2016-10-08 18:01 Myle: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083394 saradisk - 220 - Kumano]
2016-10-08 18:02 koliron: i will make an interesting puzzle with an even more interesting reward :^)
2016-10-08 18:02 koliron: lemme play first
2016-10-08 18:03 Myle: what do you mean by puzzle o-O
2016-10-08 18:03 koliron: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083321 saradisk - 220 - Kumano [Cup]]
2016-10-08 18:03 Myle: and reward o-O
2016-10-08 18:04 koliron: just to not be repetitive between diffs, 00:02:327 (2,3) - consider to replace this with a long slider
2016-10-08 18:04 koliron: to reduce the amount of notes
2016-10-08 18:05 Myle: oki
2016-10-08 18:05 koliron: 00:15:677 (1,2) - there are interesting distances like this for now, but suddenly you did 00:16:877 (3,4,1) - these, which are pretty close
2016-10-08 18:06 koliron: consider to move 4 some grids to the right
2016-10-08 18:06 koliron: it would an interesting pattern
2016-10-08 18:06 Myle: what about moving this left?
2016-10-08 18:07 Myle: or this is going to be too flow breaking for a cup?
2016-10-08 18:07 koliron: nah it would be fine
2016-10-08 18:07 koliron: go salad
2016-10-08 18:08 koliron: 00:11:777 (3,1) - no dash until now, this one could have it, has more than enough potential
2016-10-08 18:09 koliron: 00:16:727 (2,1) - ^
2016-10-08 18:09 Myle: yup
2016-10-08 18:09 koliron: 00:20:327 (6,1) - here.. feels like you tried to make a dash but, its pretty easy to catch without use it
2016-10-08 18:10 koliron: consider to move 1 a little to the left
2016-10-08 18:10 koliron: then it would be an obvious dash for a salad player
2016-10-08 18:10 koliron: 00:26:327 (4,1) - ayyy and suddenly this one is pretty hard D:
2016-10-08 18:10 koliron: not only for that distance
2016-10-08 18:11 koliron: also for the movement
2016-10-08 18:11 koliron: when you catch 1 you need to go to the opposite side
2016-10-08 18:11 koliron: thats totally fine for overdose, rain or even platter player (maybe)
2016-10-08 18:11 koliron: but salad is too much
2016-10-08 18:11 koliron: i'd reduce the distance and ctrl+g it
2016-10-08 18:12 Myle: do you think curving 1 is a way?
2016-10-08 18:12 koliron: 00:37:277 (3,4,1) - mhh, consider to change a little this pattern, sorry if im repetitive with my suggestions here XD but i think that 1 deserves dash, i mena until now there was no dash in the kiai D:
2016-10-08 18:13 koliron: ya it would be fine
2016-10-08 18:13 koliron: am i modding so fast?
2016-10-08 18:13 koliron: i can wait sry
2016-10-08 18:14 Myle: that's ok
2016-10-08 18:14 Myle: 00:37:127 (3) - do you think adding a not here is a good idea?
2016-10-08 18:16 koliron: ya
2016-10-08 18:16 koliron: actually i thought in that
2016-10-08 18:16 koliron: haha
2016-10-08 18:16 Myle: okii, changed
2016-10-08 18:17 koliron: 00:42:977 (4) - nc just for aesthetic?
2016-10-08 18:17 Myle: sure
2016-10-08 18:17 koliron: go platter
2016-10-08 18:18 Myle: that's going to be fun cx
2016-10-08 18:18 koliron: 00:12:527 (2,3,4,5,1) - this movement is so uncomfortable
2016-10-08 18:18 koliron: you need to stop in 00:12:977 (3) -
2016-10-08 18:18 koliron: and then dash
2016-10-08 18:18 koliron: so
2016-10-08 18:18 koliron: platter players can miss
2016-10-08 18:18 koliron: pretty easily
2016-10-08 18:18 koliron: you could make just a slider there
2016-10-08 18:19 Myle: well actually you don't need to
2016-10-08 18:19 Myle: but I think platter players might think so ;-;
2016-10-08 18:19 koliron: or move 00:13:052 (4,5) - a little to the left
2016-10-08 18:19 koliron: ya, they would
2016-10-08 18:20 koliron: 00:30:527 (4,1) - this hyper doesnt feels so necessary imo
2016-10-08 18:20 koliron: if oyu want an hyper, it would be better in 00:29:777 (4,1) -
2016-10-08 18:20 koliron: because is stronger
2016-10-08 18:20 koliron: or to 00:31:277 (1) -
2016-10-08 18:21 koliron: 00:33:377 (3,1) - i like these movements in overdose, in rain could be too hard already
2016-10-08 18:21 koliron: but in platter is not recommendable at all
2016-10-08 18:21 koliron: imo
2016-10-08 18:21 koliron: so, oyu could make 3 more horizontal for the flow
2016-10-08 18:21 koliron: and aesthetic as well :3
2016-10-08 18:23 Myle: made something with it
2016-10-08 18:23 koliron: 00:40:877 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - too many hypers for a platter D: do not forget that platters are supposed to introduce the hypers
2016-10-08 18:23 koliron: 00:42:977 (10) - nc too :^)
2016-10-08 18:24 koliron: oh and about the previous suggestion
2016-10-08 18:24 koliron: you could keep 1 or 2 hypers maybe
2016-10-08 18:24 koliron: but 4 are too much
2016-10-08 18:24 koliron: many*
2016-10-08 18:24 koliron: imo
2016-10-08 18:24 Myle: sure
2016-10-08 18:25 Myle: changed
2016-10-08 18:26 koliron: go rain
2016-10-08 18:27 koliron: pretty nice rain
2016-10-08 18:27 koliron: only 2 suggestions
2016-10-08 18:27 koliron: 00:33:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2016-10-08 18:27 koliron: these hypers feels so weird
2016-10-08 18:28 koliron: i would make 4 - hyper - 4
2016-10-08 18:28 koliron: insteadof 3 - hy - 3 - hy - 2
2016-10-08 18:28 koliron: it would be fine if the rhythm is 1/3
2016-10-08 18:28 koliron: but since its not
2016-10-08 18:28 koliron: 00:37:277 (1,2,3,4) - nice pattern!
2016-10-08 18:29 Myle: Ikr <33
2016-10-08 18:29 koliron: 00:38:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - oh, same as before
2016-10-08 18:29 koliron: but here i would remove the hyper, if you agree
2016-10-08 18:29 Myle: aw wait
2016-10-08 18:29 koliron: 00:42:977 (1) - ha! here theres a nc :^)
2016-10-08 18:29 koliron: yap
2016-10-08 18:30 Myle: ;-; I can't decide what to make instead of those 1/3 rhythm pattern
2016-10-08 18:30 Myle: s
2016-10-08 18:30 koliron: 1/4
2016-10-08 18:31 koliron: 4 notes
2016-10-08 18:31 koliron: hypers
2016-10-08 18:31 koliron: and 4 notes
2016-10-08 18:31 koliron: xD
2016-10-08 18:31 koliron: as how you did before
2016-10-08 18:32 Myle: Ikr
2016-10-08 18:32 Myle: I just can't think a right pattern connection to the next one
2016-10-08 18:32 Myle: will I think I did something good
2016-10-08 18:32 Myle: 00:34:577 (4,1) - do you think that's fine to remove a hd here?
2016-10-08 18:33 koliron: ya
2016-10-08 18:33 Myle: okii
2016-10-08 18:33 Myle: Rain was supposed to be the only diff here ;-;
2016-10-08 18:33 koliron: |the only?
2016-10-08 18:33 Myle: oh
2016-10-08 18:33 Myle: xD the last
2016-10-08 18:33 koliron: what do you mean
2016-10-08 18:33 koliron: ah
2016-10-08 18:33 koliron: xD
2016-10-08 18:34 koliron: then why theres an overdose?
2016-10-08 18:34 Myle: everyone told me this is pretty faast song
2016-10-08 18:34 Myle: so I made this
2016-10-08 18:34 koliron: ah
2016-10-08 18:34 koliron: go overdose
2016-10-08 18:35 Myle: that's strange no one noticed the hardeness of Rain diff, since I was making it.. well something like Rain+
2016-10-08 18:35 koliron: 00:11:477 (4,5,6,1) - not the best pattern to do here tbh
2016-10-08 18:35 koliron: i dont like the movement to 5 and 6
2016-10-08 18:35 koliron: what about
2016-10-08 18:35 koliron: ctrl+g 4 and x184 again?
2016-10-08 18:36 koliron: then move 5 to the left of 4
2016-10-08 18:36 Myle: omg perfect
2016-10-08 18:37 koliron: 00:27:677 (1,2,3,4,5) - I LOVED THIS
2016-10-08 18:37 koliron: dont change that
2016-10-08 18:37 Myle: Ikr!
2016-10-08 18:37 Myle: no one told me to change this <3
2016-10-08 18:37 koliron: dont care about what anyone say pls
2016-10-08 18:37 Myle: and I wont :P
2016-10-08 18:37 koliron: nice
2016-10-08 18:37 koliron: 00:37:277 (1,2,3,4) - i expected another hyper here D:
2016-10-08 18:37 koliron: for the vocal
2016-10-08 18:38 koliron: what about ctrl+g in 00:37:577 (3,4) - and move it to the right
2016-10-08 18:38 Myle: well did something by replacing 3 and 4 with a slider
2016-10-08 18:38 Myle: so there is a hyper now :P
2016-10-08 18:38 koliron: 00:42:677 (5) - that curve is not playable XD noone would move there, atleast i stopped the catcher thhere
2016-10-08 18:39 koliron: consdier to just make an horizontal slider
2016-10-08 18:39 koliron: 00:42:977 (6) - and nc for consistency
2016-10-08 18:39 koliron: thats all
2016-10-08 18:39 Myle: Deif suggestion xD
2016-10-08 18:39 Myle: btw
2016-10-08 18:39 koliron: this deif
2016-10-08 18:39 koliron: loli
2016-10-08 18:39 koliron: remove that tag
2016-10-08 18:39 koliron: is not allowed
2016-10-08 18:39 Myle: 00:37:277 (1,2,3) - by changing this I've made 00:37:877 (1,2) - pretty playable
2016-10-08 18:40 Myle: oki xD
2016-10-08 18:40 Myle: but I think if I won't delete this peps will h8 me xD
2016-10-08 18:40 koliron: hell?
2016-10-08 18:40 Myle: like hr players
2016-10-08 18:40 Myle: yeah, it's so hard to ss
2016-10-08 18:40 koliron: another unnecessary tag i guess XD
2016-10-08 18:40 Myle: I FCed with A rank
2016-10-08 18:40 Myle: well oki ';c
2016-10-08 18:41 koliron: hahha
2016-10-08 18:41 koliron: ok thats all
2016-10-08 18:41 koliron: gimme thread menawhhile i copy the log
2016-10-08 18:41 koliron: you improved a lot as a mapper!
2016-10-08 18:41 Myle: <333 I'm glad to hear that
2016-10-08 18:42 Myle: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/501990