[extra]
http://puu.sh/tW63N/9c6dfb06fa.png haha very funny xd
the use of pure grid snap is consistent, but doing that led to some weird emphasis and spacing issues in my opinion.
00:01:296 (3,4,1) - feels very over spaced compared to things like 00:03:296 (3,4,1) - or 00:09:463 (4,1) - the next time that part repeats.
00:09:629 (1,2) - ends up being a rather large jump, even though 2 doesn't have very strong emphasis on it imo.
00:17:629 (1,2,3,4) - despite this section being definitively calmer these jumps are the same as the ones in the intro.
01:05:463 (4,1) - 4 has more emphasis than 1, with regards to spacing, but 1 has a strong vocal starting on it as well as a hitsound.
01:09:296 (3,4,1) - is a lot easier than 01:08:296 (3,4,1) - despite being the same sound and the 3rd of that pattern.
some of these issues are not that hard to deal with but others are very tough due to the restrictiveness of your concept.
other things
00:07:629 (1,4) - these overlaps are somewhat ugly in my opinion
00:35:463 (4) - i don't really think 4 should have the same emphasis as 2 and 3 since it's a quieter drum
00:35:963 (2,3) - does not sound like it needs a triple here.
00:55:129 (4,5) - these things not aligning looks kind of strange since the rest of the pattern is fully square.
01:02:129 (3,4) - i think this spacing is too large, compared to 01:01:629 (1,2) -
01:28:296 (5) - i believe this should be two notes since the violin has two notes
[another]
00:04:296 (3,4) - these should be a slider in my opinion, since the violin is playing three descending notes and 4 is not on a new note.
00:07:963 (3,4) - i don't think there is a constant 1/4 rhythm, especially not in the deeper drums that were followed at 00:15:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - .
00:35:463 (4) - i believe this note should have lowered spacing compared to 2 and 3.
00:57:629 (1,4) - this doesn't look very good imo. similar other sliders have this issue too.
01:19:296 - same thing as the first point.
[collab insane]
00:01:629 (1,2) - strange rhythm, the violin is clearly dominant here and is followed later but the drums are highlighted?
00:13:963 (3) - while it fits the pattern, i don't think 3 should have a wide angle into it since it's somewhat awkward to play, and 3 is not a very strong note to emphasize.
00:16:629 - better to put a clickable object right before a spinner imo.
00:19:713 (2) - this is clearly not in the song... and 3 is not a strong note that should be emphasized by an overmapped triple into it i think.
00:20:296 (6) - should be more spaced out imo.
00:36:379 (4) - unneeded overmap
00:56:962 (2) - seems like very small spacing for this note.
i think, the execution of the theme in the extra means that your mapping is too restricted in my opinion. i personally don't like it much, but i'm sure others do, since it's an interesting concept.
good luck.
edit: sorry for english mod X d
http://puu.sh/tW63N/9c6dfb06fa.png haha very funny xd
the use of pure grid snap is consistent, but doing that led to some weird emphasis and spacing issues in my opinion.
00:01:296 (3,4,1) - feels very over spaced compared to things like 00:03:296 (3,4,1) - or 00:09:463 (4,1) - the next time that part repeats.
00:09:629 (1,2) - ends up being a rather large jump, even though 2 doesn't have very strong emphasis on it imo.
00:17:629 (1,2,3,4) - despite this section being definitively calmer these jumps are the same as the ones in the intro.
01:05:463 (4,1) - 4 has more emphasis than 1, with regards to spacing, but 1 has a strong vocal starting on it as well as a hitsound.
01:09:296 (3,4,1) - is a lot easier than 01:08:296 (3,4,1) - despite being the same sound and the 3rd of that pattern.
some of these issues are not that hard to deal with but others are very tough due to the restrictiveness of your concept.
other things
00:07:629 (1,4) - these overlaps are somewhat ugly in my opinion
00:35:463 (4) - i don't really think 4 should have the same emphasis as 2 and 3 since it's a quieter drum
00:35:963 (2,3) - does not sound like it needs a triple here.
00:55:129 (4,5) - these things not aligning looks kind of strange since the rest of the pattern is fully square.
01:02:129 (3,4) - i think this spacing is too large, compared to 01:01:629 (1,2) -
01:28:296 (5) - i believe this should be two notes since the violin has two notes
[another]
00:04:296 (3,4) - these should be a slider in my opinion, since the violin is playing three descending notes and 4 is not on a new note.
00:07:963 (3,4) - i don't think there is a constant 1/4 rhythm, especially not in the deeper drums that were followed at 00:15:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - .
00:35:463 (4) - i believe this note should have lowered spacing compared to 2 and 3.
00:57:629 (1,4) - this doesn't look very good imo. similar other sliders have this issue too.
01:19:296 - same thing as the first point.
[collab insane]
00:01:629 (1,2) - strange rhythm, the violin is clearly dominant here and is followed later but the drums are highlighted?
00:13:963 (3) - while it fits the pattern, i don't think 3 should have a wide angle into it since it's somewhat awkward to play, and 3 is not a very strong note to emphasize.
00:16:629 - better to put a clickable object right before a spinner imo.
00:19:713 (2) - this is clearly not in the song... and 3 is not a strong note that should be emphasized by an overmapped triple into it i think.
00:20:296 (6) - should be more spaced out imo.
00:36:379 (4) - unneeded overmap
00:56:962 (2) - seems like very small spacing for this note.
i think, the execution of the theme in the extra means that your mapping is too restricted in my opinion. i personally don't like it much, but i'm sure others do, since it's an interesting concept.
good luck.
edit: sorry for english mod X d