1. 00:17:600 - like this sound better?
   
2. 01:15:205 (1) - Remove New combo
3. 01:15:583 (3) - Add New combo

1. 00:42:054 (4) - beginning whistle

1. 00:09:533 (4) - 1grid left
2. 00:13:062 (2,3) - 1grid down
3. 00:39:659 (2) - Delete Note?

S o r d a wrote:

thanks req~

[Haku No Okami]:

1. 00:17:600 - like this sound better?
   
2. 01:15:205 (1) - Remove New combo
3. 01:15:583 (3) - Add New combo They do folllow the keys

awesome>~</

spboxer3 wrote:

[Haku No Okami]
00:32:978 (1,2,3) - Easy let player confused ? just aha??

spboxer3 wrote:

[Normal]
00:12:810 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing?

[Haku No Okami]
00:32:978 (1,2,3) - Easy let player confused ?

[KIRBY Mix]
00:12:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OMG I don't think it was good
00:14:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
I like your beat. It fit this song


finally: I think your skin is so shine.

sorry for my poor English
star~

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi. Sorry for late mod. Watching anime. orz Finally pushed myself to mod. hehe no problemo, at least you still mod it~

Easy:
00:57:180 (1) - I rather you have a beat that you can hit to start kiai time than a slider end. hmm this is a matter of taste I guess, I personally wanted this to be a slider end to make it more easier for new player. There are no critical problem with it so I stick with it

Hard:
Probably the most naziest mod you'll ever find but
01:02:600 (3,4) - 3 and 4 are two different sliders just by a bit. Their endpoint anchor point is off. Kinda bugging me though. orz hehe ok then, fixed~

Good luck!

Roddie wrote:

[*]00:24:911 (1)-Was this left intentional or by mistake? If it was a mistake, Fix the spacing on that by using the distance snap.

i c u wrote:

nice one but 3 insanes?
youre insane....................
STAR

[Haku No Okami]
This difficulty is a mystery. The spacing isn't really consist with [Kirby] and [Hard]. I would suggest keeping it's circle size, but increase it's overall spacing to create a link between [Hard] and [Kirby]. It also looks very clustered with the current spacing as well.

bmin11 wrote:

[Hard]
01:02:222 (2,3,4) - Just a linear slider would have worked. They don't have an unity as a pattern right now. It could have worked as a three slider of 01:06:256 (4,5) as well.

1. Skin:
   
   1. Perhaps, "black" ticks?
   2. Would you make the Score-bar a bit smaller? It's too close to the numbers imo.
   3. Pehaps, add a "yellow arrow" as "play-warningarrow"?

1. 01:02:222 (1) - I'm a bit worried about this slider. Sometimes I think that it would be better to move it 1/2 earlier but then I'm not sure if that would be intuitive enough. Perhaps, try this? This way rookies won't try to follow the vocals.
2. 01:12:810 (1) - Perhaps, use an horizontal flip to improve the flow?

1. 00:09:533 (4) - This slider is overlapping way too much with the bar. Perhaps, try another slider-shape?
   

   352,312,9533,2,4,B|404:264|424:192|416:120|368:64|368:64|256:64|144:64|144:64|96:120|88:192|108:264|160:312,1,770,0|2

2. 00:31:592 (2) - This clap sounds a bit disorienting, I would suggest to remove it.
3. 00:32:978 (1,2,3) - This pattern plays a bit weird and I could feel that something was missing. Perhaps, try with a slider starting from this point: 00:33:735 -?

1. 00:04:239 (6,1,2) - Half of the approach-circles appear behind the score-bar. If it's possible, I strongly suggest to avoid these things by moving the circles somewhere else.
2. 00:54:155 (5) - Same here, but this time is the slider-path.
3. Awesome!

1. Due to the special rhythms used in this song, you should use Tick Rate: 2
2. I still disapprove those stacks, I strongly suggest to unstack them all
   "00:12:565 (4,1,2) - This kind of stacks are not easy to read nor play, I highly suggest to either stack all the circles or don't stack any of them. (same suggestion for stacks like: 00:20:632 (4,1,2) - 00:22:145 (7,1,2) -)"
3. 01:04:491 (4,5,6) - The approach-circles are going behind the bar, if it's possible try to move these circles somewhere else.
4. 01:15:079 (3) - This circle felt a bit off, I think you should remove it.
5. 01:15:331 - Perhaps, end Kiai here? The musical change happens here.

1. Didn't see major problems, just one comment. The normal-whistles during the chorus are way too loud for the song imo, you should try to reduce volume a bit. Oh, same as the other diff, Tick Rate: 2?

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Easy]

1. 01:02:222 (1) - I'm a bit worried about this slider. Sometimes I think that it would be better to move it 1/2 earlier but then I'm not sure if that would be intuitive enough. Perhaps, try this? This way rookies won't try to follow the vocals. I think won't add a circle there. I do agree that it's a little tricky so I think the small gap would give them time to read the AC
2. 01:12:810 (1) - Perhaps, use an horizontal flip to improve the flow? hm.. for this I want the ball to bounce according to instrument in the music so I'll let this stay as it is

[Normal]

1. 00:09:533 (4) - This slider is overlapping way too much with the bar. Perhaps, try another slider-shape? Thanks for the code but the slanted on the slider doesn't fit with vocal
2. 00:31:592 (2) - This clap sounds a bit disorienting, I would suggest to remove it. Done
3. 00:32:978 (1,2,3) - This pattern plays a bit weird and I could feel that something was missing. Perhaps, try with a slider starting from this point: 00:33:735 -?I don't think starting it on 1/2 beat sounds fit. I change 2 & 3 to slider so it's easier to hit

[Hard]

1. 00:04:239 (6,1,2) - Half of the approach-circles appear behind the score-bar. If it's possible, I strongly suggest to avoid these things by moving the circles somewhere else.
2. 00:54:155 (5) - Same here, but this time is the slider-path.
3. Awesome!

omnomnomnomnom

nomnom.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Haku No Okami]

1. Due to the special rhythms used in this song, you should use Tick Rate: 2 ( actually, you could had said tick rate 2 is overally more consistent, or that i'm actually following more instruments (<- special rhythmn means this?)
2. I still disapprove those stacks, I strongly suggest to unstack them all
   "00:12:565 (4,1,2) - This kind of stacks are not easy to read nor play, I highly suggest to either stack all the circles or don't stack any of them. (same suggestion for stacks like: 00:20:632 (4,1,2) - 00:22:145 (7,1,2) -)" Listen at the song to kno why I don like this
3. 01:04:491 (4,5,6) - The approach-circles are going behind the bar, if it's possible try to move these circles somewhere else. while playing it do actually doesn't count , as if the upper part covered, you still see the circle itself and the lower part of the circle
4. 01:15:079 (3) - This circle felt a bit off, I think you should remove it. i think you got why i used stacks like "00:12:565 (4,1,2), it is obviously following the SAME instruments , so just thank for having me see it :3
5. 01:15:331 - Perhaps, end Kiai here? The musical change happens here Puttted it in 01:15:079 (3) , because the end of the gorgheggio

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Haku No Okami]

1. I still disapprove those stacks, I strongly suggest to unstack them all
   "00:12:565 (4,1,2) - This kind of stacks are not easy to read nor play, I highly suggest to either stack all the circles or don't stack any of them. (same suggestion for stacks like: 00:20:632 (4,1,2) - 00:22:145 (7,1,2) -)" Listen at the song to kno why I don like this
2. 01:04:491 (4,5,6) - The approach-circles are going behind the bar, if it's possible try to move these circles somewhere else. while playing it do actually doesn't count , as if the upper part covered, you still see the circle itself and the lower part of the circle

1. You added the "Slider-followcircle", you didn't add the Slider-ball set tho. Try adding the template one.
2. [Easy] uses a different Video Offset
3. [KIRBY Mix] was created using the Test Build, it uses stuff like "TitleUnicode:", "BeatmapSetID:28257"... I'm not sure if this is a problem but you better keep it consistent through the whole mapset. (Remove the extra Metadata)

Gonzvlo wrote:

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Haku No Okami]

1. I still disapprove those stacks, I strongly suggest to unstack them all
   "00:12:565 (4,1,2) - This kind of stacks are not easy to read nor play, I highly suggest to either stack all the circles or don't stack any of them. (same suggestion for stacks like: 00:20:632 (4,1,2) - 00:22:145 (7,1,2) -)" Listen at the song to kno why I don like this
2. 01:04:491 (4,5,6) - The approach-circles are going behind the bar, if it's possible try to move these circles somewhere else. while playing it do actually doesn't count , as if the upper part covered, you still see the circle itself and the lower part of the circle

Krisom wrote:

A quiestion about the skin!
Should the image on "hit300g.png" be the one that appears on "hit300k.png" and vice versa? Right now, when you do a 300 on all the notes of a combo, a "weak" appears at the end of said combo, and if you hit 100 once (or more) you get a "300!!", unless there's some persona thingy I'm missing here about the "weak" being strong, I think it should be the other way around.

I guess my only worry is the hit300k/g thingy, everything else looks nice. If you change them (or not) I'll rank afterwards.

PS: haku's diff plays so odd at first, but when you get used to the half-stacked triples it's actually very nice ~

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Another ranked to my Guest Compenium