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Suzully

Roddie wrote:

Hi.

I fixed the background for you. I didn't like the black bars in between. :( I hope you'll like it.

Thank you for fixing the BG for me :)
But sorry, I don't like BG which is enlarged without original aspect ratio :?


Insane:
  1. 00:18:490 (1, 2, 3, 4,)-Add whistles on those notes. :D Fixed
  2. 00:19:240 (6, 7, 8, 9)-Add whistles on those four as well and maybe add a new combo on 6? Fixed
  3. 00:28:240 (x)-It feels like there should be a note here.., You might want to do that. These notes follow guitar sound. So I didn't fix.
  4. 00:29:927 (4)-Remove that note. After that, create a slider and start it off on 00:29:740. And end it on 00:29:927. Like this for example. This follows the vocals pretty well, you know? ;) ^ But this is nice suggestion! It seems good for me! Fixed.
  5. 01:03:115 (1)-Leaving out an anti-jump? It might not be a good idea, man. :( Use a distance spacing of 1.2x and follow this note pattern. I suggest you use that pattern. 8-) Fixed
  6. 00:16:896-Increase the volume on this timing point. ._. Maybe about 55% should do it. Not fixed
  7. 00:02:552 (x)-Add a note here. Use this type of pattern. :3 A distance spacing of 1.7x might help you with that. Sounds good! Fixed. But different patten from yours.
  8. 02:22:896-Increase the volume on this timing point. Set the volume at 55%. Not fixed
If you have any questions about my mod post, ask me in-game. ^^

Star~

And good luck!
Thank you for your modding and star! :)
There are many nice suggestions to make mine better than now. :oops:


banvi wrote:

Roddie wrote:

banviloid:
  1. 01:16:990-Increase the volume on this timing point. Set the volume at 55%.
  2. 02:22:990-^
う~む、ほんとはこのままがいいんですがInsaneにも同じ提案があるし…
もし変更したいのであればこのdiffも勝手に変更しちゃってくださいorz
Insaneも修正なしということにするのでこのままにします~。
DeadAlready
star~ >w</
Sylfear
ふわり~ふわり~
Topic Starter
Suzully
>quintitem,Reflain
ふわり~ふわり~Thank you~<3
se-sukeEila
star~☆ :)
Leorda
こにちは!!

General
* Your BG is ugly, maybe try this one? http://konachan.net/post/show/97243/blo ... _eyes-swor
* Can you change the color from dark color to light color? It kinda odd for me, thought

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Patcheloid
* Approach Rate +2?

00:13:240 (4) - New combo?
01:33:490 (1) - I think add one repeating slider is better, IMO
01:36:302 (1) - Move further away from slider, I don't like being overlapped >.<
01:53:365 (x) - Add note?
02:12:490 (1) - Perhaps, make it like this to make a blanket combo? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/84322

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banviloid

00:20:740 (3,4) - Maybe it's better if you remove (4) and add one repeating slider for (3)
00:29:740 (5,1,2) - IMO, this is pretty confusing for me. Try add a note in 00:30:865?
01:42:115 (5) - New combo
01:42:490 (1) - Remove new combo

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さようなら~
banvi

Leorda wrote:

banviloid:
00:20:740 (3,4) - Maybe it's better if you remove (4) and add one repeating slider for (3)
00:29:740 (5,1,2) - IMO, this is pretty confusing for me. Try add a note in 00:30:865? hm , this is enough to readable imo. I wanna keep this >.<
01:42:115 (5) - New combo
01:42:490 (1) - Remove new combo
EDIT:

wmfchris wrote:

[banviloid]
01:40:615 (3) - right 1 grid lv 4 
very nice >A< >A<
Thank you~
[attachment=0:4b6d1]Kagamine Rin - Ouka Ryouran (Suzully) [banviloid].osu[/attachment:4b6d1]
wmfchris
[Insane]
00:11:740 (5,6) - (5) left 2 grids, (6) left 1 grid? [(4,5)'s spacing is 1.4x]
01:52:615 (6,6,6,6,6) - clap
02:06:115 (9) - clap?
[Not sure about that, but you don't need to whistle all 1/4 streams?]

[banviloid]
01:40:615 (3) - right 1 grid lv 4
very nice >A<

[Patcheloid]
00:34:990 (4) - whistle?

star *2 ~
Topic Starter
Suzully

Leorda wrote:

こにちは!!

General
* Your BG is ugly, maybe try this one? http://konachan.net/post/show/97243/blo ... _eyes-swor
* Can you change the color from dark color to light color? It kinda odd for me, thought

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さようなら~
Thank you Leorda~ :)
Hmm I think your BG is of "Iroha Uta".
I keep it sorry.
And dark color is also fine to me because of these color are included in BG.

But your BG is very nice Rin! XD
And your mod about 2diffs is very very helpful!

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:11:740 (5,6) - (5) left 2 grids, (6) left 1 grid? [(4,5)'s spacing is 1.4x] fixed~ (5,6,7) left 1 grid
01:52:615 (6,6,6,6,6) - clap fixed
02:06:115 (9) - clap? not fixed
[Not sure about that, but you don't need to whistle all 1/4 streams?] removed whistle on some notes~

star *2 ~
Thank you wmfchris~ :oops:
wow star *2! o.o
I say thank you again! >A<

>ばんびさん
アップロードしました~
wmfchris
Topic Starter
Suzully

wmfchris wrote:

>W<
How nice!
Thank you~!<3
Herschel
fun map :D
ganbatte !
kanpakyin
Go go
KanaRin
Taiko mod request by wmfchris
=w= Let's go~

[Wmf's Taiko]

Soft --> Normal 90% ~ 95% , 比較給力

00:56:740 (319) - Big Kat
00:57:115 (321) - Big Kat (好打一點 + 跟Voice)
00:57:677 (324) - Add a Kat?
00:58:427 (328) - ^
之後的紅線其實都可以加個Kat 不過假如你不改可以就算了 只是我感覺Kiai沒有一般part密有點奇怪

01:25:990 (500) - Don , 不要Kat
01:39:115 (569,570,571) - ~這part之後的紅線就不用像之前給你suggestion的加Kat了,因為這像冷靜的part

seems like no problem.
Good.

My Rating: 8 / 10

PS.根據wmf,kpy等人評分比較緊手 ,修定評分方法
Topic Starter
Suzully
Thank you for star, Taiko players~! :)

And KanaRin taiko mod arigatou~<3
KanaRin

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for star, Taiko players~! :)

And KanaRin taiko mod arigatou~<3
Fightだね!
wmfchris

KanaRin wrote:

Taiko mod request by wmfchris
=w= Let's go~

[Wmf's Taiko]

Soft --> Normal 90% ~ 95% , 比較給力 Yeah

00:56:740 (319) - Big Kat
00:57:115 (321) - Big Kat (好打一點 + 跟Voice) KDKDKKDDK
00:57:677 (324) - Add a Kat?
00:58:427 (328) - ^
之後的紅線其實都可以加個Kat 不過假如你不改可以就算了 只是我感覺Kiai沒有一般part密有點奇怪

Make some difference between 1st and 2nd kiai :3
01:25:990 (500) - Don , 不要Kat ok
01:39:115 (569,570,571) - ~這part之後的紅線就不用像之前給你suggestion的加Kat了,因為這像冷靜的part
X3

Download: Kagamine Rin - Ouka Ryouran (Suzully) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Suzully

wmfchris wrote:

X3
Uploaded~
Takos
;)
Muya
-Patheloid:
  1. 00:34:990 (4,5) - 1grid down?
  2. 01:36:302 (1) - スライダーに重ねないようにしたほうがいいかもしれない
  3. 02:12:490 (1) - ^
-banviloid:
  1. 02:07:615 (1,2,3) - 個人的にスライダーのお尻を隠す配置は嫌いです orz 02:06:115 (1,2,3) - と同じにしたほうがいいかもしれない
-Insane:
  1. 00:20:740 (6) - 1grid down?
  2. 00:23:546 (4,6) - grid offにして(2)に重ねる?
edit :
yay 100kudosu
banvi

Muya wrote:

-banviloid:
  1. 02:07:615 (1,2,3) - 個人的にスライダーのお尻を隠す配置は嫌いです orz 02:06:115 (1,2,3) - と同じにしたほうがいいかもしれない
譜面のバリエーションを考えたいのでこのままにしたいですorz

edit :
yay 100kudosu おめです!
Topic Starter
Suzully

Takos wrote:

;)
星どうもです!

Muya wrote:

-Insane:
  1. 00:20:740 (6) - 1grid down? 見た目の良さを比べて今のままにします><
  2. 00:23:546 (4,6) - grid offにして(2)に重ねる? fixed
edit :
yay 100kudosu
modありがとうございます!

100kudosu・・・(゜д゜)
おめですー!
m2rebirth
ワーイ♪ヽ(゚∀゚)メ(゚∀゚)メ(゚∀゚)ノワーイ♪
val0108
yaaaaaaaaaay
swish
リクエストありがとうございますー
全て提案です! :)

[Patcheloid]
SPOILER
  1. 00:57:490 (1) - spinのあとから近すぎるように思います
    spinを1つ手前の白線までにする?
  2. 01:33:490 (1) - リピート1回入れる?後ろの配置を変えなきゃですが・・
  3. 02:00:490 (1) - リピートが多いように思いました こんな風に変更?



[banviloid]
SPOILER
  1. 00:43:052 (4) - 1grid up
  2. 01:30:302 (7) - 1grid left
  3. 01:30:490 (8) - 1grid left,1grid up
  4. 01:36:115 (5) - 1grid left
  5. 01:36:677 (1) - 1grid up
  6. 01:47:740 (6) - 1grid up
  7. 01:55:802 (3) - 1grid left
1grid modすいません :(


[Suzuloid?]
looks fine~ :oops:


nice map~ ★はもう投げてました :|
banvi

swish wrote:

[banviloid]
  1. 00:43:052 (4) - 1grid up
  2. 01:30:302 (7) - 1grid left
  3. 01:30:490 (8) - 1grid left,1grid up
  4. 01:36:115 (5) - 1grid left
  5. 01:36:677 (1) - 1grid up
  6. 01:47:740 (6) - 1grid up
  7. 01:55:802 (3) - 1grid left
1grid modすいません :(
oop , 私としたことが…
All fixed!! Thanks for nazi mod!!

[attachment=0:f743a]Kagamine Rin - Ouka Ryouran (Suzully) [banviloid].osu[/attachment:f743a]
Topic Starter
Suzully
>m2rebirth,val0108
thx star~!

>swish
modありがとうううう!

>banvi
アップデートしましたー
Patchouli

swish wrote:

00:57:490 (1) - spinのあとから近すぎるように思います
spinを1つ手前の白線までにする? OK
[*]01:33:490 (1) - リピート1回入れる?後ろの配置を変えなきゃですが・・ Sorry
[*]02:00:490 (1) - リピートが多いように思いました こんな風に変更?Remap
MOD thank you :)
Weez
Can I have a cookie?

Patcheloid
00:42:490 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider instead
01:33:490 (1) - Extend this to the next white tick?

Everything else is perfect :D
Awesome map here :)
Rigeru_old
8-)
Topic Starter
Suzully

Weezy wrote:

Can I have a cookie?

Patcheloid
00:42:490 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider instead
01:33:490 (1) - Extend this to the next white tick?

Everything else is perfect :D
Awesome map here :)
Thank you for modding~


Rigeru wrote:

8-)
ありがとうー!
kioukiou
Bubbled.
Topic Starter
Suzully

kioukiou wrote:

Bubbled.
Thank you very much kioukiou-sensei~!! ><
Cyril Scarlet
:oops:
Topic Starter
Suzully

S i R i R u wrote:

:oops:
ありがとう!(・3・)
nimba_old
あーわあーわ
Topic Starter
Suzully

nimba wrote:

あーわあーわ
にーんばさーんありーがとーう
Kyonko Hizara
:)
Topic Starter
Suzully

KyonkoHizara wrote:

:)
thanks<3
Gonzvlo
[General]
  1. 02:22:990 - I don't see any reason to silence this spinner end, the music is loud enough to place a hitsound. I suggest to use 40~50% + a soft-whistle.
  2. Combo Colours: 'Red' blends a bit with the BG, would you make it a bit more "Pink-ish", please?
  3. I tried to edit the BG to make it fit the 4:3 ratio but I failed, just wondering if it's possible to get another BG...
[Patcheloid]
  1. 01:36:302 (1) - This object seems too tricky for the easiest diff in this mapset. I keep hitting it too early, it will be too hard for rookies. Try something like this instead, please.
  2. 02:12:490 (1) - As a minor suggestion, try to keep things clear and clean for the easiest diffs. Half of this slider is getting covered by the previous one, consider re-arranging the control points like this, it looks way better.
  3. 02:22:990 - You should end this diff here to match all the other diffs, you can try moving the spinner and then adding some beats or a slider here: 02:19:990 - , like this
[Banviloid]
  1. 01:51:490 (3) - The 2nd reverse arrow is getting covered by the previous hitbursts, therefore there's not enough time to see. (I asked around, so it's not only me) Move it somewhere else, please.
  2. 00:29:740 (5) - This slowdown (0.50x) kills the flow of the really awesome patterns in this map IMO, try with 0.75x instead. Also, add a NC to re-mark the slider-speed change, please.
  3. 00:44:740 (5) - ^
[Insane]
  1. No "-loid" name?
  2. 01:13:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern was not fun to play, it was quite hard to "guess" the pattern of the circles, you should keep following the zig-zag pattern in one direction, like this.
Pop'd over the hidden arrow in [Banvilod] (Please, read the other suggestions too)

Great mapset, call me back when you're done and I'll gladly re-bubble this.
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