if vocal line is not your note basis then don't mind this suggestion.

[Hard]
01:20:543 (7) - don't like this slider because it's making off-beat sounds
How about adding kiai fountains at "Aaaaah" and/or "Whooo~pa" parts? :)

Enjoyed playing this map. Star :3
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

TorNis wrote:

Suggestions:

[Easy]
01:50:702 (2) - Decrease slider for 2 ticks No
01:51:552 - Add Circle No
01:52:402 (5) - Decrease slider for 2 ticks No
01:53:251 - Add Circle No
That way it sound better imo I don't think so ..

02:14:065 (1,2,1,2) - Kinda dissapointed to see in the end simple sliders especially when you have very nice at the other parts :) Changed the sliders .. <3





[Hard]
01:20:543 (7) - don't like this slider because it's making off-beat sounds No ..


Enjoyed playing this map. Star :3
Dark_Ai
Okay ich hab gemacht: Aber hab auch nicht viel sazu zu sagen:

[Hard]
01:27:764 (4) - end the slider 1/1
01:28:614 (5) - delete this note (I think its sounds better)

Only the O.O

A very nice Map ;)

get a Star~! and good luck <3
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Dark_Ai wrote:

Okay ich hab gemacht: Aber hab auch nicht viel sazu zu sagen:

[Hard]
01:27:764 (4) - end the slider 1/1 No ~
01:28:614 (5) - delete this note (I think its sounds better) yes .. sounds much better :3

Only the O.O

A very nice Map ;)

get a Star~! and good luck <3
Hyguys
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29864
You just suck at life
ornot
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Hyguys wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29864
You just suck at life
ornot
LOL ?!
My Map : Submitted: Apr 23, 2011
osuplayers Map : Submitted: May 6, 2011
So what the hell are u talking about xD
Louis Cyphre
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29864
You just suck at life
ornot
Iron Logic.
TristanShi
this song rocks! 8-)
Please add lead-in to taiko diff and set all preview time 30760 :D
No kds 8-)
Hyguys

ShadowSoul wrote:

Hyguys wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29864
You just suck at life
ornot
LOL ?!
My Map : Submitted: Apr 23, 2011
osuplayers Map : Submitted: May 6, 2011
So what the hell are u talking about xD
I was kidding~~~~
xRaux
Not bad. Good job!
Many sliders this BM - bad ....

+ Star
warwolf
start for good song and cute pic
Andrea
IRC Mod.

- Removed Nightcore from the Source.
- Disabled the unused Countdown and Letterbox during breaks on every difficulty.
- Fixed 5 unsnapped notes on Taiko difficulty.
- Taiko BG wasn't showing, so we did a full submission for fix it.

Bubbled~
Hyguys
PINA COLADA BOY
YOU MAKE THE GIRLS GO AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
Can't wait to see jojo's map ranked
he stalks me.
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Hyguys wrote:

PINA COLADA BOY
YOU MAKE THE GIRLS GO AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
Can't wait to see jojo's map ranked
he stalks me.
:D
-Lennox-
Na jz muss es nur mehr geranked werden :D
Angeloid_Alpha
nice map!
HellDawn
Pina colada boy, you make the girls go ahh.
And when the sun goes down you make my world spin round. <33
James2250
-It looks like you have an identical "PinaColada" image in both the main folder and in the SB folder. However the PinaColada image in the SB folder is only ever used once at the very start of the map and deleting that image/code doesn't seen to effect any of the storyboard as it is right now. You might want to look into that more and see exactly what you intended for that image and if it is needed at all.
-Keep the kiai time consistent on Easy and Hard (I would also try and make it consistent on all of the difficulties in general if possible)
-I would say this has enough pulsing on the storyboard to need an epilsepsy warning on every difficulty (not including on taiko)

Firce777's Taiko:
Should have the same audio lead-in as Normal as they both start at the same time

All of the maps look pretty solid. Call me back after the general fixes and I should be able to rank
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

James2250 wrote:

-It looks like you have an identical "PinaColada" image in both the main folder and in the SB folder. However the PinaColada image in the SB folder is only ever used once at the very start of the map and deleting that image/code doesn't seen to effect any of the storyboard as it is right now. You might want to look into that more and see exactly what you intended for that image and if it is needed at all.
-Keep the kiai time consistent on Easy and Hard (I would also try and make it consistent on all of the difficulties in general if possible)
-I would say this has enough pulsing on the storyboard to need an epilsepsy warning on every difficulty (not including on taiko)

Firce777's Taiko:
Should have the same audio lead-in as Normal as they both start at the same time

All of the maps look pretty solid. Call me back after the general fixes and I should be able to rank
Okay ~ Fixed ~ Should be better now ;D Thx <3
Firce777

OnosakiHito wrote:

Taiko Mod:
01:02:596~01:04:826 - kdd kdd kdd kdd kdd > kkd kdd k ddd d kdd kdk
01:09:286~01:11:623 - kdd kdd kdd kdd kdd > kdd kkd k ddkdk ddk kdd
02:21:711(3) - kat
02:22:136(3) - don?
02:22:986(1) - delete (there are similiar points the whole song, maybe make it like that?)
02:26:915(2) - delete?

Overall 8/10 Really nice~


And here the requested Taiko_BG
sry for update so late :oops:
thx~

Download: Baby Alice - Pina Colada Boy (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [Firce777's Taiko].osu
James2250
Looks like the sb problem has been fixed. Quickly fixed a few kiai placements, everything else looks good

Ranked~
PsychoSkill
nice, gz jojo <3
Dark_Ai
Glückwunsch <3
Natteke
why
OzzyOzrock
WAIT WHAT HAPPENED TO OLD BG
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

OzzyOzrock wrote:

WAIT WHAT HAPPENED TO OLD BG
I had to change the background ~ >:(
Hyguys
PINA COLADA GIRL
YOU MAKE MY BALLS GO AAH -jk
lol nice map \o/ ps change ur sign
Starry_old
I love this map ~star
-Lennox-

StardustSky wrote:

I love this map ~star


~star
lulz
Lizzehb
So much better then osuplayer111's since the hard difficulty is actually a hard and not another insane.
IkkiMinami
:)
ac17407
太鼓圖好棒!!
777我愛你~!
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