This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年9月2日 at 18:38:43

Artist: Aimi
Title: Link (TV Size)
Source: Oda Nobuna no Yabou
Tags: op opening naryuga the ambition of oda nobuna おだのぶなのやぼう
BPM: 185
Filesize: 15581kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (3.07 stars, 101 notes)
2. Hard (5 stars, 271 notes)
3. Normal (4.23 stars, 138 notes)

Download: Aimi - Link (TV Size)
Download: Aimi - Link (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap. _Reia gave me the song, the video, and the background and forced me to map lol
Please redownload if you downloaded before 27/8/2013

Hi

[General]
Offset feels very biased. try Offset:6010 in the second red line
Is there a video without chinese subtitles? If so, use it to replace the current one
Use Grid Size 4 (or even disable the grid snapping function) so you'll have an easier time snapping notes

[Hard]
The distance spacing is too small for a Hard. Use Alt+mousewheel to adjust the distance (you are using 0.7x currently, where generic hards tend to have 1.0x or something). Most overlap issues will be completely fixed after the adjustment.

The whole map is just too loud. Reduce the volume by 30% might help

Lack of hitsounds detected...

I see you have abused the use of NC, NC should not be added too frequently, especially when this is a hard diff. Generally, NCs are added between 4 white lines, but it severely depends on how you map

00:00:676 (1,2,3,4) - These 4 sliders are very loud. I might even use soft for those if I were yuo
00:07:307 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing
00:07:973 (1,2,3) - ^
00:26:622 (3) - sliders repeating 2 times can be confusing
00:28:568 (5) - end this on the white tick
00:32:298 (4) - ^
00:32:946 (5) - This slider is just weird as it is... There are no clues in the music in indicate the existence of a 1 1/2 slider
00:38:622 (5,1) - I don't understand this distance, it is like 3/2 beats apart
00:47:055 - feels empty.Add something here plox?
00:50:136 (3,4,5) - very un-readable. Break it, use other patterns
00:57:271 - Add a stream here?
01:01:163 (4) - I would rather let it go further instead of reversing
01:04:244 (3,1) - This overlap is not pretty
01:11:703 (7,8,9) - The distance of these 3 are different from former notes, confusing!
01:13:163 - add note?
01:17:217 (6,1) - This spacing is sort of unpredictable, really. Make them closer or they'll be alone forever :/
01:19:325 (4,1) - Now there is a small overlap, not that intuitive, right?
01:26:460 (1) - Instead of a spinner which ends at a weird spot, why not just map till the music really ends?

[Hitsound]
The lack of hitsounds results in the feeling of bland while playing this map.
In most generic maps, patterns on hitsounds can be easily seen. In a 4/4 beats map, there are 4 white lines per section, 1 long and 3 shorts, as in followings:
In modern music, which emphasize the 2nd and 4th beats, claps are added.(i.e. the 2nd and 4th white line) While whistles and finish are used depending on the situation, usually using background music as an indicator
As for your map, you might try >this< clap

Well in overall, the map is pretty decent as of yuor first map. Still a lot to learn. Play other maps and learn from others, it'll help improving your map as well

Im drunk

From ~Freshly Baked Mods~
Keep in mind all personal opinion. Hope I don't double up with above mod, apologising in advance.

Normal
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1. 00:07:163 (2) - This?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:23:703 (1) - This?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:28:568 (5) - Extend slider to white tick
4. 00:39:271 (1) - This?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:48:838 (4) - Shorten slider to white tick and add note 00:49:325 (5)
6. 01:25:000 (2) - Similar fix as 00:07:163 (2)

Hard
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1. 01:44:445 (3) - Change slider maybe? Suggestion below
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:460 (1) - Weird, not in sync
3. 00:19:000 (2) to 00:19:487 (5) - Inconsistent spacing
4. 00:24:027 (4) - Extend until white tick
5. 00:26:298 (2) - Ctrl-G
6. 00:59:379 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
7. 01:00:027 (1) - ^
8. 01:00:676 (1) - ^
9. 01:07:163 (2) - ^
10. 01:16:406 (4) - Weird, not in sync

General stuff as per previous post. Good luck!

kelvinli wrote:

Hi

[General]
Offset feels very biased. try Offset:6010 in the second red line OK
Is there a video without chinese subtitles? If so, use it to replace the current one
Use Grid Size 4 (or even disable the grid snapping function) so you'll have an easier time snapping notes Thanks

[Hard]
The distance spacing is too small for a Hard. Use Alt+mousewheel to adjust the distance (you are using 0.7x currently, where generic hards tend to have 1.0x or something). Most overlap issues will be completely fixed after the adjustment. OK
The whole map is just too loud. Reduce the volume by 30% might help Sorry but how?

Lack of hitsounds detected...

I see you have abused the use of NC, NC should not be added too frequently, especially when this is a hard diff. Generally, NCs are added between 4 white lines, but it severely depends on how you map

00:00:676 (1,2,3,4) - These 4 sliders are very loud. I might even use soft for those if I were yuo Sorry but how?
00:07:307 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing Fixed
00:07:973 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:26:622 (3) - sliders repeating 2 times can be confusing Fixed
00:28:568 (5) - end this on the white tick Fixed
00:32:298 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:32:946 (5) - This slider is just weird as it is... There are no clues in the music in indicate the existence of a 1 1/2 slider Fixed
00:38:622 (5,1) - I don't understand this distance, it is like 3/2 beats apart Fixed
00:47:055 - feels empty.Add something here plox? What's plox?
00:50:136 (3,4,5) - very un-readable. Break it, use other patterns Fixed
00:57:271 - Add a stream here? No...
01:01:163 (4) - I would rather let it go further instead of reversing Fixed
01:04:244 (3,1) - This overlap is not pretty Fixed
01:11:703 (7,8,9) - The distance of these 3 are different from former notes, confusing! Fixed
01:13:163 - add note? Fixed
01:17:217 (6,1) - This spacing is sort of unpredictable, really. Make them closer or they'll be alone forever :/ Fixed
01:19:325 (4,1) - Now there is a small overlap, not that intuitive, right? Fixed
01:26:460 (1) - Instead of a spinner which ends at a weird spot, why not just map till the music really ends? The music is messy...

[Hitsound]
The lack of hitsounds results in the feeling of bland while playing this map.
In most generic maps, patterns on hitsounds can be easily seen. In a 4/4 beats map, there are 4 white lines per section, 1 long and 3 shorts, as in followings:

SPOILER

In modern music, which emphasize the 2nd and 4th beats, claps are added.(i.e. the 2nd and 4th white line) While whistles and finish are used depending on the situation, usually using background music as an indicator
As for your map, you might try >this< clap Thanks

Well in overall, the map is pretty decent as of yuor first map. Still a lot to learn. Play other maps and learn from others, it'll help improving your map as well

Im drunk

Thanks for modding^^

koko31 wrote:

From ~Freshly Baked Mods~
Keep in mind all personal opinion. Hope I don't double up with above mod, apologising in advance.

Normal
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1. 00:07:163 (2) - This? Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:23:703 (1) - This? No
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:28:568 (5) - Extend slider to white tick Fixed
4. 00:39:271 (1) - This? Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:48:838 (4) - Shorten slider to white tick Fixedand add note 00:49:325 (5) What?
6. 01:25:000 (2) - Similar fix as 00:07:163 (2)

Fixed

Hard
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1. 01:44:445 (3) - Change slider maybe? Suggestion below What time?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:460 (1) - Weird, not in sync Fixed
3. 00:19:000 (2) to 00:19:487 (5) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed
4. 00:24:027 (4) - Extend until white tick Fixed
5. 00:26:298 (2) - Ctrl-G Fixed
6. 00:59:379 (1) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed
7. 01:00:027 (1) - ^ Fixed
8. 01:00:676 (1) - ^ Fixed
9. 01:07:163 (2) - ^ Fixed
10. 01:16:406 (4) - Weird, not in sync

Fixed


General stuff as per previous post. Good luck!

Thanks for modding^^

Yo. Just a little help.

[General]

1. After offset changes, you forgot to re-snap notes. Timing > resnap all notes. Do it every time you change offset or BPM, so hitobjcts will be snapped right on ticks.
2. Red lines (timing points) MUST be consistent in ALL diffs. No matter what. Please, make sure that they're consistent! AiBat says so :<
3. Why _Reia in tags? If he/she didn't make a guest diff or storyboard for you - remove this tag. Just mention her/him in "Creator's Word"
4. You'll need more diffs. Normal is too hard for the easiest diff :< But we will think about it later, at first you should learn a bit more about mapping. I'll give you some suggestions and useful links.
5. Hitsounds are too loud. they really hurt ears! I can't even hear music! Please, make sure you'll reduce volume of your hitsounds!
   
   How?

   Press F6 and go to timing panel!
   Then, click on any of red sections and switch to Audio settings example
   change volume! example

[Normal]

1. Spacing should be consistent. use distanc snap for it. There's a lot of spacing mistakes, for example 00:16:406 (2,1) - 00:17:703 (3,4) - 00:26:622 (1,2,3) - 00:29:865 (1,2). It's hrd to read your patterns, so try to use consistent spacing. It will help us to understand your rhythm!
2. 00:13:811 (3,1) - Overlaps. The diff itself looks a little bit messy because of low Approach Rate and overlaps. Personally, I think that you should avoid them. Unless you're sure that overlap will look good here.

If you agree with my suggestions about spacing - you'll have to re-arrange your diff. :< Once you're done - poke me again! And we'll see what can i do for you!

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This is not a mod post, of course! It's just some suggestions.

Links: what's distance snap / Standard Ranking Criteria / Ranking Criteria / more about [Normal] diffs

Any questions? Notsure about something? Poke me in-game or via forum pm and I'll do my best to help you!

Good luck!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo. Just a little help.

[General]

1. After offset changes, you forgot to re-snap notes. Timing > resnap all notes. Do it every time you change offset or BPM, so hitobjcts will be snapped right on ticks. Fixed
2. Red lines (timing points) MUST be consistent in ALL diffs. No matter what. Please, make sure that they're consistent! AiBat says so :< Fixed
3. Why _Reia in tags? If he/she didn't make a guest diff or storyboard for you - remove this tag. Just mention her/him in "Creator's Word" He is making guest insane
4. You'll need more diffs. Normal is too hard for the easiest diff :< But we will think about it later, at first you should learn a bit more about mapping. I'll give you some suggestions and useful links. I am gonna make easy
5. Hitsounds are too loud. they really hurt ears! I can't even hear music! Please, make sure you'll reduce volume of your hitsounds!
   
   How?

   Press F6 and go to timing panel!
   Then, click on any of red sections and switch to Audio settings example
   change volume! example

Fixed

[Normal]

1. Spacing should be consistent. use distanc snap for it. There's a lot of spacing mistakes, for example 00:16:406 (2,1) - 00:17:703 (3,4) - 00:26:622 (1,2,3) - 00:29:865 (1,2). It's hrd to read your patterns, so try to use consistent spacing. It will help us to understand your rhythm! Fixed
2. 00:13:811 (3,1) - Overlaps. The diff itself looks a little bit messy because of low Approach Rate and overlaps. Personally, I think that you should avoid them. Unless you're sure that overlap will look good here.

Fixed

If you agree with my suggestions about spacing - you'll have to re-arrange your diff. :< Once you're done - poke me again! And we'll see what can i do for you!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is not a mod post, of course! It's just some suggestions.

Links: what's distance snap / Standard Ranking Criteria / Ranking Criteria / more about [Normal] diffs

Any questions? Notsure about something? Poke me in-game or via forum pm and I'll do my best to help you!

Good luck!

Thanks^^

Hi~from PM





可能我语气比较重了别介意
Good luck

Fycho wrote:

Hi~from PM

Black: suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: Must fixed

[General]

• Unchecked Letterbox and countdown
  建议:
  因为有视频请把letterbox和倒数计时去掉 Fixed
  为避免太突然Leadin请设置在1500 Fixed
  还有我是不是该吐槽下视频上的优酷标记和中文字幕？。请从极影等地方下载无任何水印，字幕的视频动画生肉，用裁剪工具推荐mediacoder把OP裁剪出来，并且把音频轨去掉，视频格式为flv或者avi[/color] 我會找找看的
  我个人觉得第一根红线的BPM不是185，你可以找个专业的测timing的来测下
  现在没设置preview point貌似也是不行的，点击最上面的timing然后选择最后一项来设置 Fixed

[hard]

• 
  Setting:
  我个人不喜欢小圈hard…一般都是CS4
  HP+1 Fixed
  Hitsounds:
  音效太吵，Normal的音效还敢全100%真佩服楼主耳朵，反正我是受不了 Fixed
  按照现在的标准，不加音效是不给rank的，你既然文件夹里有normal-hitclap，normal-hitfinish等音效，请务必设置成这样，如图
  Fixed
  加音效可以试试2,4白线clap，某些段落的起始和开头大白线加finish 我會試試的
  Pattern&Rhythm
  在mod之前先说下，这个难度应该主要听着鼓音下note和slider，跟人声的长音作为辅助下节奏。别乱下，别光跟人声，因为节奏很乱也只能稍微说说。
  00:05:865 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) –前面这些节奏还可以，后面的人唱的部分完全无厘头
  00:09:253 (1,2,3,4) –间距扩大，spacing=1.2 Fixed
  00:14:442 (1) –这个应该在这里结束00:14:766 ，跟鼓音下滑条
  然后00:14:928 –加滑条，在这里00:15:253 –结束。。00:15:415 –这里可以加note Fixed
  00:18:172 (1) –听着鼓音下note和滑条，高难度不要漏掉这些音00:18:334 -00:18:658 Fixed –
  00:19:631 (1,2) -^ Fixed
  00:23:604 (3) -为什么是蓝线起？？ 因為人聲在藍線...
  00:26:604 (3) –为什么又是蓝线 Fixed
  00:29:361 –这块空拍无意义 Fixed
  00:33:253 –别乱空出这么多拍，打了也别扭，像老图一样 Fixed
  00:34:388 (3) –Hard的话是不建议放这么长的滑条的 弄斷好像很怪?
  00:35:685 (1,2) –像这些都是跟人声的长滑条坚决杜绝 嗯...
  00:38:847 (1) –又乱下 跟人聲...
  00:24:009 (4,2) –这样的overlap很难看，overlap是滑条或者note交叉有公共部分的意思 Fixed
  00:40:874 (4) –又蓝线结束了。。 Fixed
  00:43:469 (4,5) –弯曲的滑条摆好后请用心拉拉好看，把判定点拉到中间别矗在那样，滑条像豆芽菜一样 Fixed

[normal]

• 
  Normal 我懒说了，基本和Hard一样，音效吵，请一定要开着distance下note，我觉得spacing别0.7了0.8可以，少overlap例如00:07:307 (2,1) ,00:59:361 (6,2) –
  下节奏少下到红线更别蓝线 Fixed
  00:05:865 (1) –这个滑条不仅尾端unsanp而且跨过时间点红线，这是unrank的
  01:27:739 (1) –这个也unsap，类似的开aimod自己检查[/color]

不明白??

[Other]
现在只是建议，多看看喜欢的图是怎么下的，也要多mod别人的图积累经验，多看图，提升自己的水平，等水平涨进到一定阶段再来remap。现在这样mod了也没什么作用，等你觉得图够好了再叫我来mod细节，有不懂的ingame问我.不管怎么样请一定要坚持下来

可能我语气比较重了别介意
Good luck

謝謝

mod as requested

general

sorry this map needs a lot of work, i can only give you some advices, more than that would be like mapping for you

you must to use a background with one of this dimensions: 800x600 / 1024x768 for 4:3. or 1280x720 / 1366x768 for 16:9
move 1st section to 00:00:659
your video dimensions are higher than the allowed for wide screen (max of 854x480) and the video contains audio track. use this video instead http://puu.sh/3Pulf.avi


normal

map with distance snap on, and i prefer you use only one distance for the whole diff
in general your patterns are too difficult for normal, try to map the white ticks and following the drums, some notes on red ticks sometimes

00:09:901 (1,2,1) - don't let your notes touch like that, thats called overlap, some overlaps affect the readability of the notes, other just don't look good
00:12:172 (2,1) - this notes are too far for their distance on time line, thats called jump. and a jump is not allowed for difficulty for beginners, that may look easy for you to hit, but don't expect newbies will enjoy it
00:12:496 (1,2,3,4) - same as above, keep in mind that just because the notes looks good does not means they will play good, you have to make a balanced mapping for flow shape and difficulty balance
00:37:793 (2,3,4) - more overlaps
00:58:388 (4,5,6,1) - same as above
01:01:955 (5,1,2) - same as above

hard

hard is way better than normal, still can be improved a lot by your own, i'll just mention the high priority issues

00:24:009 (4) - this sounds so bad. and it does not fits anything at all, i suggest you remove the repeat and make slider end at 00:24:334 and add a note at 00:24:496
00:29:199 - even if you are following vocal, don't let gaps in your hard, swift to drums....
00:32:280 (4) - same as 00:24:009 (4) -
00:43:469 (4,5) - this slider curves on short sliders are really ugly, make them softer
01:16:388 (4,5,6) - mapping "traps" on your 1st map is not recommended. keep your slider bodies and repeats always visible


insane

00:05:216 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - this does not follows anything in the song, a challenge like that is called "overmapping" overmapping can ruin your map if you dont know how to do it. i suggest you don't overmap at all, and hear the song with headphones
00:06:820- map this part too. break makes no sense
00:15:091 (1) - spinner end on white tick.
00:31:712 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - wrong snapping, looks like this notes was moved to blue ticks. take care

as i said, the map needs a lot of work. you guys should look at other people's maps / play more, to improve your skills
that's what all new mappers do and it will surely make you guys improve, if you guys try hard

good luck

pimpG wrote:

mod as requested

general

sorry this map needs a lot of work, i can only give you some advices, more than that would be like mapping for you

you must to use a background with one of this dimensions: 800x600 / 1024x768 for 4:3. or 1280x720 / 1366x768 for 16:9
move 1st section to 00:00:659 Fixed
your video dimensions are higher than the allowed for wide screen (max of 854x480) and the video contains audio track. use this video instead http://puu.sh/3Pulf.avi Fixed


normal

map with distance snap on, and i prefer you use only one distance for the whole diff
in general your patterns are too difficult for normal, try to map the white ticks and following the drums, some notes on red ticks sometimes

00:09:901 (1,2,1) - don't let your notes touch like that, thats called overlap, some overlaps affect the readability of the notes, other just don't look good Fixed
00:12:172 (2,1) - this notes are too far for their distance on time line, thats called jump. and a jump is not allowed for difficulty for beginners, that may look easy for you to hit, but don't expect newbies will enjoy it Fixed
00:12:496 (1,2,3,4) - same as above, keep in mind that just because the notes looks good does not means they will play good, you have to make a balanced mapping for flow shape and difficulty balance Fixed
00:37:793 (2,3,4) - more overlaps Fixed
00:58:388 (4,5,6,1) - same as above Fixed
01:01:955 (5,1,2) - same as above Fixed

hard

hard is way better than normal, still can be improved a lot by your own, i'll just mention the high priority issues

00:24:009 (4) - this sounds so bad. and it does not fits anything at all, i suggest you remove the repeat and make slider end at 00:24:334 and add a note at 00:24:496 Fixed
00:29:199 - even if you are following vocal, don't let gaps in your hard, swift to drums.... Fixed
00:32:280 (4) - same as 00:24:009 (4) - Fixed
00:43:469 (4,5) - this slider curves on short sliders are really ugly, make them softer Fixed
01:16:388 (4,5,6) - mapping "traps" on your 1st map is not recommended. keep your slider bodies and repeats always visible Fixed


insane

00:05:216 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - this does not follows anything in the song, a challenge like that is called "overmapping" overmapping can ruin your map if you dont know how to do it. i suggest you don't overmap at all, and hear the song with headphones
00:06:820- map this part too. break makes no sense
00:15:091 (1) - spinner end on white tick.
00:31:712 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - wrong snapping, looks like this notes was moved to blue ticks. take care

as i said, the map needs a lot of work. you guys should look at other people's maps / play more, to improve your skills
that's what all new mappers do and it will surely make you guys improve, if you guys try hard

good luck

Thanks^^

Form my queue
No kds

[整體]
把第2條紅線放到00:05:848 -

[Hard]
Check AI Mod unsnap

轉成Insane,Hard做成這樣是非常的難

有部份空掉的位置可以放到note


[Normal]
00:06:010 (1) - 放到00:05:848 - 開始
00:31:307 (5) - 放開一點
00:35:199 (1,2,3) - ^
01:27:739 (1) - spinner太短

[建議]
mapping時建議將背後的格調到最細
當心一下DS,,因為我覺得好隨機
Normal請把overlap的地方改走
不過第一張圖都算好了

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

Form my queue
No kds

[整體]
把第2條紅線放到00:05:848 -

[Hard]
Check AI Mod unsnap

轉成Insane,Hard做成這樣是非常的難

有部份空掉的位置可以放到note Fixed


[Normal] 我稍後會重做
00:06:010 (1) - 放到00:05:848 - 開始
00:31:307 (5) - 放開一點
00:35:199 (1,2,3) - ^
01:27:739 (1) - spinner太短

[建議]
mapping時建議將背後的格調到最細
當心一下DS,,因為我覺得好隨機
Normal請把overlap的地方改走
不過第一張圖都算好了

謝謝^^

Mod as requested

General

Remember to make an easier difficulty

Normal
Where are the hitsounds?

00:05:848 (1,2,3) - A few things to note. The first being it doesn't fit the beat very well. The gap should be filled and I think starting with a 1/2th stack is unnecessary. I suggest starting a slider here and ending 00:06:334 - . Map the next part as you see fit.
00:07:307 (4,5,1) - Grid snap off and apply 1.00 spacing here.
00:08:604 (1,2,3) - Badly spaced. Apply 1.00 here as well.
00:09:901 (3,4,5) - Crudely placed IMO. You could form a diamond shape out of 1,2,3,4 and have 3 blanket 4 in the pattern. This will give a much nicer pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/906214 Exit out of the pattern is nicer too http://puu.sh/3SWt2.jpg <Consider using a slider similar to this one. Yours is uneven.
Remember to keep your spacing consistent. If you need to adjust the spacing then make sure to do so. don't just leave the spacing broken.
00:15:091 (3) - Spacing is a bit closer than it should be with the previous object, and because this slider curves upward before curving downward it would look better if the slider were also slightly higher than 00:14:442 (2) - . If you do so make spacing adjustments if necessary.
00:21:739 (5) - Poorly shaped IMO. I know its a copy of 00:20:604 (3) -, but when I played it i didn't notice the symmetry pattern as much, but I noticed the slider end strangely hooking in out of the pattern. Only change if you agree with me though. Only my opinion and my preference for symmetrical slider arcs. From the abstract perspective 00:21:739 (5,1) - might be completely acceptable as a transition. Keep in mind how this pattern transitions if you change it.
00:28:550 (4,1) - Bit far for a Normal and even from a playing perspective it's far for the difficulty settings for the map. In order to comfortably play this pattern, you will need to move the cursor at an unusually high pace for the difficulty settings and slider speed. I highly recommend changing this. There is something else that bothers me. 00:29:847 (1,2,3) - feels weird to play. It confusing to pick up a rhythm after a jump that is partly mapped to beat and vocal. I don't like starting the rhythm with a stack. A slider would be better. The next part would need to be changed as well. Example timeline http://puu.sh/3SYSw.jpg
00:31:793 (1,2) - Such an ugly transition. Use a slider curve that looks better as a blanket. Here's an example of such a slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/906308
00:36:172 (3) - Remove. The pattern is better with the two sliders.
00:43:307 (3) - Slider can be more symmetrical. Move the second slider point to around x 40 y 123 to fix.
00:47:199 (3) - I suggest straightening. http://puu.sh/3SZTE.jpg
00:52:064 (5) - I think it fits better slightly more to the right. Use a spacing of 0.95-1.00 instead of 0.88. I think a 1/1 slider fits better than a repeat slider here.
00:54:334 (1,2,3,4) - Lacks polish. Highly recommend snapping these to 1.00 spacing. The more even the spacing, the cleaner a pattern looks.
00:56:766 (7,1) - Too close.
00:59:361 (5) - Avoid having this slider so close to 01:00:009 (1) - . It looks bad. Use similar curves/angles to keep the proximity equidistant. http://puu.sh/3T0DN.jpg
01:01:631 (4) - Keep your distance from 2. It will look cluttered if you place it too close.
01:05:199 (2) - Use a curve similar to 3 instead?
01:10:712 (2) - Use a 1/1 slider? That would allow you to curve it opposite of 01:09:415 (3) -.
01:12:009 (5,1) - Avoid overlap and random transitions.
01:17:199 (4) - Adjust the slider points to get a cleaner transition. http://puu.sh/3T23n.jpg
01:23:685 (1,2) - Same as the beginning of the map if you changed.
01:26:442 (1) - End here 01:28:550 - ?

Hard
AR is high for a Hard, The pace increase is very high between this and the previous difficulty. The spread should generally be closer than this, but it might be okay due to the high star rating for the Normal. Overall more consistent than Normal. the abstract parts surprisingly worked. I tried so hard to find flaws with some of your more inconsistent patterns. For the most part everything flowed well enough, but there may be several spacing concerns that may show up when people use Hard rock. I didn't feel like nitpicking over every spacing flaw to figure out which ones are problematic. I'll leave this difficulty to people who are more comfortable with AR8 maps to point out additional flaws that I may have missed/skipped over.

00:06:658 (4,5) - Too close.
00:09:091 (9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is not a hard mode transition and is much harder than the rest of the map.
00:14:280 (4,1) - Jump is a bit extreme for a Hard.
00:29:199 (1) - Blanket better with 5.
00:38:847 (6) - Should be on the next red tick. Also consider turning this 00:38:604 (5) - into a slider.
01:10:064 (10,1,2,3,4) - Form is not great here. 10 is fine I guess, but 01:11:199 (4) - is just bad.
01:24:496 (4,5) - Too close.
01:26:442 (1) - Same as in Normal


If you need a recheck, get a few more mods and contact me again.

TheVileOne wrote:

Mod as requested

General

Remember to make an easier difficulty

Normal All fixed. I am lazy to copy all >.<
Where are the hitsounds?

00:05:848 (1,2,3) - A few things to note. The first being it doesn't fit the beat very well. The gap should be filled and I think starting with a 1/2th stack is unnecessary. I suggest starting a slider here and ending 00:06:334 - . Map the next part as you see fit.
00:07:307 (4,5,1) - Grid snap off and apply 1.00 spacing here.
00:08:604 (1,2,3) - Badly spaced. Apply 1.00 here as well.
00:09:901 (3,4,5) - Crudely placed IMO. You could form a diamond shape out of 1,2,3,4 and have 3 blanket 4 in the pattern. This will give a much nicer pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/906214 Exit out of the pattern is nicer too http://puu.sh/3SWt2.jpg <Consider using a slider similar to this one. Yours is uneven.
Remember to keep your spacing consistent. If you need to adjust the spacing then make sure to do so. don't just leave the spacing broken.
00:15:091 (3) - Spacing is a bit closer than it should be with the previous object, and because this slider curves upward before curving downward it would look better if the slider were also slightly higher than 00:14:442 (2) - . If you do so make spacing adjustments if necessary.
00:21:739 (5) - Poorly shaped IMO. I know its a copy of 00:20:604 (3) -, but when I played it i didn't notice the symmetry pattern as much, but I noticed the slider end strangely hooking in out of the pattern. Only change if you agree with me though. Only my opinion and my preference for symmetrical slider arcs. From the abstract perspective 00:21:739 (5,1) - might be completely acceptable as a transition. Keep in mind how this pattern transitions if you change it.
00:28:550 (4,1) - Bit far for a Normal and even from a playing perspective it's far for the difficulty settings for the map. In order to comfortably play this pattern, you will need to move the cursor at an unusually high pace for the difficulty settings and slider speed. I highly recommend changing this. There is something else that bothers me. 00:29:847 (1,2,3) - feels weird to play. It confusing to pick up a rhythm after a jump that is partly mapped to beat and vocal. I don't like starting the rhythm with a stack. A slider would be better. The next part would need to be changed as well. Example timeline http://puu.sh/3SYSw.jpg
00:31:793 (1,2) - Such an ugly transition. Use a slider curve that looks better as a blanket. Here's an example of such a slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/906308
00:36:172 (3) - Remove. The pattern is better with the two sliders.
00:43:307 (3) - Slider can be more symmetrical. Move the second slider point to around x 40 y 123 to fix.
00:47:199 (3) - I suggest straightening. http://puu.sh/3SZTE.jpg
00:52:064 (5) - I think it fits better slightly more to the right. Use a spacing of 0.95-1.00 instead of 0.88. I think a 1/1 slider fits better than a repeat slider here.
00:54:334 (1,2,3,4) - Lacks polish. Highly recommend snapping these to 1.00 spacing. The more even the spacing, the cleaner a pattern looks.
00:56:766 (7,1) - Too close.
00:59:361 (5) - Avoid having this slider so close to 01:00:009 (1) - . It looks bad. Use similar curves/angles to keep the proximity equidistant. http://puu.sh/3T0DN.jpg
01:01:631 (4) - Keep your distance from 2. It will look cluttered if you place it too close.
01:05:199 (2) - Use a curve similar to 3 instead?
01:10:712 (2) - Use a 1/1 slider? That would allow you to curve it opposite of 01:09:415 (3) -.
01:12:009 (5,1) - Avoid overlap and random transitions.
01:17:199 (4) - Adjust the slider points to get a cleaner transition. http://puu.sh/3T23n.jpg
01:23:685 (1,2) - Same as the beginning of the map if you changed.
01:26:442 (1) - End here 01:28:550 - ?

Hard
AR is high for a Hard, The pace increase is very high between this and the previous difficulty. The spread should generally be closer than this, but it might be okay due to the high star rating for the Normal. Overall more consistent than Normal. the abstract parts surprisingly worked. I tried so hard to find flaws with some of your more inconsistent patterns. For the most part everything flowed well enough, but there may be several spacing concerns that may show up when people use Hard rock. I didn't feel like nitpicking over every spacing flaw to figure out which ones are problematic. I'll leave this difficulty to people who are more comfortable with AR8 maps to point out additional flaws that I may have missed/skipped over.

00:06:658 (4,5) - Too close. Fixed
00:09:091 (9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is not a hard mode transition and is much harder than the rest of the map. Fixed
00:14:280 (4,1) - Jump is a bit extreme for a Hard. Fixed
00:29:199 (1) - Blanket better with 5. Fixed
00:38:847 (6) - Should be on the next red tick. Also consider turning this 00:38:604 (5) - into a slider. Fixed
01:10:064 (10,1,2,3,4) - Form is not great here. 10 is fine I guess, but 01:11:199 (4) - is just bad. Fixed
01:24:496 (4,5) - Too close. Fixed
01:26:442 (1) - Same as in Normal Fixed


If you need a recheck, get a few more mods and contact me again.

Thanks a lot^^

Remember to make an easier difficulty.

Normal

00:11:199 (5) - NC
00:12:496 (1) - remove NC
00:19:469 (1) - shift to 00:19:631
00:21:739 (5) - shift to 00:21:901
00:28:550 (4) - remove repeat, put a note at 00:29:361
00:34:388 (2) - awkward. Don't repeat and lengthen the slider to end at 00:34:874
00:42:982 (2) - slider end at 00:43:307
00:43:307 (3) - slider start at 00:43:469 end at 00:43:793
01:01:955 (5) - slider end at 01:02:280
01:16:388 (2) - end at 01:16:550

Hard

00:03:253 (1) - end at 00:05:523
00:34:388 (3) - end at 00:34:874
00:45:415 (3) - first repeat at 00:45:739 end at 00:46:064
00:51:739 - add a note
01:02:280 (4) - end at 01:02:604 to hold with the vocals
01:09:091 (7) - replace with a sldier ending at 01:09:253
01:20:280 - add a note

neonat wrote:

Remember to make an easier difficulty.

Normal

00:11:199 (5) - NC fixed
00:12:496 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:19:469 (1) - shift to 00:19:631 added note
00:21:739 (5) - shift to 00:21:901 fixed
00:28:550 (4) - remove repeat, put a note at 00:29:361 it's much worser...
00:34:388 (2) - awkward. Don't repeat and lengthen the slider to end at 00:34:874 fixed
00:42:982 (2) - slider end at 00:43:307 fixed
00:43:307 (3) - slider start at 00:43:469 end at 00:43:793 fixed
01:01:955 (5) - slider end at 01:02:280 imo it's for drum
01:16:388 (2) - end at 01:16:550 fixed

Hard

00:03:253 (1) - end at 00:05:523 fixed
00:34:388 (3) - end at 00:34:874 fixed
00:45:415 (3) - first repeat at 00:45:739 end at 00:46:064 fixed
00:51:739 - add a note fixed
01:02:280 (4) - end at 01:02:604 to hold with the vocals no
01:09:091 (7) - replace with a sldier ending at 01:09:253 fixed
01:20:280 - add a note fixed

Thanks^^

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good luck~

HelloSCV wrote:

here's your ticket!

General

1. set offset to 648(-28) imo it is acceptable and deletle 2nd timing point, don't need it

changed 2nd timing point so it will not be weird.

1. move the kiai end 01:21:091 - here is better imo

fixed

1. and you need to use some hitsounds, some maps which done without hitsounds are unrankable

I will add later

Normal

1. you SHOULBE decrease this diff's star rating to under 3.24 or make Easy diff, there should be at least one difficulty around ~2.5/3 star difficulty level

I will make easy diff later

Hard

1. CS +1,AR -1,OD -1

1. this diff looks harder than Insane orz there are no any 1/4s, so imo it's ok...

00:52:550 (1) - incrase this spinner's end to 00:54:009 - here fixed

good luck~

Thanks^^

it seems you'll get mods from me and zorefire lucky you

[General]

[Normal]

• AR5 fits more i think. it fits the fast bpm and AR4 makes it kinda hard to read
  
  00:00:659 (1) - this spinner ends too soon. how about ending it at 00:05:361 - ?
  00:11:199 (5,1) - switch nc
  00:11:199 (5) - this blanket can be improved by only using three points
  00:22:550 (1) - remove nc
  00:44:766 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:48:820 (6) - end this at 00:49:306 - fits the vocal more
  00:55:307 (4) - nc?
  01:20:442 (2,3) - distance error

[Hard]

• 00:00:659 - to 00:03:253 - the hitsound seems a bit too loud
  
  00:15:739 (4,1) - the anti-jump is kinda awkward, i think
  00:25:307 (2) - this can be improved. i suppose three points are enough
  00:34:388 (3) - ^
  00:45:415 (3) - ^
  00:56:928 (4) - ^
  01:06:820 (1,2,3,4) - suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  

about those curves, i suppose you're trying to make an arc, but it's not really balanced. usually people use only three points to make curve, like this

good luck~

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

it seems you'll get mods from me and zorefire lucky you

[General]

[Normal]

• AR5 fits more i think. it fits the fast bpm and AR4 makes it kinda hard to read fixed
  
  00:00:659 (1) - this spinner ends too soon. how about ending it at 00:05:361 - ? fixed
  00:11:199 (5,1) - switch nc fixed
  00:11:199 (5) - this blanket can be improved by only using three points fixed
  00:22:550 (1) - remove nc fixed
  00:44:766 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion fixed
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:48:820 (6) - end this at 00:49:306 - fits the vocal more fixed
  00:55:307 (4) - nc? fixed
  01:20:442 (2,3) - distance error Yeah sorry. fixed

[Hard]

• 00:00:659 - to 00:03:253 - the hitsound seems a bit too loud I will fix hitsound later.
  
  00:15:739 (4,1) - the anti-jump is kinda awkward, i think fixed
  00:25:307 (2) - this can be improved. i suppose three points are enough fixed
  00:34:388 (3) - ^ fixed
  00:45:415 (3) - ^ fixed
  00:56:928 (4) - ^ fixed
  01:06:820 (1,2,3,4) - suggestion fixed
  
  SPOILER

  

about those curves, i suppose you're trying to make an arc, but it's not really balanced. usually people use only three points to make curve, like this

SPOILER

good luck~

Thanks^^