As requested.
[General]
Looks good. Kinda unfortunate that there's no spinners because that helps with leaderboard diversity (especially when there's only 3 diffs), but it's best not to force one in if you can't fit one.
[Hard]
00:33:225 (1,2,3) - Feels like underwhelming rhythm to me, personally. It might be fine, but note that you're skipping sounds at 00:34:023, 00:36:257, etc.
00:37:055 - Another skipped note. Just feels underwhelming to pass this. The music here isn't too much less intense than the previous part but the rhythm is much easier.
00:47:746 (1) - I think this NC should be on 00:48:544 (3) - instead
00:51:416 (5,6,7,8) - Instead of a square, you could gradually space these out more to match the rising volume of the music.
00:56:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This isn't really representative of the music. I guess technically you are mapping to the song but there's much more going on here than just 1/2 notes. There's held notes (vocals, instrumentals etc) that call for sliders, etc. Feels pretty lackluster in terms of rhythm selection.
01:00:991 - skipping a vocal here.
Well in general I feel like you're skipping a lot of sounds that you don't really need to, especially because this is the hardest diff. It's not too bad but some parts just feel underwhelming. Go through the kiai and think if each part is really the rhythm that best represents the song.
01:08:970 (4,5,6,7) - Like this; there's so much being skipped.
01:14:555 (2,4) - Move these a bit part so they aren't so close.
01:15:353 (4) - It's best to split this into two kick sliders, one really long one isn't fun to play.
01:19:182 (1,2) - I think it should be a bit more clear that this is a 1/4 gap, perhaps space them closer.
01:28:916 - Strong sound here, would be best if it's clickable. Break the kickslider into another slider here imo.
Overall this diff needs work in terms of rhythm selection. You have a good idea of aesthetics and structure, and the patterns are pretty fine; once you figure out the correct rhythm the map will improve a lot.
Good luck!
[General]
Looks good. Kinda unfortunate that there's no spinners because that helps with leaderboard diversity (especially when there's only 3 diffs), but it's best not to force one in if you can't fit one.
[Hard]
00:33:225 (1,2,3) - Feels like underwhelming rhythm to me, personally. It might be fine, but note that you're skipping sounds at 00:34:023, 00:36:257, etc.
00:37:055 - Another skipped note. Just feels underwhelming to pass this. The music here isn't too much less intense than the previous part but the rhythm is much easier.
00:47:746 (1) - I think this NC should be on 00:48:544 (3) - instead
00:51:416 (5,6,7,8) - Instead of a square, you could gradually space these out more to match the rising volume of the music.
00:56:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This isn't really representative of the music. I guess technically you are mapping to the song but there's much more going on here than just 1/2 notes. There's held notes (vocals, instrumentals etc) that call for sliders, etc. Feels pretty lackluster in terms of rhythm selection.
01:00:991 - skipping a vocal here.
Well in general I feel like you're skipping a lot of sounds that you don't really need to, especially because this is the hardest diff. It's not too bad but some parts just feel underwhelming. Go through the kiai and think if each part is really the rhythm that best represents the song.
01:08:970 (4,5,6,7) - Like this; there's so much being skipped.
01:14:555 (2,4) - Move these a bit part so they aren't so close.
01:15:353 (4) - It's best to split this into two kick sliders, one really long one isn't fun to play.
01:19:182 (1,2) - I think it should be a bit more clear that this is a 1/4 gap, perhaps space them closer.
01:28:916 - Strong sound here, would be best if it's clickable. Break the kickslider into another slider here imo.
Overall this diff needs work in terms of rhythm selection. You have a good idea of aesthetics and structure, and the patterns are pretty fine; once you figure out the correct rhythm the map will improve a lot.
Good luck!