Hard00:15:644 (1,2,1) - Fix this spacing. It will make it that much easier to hit if you do. (spacing is 1.07, 1.05, 1.02 and all should be 1.0)
00:25:519 - possibly delete the note here so its not just one giant stream here.
00:26:644 (1,2,3,4) - Should be 1.0?
00:29:519 - delete the note here for the same reason as before??
00:30:644 (1,2,3,4) - 1.0
00:45:144 (2,3) - ^
00:48:144 (1) - Snap to 0.67-0.75 with previous note. 1.0 is for the speed up section and it hasn't gotten to the speed up yet.
00:49:644 - Too spread out? I think the beat is primarily 1/2th or at least 1/1. It shouldn't be greater than 1/1
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100642http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100644Maybe it might work better with singular notes 1/1 apart instead of sliders. I know you should have single notes to fill that gap like so in the second screenshot. Eh experiment.
01:31:769 (4) - How about moving this half a beat back and adding two repeats? The second repeat will allow the next slider to be shifted correctly without affecting your transition all that much. I think it sounds better at least.
02:06:394 (3,1) - Please use 1.0. This is throwing me off and I am mishitting.
02:39:644 (4,5) - I don't like this transition. 1.5 is much larger spacing than the other transitions. You kind of don't expect it after the other sliders lull you into a comfortable pace. Could you maybe lower it to 1.3?
02:50:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1.0?
03:07:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1.0 Also maybe you should shift the edges of the sliders so the sliders aren't completely lines up. It sort of looks weird when sliders trail perfectly.
Look at this.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10064703:28:144 (1) - Please use 0.5 snap with previous slider. It's very awkward to transition from slow repeater to fast repeater with the current spacing.
03:30:519 (6,7) - Is the extra spacing really necessary?
03:31:644 (1,2,3,4) - 1.0
03:32:519 (4,5) - Same as 3:30
03:41:019 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - 1.0
04:28:019 (4,5) - 1.0
04:31:019 (2,3) - ^
04:41:644 (1,2) - spacing
Colabhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100889Suggested in IRC ^
Possible transition (Uses 1.7 snap)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100892Suggested in IRC^
00:17:644 (5) - New combo. You're going from ridiculous spacing to normal spacing.
01:26:519 (4) - I don't think this note should exist.
01:38:894 (1) - Make a half beat longer if you extended the similar slider in the previous section.
03:40:644 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Just No. Not enough of a beat for this.
04:02:269 (10,1) - This jump doesn't work IMO.
04:08:269 (9,10,11) - Inconsistant spacing....