It plays fine and fits the beat. Got a problem, officer? :<Garven wrote:
[Tenshi's Normal]
00:46:670 (1) - 1st time, cool
00:48:470 (1) - 2nd time okay
01:03:020 (1) - 8th time =_=
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Frank Klepacki - Hell March 2
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It's boring as sin, citizen? Just giving you a hint that your beatmap could probably be improved in that area, if you take some time and effort, even if it's "okay" as-is.Tenshi-nyan wrote:
It plays fine and fits the beat. Got a problem, officer? :<
Anyway, I'll check back when I can if that's all the changes that will happen.
That's not how you answer to modders. As "rude" as Garven's post sounds, he still took the time to have a look at your map and think about it to try to help you improve it. I'm not saying you should bow and kiss his feet for modding, but extremely rude irony is not a way to answer. "It plays fine and fits the beat" is subjective anyway. That's not a good enough reason to justify the use of the same pattern 8 times.Tenshi-nyan wrote:
It plays fine and fits the beat. Got a problem, officer? :<Garven wrote:
[Tenshi's Normal]
00:46:670 (1) - 1st time, cool
00:48:470 (1) - 2nd time okay
01:03:020 (1) - 8th time =_=
That said, I didn't actually look at the map (yet ?), but using the same pattern 8 times is... lacking creativity and gives a very bad feeling about the map. For the same exact rhythm, there are countless patterns you can use that still make sense. Try picking 4 of them and using them.
Decided I didn't want to remove them, but I don't want overlapping notes, so I made a speed descent so we could all comply.
Download: Frank Klepacki - Hell March 2 (zsr123) [Ozzy's Taiko March].osu
Sorry to be quite picky this time ._.
[Easy]
Since you went with the AR this low, maybe reduce OD by one as well so it isn't too unbalanced for the easiest difficulty.
00:10:220 (3,4) - Maybe try to avoid tiny overlaps like this?
01:45:620 (6,1) - ^
[BakaHard]
There's a bunch more small overlaps in the last section, if you want to try and clean it up and make things more presentable, I wouldn't begrudge you for it ;)
(Things like 01:46:820 (3,4) - 01:50:270 (5,6) - etc.)
[Ozzy's Taiko March]
Maybe lower the volume a bit? I can barely hear the music under the taiko hits.
[Insane]
01:18:320 (5,6) - This is pretty tricky since all the parts up to here, during this beat in the song there's a pause along with the jump, so having a jump so suddenly without very much musical cue is pretty difficult to justify.
Edit:
Rebub~
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Since you went with the AR this low, maybe reduce OD by one as well so it isn't too unbalanced for the easiest difficulty.
00:10:220 (3,4) - Maybe try to avoid tiny overlaps like this?
01:45:620 (6,1) - ^
[BakaHard]
There's a bunch more small overlaps in the last section, if you want to try and clean it up and make things more presentable, I wouldn't begrudge you for it ;)
(Things like 01:46:820 (3,4) - 01:50:270 (5,6) - etc.)
[Ozzy's Taiko March]
Maybe lower the volume a bit? I can barely hear the music under the taiko hits.
[Insane]
01:18:320 (5,6) - This is pretty tricky since all the parts up to here, during this beat in the song there's a pause along with the jump, so having a jump so suddenly without very much musical cue is pretty difficult to justify.
Edit:
Rebub~
:U
Topic Starter
thank youGarven wrote:
[Easy]
Since you went with the AR this low, maybe reduce OD by one as well so it isn't too unbalanced for the easiest difficulty.done
00:10:220 (3,4) - Maybe try to avoid tiny overlaps like this? fixed
01:45:620 (6,1) - ^fixed
[BakaHard]
There's a bunch more small overlaps in the last section, if you want to try and clean it up and make things more presentable, I wouldn't begrudge you for it
(Things like 01:46:820 (3,4) - 01:50:270 (5,6) - etc.)should be all fixed now > <
[Ozzy's Taiko March]
Maybe lower the volume a bit? I can barely hear the music under the taiko hits. lower 25%
[Insane]
01:18:320 (5,6) - This is pretty tricky since all the parts up to here, during this beat in the song there's a pause along with the jump, so having a jump so suddenly without very much musical cue is pretty difficult to justify. ok, normal spacing now.
Y' know what? I love it now.
你忘记给lepidopodus KUDOSO了吧 
- Baka
Easy
Star~
- 01:18:620 (7) - This slider is a bit hidden by 01:16:820 (4). It would be better if you make this slider more visible, else it's confusing for new players.
- 01:39:320 - As this break is short and as you have enable the letterbox during breaks, it looks ugly to have a letterbox which appears and disappears in less than 2 seconds. Consider removing the letterbox (in each difficulty).
- 01:39:320 - Same as easy
- 01:21:320 - Add a note here with a clap, else it looks really weird because it needs a clap there, and without it it breaks the rhythm.
Star~
Topic Starter
KuraiPettan wrote:
EasyBakaHard
- 01:18:620 (7) - This slider is a bit hidden by 01:16:820 (4). It would be better if you make this slider more visible, else it's confusing for new players.
- 01:39:320 - As this break is short and as you have enable the letterbox during breaks, it looks ugly to have a letterbox which appears and disappears in less than 2 seconds. Consider removing the letterbox (in each difficulty).
Shiki's March
- 01:39:320 - Same as easy
I think it would be better if you can fix this mod. You can fix it when an other BAT will mod your map, or pop your bubble and ask a MAT/BAT to rebubble your map. Anyway, good map ;D
- 01:21:320 - Add a note here with a clap, else it looks really weird because it needs a clap there, and without it it breaks the rhythm.
Star~
it's not hidden and it's visible. so , no change , sorry..
about [Shiki's March]
shiki thinks there is no need to add that clap. ( and me too.. and it will be weird if there is a clap there IMO..)
and letterbox is now removed
thank you
I wish all rechecks were this easy.
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Modding stuffs.
[General]
- I'd prefer you use 1/4s instead of 1/8s, but I guess it's okay.
- Set offset to 620, it makes the main menu work better.
- Use Tick Rate 2, please.
[Easy]
In general, I think your combos should be shorter for Easy.
01:14:720 (7,1) - Blanket could be much better here.
[BakaHard]
00:24:620 (1,2,3) - It's weird how the spacing suddenly changes here.
01:34:220 (3,4) - New combo for both of these to prevent the drain from being too harsh.
[Insane]
Spacing was odd but readable.
[Shiki's March]
00:23:120 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make these notes not overlap.
00:36:020 (8) - Have this blanket (5).
01:24:620 - It would be nice if you could map through this break.
Done!
[General]
- I'd prefer you use 1/4s instead of 1/8s, but I guess it's okay.
- Set offset to 620, it makes the main menu work better.
- Use Tick Rate 2, please.
[Easy]
In general, I think your combos should be shorter for Easy.
01:14:720 (7,1) - Blanket could be much better here.
[BakaHard]
00:24:620 (1,2,3) - It's weird how the spacing suddenly changes here.
01:34:220 (3,4) - New combo for both of these to prevent the drain from being too harsh.
[Insane]
Spacing was odd but readable.
[Shiki's March]
00:23:120 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make these notes not overlap.
00:36:020 (8) - Have this blanket (5).
01:24:620 - It would be nice if you could map through this break.
Done!
Topic Starter
thank youSapphireGhost wrote:
Modding stuffs.
[General]
- I'd prefer you use 1/4s instead of 1/8s, but I guess it's okay.
- Set offset to 620, it makes the main menu work better. done
- Use Tick Rate 2, please.
[Easy]
In general, I think your combos should be shorter for Easy.
01:14:720 (7,1) - Blanket could be much better here.
[BakaHard]
00:24:620 (1,2,3) - It's weird how the spacing suddenly changes here.
01:34:220 (3,4) - New combo for both of these to prevent the drain from being too harsh.done
[Insane]
Spacing was odd but readable.
[Shiki's March]
00:23:120 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make these notes not overlap.
00:36:020 (8) - Have this blanket (5).
01:24:620 - It would be nice if you could map through this break.
Done!
Okay, things look good. Keep in mind this is the last time I can rebubble. Good luck!
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Use less smiliestheowest wrote:
I wish I could get BATs just as easy as you do.. NOBODY WANTS TO MOD MY BEATMAP! ;_;
lol
Topic Starter
theowest wrote:
I wish I could get BATs just as easy as you do.. NOBODY WANTS TO MOD MY BEATMAP! ;_;
I wish I could help you , but I'm really not good at modding.
anyway I'll see what I can do for your map. good luck
btw . I dont think I can find BATs easily @ @
Edit: I mean your others pending map
lol
personally I could of done without the two insane but over the map set has a great lower lvl flow the double insane shake it up a bit. Good job and try to work with your flow on the hard to insane gap, trust me i know it is hard and even harder with guest diffs. But overall job job and keep up the great work I hope to see more from you 
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恭喜啊~ >w<
（虽然我更喜欢星际。。
Love RA <3
But Taiko diff is so bad. It makes me sad. :[
But Taiko diff is so bad. It makes me sad. :[
Topic Starter
looks like it just happened for a while , now it's okay to downloadBlazingFX wrote:
I am unable to download this beatmap; it...has no size! just an empty file
bad? @ @.. but I like this taiko diffMitiai wrote:
Love RA <3
But Taiko diff is so bad. It makes me sad. :[