James2250 wrote:

-Pretty nazi but rename (TV size) to (TV Size) as that is how 99% of maps have it (also make the thread title match the title in game?) fixed~
-Not really a fan of the score - numbers, they fade into the background too much (just my opinion)

Easy:
00:33:590 (1,2) - switch new combo fixed
01:14:390 (2,3,4) - continue previous clap pattern on these too? sure~

LeAfLet's Normal:
00:37:990 (4) - add a clap on the end of this?

Hard:
Looks good

Insane:
00:22:790 (1) - remove new combo fixed
00:29:990 (4) - new combo fixed
00:39:190 (9,1) - space out more fixed
00:55:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a good idea to do spacing like this, will confuse players too much
00:56:790 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ok~ i filled the gap

Looks pretty good, just some minor things to look over

IceBeam wrote:

As James noticed before,thread's title doesn't match with map.

Thread: ShaNa - One lonely(TV Size)
Map: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV Size)

Why Kiai ends at 01:18:390? Maybe cut at least at 01:19:190?
Also,maybe start Kiai from 00:53:590? Cause it's the first beat in chorus.

[Easy]
00:19:190 (2) - I'd say it doesn't match rhytm perfectly.Maybe finish it at 00:19:990 and add another note to 00:20:790?
00:40:790 (2) - Finish.
01:13:590 - I'd remove this clap.
all fixed~
[Normal]
Fix Kiai,it starts too late.
00:25:790 (2) - Remove this?

[Hard]
00:09:990 - Add these notes? Look at timeline:

SPOILER

added notes in another way~
00:27:990 (6) - Add finish?
00:40:790 (6) - ^
00:59:990 (2) - ^
01:05:590 (1) - Ninja spinner Though it's perfectly rankable.

[Insane]
00:27:990 (6) - Finish? whistle.
Otherwise seems nice.

Good luck!
Star.

lkp wrote:

Hiii

[Easy]

00:47:190 (6) - New combo? its alright~
Fine.

[LeAfLet's Normal]

00:50:390 (1) - I don't know why you add noew combo here...Maybe remove it?
Fine.

[Hard]

00:28:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those notes have different spacing int the combo(?)Try to make it same spacing. fixed
00:32:590 (3) - Delete the (3),then move (4) in 00:32:590 and add note in 00:33:390.Sound would be better if you do that. 00:33:390 already got a new combo. you mean 33:190? but i think i am not following this one.
00:48:590 (2,3) - Spacing,too far. fixed
01:01:590 (7,8,9) - Spacing,too close. fixed

[Insane]

00:58:190 (3) - Move 4 grid up (lv.3) fly high no good
01:07:590 (5,6,7) - Spacing,too close. fixed
01:11:190 (7) - New combo? no for this~

Nice map star

HeatKai wrote:

got request from crimmi queue
so here's the mod

[easy]
00:51:190 (1) - the spinner make it longer until 00:53:590 you are right
00:59:990 (5) - new combo
01:00:390 (1) - remove new combo i think it is still acceptable. not really confusing

clap making annoying sounds =.= please reduce it ok~

[leaf's normal]
00:28:390 (1) - too near at the middle =.=
00:32:990 (5) - delete

[hard]
00:11:190 (5) - new combo
00:11:390 (1) - remove new combo
00:11:990 (4) - new combo OK~

[insane]
00:06:190 (9) - new combo ok
00:07:190 (12) - delete ok
00:40:790 (1) - spacing a little jump..so moved it away more

Tonoicutzu wrote:

[Easy]
00:53:990 (1) - this is too early after the spinner..end the previous spinner here 00:53:367 i think it is still acceptable :S and its not sound so good to end earlier.

[LeAfLet's Normal]
nice diff, but it's rhythm killed me *.*

[Insane]
00:04:390 - add a circle here, it will sound great
00:04:590 (5) - move this to next white tick, and then fix the distances
00:10:590 (3,4) - same here ^
00:40:590 (5,1) - this jump killed me, it is kinda unexpected :S all agree and fixed~

nice map. Star

goodbye wrote:

[Insane]
因为你整个都是自己加的clap所以我就按照你的思路走 o.o

00:18:990 (5,9,11) - 这一段听上去挺空 在这几个地方加clap听起来的话会比较不错o.o 這個同意~
00:22:390 (2) - clap ok
00:38:990 (8) - clap 这样有个渐强的感觉 ok
00:58:190 (3) - 这边这堆也是比较空o.o...感觉有挺多种加法的 我是选择了3和00:58:390 (4) - 的尾巴上加clap这种 這個我感覺上用clap有點奇怪..試著把00:59:990 (3) - 換成了clap.
01:05:390 (x) - 感觉这里应该加个note+clap 感覺上不加玩起來舒服一點~
01:15:790 (4,7,3,1) - +clap 我想結尾不用那麼強烈的節奏了~

[Hard]
00:38:390 (5) - clap? ok~
00:10:190 (2,4) - +whistle ok~
00:11:190 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的形状说实话不太好看 我排列沒天份OTL..試著排好了~

[Normal]
这个难度的音效太响了 破坏了歌的美感 喧宾夺主、画蛇添足的感觉 集中体现在kiai段

其他没什么吧

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

General
* Your spinner-background is over 1023x692. Please resize it, it's unacceptable oh! i thought it can be 1024x768 :S fixed
* Those spinner-circle are hard to read

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Easy
00:27:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 combos are very high for easy diff, please enable the new combo at 00:31:190 (5). Since it start with heavy white tick oh~yes
00:53:990 (1) - This is pretty difficult for beginner player. This slider is place after spinner and it's too far from spinner. I suggest you to move it closer to spinner OR remove this slider. Otherwise, the beginner player can't reach this slider during gameplay moved near to the middle~ i think beginners prefer spinning with very big "circle" because i do that before too XD
00:59:990 (5) - New combo?
01:00:390 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:04:790 (4) - New combo? someone mention these before o.o maybe i should really change this

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Hard
00:18:590 (5,6) - Move 1 grid down (Nazi) LOL~good XD
00:26:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is sound better if this snap in 1st purple tick (use 1/3 beat snap divisor). Since you following the vocal, right? yes~fixed
00:44:390 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - You using 1,8x distance spacing, right? If you using 1,8x or 1,9x please make sure this pattern is spaced correctly, because I found some random spacing in this pattern fixed><
01:05:590 (1) - I know that small spinner that appropriate for this diff, but it's kinda bad during gameplay ok

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Insane
00:26:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is sound better if this snap in 1st purple tick (use 1/3 beat snap divisor). Since you following the vocal, right? yes fixed

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Fairy Tail <3

rEdo wrote:

[Easy]
0:01:590 (1) - this note might be a little bit hard for some osu! rookies to get a 300 on it, since it's starting the map in not a really accenting place, maybe delete it and let the map start at that (2) slider? i feel something missing if this one was deleted o_o; and this got a very slow AR so maybe just keep it first~
0:03:990 (1) - delete new combo fixed
0:31:990 (2,3,4) - a bit inconsistent spacing. move those notes by a grid to the left fixed
0:39:990 (1,2) - swap new combos fixed
0:56:390 (1,2) - ^ fixed
1:04:790 (1) - delete new combo fixed
1:06:390 (3,1) - swap new combos fixed


[Hard]
sweet one. <3
0:11:990 (1) - delete new combo fixed
0:22:790 (1) - delete new combo fixed
0:27:990 (6) - weird jump, huh. ._. it is not a jump it just follow the distance snap XD


[Insane]
i kinda disapprove of some jumps on that, but they're fine i suppose.
0:21:590 (6,1) - swap new combos fixed
0:25:590 (1) - not really necessary new combo imo fixed
0:58:190 (3) - move it a few grids higher? Yes~


[General]
0:53:990 (x) - do NOT start kiai according to the vocals, just don't. always do it according to the music, vocal isn't the most important thing in the song! if i were you, i'd start it at 0:53:590 :3 fine~fixed and learned
also, is it just me being out-of-dated, or BG image is still 1023x768? o.o! fixed


sweet map, great job!
good luck with it <3

1. I didn't find anything here

1. 00:04:790 (1,2,3) - This sounds really strange for me.Maybe change something?

1. 00:26:190 (9) - Make it like the slider 00:25:390 (7) -
2. 00:55:990 (1) - Delete this note
3. 01:12:590 - Add a note?

1. 00:24:890 (2) - I think this note doesen't fit here,maybe delete it?
2. 00:27:990 (6) - New combo
3. 00:28:390 (1) - Delete new combo

-kevincela- wrote:

Here's my mod

[Easy]

1. I didn't find anything here

[LeAfLer's Normal]

1. 00:04:790 (1,2,3) - This sounds really strange for me.Maybe change something? this is still ok for me :3

[Hard]

1. 00:26:190 (9) - Make it like the slider 00:25:390 (7) - fixed~
2. 00:55:990 (1) - Delete this note i want to keep this for whistle o.o;
3. 01:12:590 - Add a note? a bit not fit with the hitsounds imo

[Insane]

1. 00:24:890 (2) - I think this note doesen't fit here,maybe delete it? OK
2. 00:27:990 (6) - New combo
3. 00:28:390 (1) - Delete new combo

Really good work!These diffs fit perfectly the song (except for some things in the normal) and are really good from one who doesen't have ranked maps!

My vote:

9/10 yay

1. 00:21:590 (4) - finish this slider at 00:23:190?
2. 00:58:390 (3) - add whiste sound at start of slider, and remove finish sound at end?

• 
  Looks fine as Normal diff. :3

1. 00:49:990 (5) - remove clap sound?

1. 00:45:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not symmetry. move (7) right 2 grid?
2. 01:04:790 (9) - add clap sound at start of slider?
3. 01:11:990 (2) - ^?

1. 00:11:190 (5,1) - players are confused by these formation and timing imo.
2. 00:14:590 (3) - left 1 grid? (and also move (4,5,6,7) as like same)
3. 00:21:990 (2,3,4,5,6) - looks like crowded. move (4) to x:112 y:160?
4. 00:26:190 (10) - hmm...I feel this slider doesn't fit the music. change it to circle?
5. 00:27:990 (6) - new combo.
6. 00:28:390 (1) - remove new combo.
7. 00:29:390 (2) - remove clap sound. :3
8. 00:29:590 (3) - add clap sound. :3
9. 00:50:990 (4) - change it to slider like this?
   and add clap sound at end of slider.
   I think hitsound is natural on my pattern. :3
10. 00:53:590 (5) - put finish sound instead of whistle?

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for mod request~
But really sorry for late

[Easy]

1. 00:21:590 (4) - finish this slider at 00:23:190? agree~fixed
2. 00:58:390 (3) - add whiste sound at start of slider, and remove finish sound at end? i want that finish sound >< so i prefer not adding that whistle

[LeAfLet's Normal]

• 
  Looks fine as Normal diff. :3

1. 00:49:990 (5) - remove clap sound?

[Hard]

1. 00:45:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not symmetry. move (7) right 2 grid? fixed
2. 01:04:790 (9) - add clap sound at start of slider? agree~added
3. 01:11:990 (2) - ^? ok~

[Insane]

1. 00:11:190 (5,1) - players are confused by these formation and timing imo. fixed
2. 00:14:590 (3) - left 1 grid? (and also move (4,5,6,7) as like same) following spacing here o.o
3. 00:21:990 (2,3,4,5,6) - looks like crowded. move (4) to x:112 y:160? OK~
4. 00:26:190 (10) - hmm...I feel this slider doesn't fit the music. change it to circle? i think it is still ok o.o;
5. 00:27:990 (6) - new combo. as the modders above mentioned this too, ok~
6. 00:28:390 (1) - remove new combo. ^
7. 00:29:390 (2) - remove clap sound. :3
8. 00:29:590 (3) - add clap sound. :3 yes*2
9. 00:50:990 (4) - change it to slider like this? i use two notes instead
   [attachment=0:01b6a]screenshot103.jpg[/attachment:01b6a]and add clap sound at end of slider.
   I think hitsound is natural on my pattern. :3
10. 00:53:590 (5) - put finish sound instead of whistle? ok

Good song and nice mapset :3
Goodluck! Star~!

1. That custom clap (the first one) is really loud compared to the other hitsounds. It did surprise me when I testplayed. Also, I personnally think it doesn't fit the song, since the song is very soft, and the clap sounds rather harsh (and loud).
2. The timing becomes wrong in a certain part (see Hard). Here's what I have:

1. Why is HP drain so high ? It's as high as in Normal.
2. 00:53:990 (1) - This comes a bit soon after the spinner. New players wouldn't have time to readjust their aim to hit the slider properly.

1. 00:53:990 (1) - This slider comes a bit soon after the spinner. Same comment as above actually

1. All this 1/2 x_x I didn't expect it, but it plays fine.
2. 00:01:390 (1) - This note surprised me. The map starting on a red tick feels a bit weird, and it took me a couple tries to understand the timing.
3. 00:26:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is awful to time. Snapping in 1/6 like that is rather approximative (and for consistency, the last note would need to be snapped on the 1/6 tick before the while one - remember to fix the spacing too). If you don't want to fix the timing, fix the spacing between (4) (5) and (6) anyway.

1. This honestly feels overmapped. The added 1/4 and jumps and stuff seem to be here only for the sake of having an Insane diff.
2. 00:52:790 (1,1) - Remove these two new combos ? The stream would look a bit better imo.

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General

1. That custom clap (the first one) is really loud compared to the other hitsounds. It did surprise me when I testplayed. Also, I personnally think it doesn't fit the song, since the song is very soft, and the clap sounds rather harsh (and loud). I lowered its volume by 25%~
2. The timing becomes wrong in a certain part (see Hard). Here's what I have: fixed~

timing

offset 26930 BPM 141.500
offset: 27990 BPM 150.000

Easy

1. Why is HP drain so high ? It's as high as in Normal. set to 1
2. 00:53:990 (1) - This comes a bit soon after the spinner. New players wouldn't have time to readjust their aim to hit the slider properly.fixed, placed earlier

LeAfLet's Normal

1. 00:53:990 (1) - This slider comes a bit soon after the spinner. Same comment as above actually

Hard

1. All this 1/2 x_x I didn't expect it, but it plays fine.
2. 00:01:390 (1) - This note surprised me. The map starting on a red tick feels a bit weird, and it took me a couple tries to understand the timing. agree.. so red tick note deleted, (2)(3) changed into a slider
3. 00:26:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is awful to time. Snapping in 1/6 like that is rather approximative (and for consistency, the last note would need to be snapped on the 1/6 tick before the while one - remember to fix the spacing too). If you don't want to fix the timing, fix the spacing between (4) (5) and (6) anyway. i fixed the timing. so spacing too.

Insane

1. This honestly feels overmapped. The added 1/4 and jumps and stuff seem to be here only for the sake of having an Insane diff. removed some 1/4 and bad jumps because I am so weak on arranging notes
2. 00:52:790 (1,1) - Remove these two new combos ? The stream would look a bit better imo. ok if it feel easier for players.

I really didn't like the Insane. Easy and Normal were nice, Hard was rather good, but Insane really feels forced into the mapset. :/
Also, if you fix this little bit of timing, remember to fix it for all difficulties and to resnap all notes.

Soul-less wrote:

超遲的mod，抱歉。

[General]
- 音效應用可以進一步加強。有些部分音效跳拍（詳細見以下）。 對對對><下音效方面還是弱了點
- 可考慮把sherrie__fay加進tag？SB美化

[Easy]
- 00:24:790 (2) - 感覺少了個finish? ok
- 00:46:390 (4) - 把這裡的whistle移前到00:43:990 (3) slider尾？(配合這部分每四拍一whistle/finish的連貫性。) ok
- 00:47:990 (1) - slider尾加finish? ok
- 00:58:390 (3) - 感覺slider頭少了個whistle? 這個後面有個finish,太頻密有點吵。
- 01:02:790 (4,5) - 感覺把這裡的（4）和（5）對調比較順，但要重新排列就是了。[01:02:790 (4) 一拍，01:03:190 (5) slider] 若有調整，音效也可維持四拍一whistle了。（在01:03:190 (5) slider的頭和尾加whistle就可）ok
- 01:17:590 (4) - slider頭少了個clap? ok

[LeAfLet's Normal]
- 大致上ok。

[Hard]
- 這裡的第三個offset差了200ms(27,990ms，這裡卻是27,790ms)。
- 01:06:790 (1) - 這個clap應該是在01:06:390 (2)? (都是四拍一clap，這裡突然遲一拍？) ok
- 01:09:590 (1) - 考慮slider頭多加whistle配合01:07:590 (5,1) 的音效？ ok
- 01:11:190 (7) - 考慮多加whistle配合01:07:590 (5,1) 的音效？ ok

[Insane]
- 無法理解一些低音效區的使用。 如00:11:990 (4), 00:16:590 (2)slider 尾, 00:18:990 (4)。 改了幾個
- 00:08:590 (5,6) - 距離稍微近了些。 ok
- 00:59:990 (3) - 感覺這裡放whistle較好？ 感覺兩個連續whistle 有點奇怪。不改這個了。
- 01:02:790 - 01:04:790 - 音效。Hmm。 嗯。改成whistle->clap -> whistle->clap
- 01:06:790 - 01:12:390 - 這裡的clap跳了一拍，clap應該是在01:07:190 (3), 01:08:790 (3), 01:10:390 (3),01:11:990 (1)。 考慮把01:12:390 (1) slider尾的clap改成whistle? ok

感覺我越來越不會mod了。

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[Easy]
00:58:390 cancel the finish
00:59:190 add the finish
other fine

[leaflet]
00:48:990 add clap

[hard]
fine

[Insane]
Well done.

[Sb]
后面那段symbol闪现的话应该是以800ms左右..但是本身设置的成720~740了 所以修改下看起来比较好（估计是bpm修改过的关系

Nice done...本身做的品质很高啊

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- As awesome the SB is, I would've liked the actual video to be there as well
- Also background: Would've been better Happy and Charle instead, since the ending was for Charle, you know? :U.
- AND. I also didn't like how you darkened the scores. If you play with the normal ones, it actually looks better. IMO.

Minor things though, and really not a biggy. In general no it isn't but for me fdsaf T.T /me cries, runs away.
*cough* but yeah, otherwise map looks okay.

Also just wondering, did you make the SB yourself, or did someone else do it (skin as well)?

chungskale wrote:

Thanks for the opinions!
-A bit difficult to find it :< some copyright problem. I will try though okay
-the story board need to change together if using another the bg :(
-OK~maybe change it back to default since some modders didn't like it too lol :)

The lyric and skin are made by me.
The flashing effects are made by sherrie__fay and he helps me to make all those things look better >.> if that's so, can you credit sherrie__fay and yourself respectively for helping you with the SB then? credit as in mention it in the first post.
I sucks in making pictures lol