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Paroto - Ju Tou San Chi Tian Qi Qing [Taiko|Osu]

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CrystilonZ
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, May 16, 2018 at 6:19:36 PM

Artist: Paroto
Title: Ju Tou San Chi Tian Qi Qing
Source: 家有大貓
Tags: Nekojishi jiā yǒu dà māo jia you da mao mau Nviek5 KuensanP クエン酸P 晴空和音 Triodust 空氣載體 furry ezek HappyRocket88 BoatKrab KittyAdventure Shiroi Hiroshi gokugohan12468 collaboration 鸚鵡 ajeemaniz exusagi Nwolf Kaitjuh Parrot A Sunny Day is Watching over You (Vocal) Arzenvald
BPM: 160
Filesize: 20943kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Arzenvald's Muzukashii (2.94 stars, 327 notes)
  2. Boatocket's Hard (3.02 stars, 222 notes)
  3. Crystezek's Advanced (2.62 stars, 187 notes)
  4. Easy (1.49 stars, 102 notes)
  5. ezek's Normal (1.88 stars, 133 notes)
  6. Furiends' Insane (4.12 stars, 280 notes)
  7. Furious (4.55 stars, 358 notes)
  8. Nwolf's Oni (4.06 stars, 455 notes)


Download: Paroto - Ju Tou San Chi Tian Qi Qing
Download: Paroto - Ju Tou San Chi Tian Qi Qing (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mappers~




  • Difficulty List

    Standard
  1. Easy - Crystilonz
  2. ezek's Normal - by ezek
  3. Crystezek's Advanced - by ezek & Crystilonz
  4. Boatocket's Hard - by HappyRocket88 & BoatKrab
  5. Furiends' Insane - by HappyRocket88, BoatKrab, Shiroi Hiroshi, KittyAdventure, ezek and Crystilonz
  6. Fur-ious - by Crystilonz

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    Taiko
  7. Usagi's Muzukashii - by Arzenvald
  8. Nwolf's Oni - by Nwolf

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    Mania (4K)
  9. Wolfy's Normal - by WolfyArmato-
  10. Derrick's 4K Sunlight - by \[Crz]Derrick

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    Storyboard by Kaitjuh
Crystezek's Advanced
00:01:540 - 00:13:540 - Crystilonz
00:13:540 - 00:25:540 - ezek
00:25:540 - 00:37:540 - Crystilonz
00:37:540 - 00:49:540 - ezek
00:49:540 - 01:03:031- Crystilonz
01:03:031 - 01:15:031 - ezek
01:15:031 - 01:31:437 - Crystilonz
Boatocket's Hard
00:01:540 - 00:07:607 - HappyRocket88
00:07:540 - 00:13:607 - BoatKrab
00:13:540 - 00:25:607 - HappyRocket88
00:25:540 - 00:37:607 - BoatKrab
00:37:540 - 00:49:607 - HappyRocket88
00:49:540 - 01:03:031 - BoatKrab
01:03:031 - 01:15:031 - HappyRocket88
01:15:031 - 01:27:031 - BoatKrab
Furiends' Light Insane
00:01:540 - 00:13:540 - HappyRocket88
00:13:540 - 00:25:540 - BoatKrab
00:25:540 - 00:37:540 - Shiroi Hiroshi
00:37:540 - 00:49:540 - KittyAdventure
00:49:540 - 01:03:031 - HappyRocket88
01:03:031 - 01:15:031 - ezek
01:15:031 - 01:31:437 - Crystilonz
This game contains gay romance plot and anthropomorphic characters.

____Nekojishi is released! Get it for free on the official website or on steam!


____This is a story about a college student getting disturbed by three feline spirits. You will be playing as our main character, Lin Tian-Liao.
Born within a family of oracles, yet never cared about his family business, Liao only wanted to be an ordinary student. However, one day, three feline spirits approaches him all of a sudden. What kind of an adventure will they drag him into?

[]

Arts: Chinese New Year bg | Other stuff are taken from the vid / the official website
Website | Plurk | Twitter | Weibo
MP3: Music | 8bit | Instrumental

If you have any questions or need my assistance, pm me in-forum or in Discord.
ezek
Count on me if you want a GD or a collab diff *_*

Topic Starter
CrystilonZ

ezek wrote:

Count on me if you want a GD or a collab diff *_*

That mousepad screms "Takemoto" lol

I'm planning on inviting you and some others after finishing insane anyways XD
KittyAdventure

ezek wrote:

Count on me if you want a GD or a collab diff *_*
Maybe my boyfriend want mapping too o3o (If can, collab easy diff xD)
ezek

CrystilonZ wrote:

This project is so furry that it will make fur sprouts on you XD
I looked at my arm right after reading that ;w;
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
ezek
Boatocket xDDDDDD loooool xDDDDD
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ

ezek wrote:

Boatocket xDDDDDD loooool xDDDDD
Told you XD
HappyCrab is definitely better
Andrea
~General~
  1. Consider adding "Shiroitty" to the tags in every difficulty.


~Shiroitty's Easy~
  1. Stack Leniency is kinda low for an Easy difficulty imo, I'd suggest to increase it by 2 or 3 ticks at least.
  1. 00:52:607 (3) - New combo due to the vocals change.
  2. 01:14:732 (5,1) - Using this kind of stacks can be really confusing for beginners, I'd suggest to avoid them.


~ezek's Normal~
  1. Really weird AR for a Normal difficulty if you ask me, I'd just make it 5 at this point.
  1. 00:48:857 (5,1) - I know there's a SV change here but the spacing is suddenly too close here if we compare it to the previous pattern, I'd suggest you to move (1) a bit further.
  2. 00:57:107 (1) - Remove new combo.
  3. 00:58:607 (2) - New combo.
  4. 01:00:107 (1) - Remove new combo.
  5. 01:26:732 (6,1) - Same issue as 00:48:857, it's rather confusing for a Normal, they're way too close.


~Insane~
  1. Current AR feels way too fast, I'd make it 8.5 at least.
  1. 00:25:232 (3,4,5,6,1) - All the stream patterns you made before were awesome, then this one kinda breaks the flow, I'd make (1) closer if I were you.
  2. 01:25:419 (8) - Stacking this circle under previous slider's end would be better imo.


Quite interesting mapping style on Insane, maybe I dislike the fact that there are way too many sliders on blue ticks but for the rest I really liked the patterns and how it flows in general.

Good luck!
_handholding
Easy
  1. 01:21:857 (2) - blanket
  2. 01:28:982 - how about adding another timing point here to reduce the volume of the spinner? This would stop the spin sound of the spinner from overpowering the quiet vocals at the end


Normal
  1. 00:10:419 (6) - This note seems to ruin the pacing and flow of this section; if it were up to me I would delete this note
  2. 00:10:607 (1) - the clap doesn't fit imo. how about a soft whistle?


Insane
  1. 00:03:107 (1) - Did you not put a whistle on the head because this is the only slider with no piano chord played on it? Or did you forget to add it? I'm not sure if this was intentional based from the first thing I said, so I just pointed it out anyways
  2. 00:13:419 (3) - Imho this would look much better without the curve as neither (1) or (2) are curved. It just makes it stick out like a sore thumb
  3. 01:01:982 (4) - I can't help feeling that this would look more structured if you did something like this http://puu.sh/qEDSV/46c39c0153.jpg

[]
I really liked the tidiness of you map. It looked great! GL! Also did we use to be mutuals? I forgot :p
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. Consider adding "Shiroitty" to the tags in every difficulty. I will add it when the set is complete


~Insane~
  1. Current AR feels way too fast, I'd make it 8.5 at least. changed to 8.5
  1. 00:25:232 (3,4,5,6,1) - All the stream patterns you made before were awesome, then this one kinda breaks the flow, I'd make (1) closer if I were you. oops XD
  2. 01:25:419 (8) - Stacking this circle under previous slider's end would be better imo. that'd be too hard to read. besides, this gives pretty much the same feeling of playing stuff like 01:07:981 (4,5,6) -


Quite interesting mapping style on Insane, maybe I dislike the fact that there are way too many sliders on blue ticks but for the rest I really liked the patterns and how it flows in general. I thought I would go well with the streamy mood of the song, but I guess I went overboard ;w;

Good luck!

Kisses wrote:

Insane
  1. 00:03:107 (1) - Did you not put a whistle on the head because this is the only slider with no piano chord played on it? Or did you forget to add it? I'm not sure if this was intentional based from the first thing I said, so I just pointed it out anyways ayyyy you got it right. I'm basing the whistles on piano sounds XD
  2. 00:13:419 (3) - Imho this would look much better without the curve as neither (1) or (2) are curved. It just makes it stick out like a sore thumb This is to give 00:13:419 (3,1) - something like a slingshot XD.
  3. 01:01:982 (4) - I can't help feeling that this would look more structured if you did something like this http://puu.sh/qEDSV/46c39c0153.jpg Though the angles are a bit messed up, I intended to do something like this paint too op

[]
I really liked the tidiness of you map. It looked great! GL! Thanks! Also did we use to be mutuals? I forgot :p no we didn't. but I can add you if you want to XD
Thanks a lot :)

edit: Oooo and also thanks for the stars, Kisses :)
ezek

Andrea wrote:

~ezek's Normal~
  1. Really weird AR for a Normal difficulty if you ask me, I'd just make it 5 at this point. 5 is too much imo, moved to 4.5 instead~
  1. 00:48:857 (5,1) - I know there's a SV change here but the spacing is suddenly too close here if we comp are it to the previous pattern, I'd suggest you to move (1) a bit further. oki
  2. 00:57:107 (1) - Remove new combo. oki
  3. 00:58:607 (2) - New combo. oki
  4. 01:00:107 (1) - Remove new combo. oki
  5. 01:26:732 (6,1) - Same issue as 00:48:857, it's rather confusing for a Normal, they're way too close. fixodoki
thanks osuplayer111!

Kisses wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:10:419 (6) - This note seems to ruin the pacing and flow of this section; if it were up to me I would delete this note I'm me and you are you, and me wouldn't do the same as you
  2. 00:10:607 (1) - the clap doesn't fit imo. how about a soft whistle? b-b-but there are claps all over the place ;w;
thanks thanks!

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62169
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Ju Tou San Chi Tian Qi Qing
TitleUnicode:舉頭三尺天氣晴
Artist:Paroto
ArtistUnicode:パロト
Creator:CrystilonZ
Version:ezek's Normal
Source:家有大貓
Tags:Nekojishi jiā yǒu dà māo jia you da mao Nviek5 クエン酸P 晴空和音 Triodust 空氣載體 furry ezek HappyRocket88 BoatKrab KittyAdventure Shiroi Hiroshi
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BeatmapSetID:495866

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KittyAdventure
Fixed all, thank you for mod!

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ritsu-tanaika
Hi, from M4M

EASY

00:15:107 (2) - I think the flow of the cursor is better if you flipped vertically, by doing Ctrl + J (easier connection with 00:15:857 (3) - )

00:28:607 (1) - I personally dont think a Finish is necessary at the head of the slider, because it creates a slightly unnecessary sound (feel free to ignore this, if you disagree)

01:08:732 (4) - I dont hear any drum sound, so I think its better to replace the clap with a whistle

01:14:732 (5) - It may be slightly confusing to rookie players if you stack notes, so I suggest moving to (484,220) to form a small triangular pattern


NORMAL

00:29:169 (2) - I suggest changing this slider to this shape, so there will be less overlap, and easier to see (Ctrl H, then Ctrl J, and finally Ctrl G)


01:01:607 (1) - Suggest adding a whistle at the head of the slider, to hint the beginning of the drum beat

INSANE

00:08:919 (5) - Slightly OCD, but I may suggest moving to (160,64) to form an equilateral triangle pattern

00:15:857 (8) - I think it may be difficult for players to see if you stack this note on the back of the stream, especially if its the same color. I would suggest moving to (408,312) to form a triangular pattern with notes 8, 9 and 10

(In the image below, I NC'd at the original 8th note to make the pattern easier for you to see, which is in green)


00:26:357 (4) - Think you may have missed a whistle here

00:31:232 (4,5) - I think the flow may be easier to connect if you swapped the position and order of these notes in the triangle


01:01:794 (3,4) - The connection between these two notes isnt too smooth to reach the next stream of circles, so I suggest adjusting this slider to face 01:02:169 (1) - with the slider head at about (196.44)


01:11:919 (7) - This note's position has some slight overlap with 01:11:357 (4) - , which makes it hard to see. I would suggest moving to (292, 96) to form some sort of kite pattern


I hope I helped, good luck
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hi, from M4M

INSANE

00:08:919 (5) - Slightly OCD, but I may suggest moving to (160,64) to form an equilateral triangle pattern It's already an equilateral triangle XD. Try turning on "view stack" and you'll see what I'm talking about

00:15:857 (8) - I think it may be difficult for players to see if you stack this note on the back of the stream, especially if its the same color. I would suggest moving to (408,312) to form a triangular pattern with notes 8, 9 and 10 imo this is pretty easy to read. Since 00:15:294 (3) - have almost faded out at that point

(In the image below, I NC'd at the original 8th note to make the pattern easier for you to see, which is in green)


00:26:357 (4) - Think you may have missed a whistle here ooh nice catch!

00:31:232 (4,5) - I think the flow may be easier to connect if you swapped the position and order of these notes in the triangle this also flows just fine imo


01:01:794 (3,4) - The connection between these two notes isnt too smooth to reach the next stream of circles, so I suggest adjusting this slider to face 01:02:169 (1) - with the slider head at about (196.44) mentioned in previous mod. You can check my reply to Kisses' mod for information


01:11:919 (7) - This note's position has some slight overlap with 01:11:357 (4) - , which makes it hard to see. I would suggest moving to (292, 96) to form some sort of kite pattern I'm pretty sure 01:11:357 (4,7) - aren't overlapping @_@


I hope I helped, good luck
Thanks for the mod :)
I really appreciate your effort in capturing those pics :D
KittyAdventure
Fixed all etc. finish sound because it's from a creavity of hitsound!
I change again Stack Leniency to 3 because in AiMod say much lower than 2!

Thank you for mod! :3

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[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"thisisavideo.avi"
0,0,"Shiroitty's bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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25607,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
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49607,-100,4,2,2,25,0,0
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63107,-100,4,2,2,50,0,1
74732,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
75107,-100,4,2,2,40,0,1
87107,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0
91419,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 75,175,41
Combo2 : 239,164,5
Combo3 : 4,211,255
Combo4 : 125,69,13
Combo5 : 255,236,0
Combo6 : 153,126,100

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[ezek's Normal]
  1. 00:57:107 (2,1) - Blanket in tail is need to fix a bit :3

[Insane]
  1. 00:15:013 (1,2) - I feel confuring when beat it, how about change NC from circle (1) to circle (2)
  2. 00:25:513 (6,1) - Are you sure to used that snapper? I mean it's unrankable, maybe
  3. 00:35:169 (2,3) - It's not blanket, trying blanket it!
  4. 00:35:919 (4,1) - ^
  5. 00:38:919 (6,1) - I feel rhythm is wrong, ctrl+G? and the flow is weird and can't see when the player playing it!
  6. 01:20:357 (5,6) - Same like 00:25:513 (6,1)
  7. 01:22:419 (5,1,2) - Rhythm and NC is wrong
  8. 01:24:107 (1,2) - Same like 00:25:513 (6,1)
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
I'm also thinking about if I base the notes on the vocals too much orz
The rhythm is correct if you focus on the vocals.
and that blanket is not intended.
and that jump is totally rankable. I use it all the time and that's why people hate me lolol
Signum
Await my mod today. Sorry for taking it too long.
nice to see some more furry stuff here :3
Topic Starter
CrystilonZ
Signum
here we go

Shiroitty's Easy:
- It would be good to put the names (in SB) in exact mapped parts. (Like 0:00:00 - 0:15:00 Shiroi & . . .) - Just for the clarification
- Welp, symmetrically looks really neat and I don't have anything to say about it

ezek's Normal:
- 00:10:232 (5,6) - Change this to 1/2 slider
- 00:16:232 (6,1) - Nazi thing. Blanket seems a bit off
- 01:28:419 (3,1) - Put a slider here to fit the lyrics

Insane:
16:01 Signum: meh alright
16:01 *Signum is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055521 Paroto - Ju Tou San Chi Tian Qi Qing [Insane]]
16:03 Signum: 00:04:607 (1) -
16:03 Signum: This slider looks a bit odd.
16:03 CrystilonZ: yep
16:03 CrystilonZ: ehh
16:03 Signum: I will send you a better version of the slider. (my internet is killing me)
16:04 CrystilonZ: did something happen?
16:04 Signum: bad internet connection
16:04 CrystilonZ: lol
16:05 Signum: osu.ppy.sh/ss/5883149
16:05 Signum: oops
16:05 Signum: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5883149
16:05 Signum: This would suit better for the lyrics.
16:06 CrystilonZ: ehh
16:06 Signum: 00:13:044 (1,2) - how about use the same slider pattern as you used at00:13:419 (3) - ?
16:06 CrystilonZ: doesn't it have too many turns and stuff?
16:06 Signum: in my opinion it fits perfectly to a lyrics
16:07 CrystilonZ: I mentioned that in previous mods actually
16:07 Signum: but it is up to you if you are going to fix it or not.
16:07 CrystilonZ: (3) is too give some kind of slingshot thingy
16:07 Signum: 00:27:482 (2,4) -
16:08 Signum: 00:27:482 (2) - Ctrl+H & Ctrl+G ?
16:08 Signum: It would be more symmetrical
16:08 CrystilonZ: I'm not aiming for symmetry in this map lol
16:09 CrystilonZ: 00:28:232 (4) - is (2) but shortened and mirrored
16:09 Signum: 00:50:263 (4) - this feels a bit weird to me.
16:09 Signum: how about making this & other pattern below like you did here? 00:51:669 (3,4,5) -
16:10 CrystilonZ: how?
16:10 Signum: I mean
16:10 CrystilonZ: you mean changing it to triplet?
16:10 Signum: yes exactly
16:10 CrystilonZ: rather than a double?
16:10 CrystilonZ: I afriad that'd be overmapping orz
16:10 CrystilonZ: 00:50:357 i don't hear any sound here
16:11 Signum: 01:01:982 (4) -
16:11 CrystilonZ: or maybe my ears are too bad lol
16:11 Signum: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5883194
16:11 Signum: ?
16:12 Signum: like this or just the same pattern but add ctrl+G
16:12 CrystilonZ: also mentioned this earlier lol
16:12 CrystilonZ: wait a sec
16:12 Signum: so it will be the same as slider 3
16:12 CrystilonZ: http://puu.sh/qEHSJ/5e75b14653.jpg
16:13 Signum: Ah
16:13 Signum: 01:08:919 (10) - Is it just me or is it badly snapped?
16:13 Signum: Or is it on purpose?
16:14 CrystilonZ: on purpose
16:14 CrystilonZ: the 1/8 right?
16:14 CrystilonZ: that's intentional XD
16:14 Signum: alright
16:14 Signum: no more things found.
16:14 Signum: nicely mapped.
16:14 CrystilonZ: the same goes for other 1/8s
16:15 CrystilonZ: thank you >//<
16:15 Signum: yea you are welcome

Good luck
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