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Gojou Kai - Border of Life

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IceBeam
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IceBeam
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 мая 2011 г. at 23:14:43

Artist: Gojou Kai
Title: Border of Life
Source: Touhou
Tags: secret seven saigyouji yuyuko reiji-rj
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4707kb
Play Time: 02:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,37 stars, 116 notes)
  2. Hard (4,98 stars, 375 notes)
  3. Normal (3,32 stars, 201 notes)
Download: Gojou Kai - Border of Life
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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6-th map

touhou

Awesome music by awesome Gojou Kai

Play original map by James too.

Many thanks to Reiji-RJ for her huge help,forcing me to upload it and awesome [Normal]
Last edited by IceBeam , edited 10 times in total.
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
HELL YEAH
<3
Ch1ka
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Ch1ka
Отлично, удачи!
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
:3
Derfas13
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Derfas13
~star~
Aleks719
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Aleks719
star~
IceBeam
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IceBeam
Спасибо,няшки
happy30
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happy30
Offset / BPM

-19 / 160
47981 / 164
94810 / 168
IceBeam
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IceBeam
Thanks a lot,happy30!
Fight69
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Fight69
Hoi IceBeam ! :3

[General]

Don't forget to place a preview point in your map ! :)

[Hard]

00:55:298 (6) - Add a clap at the end
00:55:846 (7) - Delete the clap at the beggining
00:56:395 (8) - Add a clap at the end

[Normal]

02:10:881 (4) - Add a clap at the beggining

[Easy]

00:36:000 (1) - Add a finish at the beggining
02:21:238 (2) - Finish at the end ?


That's all, good stuff as usual ;)
~Starz'd !
Kert
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Kert
Awesomesauce!
IceBeam
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IceBeam
Thanks :]

Updated.
HeatKai
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HeatKai
m4m
[easy]
00:18:000 (1,1) - don't do like this , for new player sure hard to read D:
00:22:875 (1) - the spinner too short,need longer for easy =.=

[Normal]
00:21:750 (2,3,1) - spacing ?
01:12:493 (2,3,4) - make it straight http://puu.sh/1L2l

[Hard]
some of it not really stack under the slider . do you want it like that ?
I think this is you're focusing on CTB too XD

NICE :D

Starred ~
good luck Icebeam :)
Kurosanyan
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Joined November 2009
Kurosanyan
[General]
  1. Preview time different on easy D:
  2. Make the hitsounds louder? It's so quiet :( Something like this:http://puu.sh/1L2u Also Normal diff have 70% at the end while others have 60%
[Easy]
  1. Why Circle Size 4 on an easy? :(
  2. AR is so slow :| How about +1?
[Normal]
  1. 00:30:000 (1,2) - Yeah it's symmetric but too close, you can fix it if you change the shape and rotate the sliders, still keeping symmetry, something like this: http://puu.sh/1L2C and then you can make the same for 00:33:000 (3,4) - and it could fix the lack of spacing for 00:34:125 (4,1) -
  2. 02:08:381 (4,5,1) - Fix the spacing here?
  3. 01:22:554 (1) - Remove this note?
  4. 01:23:102 (1) - Remove new combo (and add new combo on 01:22:737 (2) - if you removed the previous note)
  5. 01:30:420 (1,1,1,1) - How about something else than a stack for those? :? But only a suggestion, feel free to keep it like this.
  6. 02:03:381 (1,2,3,4) - Space them more please orz
  7. 02:14:809 (1,1,1,2) - How about something else than a stack for those? :? But only a suggestion, feel free to keep it like this.
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:312 (6,7) - Unstack it? Like: http://puu.sh/1L31
  2. 00:15:375 (2,3) - This sudden reduce of spacing feels weird.
That's all! Great map <3
chungskale
120 posts
Joined December 2009
chungskale
hi~
suggestion here~

[Easy]
  1. i suggest you to use grid level 3
  2. 00:33:000 (3) - straight slider?
  3. 01:31:883 (3) - ^
  4. 01:51:952 (1) - ^
  5. 02:14:809 (1) - ^
  6. 02:16:952 (2) - ^
  7. 02:26:238 (1,2) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 01:57:309 (4) - 1 grid left
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:625 (7) - use the copy of (5) ?
  2. 00:15:375 (2) - add a reverse
  3. 00:33:000 (1,2,3) - i don't like this arrangement :S maybe look like this?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:39:000 (1) - 1 grid down (lvl 3)
  5. 00:48:163 (2,3,4) - make them parallel , (3) reverse selection. i think it is a bit tricky
  6. 00:49:444 (1,2,3) - ^
  7. 02:20:524 (1,3,4) - a straight slider looks better
star~nice map
but i think the arrangement can have some more improvement~
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
> Fight69, HeatKai, Kurosanyan, chungskale
Thank you, mostly fixed :D

Download: Gojou Kai - Border of Life (IceBeam) [Normal].osu
Kurai
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Kurai
:33
IceBeam
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IceBeam
HeatKai

HeatKai wrote:

[easy]
00:18:000 (1,1) - don't do like this , for new player sure hard to read D: Yes,I though about it,fixed.
00:22:875 (1) - the spinner too short,need longer for easy =.= 6000 bonus score and there's a break right after it so it will do.

[Hard]
some of it not really stack under the slider . do you want it like that ? Yes,it was in purpose.
I think this is you're focusing on CTB too XD

Kurosanyan

Kurosanyan wrote:

[General]
  1. Preview time different on easy D: Fixed,thanks.
  2. Make the hitsounds louder? It's so quiet :( Something like this:http://puu.sh/1L2u Also Normal diff have 70% at the end while others have 60% Probably,if I'll find better MP3/Offset/Hitsounds.


[Easy]
  1. Why Circle Size 4 on an easy? :( That's how I always map easy difficulties :<
  2. AR is so slow :| How about +1? Ok.
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:312 (6,7) - Unstack it? Like: http://puu.sh/1L31 Thanks,but I think stack fits better.
  2. 00:15:375 (2,3) - This sudden reduce of spacing feels weird.True,I'll look forward to fix it.
Also,thanks for irc disscusion.

chungskale

chungskale wrote:

[Easy]
  1. i suggest you to use grid level 3
  2. 00:33:000 (3) - straight slider?
  3. 01:31:883 (3) - ^
  4. 01:51:952 (1) - ^
  5. 02:14:809 (1) - ^
  6. 02:16:952 (2) - ^
  7. 02:26:238 (1,2) - ^ It was all in purpose,but thanks.
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:625 (7) - use the copy of (5)? It's fine.
  2. 00:15:375 (2) - add a reverse I'm following claps' rhytm here,so no.
  3. 00:33:000 (1,2,3) - i don't like this arrangement :S maybe look like this?
    SPOILER
    I like mine :|
  4. 00:39:000 (1) - 1 grid down (lvl 3) Yeah,my bad.Fixed,thanks.
  5. 00:48:163 (2,3,4) - make them parallel , (3) reverse selection. i think it is a bit tricky
  6. 00:49:444 (1,2,3) - ^ Nah,I like they was they messed up.
  7. 02:20:524 (1,3,4) - a straight slider looks better Not to me :<

Thanks a lot for your mods,updated.

And thanks for a star,Kurai :D
theMikeAG
308 posts
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theMikeAG
That girl has a serious case of red eye. :P

~Easy~
I didn't find any problems.

~Normal~
00:56:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is weird. For one, the bottom two notes (2) and (4) are level, but (1), (3), and (5) each descend by one space. For another, it seems like the pattern would look better if it was centered. Especially since 02:30:524 (1,2,3,4,1) is centered.
01:43:738 (x) - I can clearly hear a beat here, but no note. Why? Also see 01:44:452, 02:06:595, 02:07:309, 02:08:024 and all through 02:26:238 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1).

~Hard~
Errrr... I don't think I'd do a good job modding this. I'm no good with Insanes/Lunatics, which is what this map makes me think of. Touhou indeed.

STar.
lovhin456
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lovhin456
Hi! Sorry for the late mod ;~;

General;
- Really pretty background, gives a nice feeling >w<

Easy;
- To the red timing sections, I think the volume for them are too low, make them 90& ? And to the 40% section maybe to 50%
- In my opinion this diff suits an "Easy" but is kinda boring too ... I don't know ~
- 00:21:000 (1,2,3) >> Make a nice triangle with these ?
- 00:39:000 >> Shorten this so it reverses at 00:39:375 and add 2 notes on the next two white ticks
- 01:59:095 >> Ehhh finish ?
- 02:10:524 >> ^
- 02:21:952 >> ^
- 02:31:952 >> Make this note's volume 100%

Normal;
- For the red timing sections, make the volume louder
- 02:25:345 >> Add a note ?
- 02:31:595 >> Align with (2)

Hard;
- The red timing sections stuff
- Nice, I guess, but I really don't know about the whistle parts I don't really like them ;~;

* Star ~
IceBeam
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IceBeam
Thanks,theMikeAG and lovhin456!

Fixed some,I'm still searching for better MP3/hitsounds.
I tried really lots of them,but nothing really fits well,that's sad.Also,louder volume makes too much noise and drowns music..so I fixed only Easy,as I used soft sampleset.
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
> theMikeAG, lovhin456
Thanks, fixed some :P

Download: Gojou Kai - Border of Life (IceBeam) [Normal].osu
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Chacha17
As promised :)

General
- Remove unused .osb file and full submit
- Adding a skin to this would be nice

Easy- Didn't play this 'cause it's a bit boring. Yeaaah.. yet it's a nice easy map.

I suggest making the circle larger by one notch. You see, beginners will have a hard time hitting those small stuff even though the map itself is slow paced.

01:02:615 (1) - remove finish and add whistle?
01:04:078 (3) - ^
01:36:238 (2) - add whistle
02:03:381 (1) - a finish at the end of this slider doesn't sound so good i suggest you remove it
02:31:952 (1) - remove new combo


Normal - Hey be consistent. In normal you used loud normal samplesets while in easy you didn't >.>

01:23:102 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:029 (1) - ^

Hard - fun map. (a fan of fast sliders and jumps) Also, try adding +1 to the Life drain. >:D

00:07:500 - add a beat here. this caught me offguard >_>
01:11:212 (5,6,1) - space these out a bit, so that people would recognise the pattern
01:23:834 (3) - remove one repeat
01:56:952 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:095 (1,1,1,1) - ^

Now you have my pesky star!
Mok
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Joined August 2009
Mok
[General]
BG is wonderful, but it scares me a bit xD

[Easy]
Easy is just... How sould i say it? :P It's Easy and nice :D

[Normal].
00:07:312 (2) - I should stack it under (1)

[Hard]
00:01:125 (4) - This is jumpy, up to you if make it New Combo to make the people notice better the jump :P

Really good to me <3
IceBeam
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IceBeam
Thanks,Chacha17 and Mok!

Mostly fixed :P
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
> Chacha17, Mok
Thank you :3

Download: Gojou Kai - Border of Life (IceBeam) [Normal].osu
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Every diffs~
Set audio lead-in to 3


+Star
IceBeam
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IceBeam
Done.
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
Cat
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Cat
star :3
IceBeam
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IceBeam
Thanks DJPop,Cat and Haneii !
Debbiee
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Debbiee
:)
HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Requesting timing additional control for you to someone...
normal-hitclap.wav,normal-hitfinish.wav,soft-hitwhistle.wav are actually the same as the default .-., and i don't see why you lowered the volume ( you should lower the hitnormal one... not them.. )
[Hard]
You should work more on graphic ( hmm, and nazi a bit if you want )
In the middle of many combo's you change from following drums to piano... and viceversa
00:12:562 (2,3,4) - like this should be graphically better, use this code
392,120,12562,2,0,B|436:216|368:288,1,160
256,192,13125,1,8
120,264,13312,2,0,B|84:192|128:104,1,160
01:26:029 (1,2,3) - like this should be graphically better, use this code
416,196,86029,6,0,B|416:236|404:280|372:316|320:336,1,160
256,188,86578,1,8
96,188,86761,2,0,B|96:148|108:104|136:68|188:48,1,160
02:24:988 (5,6) - Why simply don't stack (6) at the end of (5) ?
02:25:702 (7,8) - Why simply don't stack (7) on the start of (8) ?
-maJu
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-maJu
star <3
IceBeam
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IceBeam
Thank you Debbiee, HakuNoKaemi and -maJu!
h3k1ru
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h3k1ru
awesome map, hope to see it ranked soon :oops:

dont give up!
happy30
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happy30
Offset / BPM

-16 / 160
47984 / 164
94813 / 168

pop, sorry
happy30
Featured Artist
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happy30
okay, new mp3 so here are the new offsets

566
48566
95395

edit: bubble restored
jericho2442
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jericho2442
all seems rankable, enjoy your Heart
Fight69
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Fight69
Yay !
Congrats ! :)
Natteke
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Natteke
James' version is much better
Waryas
Waryas

Natteke wrote:

James' version is much better
lol
lovhin456
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lovhin456
Congrats!
DoctorToxn
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DoctorToxn

Natteke wrote:

James' version is much better
... I have to agree. Why re-invent the wheel?
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ

DoctorToxn wrote:

Natteke wrote:

James' version is much better
... I have to agree. Why re-invent the wheel?
Everybody have their own tastes.
Why it cares you?
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
James' version is much better
James ver. is not even closer to this.

Nice job IceBeam! :)
Firo Prochainezo
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Firo Prochainezo

DoctorToxn wrote:

... I have to agree. Why re-invent the wheel?
Because then everybody has the chance to map what they like? Duh.
Natteke
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Natteke
viewtopic.php?f=62&t=8259 this is the classic of osu
DoctorToxn
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DoctorToxn

Firo Prochainezo wrote:

DoctorToxn wrote:

... I have to agree. Why re-invent the wheel?
Because then everybody has the chance to map what they like? Duh.
I guess what I was trying to say is that instead of re-mapping an existing (Great) map, why not do something more original with a unmapped song?
Firo Prochainezo
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Firo Prochainezo

DoctorToxn wrote:

I guess what I was trying to say is that instead of re-mapping an existing (Great) map, why not do something more original with a unmapped song?
Let the poor man map what he wants? I don't see any reason why he shouldn't do that.
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