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Earth, Wind & Fire - September 99 (Phats & Small Remix)

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ztrot
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ztrot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, June 19, 2011 at 3:44:10 PM

Artist: Earth, Wind & Fire
Title: September 99 (Phats & Small Remix)
Tags: RandomJibberish DiamondCrash
BPM: 129.67
Filesize: 4605kb
Play Time: 02:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. DCiNiS (4.86 stars, 215 notes)
  2. RJ's Cruisin' (2.31 stars, 114 notes)
  3. Sweatin' (4.34 stars, 179 notes)
Download: Earth, Wind & Fire - September 99 (Phats & Small Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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small collab don't except more than one more diff.
Last edited by ztrot , edited 17 times in total.
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
Here's your hitsoundage

Download: Earth Wind and Fire - September 99 (Phats & Small Remix) (ztrot) [Sweatin'].osu
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
- You forgot to put RandomJibberish to tags
- remove countdown?
- A preview point for this map is not set
- Add Easy and Insane difficulty

[RJ's Cruisin]
I guess this is [Hard] or [Normal+]
Go through whole map and fix offgrid notes, at least these 00:57:255 (1) - , 01:00:726 (1,2) - , 01:04:428 (1,2,4) - , 01:35:431 (1,2,3) - , 01:56:485 (1) - .. .. .. ..
Map whole song.
00:47:771 - object isn't snapped!
00:51:473 ^

[Sweatin']
Use same kiai sections on both diffs?
01:54:404 Object isn't snapped!
01:53:016 Object isn't snapped!
01:51:165 Object isn't snapped!
01:50:471 Object isn't snapped!
01:49:314 Object isn't snapped!
01:48:620 Object isn't snapped!
01:47:926 Object isn't snapped
01:44:224 Object isn't snapped!
01:43:530 Object isn't snapped!
02:24:017 (1) - add finish
SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost
- Kiai Time must be the same for all difficulties
[ztrot diff]
00:23:476 (4,6) - These don't line up right ;_;
00:40:366 (8) - I don't love the overlap with (6) but ok. It's also not perfectly symmetri-*gets shot*
01:31:960 (10) - This one is more noticeably non-symmetrical.

I will not star this beatmap because it is marked as a "Work in Progress". If you would like a star let me know when this is put into Pending.

HOW YOU DO THIS
aRiskOfRain
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Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
hi

Download: Earth Wind and Fire - September 99 (Phats & Small Remix) (ztrot) [DCiNiS].osu
iMuffin
243 posts
Joined March 2010
iMuffin
Do you remember?~
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
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Charles445
General
Copy paste much? owait it's rj and dc lol
You need a preview point!
Oh come on, Sweatin' gives a higher score than DCiNiS.

RJ's Cruisin'
Start the map at 00:14:453 like the Sweatin' diff. If you leave it as is, the countdown is extremely misleading; most will miss the first note.
End the map at 02:42:526 like the Sweatin' diff.
I'm really not a fan of huge-ass sliders, but whatever.

Sweatin'
01:29:646 (5) - New combo? It seems to work better
02:35:585 (2,3) - I would space these out just to be safe. It's fine as is though.

DCiNiS
Start the map at 00:14:453 like the Sweatin' diff. If you leave it as is, the countdown is extremely misleading; most will miss the first note.
00:44:530 - This break sucks ass, map this thing
01:28:258 - This break is pretty bad too.
End the map at 02:42:526 like the Sweatin' diff.

To be honest, the only real problem with the map is the fact that it hardly exists.
RJ's map doesn't start and end correctly.
DC's diff has too many breaks and doesn't start and end correctly.
TheVileOne
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TheVileOne
I had fun with the maps.

Except for this.
(Sweatin')
00:40:366 (8) - It's lopsidedness bothers me.

Star for an awesome song.
dkun
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dkun
septembaaa

found nothing wrong
Roddie
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Roddie
Hi.

Keep in mind that these are suggestions I'm posting.

Sweatin'
  1. 00:40:336 (8)-I believe that there should be a new combo here. Also, it sounds like there should be a finish on the last reverse arrow and a finish on the end of that slider.
  2. 00:55:173 (8)-^Pretty much same thing I mentioned except you just need to add a finish on the end of that slider.
  3. 01:39:595 (8)-^Same thing here but add finishes on both the last reverse arrow and the end of that slider.
  4. 01:54:402 (8)-^Same thing here but just add a finish on the end of that slider.
  5. 02:15:354 (x, 2)-It feels like there should be a note here... Also, on 2, Remove new combo. What I suggest is that you can make a pattern like this.

DCiNiS
  1. 01:57:642 (x)-Add a note here, add a clap as well, stack this with 3, add a timing point and set the sample set to soft.
  2. 01:58:104-Add a timing point here and set the sample set to normal.

And that's it. There wasn't anything I can point out about RJ's Cruisin' Good luck, ztrot!

Star!
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Nharox
[DCiNiS]

01:25:713 (5) - New combo.
01:26:639 (9) - Same as above.
01:27:564 (13) - ^
01:28:258 - Let the break begin at 01:28:490.

[Sweatin']

00:24:402 (6) - Move this up so it ends on the previous slider.
01:42:834 (1) - Spacing~
02:35:354 (1,2,3,4) - Increase the spacing a bit.

[RJ's Cruisin'] is fine.
NotShinta
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Joined September 2009
NotShinta
General:
Get a notlazy PiNiS mapper to make you an easy

DCiNiS:
02:11:292 (1) - This jump, while makes the map look pretty, sucks pepsi.

Sweatin':
Should have used RJ's breaks. Oh well.
00:40:366 (8) - Rotate this slightly to unoverlap 6?
01:28:490 - I would drag this break to here, mate
01:42:834 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rotate by 90 either way?
02:35:354 (1,2,3,4) - Move these further away from each other. "Some of the worst stages in EBA do it" is not a justification.

Good map, you.
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
[RJ's Cruisin']
00:29:607 - Move this timing point to 00:29:549 - ? (beat snap divisor 1/8). In that way the switch from soft to normal sliderslide should be less audible.
00:48:811 - Move this timing point to 00:48:926 -
00:52:512 - Move to 00:52:628 -

[Sweatin']
02:13:953 - Add a timing point here (Normal: volume 70%) or at 02:13:895 - (beat snap divisor 1/8)
I prefer the last one for the same reason on RJ's Cruisin'
02:14:300 - Add a timing point here (Soft: volume 100%)
02:17:655 - Add a timing point here (Normal: volume 70%) or at 02:17:597 - (beat snap divisor 1/8)
02:18:002 - Add a timing point here (Soft: volume 100%)

[DCiNiS]
00:31:921 - Add a timing point here (Normal: volume 70%) or at 00:31:863 - (beat snap divisor 1/8)
Do this for all the sliders that have a switch between normal and soft hitsound.

Just add this and we're done :\
Download: soft-sliderslide.zip
ziin
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ziin
8-)
ztrot
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ztrot
:(
Crimmi
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Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

~[General]~

You forgot the ' ,' in the artists' name, as it supposed to be: "Earth,Wind & Fire"

and just in case you don't believe me~

~[RJ's Crusin']~

Nothing~

~[Sweatin']~

TBH there is nothing in this diff to sweat about, maybe raise the HP drain by 1 or 2? (Maybe people will "Sweat" a bit :P)

~[DCiNiS]~

Nothing~


This map has my blessing~
Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli
Hello,


I'm getting 7ms early with the current offset. Try using 1490 and test it out till the end.
Delete the x2 .osb you got at the beatmap folder. Don't really need those.



[RJ's Cruisin']

Some sliders have been placed very down or up the grid. This can easily be fixed.
I mean, this one even touches the health bar: 00:36:664 (3) -
(Not a big deal for those who play maybe, but I'm just pointing it out in case you decide to move them a bit.)

01:09:749 - If you used the new offset, pull this section back a few ticks so the players get the 100% volume instead of 70%
02:08:971 - ^



[Sweatin']

00:31:104 (1) - Match with fading (7)? Just move (7) two mini grids to the right. That should do the work.
00:44:061 (4) - I suggest increasing the volume a bit here (to let's say 85%) so that the finish sounds shines a bit more.



[DCiNiS]

*I suggest increasing the drain for this difficulty. Should be harder than [Sweatin'] in my opinion.

00:36:657 - Careful with this timing section if you changed the offset. Few ticks back.

nNazi hitsound mod:

01:26:169 (3) - Totally lacks a clap.
01:27:326 (4) - Remove soft whistle and add the normal hitsound alone.
01:28:483 - Totally finish the pattern before the break with a finish sound beat here.
-
01:50:231 - Careful with this timing section if you changed the offset. Few ticks back.
01:53:239 - ^
01:59:485 - ^
02:03:187 - ^
02:06:889 - ^
02:14:061 - ^
02:17:763 - ^
02:21:465 - ^


-Merely suggestions-

- 00:27:402 - Throw some beats here to start the map with?... Or even a spinner which starts here: 00:25:551,
finishes here: 00:27:402 - and THEN the beats come.
- Add kiai timing for the chorus in all of the difficulties?-

Good luck!
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Found nothing wrong
Bubbled
Krisom
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Krisom
Hello, just passign by.
I think you're missing a space between the comma and the "W" in "Earth, Wind & Fire". Next BAT might want to check this
ztrot
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ztrot
Rebubbble would be nice
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Rebubble
jericho2442
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jericho2442
Sweatin'
02:21:703 - i think a note would go epic here


maps are great, just see if or not you wanna do that, either way i will rank after since its soooo tiny

EDIT: was fixed in irc, sooooo enjoy your Heart
Zelos
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Zelos
FINALLY :D
Verdisphena
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Verdisphena
oh you
Charles445
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Charles445
HNNNNNG the other diffs are still short
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
No, ztrot's diff is too long :D
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