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Yui - Again

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Seni wrote:

where is my kds for that skype mod feg
skype with seni gey
[17.09.2016 14:47:13] Seni xdxd: I changed the end it was wrong
[17.09.2016 14:47:26] Seni xdxd: but you obviously aren't even listening to the song
[17.09.2016 14:47:31] Seni xdxd: there are vocals on the blue and red tick
[17.09.2016 14:47:39] Seni xdxd: in your diff
[17.09.2016 14:47:39] Seni xdxd: 00:38:840 (3) -
[17.09.2016 14:47:39] Nico: I got a better idea for the0:39:376
[17.09.2016 14:47:41] Seni xdxd: same spot
[17.09.2016 14:47:44] Seni xdxd: you literally stop
[17.09.2016 14:47:49] Seni xdxd: even though there is a sound on the white tick
[17.09.2016 14:47:51] Seni xdxd: music doesnt change
[17.09.2016 14:47:51] Nico: Sec
[17.09.2016 14:47:55] Seni xdxd: you dont map the blue tick
[17.09.2016 14:48:53] Nico: Try this out it sounds better in my opinion
[17.09.2016 14:49:05] Nico: Take the 3 between 4 and 5
[17.09.2016 14:49:13] Seni xdxd: well uh how do I tell you this
[17.09.2016 14:49:17] Seni xdxd: your opinion is wrong
[17.09.2016 14:49:51] Seni xdxd: it's 4 ticks of 1/4 though
[17.09.2016 14:50:10] Seni xdxd: you didn't map the first blue tick I didn't map the second blue tick
[17.09.2016 14:50:24] Nico: Xe
[17.09.2016 14:50:27] Nico: Xd
[17.09.2016 14:50:35] Nico: Cuz i prefered the vocals
[17.09.2016 14:50:44] Nico: But its your map
[17.09.2016 14:51:03] Seni xdxd: that's a really weird thing to say
[17.09.2016 14:51:11] Seni xdxd: considering you ignored the tick with more pronounced vocals
[17.09.2016 14:51:23] Seni xdxd: and you claim it sounds better
[17.09.2016 14:51:39] Seni xdxd: http://puu.sh/refwN/f380808208.jpg
[17.09.2016 14:51:43] Seni xdxd: this is what it is like in the song
[17.09.2016 14:52:04] Seni xdxd: I didn't map the 5 because I ignored some 1/4 since it's in easier insane
[17.09.2016 14:52:12] Seni xdxd: I also ignored some in other parts
[17.09.2016 14:52:14] Nico: I see
[17.09.2016 14:52:21] Nico: I didnt mapped the white too
[17.09.2016 14:52:49] Nico: I have a hole i there
[17.09.2016 14:52:52] Seni xdxd: there is a hit on the white tick
[17.09.2016 14:54:00] Seni xdxd: well
[17.09.2016 14:54:05] Seni xdxd: it's a common thing new mappers do
[17.09.2016 14:54:08] Seni xdxd: leaving random holes
[17.09.2016 14:54:10] Nico: I placed 1 more
[17.09.2016 14:54:10] Seni xdxd: 00:21:912 (7) -
[17.09.2016 14:54:12] Seni xdxd: also here
[17.09.2016 14:54:21] Seni xdxd: there is a hit on the white tick too
[17.09.2016 14:54:30] Seni xdxd: 00:29:198 (6,7,8) -
[17.09.2016 14:54:33] Seni xdxd: this part sounds exactly the same
[17.09.2016 14:54:37] Seni xdxd: becuase it's a repeat
[17.09.2016 14:54:41] Seni xdxd: but here you mapped it
[17.09.2016 14:55:03] Nico: Cuz of vocals xd
[17.09.2016 14:55:05] Seni xdxd: and it doesnt start with a new combo
[17.09.2016 14:55:10] Seni xdxd: the vocals are the same man
[17.09.2016 14:55:15] Seni xdxd: 00:29:198 (6,7,8) -
[17.09.2016 14:55:15] Seni xdxd: this
[17.09.2016 14:55:20] Seni xdxd: is a repeat of this 00:22:340 (1,2,3) -
[17.09.2016 14:55:24] Seni xdxd: just different words
[17.09.2016 14:55:28] Seni xdxd: the music is repeating to
[17.09.2016 14:55:36] Seni xdxd: at 22 you do a nc + random hole
[17.09.2016 14:55:37] Nico: But at 21 are no vocals xd
[17.09.2016 14:55:40] Seni xdxd: later you dont do it again
[17.09.2016 14:55:50] Seni xdxd: there are no vocals on 29 either
[17.09.2016 14:55:57] Seni xdxd: 00:27:912 (1,2,3,4,5) -
[17.09.2016 14:55:59] Seni xdxd: this has no vocals
[17.09.2016 14:56:14] Seni xdxd: it's the same as 00:21:698 (6,7) -
[17.09.2016 14:56:23] Nico: Oh
[17.09.2016 14:56:23] Seni xdxd: 00:21:055 (3,4,5,6,7) -
[17.09.2016 14:56:24] Nico: Oh
[17.09.2016 14:56:26] Nico: Hi
[17.09.2016 14:56:33] Seni xdxd: here you put a circle 00:21:912 (7) -
[17.09.2016 14:56:43] Seni xdxd: 00:28:769 (5) -
[17.09.2016 14:56:44] Seni xdxd: here slider
[17.09.2016 14:56:49] Seni xdxd: even though it's the same
[17.09.2016 14:56:52] Seni xdxd: and your nc is inconsistent
[17.09.2016 14:57:17] Seni xdxd: 00:34:126 (4) -
[17.09.2016 14:57:22] Seni xdxd: random hole again
[17.09.2016 14:57:26] Seni xdxd: the music doesn't change at all
[17.09.2016 14:57:53] Seni xdxd: 00:38:840 (3,4,5,1,2,3) -
[17.09.2016 14:57:54] Seni xdxd: holes again
[17.09.2016 14:57:57] Seni xdxd: and look at the spacing
[17.09.2016 14:58:02] Seni xdxd: these things are 1/1
[17.09.2016 14:58:06] Seni xdxd: yet the have the same spacing as 1/2
[17.09.2016 14:58:35] Seni xdxd: 01:01:340 (2) -
[17.09.2016 14:58:43] Seni xdxd: stream stars on the white tick in the middle of the slider
[17.09.2016 14:59:08] Seni xdxd: 01:15:055 (8,1) -
[17.09.2016 14:59:09] Seni xdxd: another random hole
[17.09.2016 14:59:14] Seni xdxd: and there is even a stream in the song here
[17.09.2016 14:59:17] Seni xdxd: dude what
[17.09.2016 15:01:01 | Entfernt 15:03:16] Seni xdxd: Diese Nachricht wurde entfernt
[17.09.2016 15:03:13] Nico: Where
[17.09.2016 15:03:23] Seni xdxd: nowhere lol
[17.09.2016 15:03:30] Nico: Xd
[17.09.2016 15:05:30] Nico: Fill ALL holes?
[17.09.2016 15:05:33] Seni xdxd: anyways I hate modding
[17.09.2016 15:05:36] Seni xdxd: dude
[17.09.2016 15:05:38] Seni xdxd: look at
[17.09.2016 15:05:39] Seni xdxd: fucking
[17.09.2016 15:05:41] Seni xdxd: any map
[17.09.2016 15:05:52] Seni xdxd: does it have holes just randomly to "emphasize the vocals"?
[17.09.2016 15:05:56] Seni xdxd: that doesnt exist
[17.09.2016 15:05:59] Seni xdxd: I see every new mapper do it
[17.09.2016 15:06:03] Seni xdxd: you follow the beat the whole time
[17.09.2016 15:06:09] Seni xdxd: you emphasize the vocals when it fits
[17.09.2016 15:06:19] Seni xdxd: but you never disregard the beat to do thatž
[17.09.2016 15:06:20] Seni xdxd: ž
[17.09.2016 15:06:35] Seni xdxd: you can't just stop all of a sudden if the music stays exactly the same
[17.09.2016 15:07:07] Nico: Okey
[17.09.2016 15:07:13] Nico: I fill them
[17.09.2016 15:07:15] Nico: But
[17.09.2016 15:07:36] Nico: The hole at the last circle at end is ok?
[17.09.2016 15:07:44] Seni xdxd: what
[17.09.2016 15:08:01] Nico: Look last xircle
[17.09.2016 15:08:05] Nico: There is a hole
[17.09.2016 15:08:11] Seni xdxd: yeah
[17.09.2016 15:08:12] Nico: I dont fill that
[17.09.2016 15:08:14] Nico: Or?
[17.09.2016 15:08:15] Seni xdxd: no
[17.09.2016 15:08:19] Seni xdxd: there is nothing on that
[17.09.2016 15:08:22] Seni xdxd: I changed it
[17.09.2016 15:08:26] Nico: Kk
[17.09.2016 15:08:34] Seni xdxd: I just put random jumps cause I was really bored of mapping already
[17.09.2016 15:08:37] Seni xdxd: wanted to wrap it up
[17.09.2016 15:08:57] Nico: One more
[17.09.2016 15:08:57] Seni xdxd: it was wrong though
[17.09.2016 15:08:59] Nico: The hole at
[17.09.2016 15:09:04] Nico: 22:126
[17.09.2016 15:09:14] Nico: The new beats start between the sides of the hole
[17.09.2016 15:09:25] Nico: Still fill?
[17.09.2016 15:09:28] Seni xdxd: yes
[17.09.2016 15:09:30] Seni xdxd: what
[17.09.2016 15:09:34] Seni xdxd: there is a beat on the white tick
[17.09.2016 15:09:44] Seni xdxd: and on the repeat part you put a slider
[17.09.2016 15:09:47] Seni xdxd: 00:21:912 (7) -
[17.09.2016 15:09:51] Seni xdxd: 1/2 slider on this tick
[17.09.2016 15:09:57] Seni xdxd: 00:28:769 (5) -
[17.09.2016 15:09:59] Seni xdxd: that is this
[17.09.2016 15:10:17] Seni xdxd: and don't put nc there man
[17.09.2016 15:10:22] Seni xdxd: 00:22:983 (4) -
[17.09.2016 15:10:24] Seni xdxd: nc here
[17.09.2016 15:10:29] Seni xdxd: not on the vocals
[17.09.2016 15:11:01] Seni xdxd: it's not the downbeat
[17.09.2016 15:11:08] Seni xdxd: you don't use nc for that
[17.09.2016 15:11:47] Nico: I didnt nc on 28.769
[17.09.2016 15:11:49] Seni xdxd: your nc is very inconsistent
[17.09.2016 15:11:54] Seni xdxd: 00:31:340 (5,6,1) -
[17.09.2016 15:12:02] Seni xdxd: 00:27:912 (1,2,3) -
[17.09.2016 15:12:12] Seni xdxd: this is the same part
[17.09.2016 15:12:15] Seni xdxd: you don't nc on vocals
[17.09.2016 15:12:19] Seni xdxd: you nc on downbeats
[17.09.2016 15:12:29] Seni xdxd: don't use nc on vocals
[17.09.2016 15:12:34] Nico: So remove the ncs u noticed?
[17.09.2016 15:12:46] Nico: 31 27 and?
[17.09.2016 15:13:00] Seni xdxd: when you said
[17.09.2016 15:13:01] Seni xdxd: I didnt nc on 28.769
[17.09.2016 15:13:07] Seni xdxd: I was talking about 00:22:340 (1) -
[17.09.2016 15:13:11] Seni xdxd: 00:22:983 (4) - is nc
[17.09.2016 15:13:30] Nico: I did now
[17.09.2016 15:13:41] Seni xdxd: man
[17.09.2016 15:13:45] Seni xdxd: your ncs are a mess
[17.09.2016 15:13:58] Nico: Im not good at nc
[17.09.2016 15:14:03] Nico: I did how i feel
[-Miuna-]
[-Miuna-]
What did u friend say ? Can i keep mapping the Hard diff ?
Yahuri
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Yahuri
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Yahuri
1,400 posts
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Yahuri
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WolfPlayz_old
Hi
Sexy song
Sexy hitsounds
NOW ONTO THE ROUGH PART >:)
SPOILER
Seni's Insane Alchemy
First thing's first, let's take a look at AiMod.... Nothing! Good job! But now time for my modding
This colour means My Opinion This one means change combo colour to make it flow more And this one means unrankable
Okay
00:19:126 (1) - Is this combo change really necessary?
00:47:626 (1) - My opinion-ish but should this really be changed or at least make 00:48:054 (3) A new combo
Nothing else really
SPOILER
And using the same colour code as the first box it is Forbidden Alchemy
01:22:769 (1) - No combo change here please, it doesn't make sense to me
If ranked thx for pp and spread streams luv ur map goddbaie
Kondou-Shinichi
1,030 posts
Joined September 2015
Kondou-Shinichi
Hi from queue 3;;;
idk, im not into anime song but fine
Somebody's Hard abadami
Perfect
Err idk who's Insane adadamdi
00:11:197 (1) - Slider please ;w; (sounds empty w/o)
00:35:840 (2) - start the slider here
00:39:590 (3) - not needed
00:55:019 (4) - ^^^^
01:26:626 (4) - wtf just start the spinner right here
Good luck! This map has potential ^^
-C O N T R A L-
143 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
-C O N T R A L-

WolfPlayz wrote:

Hi
Sexy song
Sexy hitsounds
NOW ONTO THE ROUGH PART >:)
SPOILER
And using the same colour code as the first box it is Forbidden Alchemy
01:22:769 (1) - No combo change here please, it doesn't make sense to me
If ranked thx for pp and spread streams luv ur map goddbaie
Fixed and thanks for the mod :3

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

Hi from queue 3;;;
idk, im not into anime song but fine

Good luck! This map has potential ^^
Thanks :3
Seni
713 posts
Joined August 2014
Seni

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

00:11:197 (1) - Slider please ;w; (sounds empty w/o) no
00:35:840 (2) - start the slider here definitely no
00:39:590 (3) - not needed no
00:55:019 (4) - ^^^^ no
01:26:626 (4) - wtf just start the spinner right here lol
Good luck! This map has potential ^^ horrible map xd

WolfPlayz wrote:

Seni's Insane Alchemy
00:19:126 (1) - Is this combo change really necessary? ye stop using my color
00:47:626 (1) - My opinion-ish but should this really be changed or at least make 00:48:054 (3) A new combo ye
Nothing else really
Yahuri
1,400 posts
Joined July 2014
Yahuri
hitsounding mod :o
not gonna touch the whistles cuz i dont vocal gud

Akitoshi
needs hitsounds lol

HB
-modding based on accurately matching music
00:15:697 - remove clap
00:11:626 - i think this would be better off without a finish, the finish here takes away from the impact of 00:12:483 (3) and 00:12:912 (4) imo
00:54:697 - add finish
01:01:554 - add finish
01:08:412 - add finish
01:19:126 - remove clap
01:19:340 - add clap
01:21:483 (5) - add finish
01:23:626 - add clap

Yahuri
"Perfect"

Seni
-modding based on consistency of your hitsounding
00:57:483 (1) - add finish
00:57:054 (7) - add clap
01:14:626 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - you have 3 finishes here but only 2 here 01:21:483 (1,2,3,1,2,3) so i would suggest either removing the finish on 01:15:912 (5) OR adding a finish on 01:22:769 (3)

-C O N T R A L-
-modding based on accurately matching music
-ignore "missed clap" if you dont plan on changing the rhythms
00:11:626 - i think this would be better off without a finish, the finish here takes away from the impact of 00:12:483 (3) and 00:12:912 (4) imo
00:12:483 - why use this clap? the other clap (00:13:340) works much better for this
00:15:483 (3) - 00:15:697 (5) - these are more like kick drum sounds, i dont think they should be claps
00:54:697 - add finish
00:55:019 (3) - add clap
00:55:662 (4) - no sound here, remove note (or at least remove clap)
01:01:340 - add clap
01:01:554 - add finish
01:01:769 - nice crescendo lol
01:03:376 - missed clap
01:05:090 - missed clap
01:06:804 - ^
01:07:554 (5) - add clap
01:08:412 - add finish
01:10:769 (5) - add clap
01:11:947 (3) - ^
01:12:162 - missed clap
01:14:412 - remove clap
01:14:626 (3) - remove clap add finish
01:14:947 (6) - remove clap
01:15:269 (8) - remove clap add finish
01:15:376 - missed clap
01:15:483 (9) - add clap
01:15:483 (9) - remove clap
01:17:090 - missed clap
01:18:912 (4) - remove clap
01:19:126 (6) - remove clap
01:19:340 (1) - add clap
01:20:519 - missed clap
01:21:269 - add clap
01:21:483 - add finish
01:23:626 - add clap
01:23:947 - ^

yay
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi 
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Starset
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Joined April 2015
Starset
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RyoKazuka
Elite Mapper
669 posts
Joined April 2015
RyoKazuka
For Seni

i asked for more info regarding additive HS especially on your first part of the song (which doesnt have any claps but you still applied em)
Okorin says its rather dumb to do so but at the same I feel it is not encourage to use em (as it might feel disruptive to some players)

however, you can apply the hs but custom ones at the very beginning instead of claps for better impact on the map

edit: asked both oko and pishi personally,
https://puu.sh/s0eB8.JPG
Seni
713 posts
Joined August 2014
Seni

RyoKazuka wrote:

For Seni

i asked for more info regarding additive HS especially on your first part of the song (which doesnt have any claps but you still applied em)
Okorin says its rather dumb to do so but at the same I feel it is not encourage to use em (as it might feel disruptive to some players)

however, you can apply the hs but custom ones at the very beginning instead of claps for better impact on the map

edit: asked both oko and pishi personally,
https://puu.sh/s0eB8.JPG

ye I'm gonna re-do the hitsounds I just copy-pasted the clap pattern cause I was bored and in a hurry to finish it up
RyoKazuka
Elite Mapper
669 posts
Joined April 2015
RyoKazuka


a

General:

Metadata should be YUI - again as shown in YUI's official website http://www.yui-net.com/
released on 3rd of June

dont copy the meta from the ranked version since QATs dont check the meta that strictly during those times

Akitoshi's EZ
Super clean but the current issue now lies at the statement above about additive HS
pls do smth about it

Seni's MX
01:15:912 (1) - NC-ing the stream might emphasize the drums a bit more and you did space these objects more than the prev triplet

thats all cos it looks clean and plays well
bn might question the huge jumps but you'll prolly ignore even if i did state it

ALC
hey babe can we irc mod for this diff?

Irohas
1,353 posts
Joined May 2014
Irohas
fma so old

general
  1. BG should be 1366x768
forbidden alchemy
HP7 ? seems weird to have the bigger HP on Insane imo
00:01:983 (4,5) - what about replacing this by a slider ? sound weird 2 circles to me
00:12:912 (1,2) - inconsistency with 00:16:340 (3,4,5,1) - you didn't map the triplets
01:16:983 (2) - maybe copy/paste 01:16:340 (1) - ?

seni
00:51:376 - what about make a circle here to fit the vocal ? as 00:55:983 (2,3,4,5,6) -
01:01:769 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - a better hitclap is needed imo
01:25:769 (1,3,4) - weird imo, you should stack or not stack, it's better to avoid this overlap

yahuri
01:11:626 (2,3,4) - inconsistency with 01:04:769 (2,3,4) - (4)'s tail deserve being clickable imo
01:06:483 (2,3) - what about not skip the sound between both ?
01:20:197 (2,3) - ^
[]
that's all for me good luck
Yahuri
1,400 posts
Joined July 2014
Yahuri

MugiwaraSekai wrote:

yahuri
01:11:626 (2,3,4) - inconsistency with 01:04:769 (2,3,4) - (4)'s tail deserve being clickable imo oops Dx
01:06:483 (2,3) - what about not skip the sound between both ? okay
01:20:197 (2,3) - ^ ^
that's all for me good luck
all fixed, thanks! hopefully the added 1/4 notes dont look too weird lol

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F D Flourite
811 posts
Joined March 2013
F D Flourite
OK I see your req from queue and I will mainly focus on modding the highest difficulty.

Yui's sound is easy to recognize LOL. I didn't notice the artist name and started testplaying, and was surprised XD.

And, seriously, your highest difficulty is a nice CTB convert map.

[Forbidden Alchemy]
  1. 00:08:197 (2,3) - About this pattern, I suggest you move 3 to (400,127) or (326,146) (Just 2 examples, you can adjust them in pixels) for 2 reasons. First of all this change is good for flow. Secondly I think the current pattern is a little bit uncomfortable aestheticly.
  2. 00:10:233 (4,5) - Rhythm here is not following the vocal strictly. But you followed vocal on 00:09:912 (3,4) - this 1/4 jump. So I suggest you make rhythm like this to strictly follow the vocal.
  3. 00:09:269 (5,1) - I don't understand why you tend to set small distance on before stanza. Generally speaking sounds on stanzas should be emphasized and there are usually jumps before stanzas, while you are doing the contrast thing. Same as 00:10:769 (5,1) - 00:29:840 (6,1) - 00:38:197 (5,1) - , etc. I strongly suggest you make jumps at these places instead of 1.30x standard distance.
  4. 00:18:269 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Seems that your flow are always zig-zag. But in fact oval flow is more fluent and often used. Zig-zag flow can be used sometimes to do some emphasis. But when it fills a whole section, this part plays bad.
  5. 00:35:197 (1,2) - I know it is your map design but you should not use small spaces here because you have to make 1/2 move and 1/4 move on 00:35:626 (3,4,5) - different. I know they are different, but not enough for players to recognize for the first time playing. Make this move a jump.
  6. 00:40:340 (1,2,3,4) - So it is deliberately to make this movement distance decreasing? Or it is just by accident?
  7. 00:42:054 (1,2) - Larger space please. The reason has been mentioned above.
  8. 00:49:126 (1) - Remove NC please. Basicly NC is not used to emphasize a single sound, otherwise HP setting will be messed up. So even I understand your attempt here, 3 continuous NC is way too many.
  9. 00:50:840 (1) - ^ Remove NC to keep consistency.
  10. 00:50:626 (1,1,2,3) - I'm not sure about flow here. I don't like it mainly because fast zig-zag jump with fast streaming movement goes beyond my playing ability. This pattern is really hard because it is difficult to control the cursor speed. I suggest you ask more experienced players to test this pattern. (Oval flow is fine for me, like 00:51:912 (5,1,1) - )
  11. 00:57:054 (5,1) - Yep. This small jump seems weird lol.
  12. 01:13:554 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+H and then move 01:14:197 (7) - to (171,55)? Your current 2->3->4 flow is not really good.
  13. 01:16:340 (1,2) - If you are trying to do such stacks, making their boundary more smooth will benefit your aesthetic structure. For example, like this
  14. Conclusion: Old mapping style, while you have potential to make this map ranked I believe. Hitsound is ok, I don't find any big mistakes when modding so I just skip it. Take care of flow and you will make your map much better.
Good luck~
-C O N T R A L-
143 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
-C O N T R A L-

MugiwaraSekai wrote:

fma so old

general
  1. BG should be 1366x768
forbidden alchemy
HP7 ? seems weird to have the bigger HP on Insane imo Changed
00:01:983 (4,5) - what about replacing this by a slider ? sound weird 2 circles to metrue
00:12:912 (1,2) - inconsistency with 00:16:340 (3,4,5,1) - you didn't map the tripletsi will think 'bout it
01:16:983 (2) - maybe copy/paste 01:16:340 (1) - ? No changes here
that's all for me good luckThanks :3
Thanks for the mod
-C O N T R A L-
143 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
-C O N T R A L-

F D Flourite wrote:

OK I see your req from queue and I will mainly focus on modding the highest difficulty.

Yui's sound is easy to recognize LOL. I didn't notice the artist name and started testplaying, and was surprised XD.

And, seriously, your highest difficulty is a nice CTB convert map.

[Forbidden Alchemy]
  1. 00:08:197 (2,3) - About this pattern, I suggest you move 3 to (400,127) or (326,146) (Just 2 examples, you can adjust them in pixels) for 2 reasons. First of all this change is good for flow. Secondly I think the current pattern is a little bit uncomfortable aestheticly.Changed
  2. 00:10:233 (4,5) - Rhythm here is not following the vocal strictly. But you followed vocal on 00:09:912 (3,4) - this 1/4 jump. So I suggest you make rhythm like this to strictly follow the vocal.Changed
  3. 00:09:269 (5,1) - I don't understand why you tend to set small distance on before stanza. Generally speaking sounds on stanzas should be emphasized and there are usually jumps before stanzas, while you are doing the contrast thing. Same as 00:10:769 (5,1) - 00:29:840 (6,1) - 00:38:197 (5,1) - , etc. I strongly suggest you make jumps at these places instead of 1.30x standard distance. Changed at some points i found!:)
  4. 00:18:269 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Seems that your flow are always zig-zag. But in fact oval flow is more fluent and often used. Zig-zag flow can be used sometimes to do some emphasis. But when it fills a whole section, this part plays bad.Give it a chance :C
  5. 00:35:197 (1,2) - I know it is your map design but you should not use small spaces here because you have to make 1/2 move and 1/4 move on 00:35:626 (3,4,5) - different. I know they are different, but not enough for players to recognize for the first time playing. Make this move a jump.Changed
  6. 00:40:340 (1,2,3,4) - So it is deliberately to make this movement distance decreasing? Or it is just by accident?Made here some jumps. changed
  7. 00:42:054 (1,2) - Larger space please. The reason has been mentioned above.Changed
  8. 00:49:126 (1) - Remove NC please. Basicly NC is not used to emphasize a single sound, otherwise HP setting will be messed up. So even I understand your attempt here, 3 continuous NC is way too many.Changed on all places. Thanks, i made this because someone told me it would be better xD
  9. 00:50:840 (1) - ^ Remove NC to keep consistency.^
  10. 00:50:626 (1,1,2,3) - I'm not sure about flow here. I don't like it mainly because fast zig-zag jump with fast streaming movement goes beyond my playing ability. This pattern is really hard because it is difficult to control the cursor speed. I suggest you ask more experienced players to test this pattern. (Oval flow is fine for me, like 00:51:912 (5,1,1) - )i ask some experienced players^^
  11. 00:57:054 (5,1) - Yep. This small jump seems weird lol.Changed
  12. 01:13:554 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+H and then move 01:14:197 (7) - to (171,55)? Your current 2->3->4 flow is not really good.Changed
  13. 01:16:340 (1,2) - If you are trying to do such stacks, making their boundary more smooth will benefit your aesthetic structure. For example, like Changedthis
  14. Conclusion: Old mapping style, while you have potential to make this map ranked I believe. Hitsound is ok, I don't find any big mistakes when modding so I just skip it. Take care of flow and you will make your map much better.
Good luck~
Thank you very much Flourite for this great mod and it was really helpful!
Seni
713 posts
Joined August 2014
Seni

RyoKazuka wrote:

Seni's MX
01:15:912 (1) - NC-ing the stream might emphasize the drums a bit more and you did space these objects more than the prev triplet k

thats all cos it looks clean and plays well
bn might question the huge jumps but you'll prolly ignore even if i did state it spacing is subjective


MugiwaraSekai wrote:

seni
00:51:376 - what about make a circle here to fit the vocal ? as 00:55:983 (2,3,4,5,6) it sounds different and I'm ignoring some 1/4 cause it's too much
01:01:769 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - a better hitclap is needed imo sound alright imo
01:25:769 (1,3,4) - weird imo, you should stack or not stack, it's better to avoid this overlap
changed
mraihani
208 posts
Joined November 2014
mraihani
from your M4M queue

[general]
set the preview at 01:02:519 -

[Akitoshi's Easy Alchemy]
i prefer these have soft whistle sound instead of clap sound
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on "timing" section
00:11:197 - change to s:c2
00:12:912 - change to s:c2
00:21:483 - ^
00:47:626 - ^
00:54:054 - add 1x here, change to s:c2
00:55:769 - add 1x here, change to S
01:02:197 - change to s:c2
01:02:626 - change to s:c2
01:15:912 - ^
01:16:340 - ^

[HB's Normal Alchemy]
00:12:483 - change to sc:2 with 70% volume i guess

[yahuri's hard]
no complaints

[seni's insane]
01:26:733 (1) - move spinner start to 01:26:840

[Forbidden Alchemy]
00:09:804 (2,3) - offsync to the lyric; change to this:
i m a g e
00:35:947 (4,5) - this part was offsync too... change to this:
image
00:42:804 (3,4,5,6,7) - i prefer these circles like this:
(no.) X,Y of coordinate
(3) 249, 286
(4) 313, 319
(5) 383, 305
(6) 423, 249
(7) 413, 177
it will look more circular than before
image: http://puu.sh/sCnkY/bc41b59b95.png
01:01:876 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why somehow i prefer straightline stream like this...
image
how to construct: set 1.6 distance snap, create straight slider, then ctrl+f
start the spinner here 01:26:840 - instead of 01:26:733
MatHero
2 posts
Joined July 2016
MatHero
noo pls dont let this be graveyarded
Lulu-
398 posts
Joined March 2014
Lulu-
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[Forbidden Alchemy]
Dein Remap hat den Spread dezent kaputt gemacht xd Senis Insane ist jetzt viel zu nah an deiner Diff, was bedeutet, dass du einen Weg finden musst, um die Schwierigkeit höher zu bekommen, wie beispielsweise den DS erhöhen, was meistens ganz gut klappt. Im Notfall musst du seine GD aus dem Set nehmen.

00:00:697 (1,2,4) - Versuch mal Stellen zu finden, an denen du Sachen wie Dreiecke einbauen kannst. Perfekte Dreiecke kann man ganz schnell und einfach mithilfe von Copypasting hinbekommen. Dieses Video zeigt dir wie das geht

00:04:769 (2,3) - Der Flow ist hier komisch, weil du zwischen 1 und 2 einen sehr weiten Winkel hattest, aber von 2 auf 3 plötzlich einen sehr spitzen hast.
Vorschlag für eine bessere Pattern

00:09:804 (2) - Dieser Circle ist nicht nötig, da man hier nichts hat was man fillen muss und es sonst keinen Beat gibt

00:11:626 (3) - Ich würde den Slider um 2 Ticks kürzen und einen Circle auf den roten Tick setzen, da dieser viel stärker ist, als der Tick, auf dem der Slider anfängt, was außerdem auch unrankable ist. Damit kannst du die Intensität der Gitarre viel besser ausdrücken. Außerdem solltest du auf jeden Slider mit einer großen SV Change eine neue Combo setzen, damit der Spieler besser merkt, dass sich irgendetwas verändert und nicht misreadet.

00:13:983 (3,4) - Beide einzeln CTRL+G für besseren Flow

00:14:840 (5,6) - Ich würde hier ein Dreieck aus dem Sliderend von 3, dem Anfang von 4 und 5 machen, 6 auf einer geraden Linie mit 4 und 5 platzieren und den Stream um -90° drehen

rip zu müde lass das morgen machen
Prinsep
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Prinsep
Forbidden Alchemy Diff

00:09:912 (2,3) - this kinda breaks the visual flow
00:12:483 (5) - NC here cause there is a loud sound and this note should be spaced further away due to spacing emphasis
00:12:912 (1) - same with this note
00:29:412 (4,5,6) - these notes are kinda too spaced in the calm section
00:33:912 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:37:554 (2,5) - weird over lap
00:40:340 (1,2,3) - lol 2 doesnt even have a sound but the jump is so big
00:47:412 (6) - dont think this is supported by a sound
01:06:483 (2,5) - shouldnt they over lap?
01:09:054 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think this is too force to break the flow maybe just make it flow well but make the slider slightly further away from the end of the stream
01:14:626 (3,4,5,6,7) - the loud sound is at 3 but the stream only turns at 5 pls fix
01:19:769 (1,2,3,4) - this feels awkward to look at and play

Gl with map X3 :)
Prinsep
117 posts
Joined October 2014
Prinsep

My Angel Settia wrote:

Forbidden Alchemy Diff

00:09:912 (2,3) - this kinda breaks the visual flow
00:12:483 (5) - NC here cause there is a loud sound and this note should be spaced further away due to spacing emphasis
00:12:912 (1) - same with this note
00:29:412 (4,5,6) - these notes are kinda too spaced in the calm section
00:33:912 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:37:554 (2,5) - weird over lap
00:40:340 (1,2,3) - lol 2 doesnt even have a sound but the jump is so big
00:47:412 (6) - dont think this is supported by a sound
01:06:483 (2,5) - shouldnt they over lap?
01:09:054 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think this is too force to break the flow maybe just make it flow well but make the slider slightly further away from the end of the stream
01:14:626 (3,4,5,6,7) - the loud sound is at 3 but the stream only turns at 5 pls fix
01:19:769 (1,2,3,4) - this feels awkward to look at and play

Gl with map X3 :)
i dont need m4m xd i need kudos
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