1. Starry Sky - 4Key (4,73 stars, 1901 notes)

Julie wrote:

?? Ngeng Family Mania Queue ??

[Starry Sky]

00:03:987 (3987|0,3987|3,4212|3,4212|0,4287|1,4287|2,4362|3,4362|0,4437|1,4437|2) - are these 2 notes actually necessary?
Due to here 00:02:787 (2787|3,2787|0,2937|2,3087|0,3087|1,3237|2,3387|3,3387|0) - because 2-1-2-1-2 for the bass, starting here 00:03:687 - it should be a little bit more relaxing no? --you're right, removed notes, pattern looks like this http://puu.sh/sREHk.png mapped ln (bass sound at the end of the stream)

00:22:512 - and 00:24:912 - Add one more note on column 1 to keep the bass consistent. --fixed

00:30:987 (30987|2,31137|3,31287|2,31437|1,31587|0,31737|1) - Would be cool if you follow these LNs with the pitch of the song, because now it just feel like 2 same part but in different hands : 00:30:987 (30987|2,31137|3,31287|2) - and 00:31:437 (31437|1,31587|0,31737|1) - . Like if you try to follow the pitch of the song, for example : http://puu.sh/sNKJ5/636024e5c5.jpg (you don't need to follow it perfectly), it totally give a different hand field then trills in both hands. --well didn't pay very much attention to main sound's pitch oops , will go with this pattern now: http://puu.sh/sRFoQ.jpg

00:32:937 (32937|0) - End your LN at 00:33:087 - , since all those 1/2 LN have been matching the same instrument, and that instrument stop there. --fixed thankss

00:39:687 - Add another note to emphasize the cymbal more? So that is a bit different then these 2 notes chord 00:39:987 (39987|3,39987|1,40287|0,40287|3) - . --like the idea

00:43:024 (43024|0) - Not sure if this is wrong snap or you did it on purpose, but I assume is wrong snap, since you usually use 2 notes for that drum at 00:42:987 - , and also because 00:43:024 - I really don't hear anything here xD. -- ...wth is that doing there looool

00:49:587 (49587|1,49887|1) - Hmm why are these the same column, they have different pitch. --i wanted to make lns ascend left->right and didn't think that repeating was a problem , but now used: http://puu.sh/sRFIu.jpg

00:57:687 - + So you're kinda keeping those 2 notes chord consistent but why? Like what are they exactly matching? For example 01:00:762 - this drum louder then this 01:00:837 - , while 01:00:912 - same instrument as 01:00:837 - . I feel this part you just randomly add a stream + 2 notes on nearly each white/red line. While this is the last diff, it should be a bit more challenging by matching some specific instrument in the song. --here i mapped the bass sounds brom the background, past versions had drum and theese bass sound mapped but it was just too much, anyways im unsure about this stream so ill keep in mind the idea of remapping it .

01:24:987 (84987|2) - move this to the last column, those trills should have the same number of notes. --done

01:25:587 - to 01:26:487 - Not sure why you are suddenly snapping at 1/6, all the instrument are still pretty clear to hear that they are on 1/4 snap. --i felt like rising difficulty with harder pattern using 1/4 as a build up for this 1/6 (i realised it was 1/4 but thought 1/6 could fit) 1/6 will be replaced if this is meant again
01:29:712 (89712|2) - Delete, gotta admit in 100% playback rate, it does fit, as if there was 3 drum sound haha, but there really is no new sound here ><. -fixed

01:31:512 - Add a note here, the stream still continue from the same instrument 01:31:362 (91362|2,91437|1) - . --you're right

01:32:937 (92937|0,92937|3,93012|2,93012|1,93087|0,93087|3,93162|2,93162|1) - Same reason as 00:03:987 -, are those 2 notes chord really necessary for such low sound? Here is fine 01:33:237 - due to the drum --lol changed before reading this rec

01:53:937 (113937|2) - Move this to the last column so it doesnt do like a 6 notes jack here http://puu.sh/sNLR7/ce7c29be2d.jpg. Since the sound is really clear, you can feel that it totally won't fit the song. --okk

01:54:837 (114837|0) - Move this to the 2nd column to avoid the 4 notes jack here 01:54:387 (114387|0,114537|0,114687|0,114837|0) - . --okk x2

02:01:287 - Add one more note to emphasize the cymbal and the end of the kiai. --good idea

02:01:737 (121737|0,121887|1,122037|3,122187|1,122337|0) - How about matching the pitch? Because this part 02:01:737 (121737|0,121887|1,122187|1,122337|0) - too left handed. Pitch go something like that http://puu.sh/sNLZd/08c77860e9.jpg. --ok, used this pattern: http://puu.sh/sVYBC.jpg

02:02:637 - and 02:03:837 - Add a note here, same sound as 02:01:437 - . --on 02:01:437 - i hear a sound, on those two points i hear nothing. Wouldn't i be dumping those two notes if i apply this? maibe for consistense but idk

02:07:512 (127512|2) - This honestly feel random, 02:07:737 (127737|0,127887|0,128037|1,128187|1,128337|1) - keep it consistent with 02:06:387 (126387|2,126537|2,126687|2,126837|1,126987|1,127137|1) - . --changed pattern acording to pitch

By the way, I'm not sure if anyone told you or if you are aiming for rank since you asked a mods. But you need at least a minimum of 5 min drain to be consider a marathon or else you will have to do the full set if you are aiming for rank. --yeah i know im searching gd for NM and will do
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