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Rameses B - Beside You (feat. Soundr)

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Topic Starter
_orange
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on January 8, 2017 at 5:05:27 PM

Artist: Rameses B
Title: Beside You (feat. Soundr)
Tags: melodic dnb drum and bass ncs NoCopyrightSounds No Copyright Sounds Single ViolentBoo
BPM: 174
Filesize: 4735kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra (5.28 stars, 526 notes)
  2. Hard (3.56 stars, 346 notes)
  3. Insane (4.37 stars, 470 notes)
  4. Normal (2.15 stars, 206 notes)
  5. ViolentBoo's Easy (1.49 stars, 133 notes)
Download: Rameses B - Beside You (feat. Soundr)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Extra - 100% Complete, ready for mods
Insane - 100% Complete, ready for mods
Hard - 100% Complete, ready for mods
Normal - 100% Complete, ready for mods
Easy by ViolentBoo - 100% Complete, ready for mods
Hitsounds done for all difficulties


Taking ONE GD for either normal or easy TAKEN

Thanks to ViolentBoo for an Advanced (Easy now) GD and 19 stars <3

Oct 16 - Changed audio
Oct 29 - Changed audio again
Nov 12 - New background and combo colours! After four or five people suggested them
Dec 15 - Changed audio

Modders <3
ViolentBoo
lazyboy007
A L P H A
Miseracy
MBmasher
- Yoshimaro -
Plaudible
HootOwlStar <3
Yamicchi
CuteFunnyCat
Xayler*
RagingKirby77
Hobbes2
_vanity
Monstrata <3
mraihani
Hayuza
Contaminate
LeKhanhHoa
Log Off Now
thzz
Shmiklak
Pentori
Monstrata again
MrSergio

Monstrata



Link to song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pipf2X6bHYI
Music provided by NCS

Background made by: http://donsaid.deviantart.com/
Aniviuh
I'm new to mapping so please take everything with a grain of salt.

Review: This is a crazy solid map, it was difficult for me to find problems with the map, so it was mainly just combo changes. Really hope this gets ranked!

-HARD-
00:43:212 (1) - Unecessary combo change?
01:50:454 (1) - Unecessary combo change?
02:12:695 (7) - Maybe add a note here? Or make current note a slider.
-INSANE-
00:54:764 (3) - Curve this note like the next one.
01:46:660 (8) - New combo color, (annoys me when combos reach over 10 when it's not a stream.)
01:49:074 (1) - Unecessary combo change?
01:50:454 (1) - Unecessary combo change?
02:12:695 (3) - Maybe add a note here? Or make current note a slider.
- EXTRA -
00:53:385 (1) - Unecessary combo change?
01:30:281 (5) - New combo color.
01:50:454 (1) - Unecessary combo change?
02:12:695 (1) - Maybe add a note here? Or make current note a slider.

May I attempt to create an easy map?
Topic Starter
_orange

ViolentBoo wrote:

I'm new to mapping so please take everything with a grain of salt.

Review: This is a crazy solid map, it was difficult for me to find problems with the map, so it was mainly just combo changes. Really hope this gets ranked!

-HARD-
00:43:212 (1) - Unecessary combo change? fixed
01:50:454 (1) - Unecessary combo change? wanted to put emphasis on this
02:12:695 (7) - Maybe add a note here? Or make current note a slider. fixed
-INSANE-
00:54:764 (3) - Curve this note like the next one. fixed
01:46:660 (8) - New combo color, (annoys me when combos reach over 10 when it's not a stream.) fixed
01:49:074 (1) - Unecessary combo change? fixed
01:50:454 (1) - Unecessary combo change? i think its fine?
02:12:695 (3) - Maybe add a note here? Or make current note a slider. fixed
- EXTRA -
00:53:385 (1) - Unecessary combo change? fixed
01:30:281 (5) - New combo color. I don't think thats needed
01:50:454 (1) - Unecessary combo change? Same thing for insane and hard
02:12:695 (1) - Maybe add a note here? Or make current note a slider. fixed

May I attempt to create an easy map?


Thanks a lot for the mod! :)

If you want to make an easy diff, that would be great, thanks!
Aniviuh
Here's my difficulty, some things to note when making this.
-The hit sounds are pretty simple but that's pretty much how I do hit sounds on all my maps.
-I could have gotten this done sooner but I had some things to do. (Life and stuff ._.)

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Beside You (feat. Soundr)
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ArtistUnicode:Rameses B
Creator:_orange
Version:ViolentBoo's Normal
Source:
Tags:melodic dnb drum and bass ncs
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I'll also try to get some people to mod this. The sooner this gets ranked the better. (Also when someone mods my difficulty should I change it or you?)

Hope you'll accept it!
Topic Starter
_orange
Looks like a great GD :) Definitely getting accepted

When someone mods your diff you should change it, after all, it is your map. Unless your busy you could ask me to change it.

There's one thing I think you need to change though, the drain time of your map is less than the other difficulties. If you could map the areas with a break and send it again, that'll be great

Also, I changed your difficulty name to "ViolentBoo's Advanced" because it's harder than my normal diff
Aniviuh
What I did for this edit:
I replaced breaks with notes.
Made the difficulty more suitable for the name.
Changed some of the hit sounds.
(Please review it, just to make sure I sent the correct copy.)

Here you go!
osu file format v14

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116,140,37867,2,0,P|144:172|168:176,1,48.7499977684022
244,320,38557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,164,39074,6,0,P|378:149|417:158,1,75,12|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,236,39764,2,0,P|330:282|321:321,1,75,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,212,40454,2,0,P|205:226|166:217,1,75,12|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,148,41143,2,0,P|261:101|270:62,1,75,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,41833,12,0,43212,0:0:0:0:
360,324,44936,6,0,B|376:252|376:252|388:228|424:228,1,127.50000243187,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,45626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,172,46660,2,0,P|276:160|248:120,2,63.7500012159348
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188,344,48729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,196,49074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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88,36,50454,6,0,B|167:48|167:48|200:90,1,127.50000243187,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,184,51143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,268,51488,2,0,P|112:208|120:152,1,127.50000243187
188,92,52178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,140,52522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,204,54247,2,0,L|328:244,1,63.7500012159348
432,140,54936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,56,55281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,44,55626,6,0,P|192:108|204:168,1,127.50000243187,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,232,56316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,316,56660,2,0,P|268:336|196:296,1,127.50000243187
144,244,57350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,200,57695,2,0,P|80:164|112:156,2,63.7500012159348
336,88,58729,6,0,B|408:196|408:196|340:224|368:328,1,255.000004863739,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,59764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,204,60109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,152,60454,2,0,P|124:120|148:112,2,63.7500012159348
392,72,61488,5,12,0:0:0:0:
376,172,61833,2,0,P|320:140|292:84,1,127.50000243187
204,136,62522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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196,336,63557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,280,63902,5,12,0:0:0:0:
416,196,64419,1,4,0:0:0:0:
280,128,64936,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65281,12,0,66660,0:0:0:0:
176,248,67005,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,72,68385,2,0,P|241:73|284:96,1,63.7500012159348
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368,52,69419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,188,69764,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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54,338,72178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,196,72522,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,328,74591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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252,68,77005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,180,77350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,84,77695,6,0,L|288:112,2,95.6250018239022,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,236,78729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,320,79074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,280,79419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,128,80454,6,0,P|328:80|320:8,1,127.50000243187,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,48,81143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,72,81488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,212,81833,6,0,B|96:224|112:256|112:256|152:224|192:228,1,127.50000243187
268,240,82522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,320,82867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,188,83902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,204,84247,2,0,P|320:264|252:292,1,127.50000243187
164,288,84936,5,0,0:0:0:0:
76,232,85281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,128,85626,2,0,L|144:100,2,63.7500012159348,0|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,96,86316,5,0,0:0:0:0:
380,68,86660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,220,87005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,264,87350,2,0,L|208:248,2,31.8750006079674
228,196,87695,2,0,L|258:205,2,31.8750006079674
172,144,88040,2,0,L|141:134,8,31.8750006079674,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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248,168,89936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,244,90281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,348,90626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,312,90971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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72,152,94591,2,0,L|88:224,1,56.2500021457673
128,216,94936,2,0,L|144:288,1,56.2500021457673
208,212,95281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,300,95626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,316,95971,2,0,P|308:348|280:364,1,56.2500021457673
256,192,96660,12,0,98385,0:0:0:0:
244,232,99764,5,4,0:0:0:0:
220,144,100109,2,0,P|184:156|160:188,2,56.2500021457673,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,76,100798,2,0,P|316:88|340:120,2,56.2500021457673,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,36,101488,2,0,P|128:56|100:92,1,112.500004291535,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,164,102178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,328,102867,6,0,L|332:264,1,56.2500021457673,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,308,103385,2,0,P|399:190|248:216,1,281.250010728836
188,252,104591,2,0,P|172:208|176:180,2,56.2500021457673,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,105626,6,0,P|344:92|324:156,1,112.500004291535,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,106316,2,0,P|384:220|320:228,1,112.500004291535
252,188,107005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,240,107350,2,0,B|120:296|120:296|64:288,1,112.500004291535
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240,56,109764,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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223,325,113557,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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100,216,116660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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105,110,119074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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192,188,119764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,72,120109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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392,172,121143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,172,121488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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144,196,128385,5,4,0:0:0:0:
236,287,128730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,307,129075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,130109,12,0,132867,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
_orange
Thanks :)

I reviewed and updated the beatmap
lazygirl
Hey for M4M as agreed on PM ^^

Symbols:
- :?: : Weak suggestion, ignore unless you're determined to waste your life doing pixel-range blankets
- :!: : Unrankable
- Anything else: Strongly suggested

[General]
  1. :?: I suggest adding combo colors, I don't think it's necessary for ranking, but it's not a bad idea
  2. :!: You need to reduce the kbps! From the ranking criteria:
    The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.
  3. :!: Not sure about this, but your map ends at 80.0%, and with decimals (at least according to AIMod) your map doesn't actually do a full 80%. From the ranking criteria again:
    You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. This doesn't count intro time, and thus only applies if more than 20% of the outro is unmapped.
  4. 00:44:936 - Your kiai should be here tbh ^^
[Normal]
Many blanketting mistakes, I'll point them out with a B. Take care to not mess up your distance snapping of 1.00x while fixing blankets :)
Mapping
  1. 00:29:419 (4,5) - B
  2. 00:30:798 (1,2) - Moving 1 to x:238 y:220 and 2 to x:328 y:156 looks better, as 2 blankets and you could even rotate 1 by 20 degrees anti-clockwise for flow
  3. 00:41:143 (4,1) - B
  4. 00:46:316 (4,1) - B
  5. 00:47:695 (1,2) - B
  6. 01:10:798 (1,3) - B
  7. 01:09:419 (5,6) - :?: very slight so I'll give a small b
  8. 01:30:109 (4,6) - B or ctrl+h ctrl+j ctrl+g and rotate 4 by 15 degrees and move back to the same spot, looks and flows better too
  9. 01:31:143 (6,1) - B
  10. 02:05:454 (3,4) - is inconsistent with 01:53:902 (1,2) - and all other previous similar patterns
Hitsound
  1. Your hs are slick m8 no worries here
Combo
  1. I didn't see anything

[ViolentBoo's Advanced]
This diff is not well mapped D: Was too many mistakes, weird slider design (although the sliders look fine), way too irregular DS for an Advanced and weird patterns like 00:30:798 (1,2) - that aren't very nice to play or read. I'd suggest you look at other recently ranked diffs around 3* so you get an idea how they do it. I won't mod this diff in depth, since it's quite clunky. And don't take my comment as an insult, I started off way worse than this, so I clearly know where you're coming fom ;) Hope you can get your style fixed

[Hard]
Mapping
  1. 00:22:522 (1,2) - Increase DS here, it's hard to read
  2. 00:33:212 (9,2,3) - make these the same angle, would feel better
  3. 00:35:281 (2,3) - :?: slight blanket mistake
  4. 00:38:040 (2,3) - somewhat bigger blanket mistake
  5. 00:44:160 (8,9) - hard to play for this level, this is basically a 4-stream, make 8 one tick longer, move it where 9 is and rotate it by 180
  6. 01:00:109 (5,6,7) - do a 0.4 DS between these
  7. 01:28:040 (3,4,5,6) - if you listen on 25% you will see that there is a sound missing
  8. 02:12:178 (5,6) - repeat slider would fit :D
Hitsound
  1. Really like your hitsounding though
Combo
  1. 00:39:074 (1,1,1,1) - Only NC the first one, the others are really not necessary
Good diff :D

[Insane]
Mapping
  1. 01:39:591 (2,3) - Move 2 on top of 3, looks better
  2. 02:11:488 (1,2) - This is not too great imo, move 2 to x:219 y:208
  3. 02:12:177 (1,2,3) - Don't think this is too great tbh, repeat slider's better
Hitsound
  1. Again all good
Combo
  1. 00:33:212 (1) - NC not needed
Really like this diff

[Extra]
You went with quite the spaced streams feel on this jeez xD

EDIT: A friend pointed out to me you're missing some important beats in this map. It's heavily undermapped like f.ex.:
00:32:781 - 00:36:488 - 00:41:316 - 00:44:074 -

Mapping
  1. 00:24:247 (7,9) - Move 9 to blanket with 7
  2. 00:43:212 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - O_O Osu pls this is not a 5*42
  3. 00:52:867 (5,6,7,1,2) - do equal distance between 5,6,7 and 7,1,2 this is unreadable
  4. 00:55:109 (8) - Skipping a snare here
  5. 01:28:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - god this looks so cool
  6. 02:01:143 (1,2,1,2) - you're not following the rhythm there's doubles in there 02:01:316 (2,1) - missing a note between these two
Hitsound
  1. Slick
Combo
  1. Nicely done
Good luck going for ranking, I really love the 2 highest diffs ^^
Aniviuh
I kind of agree with you, I had to replace, through out the map I felt like the whole map was made by two different people. I think I might to re-map the whole difficulty.
Topic Starter
_orange

lazyboy007 wrote:

Hey for M4M as agreed on PM ^^

Symbols:
- :?: : Weak suggestion, ignore unless you're determined to waste your life doing pixel-range blankets
- :!: : Unrankable
- Anything else: Strongly suggested

[General]
  1. :?: I suggest adding combo colors, I don't think it's necessary for ranking, but it's not a bad idea I don't know anything about that :P
  2. :!: You need to reduce the kbps! From the ranking criteria: I'll try to fix it, but I don't know anything about compressing audio files either
    The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.
  3. :!: Not sure about this, but your map ends at 80.0%, and with decimals (at least according to AIMod) your map doesn't actually do a full 80%. From the ranking criteria again: will fix
    You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. This doesn't count intro time, and thus only applies if more than 20% of the outro is unmapped.
  4. 00:44:936 - Your kiai should be here tbh ^^ fixed
[Normal]
Many blanketting mistakes, I'll point them out with a B. Take care to not mess up your distance snapping of 1.00x while fixing blankets :)
Mapping
  1. 00:29:419 (4,5) - B
  2. 00:30:798 (1,2) - Moving 1 to x:238 y:220 and 2 to x:328 y:156 looks better, as 2 blankets and you could even rotate 1 by 20 degrees anti-clockwise for flow fixed
  3. 00:41:143 (4,1) - B
  4. 00:46:316 (4,1) - B
  5. 00:47:695 (1,2) - B
  6. 01:10:798 (1,3) - B
  7. 01:09:419 (5,6) - :?: very slight so I'll give a small b
  8. 01:30:109 (4,6) - B or ctrl+h ctrl+j ctrl+g and rotate 4 by 15 degrees and move back to the same spot, looks and flows better too I don't really know what you're saying here
  9. 01:31:143 (6,1) - B
  10. 02:05:454 (3,4) - is inconsistent with 01:53:902 (1,2) - and all other previous similar patterns fixed
i'll try to fix all the blankets :P

Hitsound
  1. Your hs are slick m8 no worries here
Combo
  1. I didn't see anything

[ViolentBoo's Advanced]
This diff is not well mapped D: Was too many mistakes, weird slider design (although the sliders look fine), way too irregular DS for an Advanced and weird patterns like 00:30:798 (1,2) - that aren't very nice to play or read. I'd suggest you look at other recently ranked diffs around 3* so you get an idea how they do it. I won't mod this diff in depth, since it's quite clunky. And don't take my comment as an insult, I started off way worse than this, so I clearly know where you're coming fom ;) Hope you can get your style fixed

[Hard]
Mapping
  1. 00:22:522 (1,2) - Increase DS here, it's hard to read fixed
  2. 00:33:212 (9,2,3) - make these the same angle, would feel better fixed
  3. 00:35:281 (2,3) - :?: slight blanket mistake
  4. 00:38:040 (2,3) - somewhat bigger blanket mistake fixed i think
  5. 00:44:160 (8,9) - hard to play for this level, this is basically a 4-stream, make 8 one tick longer, move it where 9 is and rotate it by 180 I don't know how to fix that without messing up spacing :(
  6. 01:00:109 (5,6,7) - do a 0.4 DS between these fixed
  7. 01:28:040 (3,4,5,6) - if you listen on 25% you will see that there is a sound missing fixed
  8. 02:12:178 (5,6) - repeat slider would fit :D uhmm
Hitsound
  1. Really like your hitsounding though
Combo
  1. 00:39:074 (1,1,1,1) - Only NC the first one, the others are really not necessary fixed
Good diff :D

[Insane]
Mapping
  1. 01:39:591 (2,3) - Move 2 on top of 3, looks better fixed
  2. 02:11:488 (1,2) - This is not too great imo, move 2 to x:219 y:208 fixed
  3. 02:12:177 (1,2,3) - Don't think this is too great tbh, repeat slider's betterthis was fixed before lol
Hitsound
  1. Again all good
Combo
  1. 00:33:212 (1) - NC not needed fixed


Really like this diff Thank you :)

[Extra]
You went with quite the spaced streams feel on this jeez xD

EDIT: A friend pointed out to me you're missing some important beats in this map. It's heavily undermapped like f.ex.:
00:32:781 - 00:36:488 - 00:41:316 - 00:44:074 - Wow I did not notice that, thanks for pointing it out, will fix

Mapping
  1. 00:24:247 (7,9) - Move 9 to blanket with 7 fixed
  2. 00:43:212 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - O_O Osu pls this is not a 5*42 lmao
  3. 00:52:867 (5,6,7,1,2) - do equal distance between 5,6,7 and 7,1,2 this is unreadable changed
  4. 00:55:109 (8) - Skipping a snare here fixed
  5. 01:28:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - god this looks so cool thnak
  6. 02:01:143 (1,2,1,2) - you're not following the rhythm there's doubles in there 02:01:316 (2,1) - missing a note between these two fixed
Hitsound
  1. Slick
Combo
  1. Nicely done
Good luck going for ranking, I really love the 2 highest diffs ^^
Thanks a lot for the mod :) I agree with I think everything you said. I really didn't notice some of the stuff (especially the 3/4 stuff), thanks for pointing it out
I still didn't apply everything you said, but it will be fixed by the next few days
After going through your mod on extra, I noticed a lot of spacing problems, thanks?

The mod for your map might be finished in the next few hours, if not, then tomorrow
Topic Starter
_orange
Fixed the kbps and cut the mp3 a bit more
Hikomori
Hi!

Mod from my queue


[Insane]
  1. 00:35:281 (3,6) - they contact
  1. 00:41:143 (1) - stack this with 00:40:626 (2)
  1. 01:40:454 (4) - that slider is kinda awful. change it if you want
  1. 01:41:833 (9,1) - they contact
  1. 01:51:488 (3) - move that slider cuz the circle 6 (blue) contacts with the slider nd its awful
  1. 01:55:281 (7) - stack this with 01:54:247 (3) (if you want)
  1. 01:55:971 (2) - ^ (but with 01:55:626 (8))
  1. 01:58:212 (3) - ^ (but with 01:57:178 (8))
  1. 01:59:936 (10) - make this like this only if you want

sorry if it was a very little mod but i dont have time right now sorry
Topic Starter
_orange

[A L P H A] wrote:

Hi!

Mod from my queue


[Insane]
  1. 00:35:281 (3,6) - they contact fixed
  1. 00:41:143 (1) - stack this with 00:40:626 (2) fixed
  1. 01:40:454 (4) - that slider is kinda awful. change it if you want huh, it does look ugly, fixed
  1. 01:41:833 (9,1) - they contact i want to keep it that way
  1. 01:51:488 (3) - move that slider cuz the circle 6 (blue) contacts with the slider nd its awful fixed
  1. 01:55:281 (7) - stack this with 01:54:247 (3) (if you want) fixed
  1. 01:55:971 (2) - ^ (but with 01:55:626 (8)) fixed
  1. 01:58:212 (3) - ^ (but with 01:57:178 (8)) fixed
  1. 01:59:936 (10) - make this like this only if you want fixed

sorry if it was a very little mod but i dont have time right now sorry
Thanks for the mod! :)
I'm working on the mod for your map
Hikomori

_orange wrote:

[A L P H A] wrote:

Hi!

Mod from my queue


[Insane]
  1. 00:35:281 (3,6) - they contact fixed
  1. 00:41:143 (1) - stack this with 00:40:626 (2) fixed
  1. 01:40:454 (4) - that slider is kinda awful. change it if you want huh, it does look ugly, fixed
  1. 01:41:833 (9,1) - they contact i want to keep it that way
  1. 01:51:488 (3) - move that slider cuz the circle 6 (blue) contacts with the slider nd its awful fixed
  1. 01:55:281 (7) - stack this with 01:54:247 (3) (if you want) fixed
  1. 01:55:971 (2) - ^ (but with 01:55:626 (8)) fixed
  1. 01:58:212 (3) - ^ (but with 01:57:178 (8)) fixed
  1. 01:59:936 (10) - make this like this only if you want fixed

sorry if it was a very little mod but i dont have time right now sorry
Thanks for the mod! :)
I'm working on the mod for your map
ok
Miseracy
M4M from your Q
Hi :D I am not an experienced modder so that u can just have a look on my comments

Normal
:D Excellent Map and nothing that I want to change

ViolentBoo's Advanced
I don't know why an Advanced map is even easier than Hard :O
The distance between notes need modifications
For easy maps, a constant distance is encouraged
00:36:316 (1,2) - Larger spacing
00:37:695 (4,5) - Larger spacing
01:05:281 (1) - Why spinner?
01:07:695 (2,3,4) - Not appropriate if u trying to map the main beats only
01:10:454 (2,3,4) - Not appropriate if u trying to map the main beats only
01:27:695 (5) - Increase the spacing from "4" Note
01:34:591 (2,3) - Increase the spacing of them
01:36:660 (1) - Why spinner again
01:42:867 (1) - end 1 beat later (3 beat slider, 1 reverse arrow)
01:51:833 (4,5,1) - Not appropriate if u trying to map the main beats only
01:54:591 (5,6,1) - Not appropriate if u trying to map the main beats only

Hard
Very Good map, general no problem
00:44:160 (8) - Can Start 1 beat earlier
02:06:747 (8) - change to a note at the ending beat of slider
01:28:040 (3,4,5) - Change to 3 beat slider ( with 1 reverse arrow )

Insane
There are many places that can add 3-plets while u put for some of the place only
00:44:074 - A note could be add here
00:54:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The rhythm is similar with the previous section, why this section becomes are 1/2?
00:57:350 (3) - Too close to "4" note, or u can simply add a note between them
01:36:143 (6) - Too close to "7" note, or u can simply add a note between them

Extra
General: Very cool map, u may see if the diff spread is appropriate

00:36:316 - 00:40:454 For some of the places, 3 plets are better than 2 plets
Or u may consider o(o-o) to make 2 plets
00:40:971 - Add a slider similar to previous 3 beats
00:43:988 (2) - Make it farther away from 00:44:160 (1) - or simply add a note between them
00:45:971 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove the "4" note?
00:51:660 (6,7,8,9,1) - Remove the "9" note?
01:07:350 - Add a note here
01:28:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - As the distance change is too large, each note -0.1 ds is not encourage
2 notes -0.1 with a lower ds at note "1" is suggested
02:11:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I suggest the stream is in circular shape

Sorry that I can't mod Combo or hitsound or other stuffs :(
Topic Starter
_orange

Miseracy wrote:

M4M from your Q
Hi :D I am not an experienced modder so that u can just have a look on my comments

Normal
:D Excellent Map and nothing that I want to change Thanks

ViolentBoo's Advanced
I don't know why an Advanced map is even easier than Hard :O Advanced is supposed to be harder than normal and easier than hard, also this diff is being remapped rn so I'm not going to change it as it's already going to be changed later :P
The distance between notes need modifications
For easy maps, a constant distance is encouraged
00:36:316 (1,2) - Larger spacing
00:37:695 (4,5) - Larger spacing
01:05:281 (1) - Why spinner?
01:07:695 (2,3,4) - Not appropriate if u trying to map the main beats only
01:10:454 (2,3,4) - Not appropriate if u trying to map the main beats only
01:27:695 (5) - Increase the spacing from "4" Note
01:34:591 (2,3) - Increase the spacing of them
01:36:660 (1) - Why spinner again
01:42:867 (1) - end 1 beat later (3 beat slider, 1 reverse arrow)
01:51:833 (4,5,1) - Not appropriate if u trying to map the main beats only
01:54:591 (5,6,1) - Not appropriate if u trying to map the main beats only

Hard
Very Good map, general no problem
00:44:160 (8) - Can Start 1 beat earlier there's no sound
02:06:747 (8) - change to a note at the ending beat of slider There's two sounds though
01:28:040 (3,4,5) - Change to 3 beat slider ( with 1 reverse arrow ) I kinda agree with you, but I also kinda like it this way, if more people suggest it then I'll do it

Insane
There are many places that can add 3-plets while u put for some of the place only
00:44:074 - A note could be add here no sound there
00:54:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The rhythm is similar with the previous section, why this section becomes are 1/2? uhm, I don't really know what you're saying
00:57:350 (3) - Too close to "4" note, or u can simply add a note between them fixed
01:36:143 (6) - Too close to "7" note, or u can simply add a note between them fixed

Extra
General: Very cool map, u may see if the diff spread is appropriate

00:36:316 - 00:40:454 For some of the places, 3 plets are better than 2 plets
Or u may consider o(o-o) to make 2 plets I did this to follow the sound
00:40:971 - Add a slider similar to previous 3 beats don't think it's necessary
00:43:988 (2) - Make it farther away from 00:44:160 (1) - or simply add a note between them nah
00:45:971 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove the "4" note? fixed
00:51:660 (6,7,8,9,1) - Remove the "9" note? fixed
01:07:350 - Add a note here fixed
01:28:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - As the distance change is too large, each note -0.1 ds is not encourage
2 notes -0.1 with a lower ds at note "1" is suggested don't really understand what you're saying
02:11:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I suggest the stream is in circular shape looks fine to me

Sorry that I can't mod Combo or hitsound or other stuffs :(
Thanks a lot for the mod, I'll get working on your's :)
Aniviuh
Alright, here's the remap of the difficulty advanced.
- I feel like this version is a lot better and neater.
- There are no hit sounds like you've requested.
- The difficulty star rating is more suited for the name advanced.
- I never updated the whole song because I was afraid I would delete my revision, so this diff is based off the old audio. (Although I don't think it's a problem.)

Here you go!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44591
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.549999

[Metadata]
Title:Beside You (feat. Soundr)
TitleUnicode:Beside You (feat. Soundr)
Artist:Rameses B
ArtistUnicode:Rameses B
Creator:_orange
Version:ViolentBoo's Advanced
Source:
Tags:melodic dnb drum and bass ncs
BeatmapID:1117135
BeatmapSetID:516997

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Dawn.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
_orange

ViolentBoo wrote:

Alright, here's the remap of the difficulty advanced.
- I feel like this version is a lot better and neater.
- There are no hit sounds like you've requested.
- The difficulty star rating is more suited for the name advanced.
- I never updated the whole song because I was afraid I would delete my revision, so this diff is based off the old audio. (Although I don't think it's a problem.) you're right, it isn't

Here you go!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44591
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.549999

[Metadata]
Title:Beside You (feat. Soundr)
TitleUnicode:Beside You (feat. Soundr)
Artist:Rameses B
ArtistUnicode:Rameses B
Creator:_orange
Version:ViolentBoo's Advanced
Source:
Tags:melodic dnb drum and bass ncs
BeatmapID:1117135
BeatmapSetID:516997

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Dawn.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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384,312,111316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,320,111660,2,0,P|240:276|264:256,2,63.7500012159348
320,268,112350,2,0,P|312:224|288:204,2,63.7500012159348
368,208,112867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,136,113040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,68,113212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,136,113385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,113557,6,0,P|216:168|176:104,1,95.6250018239022
244,88,114074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,48,114419,2,0,L|84:56,2,63.7500012159348
188,144,115109,2,0,L|252:136,2,63.7500012159348
116,168,115626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,220,115798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,244,115971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,188,116143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,144,116316,6,0,L|64:252,1,95.6250018239022
112,300,116833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,232,117178,2,0,P|276:216|328:224,2,63.7500012159348
308,316,117867,2,0,P|280:332|228:324,2,63.7500012159348
372,276,118385,2,0,P|400:248|400:212,1,63.7500012159348
392,148,118729,2,0,P|392:104|376:80,1,63.7500012159348
308,136,119074,6,0,P|284:88|288:44,1,95.6250018239022
212,40,119591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,92,119764,2,0,P|200:140|160:172,1,95.6250018239022
116,228,120281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,120454,5,0,0:0:0:0:
36,288,120798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,328,121143,2,0,L|160:312,3,31.8750006079674
180,324,121488,2,0,L|224:320,3,31.8750006079674
236,328,121833,5,0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,122350,2,0,P|404:276|404:248,2,31.8750006079674
336,248,122781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,132,123040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,204,123212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,240,123471,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,124,123730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,196,123902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,244,124160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,276,124419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,304,124591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,168,125109,6,0,L|84:112,2,31.8750006079674
140,76,125540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,125798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,196,125971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,88,126229,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,168,126487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,208,126660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,88,126919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,124,127177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,232,127350,5,0,0:0:0:0:
148,268,127695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,244,128040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,280,128385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,256,128729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,292,129074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,268,129419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,129764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,284,130109,6,0,P|360:248|368:232,2,63.7500012159348
292,208,130626,2,0,P|244:244|236:260,2,63.7500012159348
360,172,131143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,72,131488,6,0,L|348:56,3,31.8750006079674
336,76,131833,2,0,L|292:68,3,31.8750006079674
292,92,132178,2,0,L|256:100,3,31.8750006079674
236,108,132522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,116,132609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,128,132695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,132781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,164,132867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Looks great :)

I updated the beatmap, still haven't done hitsounds, but will be done soon
I fixed some errors that I don't think you'll mind (blankets & stuff)

Also, next time you post or update a beatmap, put it in the code box thing, because the square brackets get messed up :P

Thanks!
MBmasher
m4m queue

add combo colors.

Normal
00:31:833 (2,3) - blanket this
00:44:591 (1) - start this slider at 00:44:764 where there is a strong sound.
00:44:591 (1,2) - blanket this
00:47:695 (1,2) - ^
00:53:212 (1,3) - dont overlap
00:55:626 (5) - NC, and add finish hitsound

ViolentBoo's Advanced
00:33:901 (3) - not snapped (off by 2ms)
00:35:281 (7) - ^
00:52:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 3/4 beats are unexpected, try to use sliders
00:56:660 (4,5,6,7) - uneven distance spacing
01:06:919 (1,2) - don't stack these.
01:58:385 (5) - flip this slider like [img=http://i.imgur.com/7cXPrI8.png][/img]
02:07:177 (5,1) - inconsistent distance spacing
02:11:143 (3) - turn this into a 1/2 beat long slider to fill the sound on the red tick.

fix the tags and preview time (not consistent)

Hard
00:44:505 (9) - why don't you just get rid of this and extend 8?
00:44:591 (1) - start this slider 1/2 beat forward when there is a sound
01:18:557 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern looks messy. 2,3,4,5 are good but 1 kind of messes it up.
01:28:384 (7,8) - There is no sound at 8, so get rid of 7, move 8 1/4 beat back and make it 3/4 beats long.
02:11:488 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is confusing, a 4 note burst? Remove a repeat from the first slider, and add a hitcircle at 02:11:833.

Insane
00:33:212 (8,9,1) - uneven distance spacing
01:21:488 (4,5,6) - ^
02:00:971 (6,7,8,9) - hard to read
02:05:971 (7) - NC
so many triangles

Extra
00:59:419 (8,9,1) - uneven distance spacing
01:32:867 (3,4,5,6) - ^

gl!
Topic Starter
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MBmasher wrote:

m4m queue

add combo colors.

Normal
00:31:833 (2,3) - blanket this fixed
00:44:591 (1) - start this slider at 00:44:764 where there is a strong sound. fixed
00:44:591 (1,2) - blanket this close enough, kinda fixed
00:47:695 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:53:212 (1,3) - dont overlap I think it's fixed
00:55:626 (5) - NC, and add finish hitsound fixed

ViolentBoo's Advanced
00:33:901 (3) - not snapped (off by 2ms) fixed
00:35:281 (7) - ^ yup
00:52:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 3/4 beats are unexpected, try to use sliders I'll let violentboo do the rest
00:56:660 (4,5,6,7) - uneven distance spacing
01:06:919 (1,2) - don't stack these.
01:58:385 (5) - flip this slider like [img=http://i.imgur.com/7cXPrI8.png][/img]
02:07:177 (5,1) - inconsistent distance spacing
02:11:143 (3) - turn this into a 1/2 beat long slider to fill the sound on the red tick.

fix the tags and preview time (not consistent) done

Hard
00:44:505 (9) - why don't you just get rid of this and extend 8? fixed
00:44:591 (1) - start this slider 1/2 beat forward when there is a sound fixed
01:18:557 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern looks messy. 2,3,4,5 are good but 1 kind of messes it up. changed it
01:28:384 (7,8) - There is no sound at 8, so get rid of 7, move 8 1/4 beat back and make it 3/4 beats long. fixed
02:11:488 (1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is confusing, a 4 note burst? Remove a repeat from the first slider, and add a hitcircle at 02:11:833. fixed

Insane
00:33:212 (8,9,1) - uneven distance spacing fixed
01:21:488 (4,5,6) - ^ fixed
02:00:971 (6,7,8,9) - hard to read changed it
02:05:971 (7) - NC ok
so many triangles

Extra
00:59:419 (8,9,1) - uneven distance spacing fixed I think
01:32:867 (3,4,5,6) - ^ fixed

gl! Thanks
Thanks a lot for the mod! Helped a lot :)
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