Muya wrote:

-banviloid:

1. 02:07:615 (1,2,3) - 個人的にスライダーのお尻を隠す配置は嫌いです orz 02:06:115 (1,2,3) - と同じにしたほうがいいかもしれない

譜面のバリエーションを考えたいのでこのままにしたいですorz

edit :
yay 100kudosu おめです！

Takos wrote:

;)

Muya wrote:

-Insane:

1. 00:20:740 (6) - 1grid down? 見た目の良さを比べて今のままにします><
2. 00:23:546 (4,6) - grid offにして(2)に重ねる？ fixed

edit :
yay 100kudosu

swish wrote:

[banviloid]

1. 00:43:052 (4) - 1grid up
2. 01:30:302 (7) - 1grid left
3. 01:30:490 (8) - 1grid left,1grid up
4. 01:36:115 (5) - 1grid left
5. 01:36:677 (1) - 1grid up
6. 01:47:740 (6) - 1grid up
7. 01:55:802 (3) - 1grid left

1grid modすいません

swish wrote:

00:57:490 (1) - spinのあとから近すぎるように思います
spinを１つ手前の白線までにする？ OK
[*]01:33:490 (1) - リピート１回入れる？後ろの配置を変えなきゃですが・・ Sorry
[*]02:00:490 (1) - リピートが多いように思いました　こんな風に変更？Remap

Weezy wrote:

Can I have a cookie?

Patcheloid
00:42:490 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider instead
01:33:490 (1) - Extend this to the next white tick?

Everything else is perfect
Awesome map here

Rigeru wrote:

8-)

kioukiou wrote:

Bubbled.

S i R i R u wrote:

:oops:

nimba wrote:

あーわあーわ

KyonkoHizara wrote:

:)

1. 02:22:990 - I don't see any reason to silence this spinner end, the music is loud enough to place a hitsound. I suggest to use 40~50% + a soft-whistle.
2. Combo Colours: 'Red' blends a bit with the BG, would you make it a bit more "Pink-ish", please?
3. I tried to edit the BG to make it fit the 4:3 ratio but I failed, just wondering if it's possible to get another BG...

1. 01:36:302 (1) - This object seems too tricky for the easiest diff in this mapset. I keep hitting it too early, it will be too hard for rookies. Try something like this instead, please.
2. 02:12:490 (1) - As a minor suggestion, try to keep things clear and clean for the easiest diffs. Half of this slider is getting covered by the previous one, consider re-arranging the control points like this, it looks way better.
3. 02:22:990 - You should end this diff here to match all the other diffs, you can try moving the spinner and then adding some beats or a slider here: 02:19:990 - , like this

1. 01:51:490 (3) - The 2nd reverse arrow is getting covered by the previous hitbursts, therefore there's not enough time to see. (I asked around, so it's not only me) Move it somewhere else, please.
2. 00:29:740 (5) - This slowdown (0.50x) kills the flow of the really awesome patterns in this map IMO, try with 0.75x instead. Also, add a NC to re-mark the slider-speed change, please.
3. 00:44:740 (5) - ^

1. No "-loid" name?
2. 01:13:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern was not fun to play, it was quite hard to "guess" the pattern of the circles, you should keep following the zig-zag pattern in one direction, like this.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. 02:22:990 - I don't see any reason to silence this spinner end, the music is loud enough to place a hitsound. I suggest to use 40~50% + a soft-whistle.
   ok, I chenged volume to 50% and added whistle.
2. Combo Colours: 'Red' blends a bit with the BG, would you make it a bit more "Pink-ish", please? Fixed.
3. I tried to edit the BG to make it fit the 4:3 ratio but I failed, just wondering if it's possible to get another BG...
   I see your point, and I had tried to find better BG sometimes, but I couldn't find better one...Sorry I want to keep it unless it is a big issue.

[Insane]

1. No "-loid" name? Is it ok to use -loid name? Well, I changed my diff name to -loid.
2. 01:13:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern was not fun to play, it was quite hard to "guess" the pattern of the circles, you should keep following the zig-zag pattern in one direction, like this. I changed it as you suggested.

Pop'd over the hidden arrow in [Banvilod] (Please, read the other suggestions too)

Great mapset, call me back when you're done and I'll gladly re-bubble this.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[banviloid]

1. 01:51:490 (3) - The 2nd reverse arrow is getting covered by the previous hitbursts, therefore there's not enough time to see. (I asked around, so it's not only me) Move it somewhere else, please. Oh , I didn't notice. Changed
2. 00:29:740 (5) - This slowdown (0.50x) kills the flow of the really awesome patterns in this map IMO, try with 0.75x instead. Also, add a NC to re-mark the slider-speed change, please.hmm , ok. Changed
3. 00:44:740 (5) - ^ ^

banvi wrote:

Gonzvlo wrote:

[banviloid]

1. 01:51:490 (3) - The 2nd reverse arrow is getting covered by the previous hitbursts, therefore there's not enough time to see. (I asked around, so it's not only me) Move it somewhere else, please. Oh , I didn't notice. Changed
2. 00:29:740 (5) - This slowdown (0.50x) kills the flow of the really awesome patterns in this map IMO, try with 0.75x instead. Also, add a NC to re-mark the slider-speed change, please.hmm , ok. Changed
3. 00:44:740 (5) - ^ ^

Thank you~ :3

1. 01:16:990 - Same as the spinner-end at the end. (This includes [Patcheloid] after fixes)
2. Ok, I tried again and here is the edited BG. (I didn't not expand the BG, I tried to 'clone' the sides)
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:13:990 (1) - Do the same you did for the end of the song. Move this spinner to: 01:15:490 - and then add some beats before the spinner. Here's a suggestion.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Hey o/ hi~

Sorry, I missed some similar stuff, please forgive me. np


[General]

1. 01:16:990 - Same as the spinner-end at the end. (This includes [Patcheloid] after fixes) Fixed
2. Ok, I tried again and here is the edited BG. (I didn't not expand the BG, I tried to 'clone' the sides)
   
   SPOILER

   
   oh, this is natural fix. thanks~ changed.

[Patcheloid]

1. 01:13:990 (1) - Do the same you did for the end of the song. Move this spinner to: 01:15:490 - and then add some beats before the spinner. Here's a suggestion. Fixed

That's should be all, sorry for any inconvenience. (Don't forget to full submit after adding the BG)

No kudosu.

Gonzvlo wrote:

I made the new BG using the "jpg" extension to save some space, but it's not a big deal.

Everything seems to be fine, good luck.

Re-bubbled.

_Kiva wrote:

:D

friendok wrote:

the maps is fun at ar9..

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Overall difficulty settings are too low for such a map. I suggest HP drain +1, Overall Difficulty +1 and Approach Rate +1 (or +2, your choice).
   This will also improve the score spread.

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Approach 7 seems a tiny bit fast, have you tried using 6?
   Also, why Overall Difficulty 5?

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   02:07:990 (7) - new combo for consistency sake.

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Fine.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- banviloid:

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Approach 7 seems a tiny bit fast, have you tried using 6?
   Also, why Overall Difficulty 5?

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Patcheloid:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Overall difficulty settings are too low for such a map. I suggest HP drain +1, Overall Difficulty +1 and Approach Rate +1 (or +2, your choice).
   This will also improve the score spread.

Changed HP +1, OD +1, AR +1.

- banviloid:

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Approach 7 seems a tiny bit fast, have you tried using 6?
   Also, why Overall Difficulty 5?

Changed AR -1, OD +1 as banvi told me.

- Suzuloid:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   02:07:990 (7) - new combo for consistency sake.

Added new combo.

- Wmf's Taiko:

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Fine.

Feel free to send me a PM/ask me in game for a recheck.

h3k1ru wrote:

just want to say this map is awesome, cant stop to play it