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Aigio Vono - Savanna (demo cut)

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Sooslick
71 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Sooslick
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 11 мая 2023 г. at 21:53:59

Artist: Aigio Vono
Title: Savanna (demo cut)
Tags: House Trance Electronic Progressive
BPM: 125,99
Filesize: 1784kb
Play Time: 01:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2,65 stars, 131 notes)
  2. Insane (3,35 stars, 140 notes)
  3. Normal (1,79 stars, 84 notes)
Download: Aigio Vono - Savanna (demo cut)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1 minute long demo of progressive house, composed by Aigio Vono (aka Igor Portnov). Sadly, composer lost his project files, so he will never finish it.
Last edited by Sooslick , edited 25 times in total.
Thyicecreamman
13 posts
Joined May 2016
Thyicecreamman
General
  1. You have a bit of symmetry in you maps which isn't much of a problem since it doesn't seem to affect your spacing, but it does give it the feel of an older map.
  2. This song has rather difficult rhythm to follow so a lot of the comments I make will be about sticking to the rhythm.
Normal
  1. Overall it looks good, the spacing is consistent, and there aren't any glaring issues. I noticed a couple things that took me a while to understand rhythmically.
  2. The first is that you have sliders with half beats between them at 00:04:860 (2,3) 00:12:479 (2,3) 00:20:098 (2,3) 00:27:718 (2,3) 00:35:337 (2,3) 00:42:957 (2,3) 00:50:576 (2,3) and 00:58:196 (2,3). While they do seem to go with the song, it was confusing to me at first so I thought I would point that out.
  3. Another thing is the groups of three notes at 00:10:574 (2,3,4) 00:25:813 (2,3,4) and 00:44:862 (2,3,4). They don't seem to particularly go with the song, and while it seems simple, may confuse a new player.
Hard
  1. CS 5 and HP 7 seems a little high for a two star map.
  2. The sliders seem to be the main thing in this map. I would avoid trying to make symmetrical sliders, or ones that are perfectly vertical or horizontal, or are just abnormally shaped for whatever reason.
  3. 00:07:717 (1) This slider looks a little weird, it's symmetrical and I don't see how its shape fits the song.
  4. 00:22:956 (1) Oddly shaped slider.
  5. 00:24:861 (1,2) There are a few things I don't like about these sliders. Aside from being perfectly horizontal, which isn't really that bad, they overlap. A lot of people really don't like overlapping sliders because It makes it more difficult to see where you need to go. In addition, the player has to make a large jump, between the sliders, breaking the spacing that the map had so far. There wasn't anything I could hear in the song that let the player know this, either.
  6. 00:27:956 (3,1) More overlapping sliders.
  7. 00:35:575 (3,1) These notes are one and a half beats apart, but they're right next to each other, which I think is a little confusing.
  8. 00:47:719 (1) Oddly shaped slider.
  9. 00:48:671 (3) Oddly shaped slider.
Insane
  1. Make sure you're not overmapping. For example at 00:03:431 there's a slider that, while it's not difficult to follow, doesn't particularly go with the song. Same thing with the three notes at 00:04:622 and the other times you have those patterns in the map.
  2. CS 5 still seems a little high for this many stars, and HP 8 is high even for very high star maps.
  3. 00:11:527 (1,2,3) All of these notes overlap in some way, but they are not evenly spaced, so to me it seems confusing.
  4. 00:25:813 (5,6,7,1,2,3) Overlapping and not evenly spaced.
  5. 00:31:528 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) This is a pretty hard section for a rather mellow part of the song.
  6. 00:34:385 (1,2,3,4,1) Overlapping and not evenly spaced.
  7. 00:36:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) The jumps from 2 - 3 and 6 - 7 are not the same distance as the rest of the jumps.
  8. 00:45:338 (7,8) There isn't anything in the song suggesting a jump from 7 - 8.
  9. 00:50:100 (2) Oddly shaped slider.
  10. 00:55:338 (1,2,3) These notes kind of overlap.
Sorry about the formatting I'm still pretty new to this.
Hope I wasn't too harsh! :?
Lumario
245 posts
Joined March 2016
Lumario
Normal diff:

Did not find anything noteworthy, Sorry

Hard diff:

Add a circle in between 00:04:622 (2) - and 00:05:098 (3) - so it fits the song better
Same here add circles in between 00:06:526 (2) - 00:07:003 (3) - and 00:07:479 (4)

[You actually made this multiple times I think I know what you tried to do there but I think you should keep orientating the map after the same sounds in the music [otherwise you end up switching every few moments in between them which could be confusing]]

Insane diff:
00:03:431 (6) - Make this slider shorter [otherwise it kinda sounds weird]
Add another circle before this one 00:21:051 (1) - [otherwise there's a beat missing]
Same as above 00:27:242 (2)
Try to sync these combos up with the "foreground" of the song ( 00:31:528 (1) - 00:31:766 (2) - 00:32:004 (3) - 00:32:242 (4) - 00:32:480 (1) - 00:32:718 (2) - 00:32:956 (3) - 00:33:194 (4) ) I think it would fit better, than syncing it up with the "background" of it
Just an idea of mine: from this 00:53:433 (1) - point onwards I would make the map again follow the "foreground" of the music as the song is winding down, to have a more "relaxed" ending

I hope this is helping you to improve your map :3
Luma
Sooslick
71 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Sooslick
Thyicecreamman,
SPOILER
>This song has rather difficult rhythm to follow so a lot of the comments I make will be about sticking to the rhythm.
Fixed hitsounds on all diffs. This may improve readability of track's rhythm.


Normal
I didn't touch anything (exclude hitsounds - they improves the understanding of rhythm).


Hard
>CS 5 and HP 7 seems a little high for a two star map.
Reduced HP and AR. I Didn't touch the CS

>This slider looks a little weird, it's symmetrical and I don't see how its shape fits the song.
mmm fixed???

>Oddly shaped slider.
Fixed. All three times.

>Aside from being perfectly horizontal, which isn't really that bad, they overlap...
Fixed

>More overlapping sliders.
Particulary fixed.
???

>These notes are one and a half beats apart, but they're right next to each other, which I think is a little confusing.
New hitsounds bla-bla-bla
Also I added one note by analogy with patterns from beginning


Insane
>overmapping
>at 00:03:431 there's a slider
mmm... not fixed, but I changed a few beats

>Same thing with the three notes at 00:04:622
All's okay

>CS 5 still seems a little high for this many stars, and HP 8 is high even for very high star maps
mmm,,, I Didn't touch this parameters, but I changed AR )))

>All of these notes overlap in some way, but they are not evenly spaced, so to me it seems confusing.
Spacing fixed

>Overlapping and not evenly spaced.
Fixed. Twice

>This is a pretty hard section for a rather mellow part of the song.
All's okay

>The jumps from 2 - 3 and 6 - 7 are not the same distance as the rest of the jumps.
3 pixels. Okay. Okaay. Fixed )))

>There isn't anything in the song suggesting a jump from 7 - 8.
Reduced (= fixed???)

>Oddly shaped slider.
Fixed

>These notes kind of overlap.
I fix it at last bar before spinner. Now all's okay



Luma,
SPOILER
Hard
>Add a circle in between 00:04:622 (2) - and 00:05:098 (3) - so it fits the song better
I added hitsounds. This may improve readability of track's rhythm without adding extra notes


Insane
>Make this slider shorter
Ok!

>Add another circle before this one 00:21:051 (1) - [otherwise there's a beat missing]
Ok!
Also i added this note earlier in similar pattern...

>Same as above 00:27:242 (2)
...but not here

>Try to sync these combos up with the "foreground" of the song...
I didn't understand it (((

>Just an idea of mine...
It would be possible with beginning of drums. Unfortunately, track was end.
Buuut it's looks good.
makisokk
928 posts
Joined August 2013
makisokk
Привет, это щит мод от меня
[Hard]
  • 00:02:004 (1,2,3,4) - Сделай больше спейсинг, так кажется что они стоят 3/4 друг к другу
    00:05:100 (3) - ^
    00:08:671 (4) - Считаю этот слайдер нужно сделать округленным
    00:10:100 (2) - ^
    00:14:148 (2,3,4,5) - Слишком большой спейсинг с по сравнению с 00:10:576 (3,4,5,6) -
    00:19:862 (2) - Сделать спэйсинг побольше, как тут 00:18:910 (4) -
    00:23:434 (2,3) - Нажми ctrl+shift+R И закрути на минус 18 градусов
    00:24:386 (5) - Тогда тут получается овералп, сделай этот слайдер дальше
    00:26:767 (1) - Сделай такой же спейсинг как и тут 00:25:815 (3,4,5,6) -
    00:27:720 (2) - Ноту передвинь на x367 y80
    00:28:672 (1) - Думаю лучше отодвинуть влево
    00:29:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - Про спейсинг я тебе уже говорил
    00:35:101 (2,3,4) - Тут довольно сложный момент, я бы поставил между ними ноты, а то так при первой игре кажется что нужно нажимать на этом тике 00:35:339 (3) - , а там нету ноты= мисс
    00:35:339 (3,4) - Воу воу полечге с спейсингом, 00:35:815 (5) - и тут ноту пропустил
    00:41:054 (3,4,5,6) - ^
    00:44:387 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
    00:50:578 (3,5) - Пропускаешь ноты
    00:52:245 (2,3,4,5,6) - Тут уже сделанно получше, но все же нужно уменьшить спэйс
[Insane]
  • Предлагаю назвать light Insane
    00:03:433 (6) - WHY?
    00:13:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Вот тут уже перебор с спэйсом
    00:18:672 (6) - 2 WHY?
    00:20:815 (6,1) - Стак ровнее
    00:27:720 (3) - Вместо этого просто 2 ноты на белый и красный тик
    00:34:387 (1,2,3,4) - очень странное решение, ремап в со спэйсингом
    00:38:673 (2) - Так же 2 ноты
Ладно, помог чем смог, удачи с картой
Sooslick
71 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Sooslick
makisokk,

> 00:02:004 (1,2,3,4) - Сделай больше спейсинг, так кажется что они стоят 3/4 друг к другу
> 00:05:100 (3) - ^
ok

> 00:08:671 (4) - Считаю этот слайдер нужно сделать округленным
> 00:10:100 (2) - ^
а тут не ok

> 00:14:148 (2,3,4,5) - Слишком большой спейсинг с по сравнению с 00:10:576 (3,4,5,6) -
ok

> 00:19:862 (2) - Сделать спэйсинг побольше, как тут 00:18:910 (4) -
не очень понял, но что-то поправил

> 00:23:434 (2,3) - Нажми ctrl+shift+R И закрути на минус 18 градусов
не понравился результат, переделал вручную. ok

> 00:24:386 (5) - Тогда тут получается овералп, сделай этот слайдер дальше
т.к. переделал вручную, оверлапа не было

> 00:26:767 (1) - Сделай такой же спейсинг как и тут 00:25:815 (3,4,5,6) -
вроде ok и пофиксил, но уже не помню, что там было

> 00:27:720 (2) - Ноту передвинь на x367 y80
тут мне нужен скачок в 1.5х, поэтому я просто подвинул ноту вверх

> 00:28:672 (1) - Думаю лучше отодвинуть влево
ok

> 00:29:387 (2,3,4,5,6) - Про спейсинг я тебе уже говорил
ok

> 00:35:101 (2,3,4) - Тут довольно сложный момент, я бы поставил между ними ноты, а то так при первой игре кажется что нужно нажимать на этом тике 00:35:339 (3) - , а там нету ноты= мисс
ритмический рисунок повторяется, в первой половине таких моментов было аж два

> 00:35:339 (3,4) - Воу воу полечге с спейсингом, 00:35:815 (5) - и тут ноту пропустил
со спейсингом была бы бяда, если бы вставил ноту. Так тут все ok

> 00:41:054 (3,4,5,6) - ^
пофиксил безумную ноту 5, остальное оставил как есть (музыка затухает, расстояние наращивается)

> 00:44:387 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
ok

> 00:50:578 (3,5) - Пропускаешь ноты
пропускаю умышленно. В музыке режут частоты -> не слышно последнего бита -> нет и последней ноты

> 00:52:245 (2,3,4,5,6) - Тут уже сделанно получше, но все же нужно уменьшить спэйс
оставил как есть (музыка затухает, расстояние наращивается)
немного выровнял спейсинг




> 00:03:433 (6) - WHY?
сам хз. Если еще раз кто-нибудь про это место спросит - сменю, пока не имею ни малейшего понятия, чем

> 00:13:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Вот тут уже перебор с спэйсом
Тут все нормально (1.6х), включая скачок на триплет (2.0х)

> 00:18:672 (6) - 2 WHY?
Повторяется лейтмотив - повторяется и ритмический рисунок

> 00:20:815 (6,1) - Стак ровнее
ok

> 00:27:720 (3) - Вместо этого просто 2 ноты на белый и красный тик
ok
Исправил по-другому: привел в соответствие с ритмическим рисунком 15 секунд назад

> 00:34:387 (1,2,3,4) - очень странное решение, ремап в со спэйсингом
ok

> 00:38:673 (2) - Так же 2 ноты
ok

> Предлагаю назвать light Insane
Я пытался... Скажем так, заинсанить эту карту, но в итоге ограничился стремными экспериментами с лютыми скачками.
Теперь я не могу пройти свою карту сам :D
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