General:
Get a notlazy PiNiS mapper to make you an easy
DCiNiS:
02:11:292 (1) - This jump, while makes the map look pretty, sucks pepsi.
Sweatin':
Should have used RJ's breaks. Oh well.
00:40:366 (8) - Rotate this slightly to unoverlap 6?
01:28:490 - I would drag this break to here, mate
01:42:834 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rotate by 90 either way?
02:35:354 (1,2,3,4) - Move these further away from each other. "Some of the worst stages in EBA do it" is not a justification.
Good map, you.