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Ryo-kun - Caramel Heaven

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_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年1月20日 at 21:48:37

Artist: Ryo-kun
Title: Caramel Heaven
Tags: cover utaite Pata-Mon megpoid gumi vocaloid Last Note. nico
BPM: 194
Filesize: 1974kb
Play Time: 01:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.51 stars, 89 notes)
  2. Hard (3.12 stars, 223 notes)
  3. Insane (5.15 stars, 333 notes)
  4. Normal (2.02 stars, 126 notes)
  5. Pata-Mon's Insane (4.33 stars, 302 notes)
Download: Ryo-kun - Caramel Heaven
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1

BG from Youtube.
MP3 and timing things are stolen from Regraz's mapset.

Easy by me
Normal by me.
Hard by me.
Pata-Mon's Insane by Pata-Mon
Insane by me.
Hitsound done by Pata-Mon
Last edited by _Yiiiii , edited 35 times in total.
jj986544591
70 posts
Joined July 2013
jj986544591
M4M

[insane]

00:17:246 (4,5) - 往前移动一格是和6一起的

00:31:318 (1,2,3,4) - 排序怎么说应该方一点，虽然很舒服;w;

00:52:504 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 怎么会有这么反人类的东西
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

jj986544591 wrote:

M4M

[insane]

00:17:246 (4,5) - 往前移动一格是和6一起的 啊，对，我智障了

00:31:318 (1,2,3,4) - 排序怎么说应该方一点，虽然很舒服;w; 不不不，这样保证了DS

00:52:504 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 怎么会有这么反人类的东西 但是这个很合音乐啊;w;
谢摸~
Clovers
6 posts
Joined July 2016
Clovers
次难度只有19秒...
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
[Hard]
00:49:411 (1) - 离的很远又NC，开HR的话容易一下子找不到地方...可以放近一点w

00:57:916 (3) - 这个感觉后面加个圈？主歌里都加了
后面还有一个地方类似，不找了

挺好的
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Lily Bread wrote:

[Hard]
00:49:411 (1) - 离的很远又NC，开HR的话容易一下子找不到地方...可以放近一点w 已改

00:57:916 (3) - 这个感觉后面加个圈？主歌里都加了 啊，Insane那两个大概算是overmap出来的，那里我不放个圈十分不爽，但是Hard再overmap感觉就有点过分了，不加了。
后面还有一个地方类似，不找了

挺好的
谢谢
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
不是啦..我是指类似这样的三连 - 00:25:751 (3,4,5) - 。kiai里听起来也可以加的，1/4的地方有个转音
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii
Added Pata-Mon's Insane!

Now, it is ready for M4M
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
自己把2kds位占了2333
我看有2kds都没po论坛
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Pata-Mon wrote:

自己把2kds位占了2333
我看有2kds都没po论坛
说的好像2kds对modder有多大用似的233
对于自己也就1sp的事而已 XD
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
Hello for M4M

[General]
  1. 有點驚訝這譜竟然沒有hitsound!? 像這種高BPM又鼓點分明的曲子我建議一定要下音效，絕對會比較好
    雖然你有下，但完全不夠啊啊啊 (沒有打擊感)
  2. 如果真的覺得找音效很麻煩，那其實現有的音效也就夠了，像是Pata-Mon's Insane就挺好的
  3. 所有難度的tag沒有統一

[Normal]
  1. 00:29:308 跟Hard問題一樣，NC下在DS改變的NOTE上
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:844、00:29:617 NC拿掉，下在00:29:308 因為DS改變
  2. 01:02:555 (2) 弄成這樣好了，因為快壓到前一條Slider了
    SPOILER
[Pata-Mon's Insane]
  1. 00:08:277 (3) 故意不疊的嘛? 跟這個00:07:504
  2. vocal 唱到oya的地方都改成normal-whistle好了XD 覺得soft-whistle不夠力
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:308 (2,3,4,5,6) 這裡的下法我覺得可以弄成這樣，不過5拍那個1/4的短滑條就看你自己了
    SPOILER
  2. 00:26:988 (3,4,5,6) 3可以拉遠一點跟vocal的感覺，然後滑條2的尾巴跟34成大三角 (6不用動 一樣在滑條後面)
    SPOILER
  3. 00:27:607 這應該是下finish阿怎麼是whistle QAQ
  4. 00:31:318 (6,7,8,9) 利用Ctrl+shift+D 排個正方形
    SPOILER
  5. 00:35:029 (1,2,1,2) 試試這樣的?
    SPOILER
  6. 00:52:504 這我覺得這樣好 斜度跟00:52:195 (1) 這Slider尾巴一樣
    SPOILER
  7. 01:00:080 (3,1,2,3) 這樣的flow其實很卡手... 要改的話我建議這樣
    SPOILER
整體來說 節奏大致沒甚麼問題，flow有些地方也需要調整，就是沒有hitsound真的很可惜
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Azure wrote:

Hello for M4M

[General]
  1. 有點驚訝這譜竟然沒有hitsound!? 像這種高BPM又鼓點分明的曲子我建議一定要下音效，絕對會比較好你是指自定义音效么？感觉没什么可加的，于是只加了个clap
    雖然你有下，但完全不夠啊啊啊 (沒有打擊感)
  2. 如果真的覺得找音效很麻煩，那其實現有的音效也就夠了，像是Pata-Mon's Insane就挺好的
  3. 所有難度的tag沒有統一 噫，我zz了，怕他萌的GD忘加Pata-Mon了

[Normal]
  1. 00:29:308 跟Hard問題一樣，NC下在DS改變的NOTE上 ？？？ 所有的note都在DS上啊
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:844、00:29:617 NC拿掉，下在00:29:308 因為DS改變 ？？？ 这一段我是开DS做的啊，1.1x DS没变的
  2. 01:02:555 (2) 弄成這樣好了，因為快壓到前一條Slider了 好
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:308 (2,3,4,5,6) 這裡的下法我覺得可以弄成這樣，不過5拍那個1/4的短滑條就看你自己了那个1/4不在我跟的音轨上，不改
    SPOILER
  2. 00:26:988 (3,4,5,6) 3可以拉遠一點跟vocal的感覺，然後滑條2的尾巴跟34成大三角 (6不用動 一樣在滑條後面) 好
    SPOILER
  3. 00:27:607 這應該是下finish阿怎麼是whistle QAQ 加了
  4. 00:31:318 (6,7,8,9) 利用Ctrl+shift+D 排個正方形 你怎么选出6,7,8,9的？我这里跟本没有6789啊
    SPOILER
  5. 00:35:029 (1,2,1,2) 試試這樣的? 照着样子稍微改了一下
    SPOILER
  6. 00:52:504 這我覺得這樣好 斜度跟00:52:195 (1) 這Slider尾巴一樣 不讲道理，而且俺就是要玩梗
    SPOILER
  7. 01:00:080 (3,1,2,3) 這樣的flow其實很卡手... 要改的話我建議這樣 一个标准的顺时针怎么会卡手？
    SPOILER
整體來說 節奏大致沒甚麼問題，flow有些地方也需要調整，就是沒有hitsound真的很可惜 ？？？？？？？？？？
谢谢~
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
@Azure 是没叠好 改啦
后面哪里其实是漏normalhit了 哨子不太喜欢还是算了
3q~

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Title:Caramel Heaven
TitleUnicode:キャラメルへヴン
Artist:Ryo-kun
ArtistUnicode:りょーくん
Creator:_Yiiiii
Version:Pata-Mon's Insane
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Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
00:31:318 這裡應該是 00:31:318 (1,2,3,4)，因為我把你的note刪了所以nc也沒了

00:29:308 我指的是你的這個梗 NC應該下在00:29:308 而不是後面的紅線上，如果你這裡開著DS做那 00:29:308 (1,2,3) 會這麼近嗎
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Azure wrote:

00:31:318 這裡應該是 00:31:318 (1,2,3,4)，因為我把你的note刪了所以nc也沒了 不了不了，现在的DS是没问题的

00:29:308 我指的是你的這個梗 NC應該下在00:29:308 而不是後面的紅線上，如果你這裡開著DS做那 00:29:308 (1,2,3) 會這麼近嗎 就该那么近，那里是折返滑条，而且你在摸hard的时候的意思是不是distance变了？distance变了是不用加NC的
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Garden
General
  1. add cover utaite to tags
  2. 整体上是underhitsounded了，比如从 00:10:287 - 到主歌开始的那段可以保持2,4clap，后面很多地方也可以跟着曲子加，如果是比较安静的曲子这样以whistle为主的音效下法倒也没什么问题。对于这个你可以再问问其他人的意见，我是觉得你可以再搞下，现在这样打图feedback十分不够啊
Normal
  1. 00:09:050 (1) - 1->1 ds
  2. 00:35:648 (3,1) - 这里几乎贴着底边了，可以整体稍微调整一下
  3. 00:49:875 - 00:52:195 - 00:57:143 - 01:02:092 - 01:07:040 - finish? 如果加的话你的其他难度也加上
  4. 01:09:669 (1) - 转盘停的地方有点迷，啥也没有。不如停在这 01:14:617 - ，如果你实在想keep可以调低点音量，其他难度同
Hard
  1. 00:34:720 (5,1) - 视觉感受1滑条主体部分离5略近，包一下会比较好看
  2. 00:50:184 (2,1) - 可不overlap，要么像01:02:865 (3,4,1) - 一样碰得干脆点
Pata-Mon's Insane
  1. 可以很干净
Insane
  1. 00:08:432 (1,2) - 尾巴稍微消下音，drumsample还是挺吵的
  2. 00:14:927 (5,6) - 要不要ctrlg，45巨近，也可以给00:15:081 (6,1) - 一个跳
  3. 00:52:814 (1,2,3) - 想搞点花样可以这个ctrlg一下，现在这样不够给力啊
  4. 00:54:823 - 漏finish 这里在normal hard加了的，注意下统一
整体挺好，再搞下音效就稳了
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Garden wrote:

General
  1. add cover utaite to tags 虽然不知道是什么意思但是还是加了 XD
  2. 整体上是underhitsounded了，比如从 00:10:287 - 到主歌开始的那段可以保持2,4clap，后面很多地方也可以跟着曲子加，如果是比较安静的曲子这样以whistle为主的音效下法倒也没什么问题。对于这个你可以再问问其他人的意见，我是觉得你可以再搞下，现在这样打图feedback十分不够啊
Normal
  1. 00:09:050 (1) - 1->1 ds 修了，那个滑条是做完后加上去的
  2. 00:35:648 (3,1) - 这里几乎贴着底边了，可以整体稍微调整一下 用4:3 testplay没出去，改起来也麻烦，不改了
  3. 00:49:875 - 00:52:195 - 00:57:143 - 01:02:092 - 01:07:040 - finish? 如果加的话你的其他难度也加上 稍微加了几个地方
  4. 01:09:669 (1) - 转盘停的地方有点迷，啥也没有。不如停在这 01:14:617 - ，如果你实在想keep可以调低点音量，其他难度同 没停在那里，不过也是换了个地方停
Hard
  1. 00:34:720 (5,1) - 视觉感受1滑条主体部分离5略近，包一下会比较好看 不好看，不改了
  2. 00:50:184 (2,1) - 可不overlap，要么像01:02:865 (3,4,1) - 一样碰得干脆点 overlap没了
Insane
  1. 00:08:432 (1,2) - 尾巴稍微消下音，drumsample还是挺吵的 消了，20%
  2. 00:14:927 (5,6) - 要不要ctrlg，45巨近，也可以给00:15:081 (6,1) - 一个跳 修了一下DS，没Ctrl+G
  3. 00:52:814 (1,2,3) - 想搞点花样可以这个ctrlg一下，现在这样不够给力啊 不搞，现在这样已经很反人类了
  4. 00:54:823 - 漏finish 这里在normal hard加了的，注意下统一 加了
整体挺好，再搞下音效就稳了
谢谢！
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding
m4m

normal
00:00:391 (1,1,1,1) - claps sound weird here, can you use another hitsound?
00:15:236 (1) - looks out of place bth
00:32:555 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these are a lot of clickable objects without a pause in between. It's 190 bpm too and it's suppose to be the easiest diff in the set. Recommend to reduce it
00:35:030 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
00:41:370 (3) - how about this rhytmh? http://puu.sh/rJw9P/002cc428a0.jpg . Same goes for the other measures
00:46:318 (3) - was this meant to blanket 00:44:927 (1) ? If so it's off
00:47:401 (1) - clap doesn't fit the spinner end at all, try a drum clap or drum finish
01:03:793 - add circle here? this is a really big sound in the rhythm that you seem to be skipping

hard
00:08:277 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same about hitsounds in normal, also for a hard diff I recommend stacking these.
00:48:638 (5) - try a drum clap or drum finish
00:49:411 (1) - smaller SV would play better imo
00:50:184 (2,1) - the small overlap makes this look unpolished, try moving them apart a bit
00:59:772 (1) - remove clap from tail, sounds out of place

Patamon
01:09:746 (1) - add finish or whistle

Insane
00:00:391 (1) to 00:09:050 (1) - because this is the intro I suggest not to use any spacing increases such as 00:07:504 (8,9) and 00:08:277 (2,1) etc
00:14:617 (3,4,5,6) - it feels weird that all these emphasized, clickable objects are completely unhitsounded
00:52:504 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is really awkward to play, it's linear, the triplets are spaced, and the spacing is short between the triplets. Try increasing the space between the triplets and not have the pattern so linear, it would play a lot better
[]
I didn't really like the claps at all tbh, it just sounds really off. my suggestion would be to use normal sampleset like pata-mon used
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Kisses wrote:

m4m

normal
00:00:391 (1,1,1,1) - claps sound weird here, can you use another hitsound? OK
00:15:236 (1) - looks out of place bth It doesn't
00:32:555 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these are a lot of clickable objects without a pause in between. It's 190 bpm too and it's suppose to be the easiest diff in the set. Recommend to reduce it There are two 1/1 sliders so it doesn't matter
00:35:030 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
00:41:370 (3) - how about this rhytmh? http://puu.sh/rJw9P/002cc428a0.jpg . Same goes for the other measures Good idea
00:46:318 (3) - was this meant to blanket 00:44:927 (1) ? If so it's off Changed to another pattern
00:47:401 (1) - clap doesn't fit the spinner end at all, try a drum clap or drum finish I don't think so
01:03:793 - add circle here? this is a really big sound in the rhythm that you seem to be skipping Fixed

hard
00:08:277 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same about hitsounds in normal, also for a hard diff I recommend stacking these.
00:48:638 (5) - try a drum clap or drum finish
00:49:411 (1) - smaller SV would play better imo Done
00:50:184 (2,1) - the small overlap makes this look unpolished, try moving them apart a bit I tried before, it looked ugly
00:59:772 (1) - remove clap from tail, sounds out of place Done

Insane
00:00:391 (1) to 00:09:050 (1) - because this is the intro I suggest not to use any spacing increases such as 00:07:504 (8,9) and 00:08:277 (2,1) etc OK
00:14:617 (3,4,5,6) - it feels weird that all these emphasized, clickable objects are completely unhitsounded I think circles without hitsound work well here
00:52:504 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is really awkward to play, it's linear, the triplets are spaced, and the spacing is short between the triplets. Try increasing the space between the triplets and not have the pattern so linear, it would play a lot better Idk why so many people don't like this pattern, tho , fixed
[]
I didn't really like the claps at all tbh, it just sounds really off. my suggestion would be to use normal sampleset like pata-mon used Ok, made a big change
Thanks for modding! I'll mod your map later soon
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Yorita Yoshino
[Insane]
00:10:287 (1) - 这之前的whistle声音太怪了
00:09:050 (1,2) -这间距？
00:14:308 (2) - stack，另外这滑条扭得有点过
00:23:277 (3) - flow有点不顺
00:41:834 (4) - 这个拉远一点吧
[PTM]
主歌部分间距我觉得太小了
还有这个跳好像挺莫名的00:26:988 (3,4,5,6) -
其他没啥
[hard]
00:08:432 (1) - 把头部的finish去掉试试？
00:10:287 (1) - 到00:19:875 (4) - 滑条头可以多加一些whistle，只在三连放有点单调了
00:32:555 (1) - stack

整体还行？射个星吧 :)
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

-ClariS- wrote:

[Insane]
00:10:287 (1) - 这之前的whistle声音太怪了 这个我之后单找人问问吧，音效方面我不是很懂
00:09:050 (1,2) -这间距？ 故意的
00:14:308 (2) - stack，另外这滑条扭得有点过 叠了，扭曲程度感觉不是问题
00:23:277 (3) - flow有点不顺 改了00:23:122 (2) - 的位置，现在好了
00:41:834 (4) - 这个拉远一点吧 好

[hard]
00:08:432 (1) - 把头部的finish去掉试试？头和尾的音是一样的，不去了
00:10:287 (1) - 到00:19:875 (4) - 滑条头可以多加一些whistle，只在三连放有点单调了 加了一点
00:32:555 (1) - stack 坐标问题，只能叠成这样了，叠上之后保存了再打开就还是现在这样

整体还行？射个星吧 :)
非常感谢！
Vanilla Vat
30 posts
Joined February 2015
Vanilla Vat
新人摸图请多关照！ :)
挺棒的图，感觉自己提不了什么很有帮助的建议，就提一下自己在排列上的一些看法吧
明显就是在水
[Insane]
00:14:617 (3,4,5,6) - 感觉可以放大一些，比如做个对跳？
00:15:236 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6381160 个人觉得这样摆感觉好一点
00:18:638 (4) - 这个note放上面一点比较好，在下面打起来感觉有点不舒服
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6381173像这样的位置应该会好点吧 :)
00:21:421 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6381182 这里个人觉得摆紧一点好
00:26:215 (1) - 水平翻转一下感觉更好

:) 爷爷有时间的话求摸图https://osu.ppy.sh/s/511417
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Vanilla Vat wrote:

新人摸图请多关照！ :)
挺棒的图，感觉自己提不了什么很有帮助的建议，就提一下自己在排列上的一些看法吧
明显就是在水 新人水多了就不水了
[Insane]
00:14:617 (3,4,5,6) - 感觉可以放大一些，比如做个对跳？ No，四个音明显不一样，而且现在这样成flow
00:15:236 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6381160 个人觉得这样摆感觉好一点 这里用锐角是因为想要强调00:15:545 - 的重音
00:18:638 (4) - 这个note放上面一点比较好，在下面打起来感觉有点不舒服 好
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6381173像这样的位置应该会好点吧 :)
00:21:421 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6381182 这里个人觉得摆紧一点好 的确，间距改小了些
00:26:215 (1) - 水平翻转一下感觉更好 不，现在这样前后的跳都能被强调，要的就是现在的效果

:) 爷爷有时间的话求摸图https://osu.ppy.sh/s/511417 摸完啦
以后M4M记得写在摸的第一行，尤其是先手的时候，因为不写对方可能就不摸你的了
谢谢！
Otosaka-Yu
1,117 posts
Joined August 2013
Otosaka-Yu
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_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Suzuki_1112 wrote:

我出去了所以挂着不好意思没看到

Hard

00:40:906 (2) - 间距可以离00:41:370 (3) - 远点 好
00:43:380 (2,3) - ^ ^

阿姨的in

00:50:958 (1) - 滑条弄好点就像黑天使那样 这个角度和形状已经够了
00:52:504 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 此处音效有问题，此处00:52:814 (1,2,3) - 的00:52:968 (3) - 音效应为soft whistle 现在没错啊
00:55:906 (1) - stack到00:55:133 (2) - 头上 好
00:57:143 (1) - 其实我真的不太喜欢这种摆法，虽然说play起来很爽，但玩的时候大丈夫了滑条也应该修饰一下 这个滑条既把flow掰反了，又美观，不想改
别人说的没错你确实应该学学巴达萌的stack技术 感觉没啥叠的必要啊
没了
谢谢！
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Binguo
[lnsane]
00:00:700 (1) - 这里 我觉得不应该和00:00:854 (2,3) - 叠在一起 因为00:00:700 (1,2) - 听上去和00:00:854 (2,3) - 是有区别的
00:02:246 (7) - 3个单点比较好配合4成为1组
00:05:648 (1,2,3) - 这里和第一组差太大了 没道理 修改
00:08:432 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 全是1/4 但是看起来像是1/2 因为你前面一段和这里视觉间距是差不多的 要么不怂拉大 要么改掉前面
00:11:060 (4,2) - 贴太近
00:26:679 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6393315
00:31:318 (1,2,3,4) - 顺带一题 这个看上去很乱 因为靠的比较近 即不对称 又没有形状 建议修改其他地方也有
01:03:329 (1,3) - 丑
我个人觉得2.4的SV配5星太高了 先静下来http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6393419 folw挺顺的（鼠标玩的） 感觉有些滑条真的是太长

[normal]
00:09:050 (1) - 丑
00:43:999 (4) - 低难度难度不应该出现这种滑条 这很有可能会被DQ（头尾必须要分明）

加油 :) 鼓得拉客
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Binguo wrote:

[lnsane]
00:00:700 (1) - 这里 我觉得不应该和00:00:854 (2,3) - 叠在一起 因为00:00:700 (1,2) - 听上去和00:00:854 (2,3) - 是有区别的 这个早就想改了，但每次看这图都忘了，改了
00:02:246 (7) - 3个单点比较好配合4成为1组 开头段就下四连1/2感觉太多了
00:05:648 (1,2,3) - 这里和第一组差太大了 没道理 修改 好
00:08:432 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 全是1/4 但是看起来像是1/2 因为你前面一段和这里视觉间距是差不多的 要么不怂拉大 要么改掉前面 拉了前面的
00:11:060 (4,2) - 贴太近 改了
00:26:679 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6393315 好
00:31:318 (1,2,3,4) - 顺带一题 这个看上去很乱 因为靠的比较近 即不对称 又没有形状 建议修改其他地方也有 感觉还好，摆正了一点，不大改了
01:03:329 (1,3) - 丑 这种形状挺常见的吧？不改了
我个人觉得2.4的SV配5星太高了 先静下来http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6393419 folw挺顺的（鼠标玩的） 感觉有些滑条真的是太长

[normal]
00:09:050 (1) - 丑 改了
00:43:999 (4) - 低难度难度不应该出现这种滑条 这很有可能会被DQ（头尾必须要分明）改了

加油 :) 鼓得拉客
谢谢！
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
来了

很久之前在骗顶吧有btt这首歌的图，所以一听到就有种超级耳熟的感觉：https://osu.ppy.sh/s/287269 当时应该还没开始流行跳跳跳跳跳吧

Insane

  1. 00:11:061 (4,1,2) - 比较个人向的建议：试试这个？现在这个的话感觉1和2之间没必要，因为2滑条头的音没强到需要卡手flow来强调的地步。
  2. 00:17:246 (4,5,6) - 如果是直的就好了，方向跟后面那根滑条的前半一致，这样看起来养眼些。
  3. 00:21:731 (3,4) - 试试ctrl+g？感觉合曲一些
  4. 00:35:648 (1) - 如果能把弧的开口改成向下的就好了
  5. 00:48:638 (3) - NC
  6. 00:52:504 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建议用短滑+单点的玩法，或者是彼此隔得较开的三连，感觉比较爽
  7. 这图真的不是Ex吗（发呆）（发呆）（发呆）打起来梗感挺强烈的= =

Pata-Mon

  1. 不太推荐用头尾重叠的滑条。尽管不是完全重叠不会unrank，但这个在LI难度相当的坑读图。00:02:246 (4,2) - 00:05:803 (3,4) - 00:18:793 (1,4) - 等等
  2. 00:47:401 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 建议把3,4和7,8 ctrl+g，弄成类似四边形的flow，跟前面的5,6在一起感觉很爽。

Hard

  1. 00:10:906 (3,1,2) - 试试这个？主要是想把1弄成折返，因为00:11:525 - 有音，忽略了总感觉怪怪的
  2. 00:13:844 (1) - 同上。建议把这个弄成折返，然后2 ctrl+g
  3. 00:16:318 (1) - 同上，直接缩短成折返感觉可以

就这样吧。祝你好运~
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
@Kisses
not needed imo

@小激光
这样已经4.3了，还想怎么加．主歌副歌听着差距很明显，摆起来也肯定要有明显差距，主歌还加距，副歌再加，直接奔5*好了．这bpm可是194
那组跳不觉得无理，跳的两个地方都是重音，我也给了音效强调

@Suzuki_1112
没啥不好吧

@阿斗
stack的事，这图难读的可不止那些滑条．作为insane是属于难读的，但并非不合理．玩家读不了是他们要提高的事情
后面那里，1357是重音，现在flow就很好，重音ds也有考虑，keep最好

no change but thanks
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Adol Christin wrote:

来了

很久之前在骗顶吧有btt这首歌的图，所以一听到就有种超级耳熟的感觉：https://osu.ppy.sh/s/287269 当时应该还没开始流行跳跳跳跳跳吧

Insane

  1. 00:11:061 (4,1,2) - 比较个人向的建议：试试这个？现在这个的话感觉1和2之间没必要，因为2滑条头的音没强到需要卡手flow来强调的地步。 改了，不过不是按照下图的方式
  2. 00:17:246 (4,5,6) - 如果是直的就好了，方向跟后面那根滑条的前半一致，这样看起来养眼些。 00:16:782 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我想要的是这个的s形
  3. 00:21:731 (3,4) - 试试ctrl+g？感觉合曲一些 一个大间距应该就够了，那样的话太别手了
  4. 00:35:648 (1) - 如果能把弧的开口改成向下的就好了 额，我个人觉得那样不美观，而且打着不爽
  5. 00:48:638 (3) - NC 已加
  6. 00:52:504 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建议用短滑+单点的玩法，或者是彼此隔得较开的三连，感觉比较爽 之前有考虑过，效果不是太好，不用了
  7. 这图真的不是Ex吗（发呆）（发呆）（发呆）打起来梗感挺强烈的= =

Hard

  1. 00:10:906 (3,1,2) - 试试这个？主要是想把1弄成折返，因为00:11:525 - 有音，忽略了总感觉怪怪的 好
  2. 00:13:844 (1) - 同上。建议把这个弄成折返，然后2 ctrl+g 改了节奏，排列不是按你说的改的
  3. 00:16:318 (1) - 同上，直接缩短成折返感觉可以 ^

就这样吧。祝你好运~
非常感谢！
Lokidoki
374 posts
Joined June 2015
Lokidoki
:? BG submission : http://67.media.tumblr.com/798913b25968 ... 3_1280.png

[Normal]

00:00:622 - Insert brakes like here after other sliders.
00:35:648 (3,1) - Use same slidershapes.
00:37:504 - I suggest using this rhytm due to using same 1/2 reverse sliders this could get uncomfortable. https://puu.sh/s9qIT/382fb03388.png
01:03:329 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is quite hard to read for normal players. Most likely due to tight note placements that look tough.


[Hard]

00:29:927 (2) - I'd stack it with - 00:30:081 (1) - and make them a triple. https://puu.sh/s9qVK/113208a25b.png
00:33:174 - I suggest this patterm : https://puu.sh/s9qXF/c8ea0bfb4d.png


[Pata-Mon's Insane]

00:06:112 - I'd add a precussion note there.
00:27:143 (3,4) - It's better to increase spacing between those notes and (4,5,6) cause vocals are stronger at that part.
I do understand that you don't use streams here to diff being mostly a LI, but those are pretty short streams and you can balance them with 1/4 reverse sliders.


[Insane]

00:10:597 (2,3) - You don't use this pattern at the map anywhere else, so it's bad.
00:28:071 (2,3) - I'd rather blanket them.
00:34:720 (6,7,1,2,1,2) - It's very inconvenient to play because of this strange jump position change.
00:48:638 (1) - I'd want it to be in a straight line with (2).
01:05:803 (1) - This slidershape isn't too good in my opinion.

Good luck.
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-Liddell
75 posts
Joined May 2015
-Liddell
mod from my m4m queue

SPOILER
insane

00:01:009 (3) - just for consistency, having this one as an angled slider feels off. try changing this into a curved slider instead

00:01:473 (4,5) - this should be a slider instead because the following part of the intro uses sliders on that guitar part like this one 00:03:793 (3)

00:12:607 (1) - slider should end at red tick 00:12:916
00:18:793 (1) - slider should end at red tick 00:19:102 try to listen at it carefully :)

tbh the slider end thingy is all over the map. try pressing ctrl+alt+shift+a and it will tell that most of your slider ends are not snapped

01:05:803 (1) - just a personal opinion: this slider is shaped differently with others hmmm. as much as possible, you want to keep consistent with your shapes

01:09:669 (1) - uhm why is this one not aligned with the others o.o


patamon's insane

00:19:411 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow

00:26:988 (3,4,5,6) - the flow in this one seems to be bad. try changing circle 4 and 5's position then stack 6 at number 4's new position

00:41:061 (1) - remove NC
00:41:525 (2) - put NC
00:43:535 (1) - remove NC
00:43:999 (2) - put NC

00:48:638 (1) - remove NC
00:49:411 (2) - put NC

hard

00:11:215 (4,1) - since there's no overlapping in almost the whole diff, try moving the slider a bit so that it doesn't overlap with circle 4

00:22:040 (3,1) - i'm not actually familiar with the rules on a hard diff but i'm not sure if overlapping notes like this is allowed since it makes the reading quite harder. if you think i'm wrong then follow yourself since i'm not actually familiar with the diff XD
00:31:937 (3,1) - ^

normal

fuck i can't mod easy to hard ;_;
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Lokidoki wrote:

:? BG submission : http://67.media.tumblr.com/798913b25968 ... 3_1280.png ohh what's that?

[Normal]

00:00:622 - Insert brakes like here after other sliders. That couldn't be done because it's too close to the slider
00:35:648 (3,1) - Use same slidershapes. ok
00:37:504 - I suggest using this rhytm due to using same 1/2 reverse sliders this could get uncomfortable. https://puu.sh/s9qIT/382fb03388.png ok
01:03:329 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is quite hard to read for normal players. Most likely due to tight note placements that look tough. This is quite slow and it doesn't matter


[Hard]

00:29:927 (2) - I'd stack it with - 00:30:081 (1) - and make them a triple. https://puu.sh/s9qVK/113208a25b.png good idea
00:33:174 - I suggest this patterm : https://puu.sh/s9qXF/c8ea0bfb4d.png no, i mainly followed vocal


[Insane]

00:10:597 (2,3) - You don't use this pattern at the map anywhere else, so it's bad. it's just a simple overlap, it doesn't made a special pattern for players to recognise, so it doesn't matter
00:28:071 (2,3) - I'd rather blanket them. I'd rather have regular DS
00:34:720 (6,7,1,2,1,2) - It's very inconvenient to play because of this strange jump position change. changed a bit
00:48:638 (1) - I'd want it to be in a straight line with (2). ohhh it was like that, fixed
01:05:803 (1) - This slidershape isn't too good in my opinion. but i love it XD

Good luck.
Thanks for modding!

-Liddell wrote:

mod from my m4m queue

SPOILER
insane

00:01:009 (3) - just for consistency, having this one as an angled slider feels off. try changing this into a curved slider instead people will ask me to make a blanket with 00:00:391 (1) - if i do so, but it will be ugly if i do so

00:01:473 (4,5) - this should be a slider instead because the following part of the intro uses sliders on that guitar part like this one 00:03:793 (3) fixed

00:12:607 (1) - slider should end at red tick 00:12:916
00:18:793 (1) - slider should end at red tick 00:19:102 try to listen at it carefully :)

tbh the slider end thingy is all over the map. try pressing ctrl+alt+shift+a and it will tell that most of your slider ends are not snapped idk why there is a missing inherited point, i added back and everything goes well

01:05:803 (1) - just a personal opinion: this slider is shaped differently with others hmmm. as much as possible, you want to keep consistent with your shapes ok, this can be a reason, changed the shape a bit

01:09:669 (1) - uhm why is this one not aligned with the others o.o there is a strong sound so i moved it a bit up


hard

00:11:215 (4,1) - since there's no overlapping in almost the whole diff, try moving the slider a bit so that it doesn't overlap with circle 4 fixed

00:22:040 (3,1) - i'm not actually familiar with the rules on a hard diff but i'm not sure if overlapping notes like this is allowed since it makes the reading quite harder. if you think i'm wrong then follow yourself since i'm not actually familiar with the diff XD this is allowed
00:31:937 (3,1) - ^

normal

fuck i can't mod easy to hard ;_; XD
Thanks for modding!
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Normal
  1. 00:09:050 (1) - remove nc
  2. 整体建议两根长白线一次nc，在nm里面nc切换太快了的话不适宜新手读图
  3. 00:29:308 (2,3) - 换1/1slider
  4. 00:35:030 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 下的太密了，note还堆在一起
  5. 00:55:906 (1,1) - avoid overlap
  6. 01:05:803 (1,1) - ^
Hard
  1. 00:00:391 - to 00:08:741 - 前段滑条声音太吵了，建议vol 50%并加静音滑条
  2. 00:11:215 (4,1) - ds
Pata-Mon's Insane
  1. 00:20:803 (3,4) - 00:30:700 (4,5) - 滑条尾和note明明就是normal音效为什么加whistle，听起来很怪
  2. 00:28:844 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这个放的不太开啊，可以稍微再跳一点
Insane
  1. 00:57:762 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这里不适合overmap放五连，还是下1/2比较好
  2. 01:02:787 (3) - 这里的节奏应该没有3这个note
  3. 01:08:741 (2,3,1,2,3) - 最后这个跳有点小卡手，不如把01:09:205 (2) - 放在01:09:360 (3) - 的位置然后后面五连放右边向上：https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6832826
  4. 01:09:360 (3,4,5,6) - 最后几个clap简直出戏

    看得出来还是新人的排列方式 233
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Koiyuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Normal
  1. 00:09:050 (1) - remove nc 已改
  2. 整体建议两根长白线一次nc，在nm里面nc切换太快了的话不适宜新手读图 已改
  3. 00:29:308 (2,3) - 换1/1slider 好
  4. 00:35:030 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 下的太密了，note还堆在一起 简化了一下，还简化了其他几处
  5. 00:55:906 (1,1) - avoid overlap 改成只叠一点了
  6. 01:05:803 (1,1) - ^
Hard
  1. 00:00:391 - to 00:08:741 - 前段滑条声音太吵了，建议vol 50%并加静音滑条 音量改了静音滑条的话，若果指的是静音所有感觉没啥必要
  2. 00:11:215 (4,1) - ds fixed，然后blanet就没了orz
Insane
  1. 00:57:762 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这里不适合overmap放五连，还是下1/2比较好 已改
  2. 01:02:787 (3) - 这里的节奏应该没有3这个note 已改
  3. 01:08:741 (2,3,1,2,3) - 最后这个跳有点小卡手，不如把01:09:205 (2) - 放在01:09:360 (3) - 的位置然后后面五连放右边向上：https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6832826 01:09:205 (1,2) - 应该是小跳，于是叠在01:08:277 (1) - 尾上了，五连
  4. 01:09:360 (3,4,5,6) - 最后几个clap简直出戏 这是怕他萌下的音效，感觉还好啊

    看得出来还是新人的排列方式 233
非常感谢！

等怕他萌改完摸再update
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
音效那里不是normal音效啊……是低的那种鼓，跟我其他加whistle的地方是一种
跳摆大了
谢摸

@_Yiiiii 结尾那里我没加clap 你大概复制错了

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Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
感觉nm还是有点难，如果有个ez就更好了
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
M4M as requested.
[General]
soft-hitclap.wav is unused I guess? Need to be removed.
Make your white-screen support consistent.

[Easy]
It feels like that it could be renamed as Normal with some difficulty setting enhancements.
00:39:360 (3,1) - A symmetric pattern works better here: https://puu.sh/tqAIc/368ca319fb.png

[Normal]
It feels like that it could be renamed as Advanced with some difficulty setting enhancements.
00:23:122 (2) - Keep it a straight line with 1 and 3: https://puu.sh/tqANZ/c46a3de411.png
00:40:906 (2,3,4) - Confusing rhythm here. Try this as an alternative: https://puu.sh/tqAXI/3db12a739a.png
00:42:452 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:50:958 (3,4,5) - https://puu.sh/tqB3m/c7cb355e4e.png
00:58:226 (3,4) - Keep a linear layout here. https://puu.sh/tqB6U/82ce83e9a1.png
01:05:803 (3,1) - This overlap ought not to be in Normal.
01:09:669 (1) - Keep consistent with your Easy difficult.

[Hard]
00:29:308 (2,1) - The spacing here needs to be enhanced for sure. It could be easily misread as 1/2 patterns currently.
00:44:617 (5) - The whistle on the sldier-end seems come from nowhere. Remove it.

[Insane]
00:09:050 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think drum hitsounds fit better here.

Call me back when you get those fixed.
Last edited by Mafumafu , edited 2 times in total.
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
SPOILER
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