01:06:118 - pls nerf the SV here since it isn't sightreadable. I'm recommending to set it at 1.5x
01:51:998 - ^
01:56:480 - ^
01:31:308 - ^
03:53:722 - ^
00:48:204 (48204|0,48204|2) - make this a triple since you used triples every 1/1 previously
00:48:549 (48549|2,48549|3) - ^
00:48:722 (48722|0) - don't make this an LN, make this a single note
00:50:963 (50963|0,50963|3) - make this a triple
00:51:308 (51308|2,51308|0) - ^
00:53:722 (53722|3,53722|1) - ^
00:54:239 (54239|2) - make this only a single note
00:56:653 (56653|2,56739|3) - i think this should be an LN, starting from 00:56:653 up to 00:56:825
01:35:963 (95963|2,95963|0,96135|3,96135|1,96308|0,96308|2,96394|3,96480|1,96480|2,96825|1,96911|2,96998|3,96998|1,97170|0,97342|2,97429|1,97515|0,97515|3,97687|1,97773|2,97860|3,97860|0,98032|1,98032|2) - woah there are suddenly LNs inserted. I prefer that you follow your previous patterns of 1/4 jumpstreams to be consistent
01:35:963 (95963|2,95963|0,96135|3,96135|1,96308|0,96308|2,96394|3,96480|1,96480|2,96825|1,96911|2,96998|3,96998|1,97170|0,97342|2,97429|1,97515|0,97515|3,97687|1,97773|2,97860|3,97860|0,98032|1,98032|2) - this part also ^
01:40:963 - missing double
01:46:998 (106998|2,106998|3,107170|0,107170|1,107342|1,107342|3,107515|3,107515|0,107687|2,107687|1,107860|0,107946|1,108032|3,108032|2,108204|0,108377|1,108377|2,108549|0,108722|2,108722|1,108894|3,109066|1,109066|2) - again you inserted some LNs. just follow the jumpstreams for consistency
01:51:739 (111739|0,111739|2) - i think this should be deleted as there is no sound
02:08:894 (128894|3) - this should be a triple since the sound is strong
02:09:411 (129411|0,129411|3) - ^
02:09:929 (129929|0,129929|2) - ^
02:10:273 (130273|1,130273|3) - ^
02:10:791 (130791|3,130791|0) - ^
02:11:308 (131308|3,131308|0) - ^
02:11:653 (131653|3,131653|1,131998|1,131998|3,132342|2,132342|0,132687|2,132687|0,133032|1,133032|3) - move these notes together, I mean put them beside each other for a more impact
02:36:480 (156480|2,156480|3,157515|0) - why not snap the end of the LN at 02:37:773?
02:38:894 (158894|2,158894|3,159239|1,160273|0) - ^same issue, snap the end at 02:40:532
02:47:515 (167515|1,167515|0,168549|2) -^ same, at 02:48:808
02:49:929 (169929|0,169929|3,170273|2,171308|1) -^ same, at 02:51:566
02:56:135 - you could start the 1/4 stream here that occurs at 02:56:825
03:20:187 (200187|0) - delete this note
03:20:273 (200273|3) - make this a double
03:35:963 (215963|3,215963|2,216135|3,216135|1,216135|2,216308|2,216308|0,216480|3,216480|0,216653|2,216653|0,216653|1,216825|0,216825|2,216825|3) - suddenly in this part there are anchors. to be consistent in patterning you can follow the previous pattern at 03:33:377 (213377|2,213549|0,213549|1,213635|3,213722|2,213894|1,213894|0,213980|2,214066|3,214066|0,214239|0,214239|2,214411|1,214411|2)
05:08:204 - you could put another LN here and extend it to 05:10:963