jioyi - Platinum

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Lunicia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 21, 2016 at 6:21:22 PM

Artist: jioyi
Title: Platinum
Source: VOEZ
Tags: application game rayark international limited iphone android app ipad
BPM: 182
Filesize: 3635kb
Play Time: 02:14
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  1. Special (5.76 stars, 643 notes)


Download: jioyi - Platinum
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wip
100% hitsounded
accepting mods and gds
i still need to remap stream section :/
Weriko
zzzzz
call me if you need something

16:46 Weriko: zzzz ok
16:46 Weriko: 00:01:793 (5,2) -
16:46 Xendogenesis: zz
16:46 Weriko: this overlap looks weird
16:46 Weriko: you can stack them
16:46 Weriko: ok ill just talk generally
16:46 Weriko: i think it will be better
16:47 Weriko: 00:03:441 (4,3) - look
16:47 Weriko: stuff like this
16:47 Xendogenesis: ok
16:47 Weriko: shows the map was just a randomplacing funtime
16:47 Weriko: with some ds
16:47 Xendogenesis: jow
16:47 Xendogenesis: how
16:47 Weriko: how what
16:48 Xendogenesis: i mean
16:48 Xendogenesis: wat do i do to fix it
16:48 Weriko: emm....
16:48 Weriko: practice
16:48 Weriko: learn how to build structure
16:48 Xendogenesis: ok
16:48 Weriko: you can stack a lot of stuff
16:48 Weriko: and most of overlaps look ugly
16:49 Weriko: 00:11:436 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - look at this
16:49 Weriko: doesnt it look messy?
16:49 Weriko: and weird?
16:49 Weriko: another thing
16:49 Weriko: 00:14:320 (1) - dont use this sv for 1/4 sliders lol
16:50 Xendogenesis: no it looks pretty sex
16:50 Weriko: 00:24:705 (8) - i think you missed a note here
16:50 Weriko: zzzz
16:50 Xendogenesis: the sv thing was just for fun
16:50 Xendogenesis: if its really a bad thing then i\ll change it :P
16:50 Weriko: yes please
16:50 Weriko: look
16:50 Weriko: 00:39:375 (1,2) - here you did good on timing
16:50 Weriko: next stream is starting
16:51 Weriko: well no actualyl i dont know
16:51 Xendogenesis: huh
16:51 Weriko: but at least the stream is starting on the white tick
16:51 Xendogenesis: thats cuz u told me to fix that
16:51 Weriko: well then its better now
16:51 Weriko: but i think you are not following the song at all
16:52 Weriko: i mean the slider is on a downbeat
16:52 Weriko: but after that... the stream looks meh
16:52 Weriko: its not bad
16:52 Weriko: but you can place... i dont know.... more kicksliders or something
16:52 Xendogenesis: well i didnt really listen to the song i just said "oh stream section" and put streams
16:52 Weriko: lmao dont do that
16:52 Weriko: and plase
16:52 Xendogenesis: ok i'll fix it now then
16:52 Weriko: please
16:52 Weriko: keep consistency
16:53 Weriko: streams just look random
16:53 Weriko: i mean its like
16:53 Weriko: you place a random ammount of circles
16:53 Weriko: and then a kickslider
16:53 Xendogenesis: yes
16:53 Weriko: ok dont do it
16:53 Weriko: you gotta follow the song
16:53 Weriko: you will get that with practice zzz
16:54 Weriko: here
16:54 Weriko: 01:00:474 (1,2,3) -
16:54 Weriko: you see how 1 and 2 are at a distance
16:54 Weriko: but then you totally change it on 2 and 3?
16:54 Weriko: it can be justified
16:54 Xendogenesis: how
16:54 Weriko: because the song has a small change
16:54 Weriko: but i wouldnt recommend that
16:55 Weriko: you should keep everything stacked
16:55 Weriko: or with that small distance
16:55 Weriko: that is also weird because its 1/4
16:55 Weriko: 00:59:238 (1,1) -
16:55 Weriko: also... i know its not an easy
16:55 Weriko: but you should give players some time to react after spinner
16:56 Xendogenesis: but
16:56 Xendogenesis: its pretty easy enough
16:56 Xendogenesis: especially for an extra
16:56 Weriko: zzzzz
16:56 Weriko: its not
16:56 Weriko: you will get way less points in the spinner
16:56 Weriko: because you have less time to react
16:56 Weriko: zzzz i just say its not a good idea to do it
16:57 Xendogenesis: uguu
16:57 Xendogenesis: i accidentally deleted a slider
16:57 Weriko: you can put a beat here i think
16:57 Weriko: 01:14:320 (7) -
16:57 Weriko: ctrl z zzz
16:57 Weriko: and that last thing also goes for another spot
16:57 Xendogenesis: WAIT
16:57 Weriko: ?
16:57 Xendogenesis: i never knew that ctrl z thing existed
16:57 Weriko: lmao
16:57 Xendogenesis: wow
16:57 Weriko: zzzz
16:58 Weriko: also ctrl y if you are a mess and pressed ctrl z
16:58 Weriko: and you didnt want to
16:58 Weriko: but whatever
16:58 Weriko: 01:29:568 (2) -
16:58 Weriko: here you ate some beats
16:58 Weriko: even tho the slider kinda follows them....
16:58 Weriko: but im not sure about that
16:59 Xendogenesis: wat
16:59 Weriko: ?
16:59 Weriko: you can place circles there
16:59 Xendogenesis: but
16:59 Weriko: ?
16:59 Xendogenesis: the slider looks more a e s t h e t i c
17:00 Weriko: zzzzz
17:00 Weriko: say that when everything fits and you keep consistency
17:00 Xendogenesis: lol
17:00 Weriko: i think the main problem is that you just randomplaced everything
17:00 Weriko: right?
17:00 Weriko: there is some cool stuff
17:00 Weriko: but it looks meh overall
17:01 Xendogenesis: well it onl y took me one day to map
17:01 Weriko: zzzz
17:01 Weriko: i would recommend
17:01 Weriko: that you go to an easier song
17:01 Weriko: and map it
17:01 Weriko: thinking about the song
17:01 Xendogenesis: idk any songs t hotht
17:02 Weriko: zzz map some eroge idk
17:02 Xendogenesis: fuk u
17:02 Xendogenesis: u never mapped a tv size anime song or stuff liek that in me life
17:02 Weriko: wat
17:02 Xendogenesis: i\ll hav eu know the first song i tried to map wa s a camellia song
17:02 Xendogenesis: heh
17:02 Weriko: u never mapped in me life
17:02 Xendogenesis: a
17:02 Weriko: zzzz
17:02 Weriko: idk map something easier
17:02 Weriko: i learned mapping hard stuff
17:02 Weriko: and right now
17:02 Weriko: well you know
17:03 Weriko: its better to start with easy stuff for real
17:03 Weriko: this could have been pretty good in 2011 or sumthing
17:03 Weriko: but okay
17:03 Weriko: if u need anything else just tell me zzzz
17:04 Xendogenesis: LOL
17:04 Xendogenesis: wat is easy stuff
17:04 Weriko: the rhythms here are complex enough
17:04 Weriko: to make it hard
17:04 Weriko: map something where you can spam 1/2
17:05 Xendogenesis: hmm
17:05 Xendogenesis: that to ez
17:05 Xendogenesis: i like making 5 star + maps :V
17:05 Weriko: zzzzzz but you not doing it well
17:05 Weriko: so its not ez at all
17:06 Xendogenesis: ive only ever mapped 1/3
17:06 Xendogenesis: 1/4**
17:06 Weriko: learn how to map 1/2
17:06 Weriko: and im serious
17:06 Xendogenesis: but 1/2 is easier version of 1/4
17:06 Xendogenesis: :(
17:06 Weriko: its not easier
17:07 Weriko: zzz listen to me
17:07 Xendogenesis: z
17:07 Weriko: its hard to get so something mapping stuff like this
17:07 Weriko: but bah
17:07 Weriko: whatever
17:07 Weriko: map whatever you like to map
17:07 Xendogenesis: idk
17:07 Xendogenesis: maybe one day i'll map an eroge thing
17:07 Xendogenesis: and t hen i become famous pp mapper
17:07 Weriko: lulz
17:08 Weriko: maybe
Topic Starter
Lunicia

Weriko wrote:

zzzzz
call me if you need something

16:46 Weriko: zzzz ok
16:46 Weriko: 00:01:793 (5,2) -
16:46 Xendogenesis: zz
16:46 Weriko: this overlap looks weird
16:46 Weriko: you can stack them
16:46 Weriko: ok ill just talk generally
16:46 Weriko: i think it will be better
16:47 Weriko: 00:03:441 (4,3) - look
16:47 Weriko: stuff like this
16:47 Xendogenesis: ok
16:47 Weriko: shows the map was just a randomplacing funtime
16:47 Weriko: with some ds
16:47 Xendogenesis: jow
16:47 Xendogenesis: how
16:47 Weriko: how what
16:48 Xendogenesis: i mean
16:48 Xendogenesis: wat do i do to fix it
16:48 Weriko: emm....
16:48 Weriko: practice
16:48 Weriko: learn how to build structure
16:48 Xendogenesis: ok
16:48 Weriko: you can stack a lot of stuff
16:48 Weriko: and most of overlaps look ugly
16:49 Weriko: 00:11:436 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - look at this
16:49 Weriko: doesnt it look messy?
16:49 Weriko: and weird?
16:49 Weriko: another thing
16:49 Weriko: 00:14:320 (1) - dont use this sv for 1/4 sliders lol
16:50 Xendogenesis: no it looks pretty sex
16:50 Weriko: 00:24:705 (8) - i think you missed a note here
16:50 Weriko: zzzz
16:50 Xendogenesis: the sv thing was just for fun
16:50 Xendogenesis: if its really a bad thing then i\ll change it :P
16:50 Weriko: yes please
16:50 Weriko: look
16:50 Weriko: 00:39:375 (1,2) - here you did good on timing
16:50 Weriko: next stream is starting
16:51 Weriko: well no actualyl i dont know
16:51 Xendogenesis: huh
16:51 Weriko: but at least the stream is starting on the white tick
16:51 Xendogenesis: thats cuz u told me to fix that
16:51 Weriko: well then its better now
16:51 Weriko: but i think you are not following the song at all
16:52 Weriko: i mean the slider is on a downbeat
16:52 Weriko: but after that... the stream looks meh
16:52 Weriko: its not bad
16:52 Weriko: but you can place... i dont know.... more kicksliders or something
16:52 Xendogenesis: well i didnt really listen to the song i just said "oh stream section" and put streams
16:52 Weriko: lmao dont do that
16:52 Weriko: and plase
16:52 Xendogenesis: ok i'll fix it now then
16:52 Weriko: please
16:52 Weriko: keep consistency
16:53 Weriko: streams just look random
16:53 Weriko: i mean its like
16:53 Weriko: you place a random ammount of circles
16:53 Weriko: and then a kickslider
16:53 Xendogenesis: yes
16:53 Weriko: ok dont do it
16:53 Weriko: you gotta follow the song
16:53 Weriko: you will get that with practice zzz
16:54 Weriko: here
16:54 Weriko: 01:00:474 (1,2,3) -
16:54 Weriko: you see how 1 and 2 are at a distance
16:54 Weriko: but then you totally change it on 2 and 3?
16:54 Weriko: it can be justified
16:54 Xendogenesis: how
16:54 Weriko: because the song has a small change
16:54 Weriko: but i wouldnt recommend that
16:55 Weriko: you should keep everything stacked
16:55 Weriko: or with that small distance
16:55 Weriko: that is also weird because its 1/4
16:55 Weriko: 00:59:238 (1,1) -
16:55 Weriko: also... i know its not an easy
16:55 Weriko: but you should give players some time to react after spinner
16:56 Xendogenesis: but
16:56 Xendogenesis: its pretty easy enough
16:56 Xendogenesis: especially for an extra
16:56 Weriko: zzzzz
16:56 Weriko: its not
16:56 Weriko: you will get way less points in the spinner
16:56 Weriko: because you have less time to react
16:56 Weriko: zzzz i just say its not a good idea to do it
16:57 Xendogenesis: uguu
16:57 Xendogenesis: i accidentally deleted a slider
16:57 Weriko: you can put a beat here i think
16:57 Weriko: 01:14:320 (7) -
16:57 Weriko: ctrl z zzz
16:57 Weriko: and that last thing also goes for another spot
16:57 Xendogenesis: WAIT
16:57 Weriko: ?
16:57 Xendogenesis: i never knew that ctrl z thing existed
16:57 Weriko: lmao
16:57 Xendogenesis: wow
16:57 Weriko: zzzz
16:58 Weriko: also ctrl y if you are a mess and pressed ctrl z
16:58 Weriko: and you didnt want to
16:58 Weriko: but whatever
16:58 Weriko: 01:29:568 (2) -
16:58 Weriko: here you ate some beats
16:58 Weriko: even tho the slider kinda follows them....
16:58 Weriko: but im not sure about that
16:59 Xendogenesis: wat
16:59 Weriko: ?
16:59 Weriko: you can place circles there
16:59 Xendogenesis: but
16:59 Weriko: ?
16:59 Xendogenesis: the slider looks more a e s t h e t i c
17:00 Weriko: zzzzz
17:00 Weriko: say that when everything fits and you keep consistency
17:00 Xendogenesis: lol
17:00 Weriko: i think the main problem is that you just randomplaced everything
17:00 Weriko: right?
17:00 Weriko: there is some cool stuff
17:00 Weriko: but it looks meh overall
17:01 Xendogenesis: well it onl y took me one day to map
17:01 Weriko: zzzz
17:01 Weriko: i would recommend
17:01 Weriko: that you go to an easier song
17:01 Weriko: and map it
17:01 Weriko: thinking about the song
17:01 Xendogenesis: idk any songs t hotht
17:02 Weriko: zzz map some eroge idk
17:02 Xendogenesis: fuk u
17:02 Xendogenesis: u never mapped a tv size anime song or stuff liek that in me life
17:02 Weriko: wat
17:02 Xendogenesis: i\ll hav eu know the first song i tried to map wa s a camellia song
17:02 Xendogenesis: heh
17:02 Weriko: u never mapped in me life
17:02 Xendogenesis: a
17:02 Weriko: zzzz
17:02 Weriko: idk map something easier
17:02 Weriko: i learned mapping hard stuff
17:02 Weriko: and right now
17:02 Weriko: well you know
17:03 Weriko: its better to start with easy stuff for real
17:03 Weriko: this could have been pretty good in 2011 or sumthing
17:03 Weriko: but okay
17:03 Weriko: if u need anything else just tell me zzzz
17:04 Xendogenesis: LOL
17:04 Xendogenesis: wat is easy stuff
17:04 Weriko: the rhythms here are complex enough
17:04 Weriko: to make it hard
17:04 Weriko: map something where you can spam 1/2
17:05 Xendogenesis: hmm
17:05 Xendogenesis: that to ez
17:05 Xendogenesis: i like making 5 star + maps :V
17:05 Weriko: zzzzzz but you not doing it well
17:05 Weriko: so its not ez at all
17:06 Xendogenesis: ive only ever mapped 1/3
17:06 Xendogenesis: 1/4**
17:06 Weriko: learn how to map 1/2
17:06 Weriko: and im serious
17:06 Xendogenesis: but 1/2 is easier version of 1/4
17:06 Xendogenesis: :(
17:06 Weriko: its not easier
17:07 Weriko: zzz listen to me
17:07 Xendogenesis: z
17:07 Weriko: its hard to get so something mapping stuff like this
17:07 Weriko: but bah
17:07 Weriko: whatever
17:07 Weriko: map whatever you like to map
17:07 Xendogenesis: idk
17:07 Xendogenesis: maybe one day i'll map an eroge thing
17:07 Xendogenesis: and t hen i become famous pp mapper
17:07 Weriko: lulz
17:08 Weriko: maybe
thanks father
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