Hello!
Sugestion,
General
Sugestion,
General
- Your both diff lack of hitsound, well you already put some clap but that rather a random placement lol and imo it still doesn't represent the music very well
- Your background could be optimized by using a 1366x768 or 1920x1200, it could prevent unecesarry pixelated on widescreen play
- Due to music, the first kiai should be start on here 01:19:940 - and the second kiai should be begin here 02:23:717 -
- Why no kiai on this one 03:11:550 - until 03:27:494 - ? the music itself literally same as the other two kiais
- You can delete marina and the diamonds on tags, its already on the artist name
- 01:11:470 (2,3) - Shouldn't that stacked perfectly?
- 01:10:972 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Somehow the placement looks too corwded lol
- 01:22:930 (3) - Could be flipped ctrl+j imo to have a better flow on this one 01:22:930 (3,1) -
- 01:31:899 (4,1,2,3) - Try testplay that part, the overlapping not looking so good for lower diff imo, maybe you should avoid that by using a new patterning on 01:33:393 (1,2,3,4,1) -
- 01:55:815 (1,2,3) - Your placement too forced imo, it makes the cursor movement on that part uncomfortable. Something like this http://puu.sh/srbph/caac3b9e3a.jpg well play better
- 01:51:829 - until 02:23:717 - On that part you have a rather very dense rhythm by using so many 1/2 rhythm compared to both kiais (especially first kiai). I think that doesn't make sense since most people will mapped kiai part with a denser rhythm than any other part, this should be consider to fix imo
- 02:21:226 (3,1,2) - Again the overlapping looks bad on that one and the placement seems too forced
- 03:19:024 - Could be add a circle there imo, the rhythm here 03:18:775 (3,1) - somewhat odd to follow
Imo the main problem is you have a rather small distance snap on this diff, so you will tend to have some corweded patterning and unnecesarry overlapping when you map (I think I already mention some). I think you have the basic, I believe you will improve through time :p
- 00:52:287 (1) - Imo there is nothing to follow there, the vocal itself should be on here 00:52:536 - so consider to delete to have more consistent rhythmical with 00:54:529 (2,1,1) - ?
- 01:11:968 (3) - and 01:23:927 (1) - Not really sure why you decide to end that slider on weak beat while you have a strong drum on white beat here 01:12:467 -
- 01:28:909 (2) - and 01:30:902 (5) - Also same, if try to follow the long vocal, then the slider should be end on here 01:29:407 - instaed
Pretty solid, but I have concern with some of the extended slider usement here, it's not bad but rather questionable in term of rhythmical