Cuvelia - Tenkuu no Yoake [OsuMania]

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ZZHBOY

Yoyupond wrote:

我来水摸了hhhhhhhhh(求不打
00:42:970这里填上一个把音都对准呗,后面00:43:270也是,之后的部分也都这样填上吧,不然看着略难受XD 这里跟的另一个音 这些音就不跟啦
00:45:570 (45570|3,45770|3) - 往左挪一下,同时00:45:970 (45970|0,46170|0) - 往右挪,音高对的不太准
01:44:970 这里要不填个LN把那个Reverse Cymbal跟上?感觉加了有点乱 就不跟了
00:54:370 (54370|3) - 这个LN好突兀的感觉,考虑去掉吧,还有00:56:270 (56270|3) - 也是 感觉跟旋律挺好 钥匙还有人觉得不好我就删了吧
01:15:370 (75370|3) - 往左挪一位
01:14:270 (74270|0,74370|1,74370|3,74470|2) - 改成01:14:270 (74270|2,74370|0,74370|3,74470|1) - 这样个人认为好看些


大体上就这些吧,完成度挺高的了,毕竟贼贼爱吃(啊,我觉得又一张神图被我玷污了
感谢大佬
paperlens
姑且来ZZB这边BB一波
首先 don't forget my kudosu
然后 我是来喷的,是完全不顾mapper作图意图的mod
而且还不提出具体意见,直接喷你这样不行的那种

1.
00:28:970 (28970|2,29070|0,29070|3,29170|1) - Ctrl+H
00:30:570 (30570|1,30670|3,30670|0,30770|2) - Ctrl+H
注意使用1/2的jack。

2.
00:35:270 (35270|1,35370|2) - ctrl+H
00:35:970 - 这是在随机排列?
你的pattern怎么没有规律性

3.
00:36:970 - 这段干啥 re
做1/8可以 做这样的1/8不行

4.
00:38:570 (38570|1,38670|0,39170|1,39270|0) - 凭什么

5.
00:39:970 - 从这里开始好像有大量snap错误,我不确定。有原谱参照么?

6.
00:39:970 - 从这里开始
一、这些1/6 不知道你在搞什么回转寿司 你的1/6pattern只有楼梯么 我知道这是和弦钢琴你觉得楼梯好抓
二、1/6和1/4之间完全没有做出区分,导致普通玩家在玩的时候产生混淆判定爆破,大触在玩的时候会感觉很累
三、抓音没有轻重,一味向难度低头求和
四、pitch抓的贼差
五、特色完全没有体现,无论是曲子的特色还是谱子的特色
综上 0分

7.
00:54:570 - 抓音可以可是不要楼梯。很爽的一段被你变成滚车轮

8.
01:07:170 - 从这里开始的1/4我严重怀疑你全都是random mapping。可以摘耳机了
注意低音钢琴和次重音的交替演奏是这段的特色

9.
01:19:970 - 0分抓音
认真点听pitch

10.
01:45:570 - jack可以,nonstop1/4不可以。
这段的钢琴这么有特色这么好听,你还在用note去抓那个循环的hithat

以上
可以在以后的图改进 这张和上张都比你以前的图好多了
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

paperlens wrote:

姑且来ZZB这边BB一波
首先 don't forget my kudosu
然后 我是来喷的,是完全不顾mapper作图意图的mod
而且还不提出具体意见,直接喷你这样不行的那种

1.
00:28:970 (28970|2,29070|0,29070|3,29170|1) - Ctrl+H
00:30:570 (30570|1,30670|3,30670|0,30770|2) - Ctrl+H
注意使用1/2的jack。

2.
00:35:270 (35270|1,35370|2) - ctrl+H
00:35:970 - 这是在随机排列?
你的pattern怎么没有规律性

3.
00:36:970 - 这段干啥 re
做1/8可以 做这样的1/8不行

4.
00:38:570 (38570|1,38670|0,39170|1,39270|0) - 凭什么

5.
00:39:970 - 从这里开始好像有大量snap错误,我不确定。有原谱参照么?

6.
00:39:970 - 从这里开始
一、这些1/6 不知道你在搞什么回转寿司 你的1/6pattern只有楼梯么 我知道这是和弦钢琴你觉得楼梯好抓
二、1/6和1/4之间完全没有做出区分,导致普通玩家在玩的时候产生混淆判定爆破,大触在玩的时候会感觉很累
三、抓音没有轻重,一味向难度低头求和
四、pitch抓的贼差
五、特色完全没有体现,无论是曲子的特色还是谱子的特色
综上 0分

7.
00:54:570 - 抓音可以可是不要楼梯。很爽的一段被你变成滚车轮

8.
01:07:170 - 从这里开始的1/4我严重怀疑你全都是random mapping。可以摘耳机了
注意低音钢琴和次重音的交替演奏是这段的特色

9.
01:19:970 - 0分抓音
认真点听pitch

10.
01:45:570 - jack可以,nonstop1/4不可以。
这段的钢琴这么有特色这么好听,你还在用note去抓那个循环的hithat

以上
可以在以后的图改进 这张和上张都比你以前的图好多了
好 排列都改了
pocket-Gao
hi 种种花

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

咦 反震你好
01:33:070 (93070|2,93170|3,93870|1,93970|0,94670|3,94770|2,95470|0,95570|1) - 可以考虑跟音高摆成 |1|3| ; |2|4|,
相应 01:36:270 (96270|3,96370|1,97070|0,97170|2,97870|2,97970|0,98670|1,98770|3) - 可以换过来 |1|2| ; |2|3| ; |3|4|

没别的问题了
00:37:570 (37570|3,37770|3,37970|3,38170|3) - 这一段有点怪,前面的鼓点都抓了 这里突然不抓 变1/1了
可以考虑1/4拍 |1|→|2|→|3|→|4|→|1|→|2|→|3|→|4|

01:04:370 - |4|加1note吧
打了下比以前降低难度了? 挺好的

01:41:870 (101870|0,101870|2,102270|0,102270|2) - 这两处的琴音太轻了,打起来完全没感觉,没必要2 note
如果想改有些1/6的地方可以加:这样的pattern


good luck
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

pocket-Gao wrote:

hi 种种花

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

咦 反震你好
01:33:070 (93070|2,93170|3,93870|1,93970|0,94670|3,94770|2,95470|0,95570|1) - 可以考虑跟音高摆成 |1|3| ; |2|4|,
相应 01:36:270 (96270|3,96370|1,97070|0,97170|2,97870|2,97970|0,98670|1,98770|3) - 可以换过来 |1|2| ; |2|3| ; |3|4|

没别的问题了
00:37:570 (37570|3,37770|3,37970|3,38170|3) - 这一段有点怪,前面的鼓点都抓了 这里突然不抓 变1/1了
可以考虑1/4拍 |1|→|2|→|3|→|4|→|1|→|2|→|3|→|4|感觉1/4太乱了 就干脆1/1;

01:04:370 - |4|加1note吧
打了下比以前降低难度了? 挺好的

01:41:870 (101870|0,101870|2,102270|0,102270|2) - 这两处的琴音太轻了,打起来完全没感觉,没必要2 note
如果想改有些1/6的地方可以加:这样的pattern


good luck
感谢摸得
[Crz]Makii
随便写点
1 2 3 4
[Another]
  1. 00:29:570 - 这一节1/4都有音的 摆个121212或者232323比较合曲 空出空来感觉不对劲
  2. 00:32:770 - ^
  3. 00:37:370 (37370|3,37420|2,37470|1,37520|0) - 这1/4吧 1/8还没开始
  4. 00:47:970 - 00:48:370 - 这没1/6的吧 放早了 00:41:570 - 同理
  5. 01:19:970 (79970|1) - move to 01:19:870 - 打起来更好
  6. 01:35:470 (95470|3,95570|3) - 移到3去 这里没升调 4轨道听起来就很怪因为01:33:070 (93070|3,93170|3,93870|3,93970|3) - 这都是高音 后面类似降调01:36:270 (96270|2,96370|2) - 就该移到2了
  7. 02:01:570 - 02:01:970 - 02:02:770 - 都加一个?有点区分度

好了就扯这些 打起来还是挺爽的
AgeSheRi
没有老外莫得我怎么复制给你莫得???
Wonki
yo

  1. Uncheck widescreen support in normal, hyper.
00:29:570 (29570|2,29870|2,30170|2) - tricky to play. Follow this http://puu.sh/s2DyE/9cf1db8fe5.jpg

00:32:770 (32770|0,33070|0,33370|0) - It is the same as the above.

01:39:170 - ~ 01:40:770 - It has too many notes compare to hyper diff. Switch normal and hyper.

01:42:370 - ~ 01:45:170 - It is the same as the above.

02:03:070 (123070|1,123070|2) - same.
00:26:770 - add 1note? It matches music well if you add note here.

00:30:370 - add note. 00:28:770 -, 00:27:170 - It's more reasonable to add note here compare to this.

00:31:970 - It is the same as the above.

01:19:170 - , 01:19:370 - add note. 01:17:770 (77770|2,77770|3,77970|1,77970|2,78170|1,78170|0) - It's more reasonable to add note here compare to this.
00:26:770 - 00:26:770 - add 2note? It matches music well if you add note here.

00:41:836 (41836|1,41903|0,41970|1,42036|2,42103|1) - It's too hard to play well. I think that can be changed to get along with both hand.

00:52:770 (52770|2) - delete. too hard

01:25:270 (85270|2) - Jack can be confusing that came out suddenly. Suggest normal pattern.

01:50:670 (110670|2,110670|1) - move to 3 4. Good balance in hand if it is moved.


okii done
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Wonki wrote:

yo

  1. Uncheck widescreen support in normal, hyper.
00:26:770 - add 1note? It matches music well if you add note here. emm the sound there is not clear enough so i empty there.

00:30:370 - add note. 00:28:770 -, 00:27:170 - It's more reasonable to add note here compare to this.

00:31:970 - It is the same as the above.

01:19:170 - , 01:19:370 - add note. 01:17:770 (77770|2,77770|3,77970|1,77970|2,78170|1,78170|0) - It's more reasonable to add note here compare to this.
00:26:770 - 00:26:770 - add 2note? It matches music well if you add note here. same to hyper

00:41:836 (41836|1,41903|0,41970|1,42036|2,42103|1) - It's too hard to play well. I think that can be changed to get along with both hand.

00:52:770 (52770|2) - delete. too hard

01:25:270 (85270|2) - Jack can be confusing that came out suddenly. Suggest normal pattern. they have same pitch so kept

01:50:670 (110670|2,110670|1) - move to 3 4. Good balance in hand if it is moved.


okii done
thanks for mod :3
_Stan
来摸个ZZHBOY大佬

|1|2|3|4|

fanzhen's Normal
  1. 00:31:170 - 这里的键位设置不太平衡,从00:31:170 - 到00:32:770 - ,Col 1 和 Col 2 没有任何note,个人建议如图,而且00:31:970 (31970|2) - 这个音高明显比00:31:570 (31570|2,31770|3) - 这两个要高
  2. 01:37:170 (97170|2) - 和01:37:570 (97570|2) - 个人建议不要放在用一Col,因为明显是两个不同的音高,是否考虑调整一下位置??
  3. 02:03:070 (123070|2) - 个人建议移除1个note,因为这里没有鼓声。如果是为了体现打击感,我建议可以将02:03:070 (123070|2) - 移动到02:03:170 -


Hyper
  1. 01:34:670 - 个人建议将这两个note移到Col3,根据音高,01:34:670 (94670|0) - 和01:33:070 (93070|0) - 是两个不同的音,而且明显01:33:070 (93070|0) - 01:33:870 (93870|1) - 01:34:670 (94670|0) - 是递增
  2. 01:43:070 (103070|2,103170|3) - 可以考虑mini jack 因为之前的相同节奏你也做过
  3. 01:57:970 - 这里miss了一个piano sound,但是如果这里是为了凸显01:57:570 - 到01:58:370 - 的鼓点打击,那么可以忽略
  4. 02:03:170 - 3个note怎么样?因为这里明显比同样是2个note的这里01:58:370 - 音更重


Another
  1. 00:26:570 - 个人建议将滑条停在00:26:870 - ,很明显buzz声并不结束在00:26:770 -
  2. 01:18:970 - 个人建议add a note,这里明显有个擦音
  3. 01:35:170 - 和01:35:970 - 是一样的,然而01:35:970 - 的音调明显是下降了,考虑变化一下??

diao map / plz rank it ! :)
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

_Stan wrote:

来摸个ZZHBOY大佬

|1|2|3|4|

fanzhen's Normal
  1. 00:31:170 - 这里的键位设置不太平衡,从00:31:170 - 到00:32:770 - ,Col 1 和 Col 2 没有任何note,个人建议如图,而且00:31:970 (31970|2) - 这个音高明显比00:31:570 (31570|2,31770|3) - 这两个要高
  2. 01:37:170 (97170|2) - 和01:37:570 (97570|2) - 个人建议不要放在用一Col,因为明显是两个不同的音高,是否考虑调整一下位置??
  3. 02:03:070 (123070|2) - 个人建议移除1个note,因为这里没有鼓声。如果是为了体现打击感,我建议可以将02:03:070 (123070|2) - 移动到02:03:170 -


Hyper
  1. 01:34:670 - 个人建议将这两个note移到Col3,根据音高,01:34:670 (94670|0) - 和01:33:070 (93070|0) - 是两个不同的音,而且明显01:33:070 (93070|0) - 01:33:870 (93870|1) - 01:34:670 (94670|0) - 是递增 改了点位置
  2. 01:43:070 (103070|2,103170|3) - 可以考虑mini jack 因为之前的相同节奏你也做过
  3. 01:57:970 - 这里miss了一个piano sound,但是如果这里是为了凸显01:57:570 - 到01:58:370 - 的鼓点打击,那么可以忽略 跟鼓的
  4. 02:03:170 - 3个note怎么样?因为这里明显比同样是2个note的这里01:58:370 - 音更重 3个感觉太多了


Another
  1. 00:26:570 - 个人建议将滑条停在00:26:870 - ,很明显buzz声并不结束在00:26:770 - 先停哪里吧
  2. 01:18:970 - 个人建议add a note,这里明显有个擦音 感觉不清楚 先不家了
  3. 01:35:170 - 和01:35:970 - 是一样的,然而01:35:970 - 的音调明显是下降了,考虑变化一下?? 改了点

diao map / plz rank it ! :)
感谢摸得 :)
Mafumafu
Good good make map no make things
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Regraz wrote:

Good good make map no make things
?
Mafumafu
Some opinions.

[fanzhen's Normal]
00:39:970 (39970|1) - Consider adding a note?
01:14:170 (74170|2,74370|3,74570|2) - https://puu.sh/s6iQO/407fe4a2b7.png Dont forget to move 01:14:770 (74770|2) - away if you apply this change.

[Hyper]
00:15:970 (15970|2) - You could actually add a note here as well.
00:23:970 (23970|1) - SAme as above.
00:25:570 (25570|1) - ^
00:27:170 (27170|2) - Three notes here?
01:05:170 (65170|3,65270|0,65370|2,65470|1) - They could be emphasized like this? https://puu.sh/s6j7g/41643ab77b.png
01:57:770 (117770|2,117770|3) - Why not use Hold here?

Good luck!
Kuo Kyoka
no kud

add tags: pop'n music Sunny Park REFLEC BEAT limelight plus ポップンリズミン the dawn of the sky
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Regraz wrote:

Some opinions.



[Hyper]
00:15:970 (15970|2) - You could actually add a note here as well. 都加了
00:23:970 (23970|1) - SAme as above.
00:25:570 (25570|1) - ^
00:27:170 (27170|2) - Three notes here? 这个难度就不放3note了
01:05:170 (65170|3,65270|0,65370|2,65470|1) - They could be emphasized like this? 不妥https://puu.sh/s6j7g/41643ab77b.png
01:57:770 (117770|2,117770|3) - Why not use Hold here? 放了

Good luck!
感谢摸得 :)

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

no kud

add tags: pop'n music Sunny Park REFLEC BEAT limelight plus ポップンリズミン the dawn of the sky
added :)
misakidate
话说这首歌叫什么名字,有图包么
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

misakidate wrote:

话说这首歌叫什么名字,有图包么
?
sahuang

ZZHBOY wrote:

你就写 范缜's脑膜 气死 咋六四
Fresh Chicken
zzh fk gay let me check patterns first, I will check general later

Does this BG feel fit for you? hmm I presonally don't think this BG is fit, whatever gay

[fanzhen's Normal]

00:26:570 (26570|2) - Should be better to be a LN which finishes on 00:26:770 - here. This sound is so clear for ignoring

00:52:170 (52170|3,52170|0) - 2.3 I think. 00:51:970 (51970|3,51970|0,52170|3,52170|0,52370|3,52370|0,52570|3,52570|0) - These 4 jacks will too heavy on Normal difficulty, but if that could be 2.3, will be more structured pattern also can keep feeling that like hammer

00:56:470 - Add one more I guess, it has main melody that you followed also 00:56:170 - ~00:56:570 - this empty part feels too awkward for me

[Hyper]

00:15:970 (15970|2,16070|1,16170|2,16270|1) - Does this trill intended one? if that doesn't so, 00:16:170 (16170|2) - I would like to move it to 4, for balance.

00:37:370 - ~ 00:38:370 - In my personal think, this section should be hard, as you know, there's 1/8 sounds which sounds more harder than other parts. How about use some trills like 2-4-2-4 or 2-3-2-3? can feel 1/8 more easier than Another. This is soooooo easy.

01:23:570 - missing note

01:25:170 - ^

[Another]

hmm dump overall, I like it

00:20:170 (20170|2,20270|3,20370|3) - kinda unbalance, 00:20:170 (20170|2) - move it to 1?

00:40:770 - ?
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