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General:
- The dimensions of the BG is a bit weird. I suggest rather using one of these resolutions instead: 1024X768, 1366X768, 1920X1080, 1920X1200.
- Why did you use a slidertickrate of 2? I noticed it’s not for purposes of hitsounding since you don’t have any slidertick soundfiles. If there isn’t really a reason I suggest to rather use a slidertickrate of 1.
Tyrell's Utopia:
- I’m not sure if those hyperdashes/large spacings in the beginning of the diff really fit in with the intensity of the song. It sounds kind of calm. I’m not saying to remove all hyperdashes; some of them fit in nicely. The section I’m talking about is from 00:00:230 – to 00:10:968 – I would say the hyperdashes here: 00:00:570 (2,3) - 00:01:934 (2,3) - 00:03:298 (2,3) - 00:04:661 (2,3) - 00:06:025 (2,3) – etc. are fine, but these ones: 00:01:423 (6,1) - 00:02:786 (6,1) - 00:04:150 (6,1) - 00:05:514 (6,1) – etc. feel unnecessary. Perhaps you think of it the other way around, but my opinion is that you have too many hyperdashes in the beginning of the diff. If the intensity of the song was higher then I would have supported it.
- 00:09:775 (1,2,3,4) –I also don’t support these four hyperdashes after another. The music just isn’t intense enough; song is still calm. I suggest removing the hyperdash on 00:09:775 (1) – and the hyperdash on 00:10:116 (2) – so that 00:10:798 (4) – is being emphasized only.
- 00:11:139 (1,2) –Why not make these two sliders’ shapes similar like you did here: 00:12:502 (1,2) – It would be nice for consistency.
- 00:11:139 (1,2) –You didn’t place a hyperdash here but you placed hyperdashes on the other similar beats though: 00:12:502 (1,2) - 00:13:866 (1,2) - 00:16:593 (1,2) – etc. For consistency you should probably add a hyperdash on 00:11:139 (1,2) – as well.
- 00:16:252 (7,8) –It would be nice to emphasize these more because of the strong beats on them by changing the distance. Something like you did here: 00:21:707 (7,8) – You increased the spacing of (7) a bit. You can do the same here: 00:16:252 (7,8) –
- 00:34:320 (5) –I think NC have to be added here to be consistent with the previous NC’ing patterns. This NC pattern is kind of long.
- 00:38:411 –This is quite a strong beat so it would be nice if it was a single fruit instead for more emphasis. So perhaps a pattern like this:
- 00:43:866 (4) –A NC has to be placed here as well for consistency with previous NC patterns.
- 00:44:207 (5,6) –I think the hyperdash here is a mistake since you didn’t add any other hyperdashes in this section of the diff and also, the beat isn’t really that strong to support a hyperdash.
- 00:46:593 (1,2) - 00:48:639 (1,2) - 00:50:684 (1,2) - 00:52:730 (1,2) - Try to keep the spacings between these similar since all of them follow a similar rhythm.
- 00:56:820 (5) –Add NC here and remove NC here: 00:57:502 (1) – Mainly because the beat on (5) supports it more.
- 01:53:411 (1) –I don’t really understand the sudden SV change here.. it doesn’t seem to affect gameplay, but I still don’t understand it.
- 02:05:002 (3) –I think you may have missed a clap here.
Platter:
- 00:07:048 (1,2) –I suggest increasing the distance between these two objects a bit more to be consistent with the other similar patterns: 00:01:593 (1,2) - 00:04:320 (1,2) - 00:05:684 (1,2) – etc. These patterns are a bit more challenging and I seem to miss 00:07:048 (1,2) – the whole time cause I expect the distance to be a bit higher lol
- 00:15:911 (5,6,7,8) –I suggest trying to space these the same way you spaced and placed: 00:15:230 (1,2,3,4) – I think the pattern will look better then. So something like this:
Also, because of the beat on 00:16:252 (7) – it would be nice to change the spacing here a bit, so something like this: - 00:18:468 (2,3) –I don’t think a hyperdash should be placed here. It’s a bit inconsistent since you didn’t place a hyperdash on other beats that might be similar to this. I think it would be better to place a hyperdash on 00:21:877 (8) – instead to emphasize 00:22:048 (9) – more (so (9) must be hyperdashed)
- 00:20:514 –I think placing a note here would be better since there’s a vocal there and it feels quite empty without something to support that vocal.
- 00:51:536 (2,3) –You can increase the spacing between these two objects a bit more to emphasize 00:51:707 (3) – more since I feel the spacing is currently too small. Perhaps try placing 00:51:707 (3) – here:X:112
- 01:08:752 (4,5) -^, more emphasis on (5) would be great. So place (5) somewhere here: X:108
- 01:33:809 (1) –I doubt this NC should be here otherwise this NC pattern will be quite short and inconsistent with the rest. I suggest removing the NC here.
- The slider velocity in the last kiai is quite big. It’s the same as the hardest diff as well which is a bit weird for spread. Imo the slider velocity should be slower than the hardest diff for better spread and also to show the difference between the two diffs. 1.20X, like you did in the first kiai would be best imo.
- 01:38:070 (7) –Same as 00:16:252 (7) –
- 01:54:093 (2,1) –I don’t really think a hyperdash fits in here since the beat on 01:54:775 (1) – really isn’t that strong and the music’s intensity actually dies down (music becomes calmer)
- 00:35:684 – to 00:45:570 – The new combo’s in this section look very inconsistent. I’m not sure what your intentions with the NC’s are here so I suggest going through this section again and just doublechecking the NC’s for inconsistencies.
- 02:05:002 (3) –I think you missed a clap here. This applies to the Salad as well.
Salad:
- 00:05:173 –Why no note here? It feels a bit inconsistent with the previous similar patterns since you placed notes on all those similar beats. Also the beat is quite strong so it feels weird to leave it empty.
- 00:17:957 (3) –This object’s distance can be increased a bit. Especially since it’s in kiai and the beat isn’t weak. I suggest placing it somewhere around:X:348
- 00:18:980 (4) -^, somewhere here perhaps: X:124. The spacing here depends on the spacing of the one above.
- 00:24:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –This NC pattern exceeds the guideline of 10 objects. One extra fruit will probably not be a problem but just thought I’ll point this out.
- 00:42:843 (3) –I feel this object can do with a bit more spacing. While testplaying it felt as if 00:42:843 (3) – was a bit too close to 00:41:480 (2) –
- 00:48:298 (3) –Place this object a bit more to the right. Will make it a bit more challenging. Somewhere around: X:480 will be good.
- 00:52:389 (3) -^, X:244
- 00:59:548 (2,3) –The distance between these two objects look quite small when comparing it to 00:58:866 (1,2) – The beat on the head of 00:59:889 (3) – is also a bit strong so more spacing would be nice.
- 01:38:411 (1,2) – It would be a good idea to keep these spacings similar to 01:32:957 (1,2) – since they follow the same rhythm/beat. Right now the difference between them is big. Same goes to 01:43:866 (1,2) -
- 01:40:798 (4) –Increase the spacing of this object a bit more. Somewhere here: X:208. Right now the spacing is quite low.
Nelly’s Cup:
- 00:54:093 (4,1) –The spacing here can be increased a bit more. Right now (1) is quite close to (4) and the pattern can do with a bit more spacing imo. So you can place 00:54:775 (1) – somewhere here: X:260
- 01:47:957 (2,3,1) –Increasing the spacing here a bit more as well would be great especially since there’s a finish on 01:49:320 (1) – So you can place 01:48:980 (3) – somewhere here: X:196 and 01:49:320 (1) – somewhere here: X:312.
- 01:39:775 (2,3) –The spacing between these look quite small. I suggest placing 01:41:139 (3) – somewhere here: X:144.
- 01:38:411 (1,2,3,4,5) –This combo is quite long, much longer than the suggested 8 objects max. I suggest placing a new combo here: 01:41:139 (3) –
- 01:43:866 (1,2) –More spacing here would be nice, so you can place 01:45:230 (2) – somewhere here: X:72
If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to poke me in-game. Good Luck~