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Yousei Teikoku - Kokou no Sousei (Approval)

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Shiirn
Collab:
01:27:644 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - you don't really need the SB, but nice touch - and move 5 to the center?
03:23:519 (10,11) - is this huge, unfitting jump intentional?
05:06:019 (9) - place clap at the end of this slider?

Hard:
C'mon, change to Ar8.
01:12:644 (1) - wat
01:20:644 (1) - wat.2

Insane
02:52:644 (1,1) - sorry, wut
03:20:019 (1) - exorbitant jump
Weez
Oh crap didn't see that insane diff >.<
Insane
01:32:394 (6,7) - Remove both claps here
04:15:644 (1,2) - Can be stacked better

One other thing: I think this can go for ranked :T (Collab only for approval) that's if you create an Easy diff. But that's just what I think.
Topic Starter
Saten

Shiirn wrote:

Collab:
01:27:644 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - you don't really need the SB, but nice touch - and move 5 to the center? done
03:23:519 (10,11) - is this huge, unfitting jump intentional? will ask Teras
05:06:019 (9) - place clap at the end of this slider? ^

Hard:
C'mon, change to Ar8. ooh fsd, changed
01:12:644 (1) - wat .org
01:20:644 (1) - wat.2 .se
need someone who can make pretty sliders~♪

Insane
02:52:644 (1,1) - sorry, wut lol, fixed
03:20:019 (1) - exorbitant jump fixed
(ノ゚ω゚)ノv(ノ゚ω゚)ノv(ノ゚ω゚)ノv(ノ゚ω゚)ノv(ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Thanks Shiirn~♪

Weezy wrote:

Oh crap didn't see that insane diff >.< (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Insane
01:32:394 (6,7) - Remove both claps here removed one, the other one is following the basic drum rhythm
04:15:644 (1,2) - Can be stacked better fixed

One other thing: I think this can go for ranked :T (Collab only for approval) that's if you create an Easy diff. But that's just what I think.
I doubt an Insane with 39m and 5 min and a Hard with the same length will fit for ranking~

Thanks for modding.. oh wait a kd star!?
double thanks :3
Teras

Shiirn wrote:

Collab:
03:23:519 (10,11) - is this huge, unfitting jump intentional? Intentional.
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sirokuro123
star☆
OnosakiHito
Finished 70%. I will finish it this weekend.
Kitsuneko
nice ☆
OnosakiHito
Genkishi
NICE! :)
HineX
star 8-)
Lunah_old
well, overally it's really a nice map, but these jumps (Collab difficulty) :

01:27:769 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - (etc next times) are just unplayable.



also have my star
Norn_NNN
good~~~~:)
Teras

Lunah wrote:

well, overally it's really a nice map, but these jumps (Collab difficulty) :

01:27:769 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - (etc next times) are just unplayable.



also have my star
Guess i'll be faster than Saten-san now even though it's not my part.

We've watched ppl play it, and they can fc it. It's just a tricky part to play/read
TheVileOne
Hard

00:15:644 (1,2,1) - Fix this spacing. It will make it that much easier to hit if you do. (spacing is 1.07, 1.05, 1.02 and all should be 1.0)

00:25:519 - possibly delete the note here so its not just one giant stream here.

00:26:644 (1,2,3,4) - Should be 1.0?

00:29:519 - delete the note here for the same reason as before??

00:30:644 (1,2,3,4) - 1.0

00:45:144 (2,3) - ^

00:48:144 (1) - Snap to 0.67-0.75 with previous note. 1.0 is for the speed up section and it hasn't gotten to the speed up yet.

00:49:644 - Too spread out? I think the beat is primarily 1/2th or at least 1/1. It shouldn't be greater than 1/1

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100642
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100644

Maybe it might work better with singular notes 1/1 apart instead of sliders. I know you should have single notes to fill that gap like so in the second screenshot. Eh experiment.

01:31:769 (4) - How about moving this half a beat back and adding two repeats? The second repeat will allow the next slider to be shifted correctly without affecting your transition all that much. I think it sounds better at least.

02:06:394 (3,1) - Please use 1.0. This is throwing me off and I am mishitting.

02:39:644 (4,5) - I don't like this transition. 1.5 is much larger spacing than the other transitions. You kind of don't expect it after the other sliders lull you into a comfortable pace. Could you maybe lower it to 1.3?

02:50:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1.0?

03:07:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1.0 Also maybe you should shift the edges of the sliders so the sliders aren't completely lines up. It sort of looks weird when sliders trail perfectly.

Look at this.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100647

03:28:144 (1) - Please use 0.5 snap with previous slider. It's very awkward to transition from slow repeater to fast repeater with the current spacing.

03:30:519 (6,7) - Is the extra spacing really necessary?

03:31:644 (1,2,3,4) - 1.0

03:32:519 (4,5) - Same as 3:30

03:41:019 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - 1.0

04:28:019 (4,5) - 1.0

04:31:019 (2,3) - ^

04:41:644 (1,2) - spacing


Colab

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100889
Suggested in IRC ^
Possible transition (Uses 1.7 snap)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100892
Suggested in IRC^

00:17:644 (5) - New combo. You're going from ridiculous spacing to normal spacing.

01:26:519 (4) - I don't think this note should exist.

01:38:894 (1) - Make a half beat longer if you extended the similar slider in the previous section.

03:40:644 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Just No. Not enough of a beat for this.

04:02:269 (10,1) - This jump doesn't work IMO.

04:08:269 (9,10,11) - Inconsistant spacing....
Topic Starter
Saten
Thanks~~♪
Did everything, only one thing I was unsure about

TheVileOne wrote:

00:49:644 - Too spread out? I think the beat is primarily 1/2th or at least 1/1. It shouldn't be greater than 1/1

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100642
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100644
if I change this, I need to change the rest of the pattern~
al2e10
- Insane
01:25:644 (1,2) - Ohh,,, Can you fix it with same distance with 01:26:019 (2,3)? (I means distance snap)
03:03:894 (4,5,6,7) - Same distance snap with 03:03:519 (3,4).
03:08:394 (1) - Remove new combo is okey in here.

- Collab
AP can be lower to 7
01:32:894 (1,2,3) - Not beautiful.

- All
OMG, CARZY
Peace_old_1
;)
theowest
101 STARS! I can't believe I forgot to star this.
Teras

KingsAL2 wrote:

- Collab

01:32:894 (1,2,3) - Not beautiful. Leaving it as it is.
Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kokou no Sousei (Saten-san) [Collab].osu
Verdisphena
TAG2 80%
VelperK


:3
Ikillforpies
niceeeee

Tag2 is crazyyyyyy
Verdisphena
Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kokou no Sousei (Saten-san) [TAG2].osu
Sorry for the big delay orz
Lunah_old

Teras wrote:

Guess i'll be faster than Saten-san now even though it's not my part.

We've watched ppl play it, and they can fc it. It's just a tricky part to play/read
who ? cookiezi only, lol it's just unplayable :S, I really like the song/map, but this part fits off

just remembering 240 BPM 1/2
Verdisphena

oh boy
OzzyOzrock
My bat is a cat.
Wishy

Lunah wrote:

who ? cookiezi only, lol it's just unplayable :S, I really like the song/map, but this part fits off

just remembering 240 BPM 1/2
If you mean those diamond then square jumps, even I can hit them sometimes (I usually miss and fail miserably though) and I'm not a pro or anything.
Teras

Lunah wrote:

Teras wrote:

Guess i'll be faster than Saten-san now even though it's not my part.

We've watched ppl play it, and they can fc it. It's just a tricky part to play/read
who ? cookiezi only, lol it's just unplayable :S, I really like the song/map, but this part fits off

just remembering 240 BPM 1/2
Sigh, not only Cookiezi. Just you that can't handle it then, stop whine please because you can't handle it by yourself. Not my part, and even me that is terribad at jumps can hit those after a couple of tries.
Your choice to complain, I can't really answer this but I'd personally say you should just leave it as it is
Phialis
good map :)
Topic Starter
Saten
Thanks~ :)


Added TAG2 & TAG4

Every diff is in pending now~♪
psyclone
*********
<3<3<3<3

nuff said. :3
Mitiai

Saten-san wrote:

Thanks~ :)


Added TAG2 & TAG4

Every diff is in pending now~♪
Thanks for your "Thanks" :D
Ikillforpies
This map is love!

Edit:tag2 is almost impossible for ctb
Verdisphena

Ikillforpies wrote:

This map is love!

Edit:tag2 is almost impossible for ctb
Really?
Nyan-Zapo
Saten /o/ :)
ElectricShock

Ikillforpies wrote:

This map is love!

Edit:tag2 is almost impossible for ctb
it can clear '-'
but holy....
OnosakiHito
Verdisphena, so pro. lol
ElectricShock

OnosakiHito wrote:

Verdisphena, so pro. lol

That play played by Velperk '-'
OnosakiHito

Verdisphena wrote:


oh boy
Taiko diff..^^
M0Rl0_sk
~☆
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