first \:D/
Secretpipe wrote:
• • • EPIC SB? ? wait for it
don't forget to put epilepsy warning pipuh!phaZ wrote:
00:55:440 - please its "leave this plane" not place actually, that's kinda unknown; I mean, websites says "plane", "place", "pain",... so I just took the most relevant, since, leaving a plane means they were already seperated.
otherwise really epicstoryboard :^) thanks!
also, even though those lines are some nice little rhymes that you did, i think they are a bit off the mark. if im correct the song is about losing someone, but it doesnt say anything about a relationship. so maybe write something like: to be honest, I haven't thought of relationship or whatever xD but your lines are better imo so i'll use them
1: together we laughed / together we cried
2: we often did xx (no idea) / we often did fight
3: but dont be afraid / you will be alright
4: because in my mind / youre still at my side
maybe swap 1 and 2
instead of "because in my mind" maybe " 'cause in my inner heart"
(wtf did i just wrote)
Secretpipe wrote:
LETS FKING RANK
Monstrata wrote:
in the city of gold
00:19:918 (1,2,3,4) - Mainly just an aesthetic thing, but make them the same visual spacing? the gap from 2 > 3 is slightly bigger
yes
00:28:194 (3) - NC? New measure, and you usually NC to begin these repeat sliders. Also, maybe remove the NC on 00:26:470 (1) - yes
00:46:642 (3,1) - Blanket? yes
00:47:849 (4,5,6) - Make the spacing on the triplet more even. buffed it
01:37:511 (2,3) - It would look nicer if these two sliders were like, the same shape? xD rofl fixed huehue
02:32:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would make these jumps smaller since the music does quiet down here. rite
Collab Insane
00:36:470 (7) - I would NC here, the combo is getting really long. fixed
00:39:228 (1) - Nice! good job kin hue
01:28:891 - red/green lines have different values. i dun see what's wrong on it o: sv is at 0.75 at that time and then it increase (maybe i missed something ? o:)
01:30:270 (1,2,3,4) - This structure just felt too close together lol. I would space the objects apart a bit more. Like, 01:28:891 (1,2,3) - is good! fixed yeh
01:50:615 (7) - Unsnapped fixed
NA's Hard
01:40:270 (3,4) - Incorporating the wave slider into a blanket pattern could improve the aesthetics here.
02:12:684 (3,1) - I would space this out a bit more. The current spacing resembles a 1/2 jump rather than a 1/1 gap.
02:17:856 (3,1) - Same here, just move slider 3 down a bit more.
Normal
00:52:680 - red/green lines have different values. fixed
01:49:580 (4,1,2) - Spacing is kinda messed up here xd fixed
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Should be all~