1. [Shalon]'s Taiko Oni (4,74 stars, 883 notes)
2. Collab (4,85 stars, 701 notes)
3. Normal (3,09 stars, 342 notes)

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

I think it gets a little bit off towards the end. Maybe the BPM is too high? Though I just used what the BPM analyzer gave me >_<

• 00:09:148 (1,2) - spacing error... well, how about stack these and arrange following notes this way?
  01:15:325 (2,4) - Remove clap?
  01:35:840 (7) - Clap end?
  01:48:524 (11,12) - Stacking (Use 0.0x spacing and disable grid snap)
  01:51:722 (4,5) - ^
  01:56:354 (5,6) - ...I suggest move 01:56:354 (5,6) 1/2 beat forward...also fix the spacing = =
  02:02:310 (2,3) - Stacking
  02:25:913 (X) - add a note with clap here?
  03:01:648 (1,1) - add whistle?

loli_milk wrote:

wow
I really lvoe this song

kurohacker wrote:

Hi there~

kurohacker's mod(^^)

[General]
The combo colours used here are very hard to differentiate, maybe you can use different colours instead? Like maybe:
- Hue 162, Sat 234, Lum 153
- Hue 74, Sat 216, Lum 150
- Hue 20, Sat 240, Lum 100
(I'm using the blue on the girl's uniform, the green of the chalkboard and the brown of the girl's hair. I like the colors as they are.
Also, maybe increase the hitsounds' volume by just a bit. Did you see all the green lines? The volume is pefect to me.

[Normal]
0:38:693 [1] - How about changing the hitsounds to make it similar to [1] at 0:36:929, i.e. finish-normal-whistle? nah.
1:22:921 [spinners] - The two spinners are a bit too close to one another, maybe shorten the first one so that it ends at 1:24:355, and extend the second one so that it starts at1:24:576 instead? Want to let it stay like this. I dunno if that's OK for a Normal, though.
1:54:686 [spinners] - Same case here. First one ends at 1:55:899 and the second one starts at 1:56:193.
3:05:826 - Maybe add a circle here? Hmm.. nah.
4:15:752 [spinners] - Same case as the spinners before, first one ends at 4:17:186.
4:25:017 [1-3, 1-2] - Move one grid down (grid level 3).

[Collab]
0:17:076 [3] - Move one grid up and one grid left (grid level 3).
0:48:179 [3] - Move one grid up.
0:56:120 [3,4,5] - I think you should remove these, put in a slider 1/6 beats long from this point, and reverse it 3 times, ending at 0:56:340. It'll go better with the synth sounds at the back. Might be, but I think it play better like this.
1:36:487 [8] - Maybe add a finish at the end? nope
1:43:987 [5] - Move this one one grid up.
1:59:429 [5] - Move this one one grid right and one grid down.
2:28:767 [5] - Reverse selection here (Ctrl-R). nope... those are jumps here
3:31:414 - Add a note here, to follow the echo.
3:44:649 [3] - Snap this one to position (grid level 3).
4:25:899 [3] - Move this one one grid left.
4:26:561 - Maybe add a circle here? nope
4:32:958 [3] - Move one grid left.
4:36:267 [2,3,4] - Move these one grid up and one grid right.

I enjoy listening to the song, and I like the fact that both Tenshi-nyan and Magicpheonix map the beatmap almost in sync with the song, so one star to you guys~ Great :3
All the best!

kurohacker wrote:

I enjoy listening to the song, and I like the fact that both Tenshi-nyan and Magicpheonix map the beatmap almost in sync with the song, so one star to you guys~

Tenshi-nyan and Magicpheonix

Magicpheonix

Magicpheonix

Combo1 : 232,135,70
Combo2 : 201,145,82
Combo3 : 57,101,166

Magicphoenix wrote:

kurohacker wrote:

I enjoy listening to the song, and I like the fact that both Tenshi-nyan and Magicpheonix map the beatmap almost in sync with the song, so one star to you guys~

Tenshi-nyan and Magicpheonix

Magicpheonix

Magicpheonix

Magicpheonix

Lanttu wrote:

[Collab]
00:09:576 (2) - Maaybe new combo because of the spacing?
00:13:767 (1) - Aaaaggghh, completely silent, why? ;_; Can't this poor slider have at least a bit volume in it?
00:40:458 (1) - Is new combo necessary here?
01:24:576 (4) - Move the middle square some 3 grids to left so that it bends more nicely?
01:57:223 (6) - New combo, because of the spacing?
02:12:664 (1,2) - Not very pretty looking sliders tbh. Try to make them wave in bit more symmetrical way?
02:34:943 - Gaaahh, why so silent again? ;_; Couple of ticks more volume here?
02:54:576 (2) - Move the beginning square 1,5 grids down so that it's parallel to (4)? :3
03:35:164 - SO QUIET~ ;_; Hard to play because of that.
03:38:473 (4) - Don't like this jump very much, doesn't fit the music or anything.

No problems in Normal, exept for those few very silent timing sections again~

Now I'm really addicted to this song, so cute~ *throws a star*

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,80,30
Combo2 : 255,170,30
Combo3 : 255,130,30

KillerRind wrote:

Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!

[General]
- Ich modde in english! :o
- You need atleast one diff under 3 stars, but it should be ok since the song is over 4 minutes long 3 star = ok
- You have an unused .osb file in your song-folder, delete it FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
- Fade out the mp3 a bit earlier? 04:43:987 Sounds good. nah
- The Combo-Colors look very similliar, try :

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,80,30
Combo2 : 255,170,30
Combo3 : 255,130,30

see no differnce, but why not.

[Normal]
00:36:929 (1) - Add Clap on Slider End-Point nah
00:42:223 (1) - Add finish k
01:46:634 (7) - Move last slide-point 3 Grids up (looks better) k
02:45:090 (4) - New Combo nah
03:49:061 - Add circle, move it under the end of (2) nah

[Collab]
01:24:576 (4) - Move last slider-point 4 grids down k^^

Nice Map :3
Collab is fuckin Sexy ^o^
Sternchen~

• 
  Combo colour is different in Normal and Collab

• 
  00:39:576 (2): Repeat – 1 and start the spinner at 00:40:458 or just move the spinner
  00:57:002 (5,6,7,8,9,1): Maybe a bit hard for Normal
  01:15:752 (1): Move this slider away from the bottom of ⑥
  01:37:811 01:38:252 01:42:779 : These three green lines seems unnecessary
  01:58:105 : End the Kiai Time here
  02:19:282 (3): Delete this circle and start the spinner here or just move the spinner
  02:35:384 (1,2,3,1): Strange spacing. I think overlap 1,2,3 would be better
  02:36:929 (1): The sound is too loud
  02:49:061 (1): I suggest changing this spinner to some notes or end it at 02:50:605
  03:06:487 (1): Start this slider at 03:06:267 and add one repeat

• 
  00:20:605 (3,4): Exchange the position
  00:56:120 (3,4,5) 00:56:561 (6,7) : Overlap
  01:18:620 (4,1): Add jump
  01:50:605 (6): I suggest only keep the clap at the beginning and remove the others
  02:36:929 – 02:51:046 : Why not add clap hitsounds in this part
  03:28:767 : Add a circle
  03:30:973 (5,6): Overlap here is not good in my opinon
  03:40:017 03:40:237 03:40:458 : Add circles
  04:03:840 (3): Clap
  04:11:782 (6): Add clap here

[Shalon] wrote:

done.

IceBeam wrote:

Hi.

Why combo colours are so similar? :< I'd like to see something more colourful. I like them the way they are now.

[Normal]
00:40:679 - There's almost a 2 seconds empty space between the last note and the spinner.Add a note to 00:41:340 or start spinner earlier?that's supposed to be a short break.
00:58:105 (6) - Finish?
01:14:429 - I'd add a note here. I mapped the clap pattern in here...
01:18:620 (7) - Move it back to 01:18:399?
01:26:561 - Again,too much empty space..Add 2 notes at 01:27:002 and 01:27:664 maybe?
02:29:870 (4) - Finish?
03:00:311 - Add a note?
03:05:826 - ^
03:07:149 (1) - Finish?
03:42:002 - Add a note?

[Collab]
00:09:576 (2) - Stack it with (1) or fix distance,but it's too close to previous object now.
00:25:458 (1) - ^ Again too close.
00:54:576 (1,2,1,2,3) - Again distance is hardly readable,I was close to click earlier. Those are Anti-jumps, and I put them there intentionally. They play just fine to me.
01:36:929 - Finish?
01:57:223 (6) - Again distance lack,fix it,it's too close. ^
03:02:958 (1,2) - Such spacing with unexpected notes between spinners is kinda cruel Magic already decreased the spacing at one point...
03:36:929 (1) - Finish?
03:43:987 (1) - ^


Good job,star!

winber1 wrote:

Sorry for like 11 day mod lol

Collab

00:55:899(x) - add note under combo 2
01:42:995(1) - end slider here with clap
01:43:215(x) - add note [do these two together and fix spacing if needed]

Normal

LetterBox during breaks is checked in this diff while it is not in Collab whoa i coulda sworn that was the case. wtf, my eyes are failing me gahhhhh

00:58:987(1,2,3,4) - i would rather do something with this rather than stacking them all in one spot
02:25:679(x) - add note
02:27:443(x) - ^?
04:11:340(4) - i would rather have this slider repeat once and then add something at 4:12:002 and 4:12:223. this original repeat slider feels weird to me (then you should move some notes around to make it fit). The slider also looks like it will only repeat one time to me, and apparently it did not, so it lied to me. you're right. fixed that. the only thing I fixed from your mod.

Awesome map! :3
Star~

KSHR wrote:

taiko dif : I ask to KanaRin

1. the tag should be [Shalon], don't forget '[' and ']'

1. 00:09:576 (2) - new combo
2. 00:21:487 (1,2,3,4) - copy paste D:
3. 00:24:576 (8,1,2) - spacing
4. 00:35:605 (1,2,3,1) - ...
5. 00:38:473 (5,1) - swap new combo
6. 01:56:340 (5,6) - spacing
7. 02:01:635 (5) - new combo
8. 02:36:929 (T) - volume too high, 45% is enough imo

1. 01:18:620 (7) - a bit confusing in a Normal to overlap sliders

1. set all difficulty settings to the middle

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. the tag should be [Shalon], don't forget '[' and ']'

[Collab]:

1. 00:09:576 (2) - new combo
2. 00:21:487 (1,2,3,4) - copy paste D:
3. 00:24:576 (8,1,2) - spacing
4. 00:35:605 (1,2,3,1) - ...
5. 00:38:473 (5,1) - swap new combo
6. 01:56:340 (5,6) - spacing
7. 02:01:635 (5) - new combo
8. 02:36:929 (T) - volume too high, 45% is enough imo

[Normal]:

1. 01:18:620 (7) - a bit confusing in a Normal to overlap sliders

and a huuuuge score gap between Normal and Collab, it would be nice if you can map/find a diff around 10 million score.

arien666 wrote:

[Normal]
:3

[Collab]
16.5mil >_>
01:11:230 (8,9,10,1) - Err... Can I ask you make them seperated position orz? Some confusing ;_; Sorry no ;_; Plays perfectly fine

[[Shalon]'s Taiko]
03:51:487 - Move this Kiai start into 03:51:046? Fixed the Kiai time snappings O_o Don't tell me that the Kiai times are supposed to end after a spinner...

Nice set anyway :3

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
03:01:634 (1) - looks bad, don't use red dots on the curve urr ok.

~Collab~
02:17:517 (1,2) - looks bad, don't use red dots on the curve ok...
03:27:443 (4) - new combo k
04:05:384 (1) - delete hmm.. I dunno, I think I can let it stay.
04:12:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacings seem too high, I thought the rhythm was like 04:36:929 (1,2,3) (It's OK if you don't want to change) lowered it a bit


+Star

1. Artist:Riya
2. A combo color is similar change?

1. 00:37:260 (2) - move 00:37:149 -
2. 00:37:370 - add note
3. 00:46:083 (2) - move 00:46:193 -
4. 00:58:105 (1) - Finish
5. 01:09:796 (6) - Repeat 1time
6. add slider? Start 02:42:223 02:42:443 end
7. 04:26:340 (1) - Remove New combo 04:26:782 (2) - new combo
8. 04:31:193 (4) - Repeat 1time

S o r d a wrote:

thanks reqs~

[overall]:

1. Artist:Riya
2. A combo color is similar change?

[Collab]:

1. 00:37:260 (2) - move 00:37:149 -
2. 00:37:370 - add note
3. 00:46:083 (2) - move 00:46:193 -
4. 00:58:105 (1) - Finish
5. 01:09:796 (6) - Repeat 1time
6. add slider? Start 02:42:223 02:42:443 end
7. 04:26:340 (1) - Remove New combo 04:26:782 (2) - new combo
8. 04:31:193 (4) - Repeat 1time

[Normal]:
Fine.

nice Collab <3
go go ranked