1. Velocity (5.28 stars, 1722 notes)

1. Remove the title, artist, and creator from the tags. They are already listed in the info.
2. Set custom combo colors.
3. Take advantage of kiai.

1. Check AiMod, Ctrl+shift+a.
2. 03:25:863 (1) - This is unsnapped.
3. Ignore the other stuff.

1. HP6
2. 00:06:226 (2) - This isn't a good place to start a slider on a red tick. Don't start sliders on red/blue/yellow ticks unless you have a strong sound that you're like to emphasize there.
3. 00:11:284 (1,2) - This distance doesn't sufficiently demonstrate the 1/1 gap between these objects, especially in a section where 1/2 patterns are placed like 00:05:703 (1,2) - this. I recommend either making more distance or stacking.
4. 00:14:075 (1,2,3) - These 1/4 jump are a little too cruel for this section. i can understand a spacing like this if they needed more emphasis, and were in a section that spaced objects this far, but for this early in the map, I would nerf the spacing here.
5. 00:14:773 (3,4,5) - The spacing here is strange too. There should be more spacing 00:14:947 (4,5) - here to give more emphasis to (5); instead, there is more spacing 00:14:773 (3,4) - here, incorrectly giving emphasis to (4).
6. 00:15:819 (1) - NC, it's recommended for every time you change the SV for easier reading.
7. 00:16:517 (1) - ^
8. 00:18:261 (1,2) - The spacing seems very unfair here. Similar to what I said for 00:14:075 (1,2,3) - here, it gives a strange emphasis to the blue tick
9. 00:18:523 - here.
10. 00:23:843 (1,2,3) - ^ ...I'm sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but if your map has a lot of spacing problems, then you may need to consider remapping parts of it. If you need more help with spacing, or anything else I've mentioned, feel free to ask.

Jonawaga wrote:

M4M
[General]

1. Remove the title, artist, and creator from the tags. They are already listed in the info. Sure.
2. Set custom combo colors. To be honest, I have never touched this before, so I'm glad you brought this up.
3. Take advantage of kiai. Can't really find a place where kiai fits.

[~(Ai)Mod~]

1. Check AiMod, Ctrl+shift+a.
2. 03:25:863 (1) - This is unsnapped. I am aware of this, but the game doesn't seem to allow snapping it. The object begins in one timing section and ends in another... rip.
3. Ignore the other stuff.

[~Mod~]

1. HP6 Sure.
2. 00:06:226 (2) - This isn't a good place to start a slider on a red tick. Don't start sliders on red/blue/yellow ticks unless you have a strong sound that you're like to emphasize there. I see what you're saying. However, I don't think this quite applies to this song (or genre, for that matter).
3. 00:11:284 (1,2) - This distance doesn't sufficiently demonstrate the 1/1 gap between these objects, especially in a section where 1/2 patterns are placed like 00:05:703 (1,2) - this. I recommend either making more distance or stacking. Yup, fixed.
4. 00:14:075 (1,2,3) - These 1/4 jump are a little too cruel for this section. i can understand a spacing like this if they needed more emphasis, and were in a section that spaced objects this far, but for this early in the map, I would nerf the spacing here. Yup, fixed.
5. 00:14:773 (3,4,5) - The spacing here is strange too. There should be more spacing 00:14:947 (4,5) - here to give more emphasis to (5); instead, there is more spacing 00:14:773 (3,4) - here, incorrectly giving emphasis to (4). Fixed.
6. 00:15:819 (1) - NC, it's recommended for every time you change the SV for easier reading. Interesting point. Fixed.
7. 00:16:517 (1) - ^ Fixed.
8. 00:18:261 (1,2) - The spacing seems very unfair here. Similar to what I said for 00:14:075 (1,2,3) - here, it gives a strange emphasis to the blue tick Honestly I'm not sure how it emphasizes the blue tick, but I nerfed the spacing.
9. 00:18:523 - here.
10. 00:23:843 (1,2,3) - ^ ...I'm sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but if your map has a lot of spacing problems, then you may need to consider remapping parts of it. If you need more help with spacing, or anything else I've mentioned, feel free to ask. I don't see anything wrong here... the spacing doesn't seem excessive here imho.

Good Luck with your map~!!

Arutsuki wrote:

nm from q

00:15:116 (5) - make this into a double like the others? doesnt seem to fit in like this Fixed.
00:25:058 (8) - delete this, no sound Fixed.
00:39:184 - I think you should continue the stream part here, making the map easier as the song builds up to be more intense is just weird If I continued the stream, it would be repetitive and boring. In addition, it wouldn't fit well since this section contains more prominent sounds than before.
01:45:638 - delete this timing point, not really neccesarry It is necessary; the sliders are 215bpm.
04:22:001 - 04:22:205 - ^ Also 215bpm.
01:45:638 (6,7,8,9) - I think changing those into a 1/8 slider burst would be a nice touch and would match the sound good, or something like this http://puu.sh/sAOZX/b9b5074e41.jpg It's not 1/8, but I like the aesthetic.
04:21:565 - ^ Still not 1/8.
01:57:323 - this section just sounds undermapped, try mapping that stream sound, would be way more fun I can barely hear any stream sound; it may be more "fun," but I dislike overmapping.
04:33:599 - ^
03:37:743 - same as the previous section, map the streams till the end

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