Storyboard by Zerss has been uploaded!
Several changes will come!
Several changes will come!
don't forget to put epilepsy warning pipuh!phaZ wrote:
00:55:440 - please its "leave this plane" not place actually, that's kinda unknown; I mean, websites says "plane", "place", "pain",... so I just took the most relevant, since, leaving a plane means they were already seperated.
otherwise really epicstoryboard :^) thanks!
also, even though those lines are some nice little rhymes that you did, i think they are a bit off the mark. if im correct the song is about losing someone, but it doesnt say anything about a relationship. so maybe write something like: to be honest, I haven't thought of relationship or whatever xD but your lines are better imo so i'll use them
1: together we laughed / together we cried
2: we often did xx (no idea) / we often did fight
3: but dont be afraid / you will be alright
4: because in my mind / youre still at my side
maybe swap 1 and 2
instead of "because in my mind" maybe " 'cause in my inner heart"
(wtf did i just wrote)
Secretpipe wrote:
LETS FKING RANK
Monstrata wrote:
in the city of gold
00:19:918 (1,2,3,4) - Mainly just an aesthetic thing, but make them the same visual spacing? the gap from 2 > 3 is slightly bigger
yes
00:28:194 (3) - NC? New measure, and you usually NC to begin these repeat sliders. Also, maybe remove the NC on 00:26:470 (1) - yes
00:46:642 (3,1) - Blanket? yes
00:47:849 (4,5,6) - Make the spacing on the triplet more even. buffed it
01:37:511 (2,3) - It would look nicer if these two sliders were like, the same shape? xD rofl fixed huehue
02:32:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would make these jumps smaller since the music does quiet down here. rite
Collab Insane
00:36:470 (7) - I would NC here, the combo is getting really long. fixed
00:39:228 (1) - Nice! good job kin hue
01:28:891 - red/green lines have different values. i dun see what's wrong on it o: sv is at 0.75 at that time and then it increase (maybe i missed something ? o:)
01:30:270 (1,2,3,4) - This structure just felt too close together lol. I would space the objects apart a bit more. Like, 01:28:891 (1,2,3) - is good! fixed yeh
01:50:615 (7) - Unsnapped fixed
NA's Hard
01:40:270 (3,4) - Incorporating the wave slider into a blanket pattern could improve the aesthetics here.
02:12:684 (3,1) - I would space this out a bit more. The current spacing resembles a 1/2 jump rather than a 1/1 gap.
02:17:856 (3,1) - Same here, just move slider 3 down a bit more.
Normal
00:52:680 - red/green lines have different values. fixed
01:49:580 (4,1,2) - Spacing is kinda messed up here xd fixed
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Should be all~
Wishkey wrote:
Yow!
Saw this in qualifed so sorry for late stuff but I feel theres still some things that need to be adressed in the lower diffs
General
SB\elements\highlight.png is still an unused file it seems
Easy
01:01:297 (1) - 01:17:837 (1) - basicly the reason for the post, feel like these should be snapped to the white tick for an easy diff even tho it kinda fits, the main problem is at 01:17:837 (1) - where you have a slidertick right before the end which kinda sucks for newer players since you take away all the leniency and sounds a bit strange. Tthe blue tick snaps seem unintentional alltoghether tbh
both fixed and idk tbh how they ended up snapped like that, it's weird, also fixed some ds issues and removed useless whistle across the whole slider
gl!
osu file format v14
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Title:Slip Away
TitleUnicode:Slip Away
Artist:The Prototypes
ArtistUnicode:The Prototypes
Creator:Secretpipe
Version:Collab Easy
Source:
Tags:dnb drum and bass C00L Nerova Riuz GX Kin Kyshiro Zerss phaZ
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