Red Velvet - Ice Cream Cake · forum

Nuolong

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nuolong 2016-10-09T14:23:43+00:00

I'm scared
The other one is so ahead anyways
I could've finished hard yesterday but I was trying to be a super cool dude and make a storyboard but that's a huge disaster

Ela

111 posts

Joined November 2012

Ela 2016-10-11T05:08:36+00:00

let's see
Red Velvet?

yaaaaaay

Ela

111 posts

Joined November 2012

Ela 2016-10-11T21:09:54+00:00

please don't take everything i say, i'm just a novice modder who wants to help (:

[Hard]

00:17:481 (5) - The "Neon Na-" is so notorious to be ignored, suggestion
00:53:935 (1,2,3) - sounds flat compared with the ones before and after it, just keep the same pattern
01:01:435 (3) - same thing of the first one, this time the vocal is lower than the instrument so the other one is more important, suggestion
01:09:981 (7) - vocal, -2/8
01:12:074 (1) - and 01:14:691 (4) - +1/8
02:59:516 (1,2,3) - same thing of the second

[Insane]

00:09:807 (1,2) - add a 1/8 between de two to make a triple and keep the idea that you make here 00:07:016 (2,3,4) - and 00:07:714 (6,7,1) - this way you have two doubles triples and make it more comfortable
00:28:818 (1,2) - they are too close, move them apart, same to this ones 00:31:609 (1,2) - and this ones 00:34:400 (1,2) - because they have a music gap between each other (note: this is really a suggestion than a error, it's just to take advantage of what can u do here)
00:37:801 (3) - you don't need it (it's true that in the beginning u used two triples but later u just used one) plus it sound better without it, same to the next ones
00:48:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:51:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - seems to have more beats than what the music have and it's weird, try to change it also to the next ones, an idea/suggestion (also can be that i'm crazy, wait if someone thinks the same)
01:21:842 (1,2) - same thing of the second one, u did what i meant right here 01:24:632 (1,2) -
02:19:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - it's really uncomfortable this part, i think it's okey to increase the distance between the circles but don't change too much the inclination of the triples or just keep the inclination but change the distance to the same of 02:18:702 (1,2,3) - , besides the 02:19:749 (1) - change to the left of the last triple to keep the flow
02:59:516 (1,2) - too straight, there is nothing in the map like these ones, replace them with something like this 02:48:353 (1) -
03:10:155 (2) - change it to a slider until here 03:10:156 (2) - to finish the map with the voice

the two diff are really good
good luck!!

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nuolong 2016-10-12T03:43:39+00:00

Blue - Yes, fixed!! I agree, but... (I'll keep it in mind) Sorry, I disagree.

Freyja Wion wrote:
please don't take everything i say, i'm just a novice modder who wants to help (:

[Hard]
00:17:481 (5) - The "Neon Na-" is so notorious to be ignored, suggestion Yeah, I skipped that vocal part but I do not see it as much of a problem. Also suggestion - you should maybe include how you would place it too, because just showing the timeline is a little confusing
00:53:935 (1,2,3) - sounds flat compared with the ones before and after it, just keep the same pattern I agree, fixed on both kiais this pattern was used on!
01:01:435 (3) - same thing of the first one, this time the vocal is lower than the instrument so the other one is more important, suggestion For this big white tick I decided to stick on vocals because it began with no music, only vocal. So I don't want to switch to the music before the next big white tick, which I did switch more to the music at the next big white tick
01:09:981 (7) - vocal, -2/8 I think it's fine~
01:12:074 (1) - and 01:14:691 (4) - +1/8 I think you're wrong for 01:14:691 (4) - .but I tried messing around with 01:12:074 (1) - a bit because it does need an extension, but I found that the way it is now plays the best imo.
02:59:516 (1,2,3) - same thing of the second Yup, fixed this too~ ^^

[Insane]
00:09:807 (1,2) - add a 1/8 between de two to make a triple and keep the idea that you make here 00:07:016 (2,3,4) - and 00:07:714 (6,7,1) - this way you have two doubles triples and make it more comfortable ohh, that's a good suggestion. But I want to have more emphasis on vocals, and it's kinda hard to implement this when I have that small pause.see what you mean though. If more mods point it out, then I might change it
00:28:818 (1,2) - they are too close, move them apart, same to this ones 00:31:609 (1,2) - and this ones 00:34:400 (1,2) - because they have a music gap between each other (note: this is really a suggestion than a error, it's just to take advantage of what can u do here) I like the inconsistency of spacing for this~
00:37:801 (3) - you don't need it (it's true that in the beginning u used two triples but later u just used one) plus it sound better without it, same to the next ones I disagree because I like to view this as a high density map, and it has some beats used in the chorus that I like to emphasize with these triples
00:48:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:51:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - seems to have more beats than what the music have and it's weird, try to change it also to the next ones, an idea/suggestion (also can be that i'm crazy, wait if someone thinks the same) no it follows beats used in the chorus
01:21:842 (1,2) - same thing of the second one, u did what i meant right here 01:24:632 (1,2) -
02:19:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - it's really uncomfortable this part, i think it's okey to increase the distance between the circles but don't change too much the inclination of the triples or just keep the inclination but change the distance to the same of 02:18:702 (1,2,3) - , besides the 02:19:749 (1) - change to the left of the last triple to keep the flow I think the flow is okay. But this is something I might remove on the future, if more mods point in out. I can never get these spaced triples when playing >w<
02:59:516 (1,2) - too straight, there is nothing in the map like these ones, replace them with something like this 02:48:353 (1) - I do not want to make the make too repetitive
03:10:155 (2) - change it to a slider until here 03:10:156 (2) - to finish the map with the voice Sorry, I don't want to switch to focusing on vocals at the end because in this whole last section 03:05:795 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I focus on drums

the two diff are really good
good luck!!

Thanks! I really appreciate this mod. Regardless of how many things I declined, I really found your mod helpful. I hope you enjoy your future modding, and congrats on your first mod! I'm honored that this is the first map you ever modded

I'll be sure to keep the purple things I wrote in mind in case future mods bring it up~

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-10-12T04:53:48+00:00

Q NM

[General]
I think bpm is 172

[Easy]
00:00:911 (1,2) - Don't stack.
00:36:667 - 00:36:842 - 00:36:842 - unnecessary greenline.
00:38:586 (2,1) - don't stack.
you ignored too many beats. for example, 00:49:400 - 00:52:191 - ...etc.

[Hard]
01:05:098 (5,1) - swap NC.
01:12:074 (1) - end at 01:12:685 - .

Umm....Sorry, It was too hard to mod.

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nuolong 2016-10-12T16:07:47+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Q NM

[General]
I think bpm is 172 It was 172 before but it is actually 86 because you count it to the percussion

[Easy]
00:00:911 (1,2) - Don't stack. I didn't find it necessary to move, but moved anyways~
00:36:667 - 00:36:842 - 00:36:842 - unnecessary greenline. Deleted
00:38:586 (2,1) - don't stack. nope, this is fine and I think it has high aesthetic
you ignored too many beats. for example, 00:49:400 - 00:52:191 - ...etc. For these parts I decided to just make the sliders go to the bpm, I don't want to follow the beats/vocals here

[Hard]
01:05:098 (5,1) - swap NC. oops fixed ~
01:12:074 (1) - end at 01:12:685 - . Naw, it's actually fine because 01:12:772 (2) - counts as last beat

Umm....Sorry, It was too hard to mod.

Thank you for modding~!

A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

A r M i N 2016-10-12T16:56:35+00:00

i like the facial expression of the girl in the middle hahahaa

Ashton

Ashton 2016-10-12T21:37:14+00:00

[General]

01:12:074 (1,2) - in the hard difficulty, these notes are concurrent

other stuff looks good!

[Timing]

Check!

[Easy]

your NC pattern is too difficult for an easy, I would suggest to NC every second downbeat rather than every downbeat

00:15:563 (2) - although this looks fine, it would be good if this was a soft pointed triangle because the sliders before hand and the sliders after it ( like 00:18:353 (2) - this one ) have no sharp points, and they are soft
01:30:214 (1,2) - soft pointed please
02:28:818 (1,2) - so now all of a sudden you move to these sliders when you've been using 02:12:074 (1) - these kind through your whole diff up until now
02:37:191 (1,2) - this should be parallel
02:51:144 (1,2) - again all of a sudden these sliders
02:53:935 (1) - this shape should be the same as 02:31:609 (1) - this seeing your whole diff is basically copy paste, copt paste, no effort put into it whatsoever
02:59:516 (1,2) - parallel

nice copy pasta diff correct me if i'm wrong

[firetruck's Normal]

00:20:446 (1) - please don't make this a red anchor, normal anchor will do fine
00:23:586 (2,3) - make these identical
00:25:330 (4) - try something like this (gero style)
00:54:632 (2,3) - please just stack these
02:03:005 (4,2) - please make the same shape

thats it, good luck.

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nuolong 2016-10-13T01:12:14+00:00

Whirl wrote:

[General]

01:12:074 (1,2) - in the hard difficulty, these notes are concurrent oops thanks for pointing that out!

other stuff looks good!

[Timing]

Check!

[Easy]

your NC pattern is too difficult for an easy, I would suggest to NC every second downbeat rather than every downbeat

00:15:563 (2) - although this looks fine, it would be good if this was a soft pointed triangle because the sliders before hand and the sliders after it ( like 00:18:353 (2) - this one ) have no sharp points, and they are soft I agree except that making it soft will be even more repetitive than it already is, and also it's at the lalala part of the music so I want to emphasize it more.
01:30:214 (1,2) - soft pointed please there's nothing wrong with it, so I won't change it
02:28:818 (1,2) - so now all of a sudden you move to these sliders when you've been using 02:12:074 (1) - these kind through your whole diff up until now uh, there's nothing wrong with being inconsistent with slider shapes? I made them different on purpose.
02:37:191 (1,2) - this should be parallel Good point, but I did this on purpose, so that the tail of 02:38:586 (2) - stacks on the tail of 02:34:400 (1) - . Even though it doesn't seem to make sense, but it's my style.If more people point it out then I will probably change it~
02:51:144 (1,2) - again all of a sudden these sliders Yeah same as before, there's nothing wrong with using a different style slider.
02:53:935 (1) - this shape should be the same as 02:31:609 (1) - this seeing your whole diff is basically copy paste, copt paste, no effort put into it whatsoever It is the same shape. Just an FYI, the whole diff is not copy and paste. I put a lot of effort into creating this difficulty and clearly you didn't put effort into this mod if you think the whole thing is basically copy and pasting. I'm surprised that you have the audacity to make such a comment. I'd greatly appreciate if you refrain yourself from making such unnecessary critisism in the future. And yes, in case you decide to reply, the last two choruses are mirrors of each other.
02:59:516 (1,2) - parallel if future mods suggest

nice copy pasta diff correct me if i'm wrong If it's an easy difficulty, there isn't as much flexibility to make it as unique as you'd like it, especially if you're telling me to make sliders look like sliders I've used before when I try to use something new.

thats it, good luck. Thanks.

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-10-13T04:53:50+00:00

Whirl wrote:
[firetruck's Normal]

00:20:446 (1) - please don't make this a red anchor, normal anchor will do fine there's nothing wrong with the red anchor there, but whatevs made it normal
00:23:586 (2,3) - make these identical k done
00:25:330 (4) - try something like this (gero style) meh, it's ok as it is
00:54:632 (2,3) - please just stack these oops
02:03:005 (4,2) - please make the same shape ok

thx for modding

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AzureDoctor

196 posts

Joined January 2016

AzureDoctor 2016-10-13T22:29:01+00:00

Sorry, I won't be able to do mods anytime soon because something came up my my life.

Have a star instead. GL

Ethan

226 posts

Joined September 2015

Ethan 2016-10-14T22:14:40+00:00

Hi from my q

[Easy]
make sure to look at AIMod for things you need to change. for example the DS errors which must be fixed else it is unrankable for this diff
00:09:981 (2) - Maybe redo the slider to look like this? So the wiggle thing is more to the middle like this
00:21:144 (2) - ^ (click for shape)

[Firetruck]
00:13:470 (3) - This overlaps with (1)

[Hard]
looks fine

[Insane]
looks fine too

sorry for such a quick mod but i was rushed bc of stuff IRL. good luck

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nuolong 2016-10-14T23:11:41+00:00

Annika Flina wrote:
Sorry, I won't be able to do mods anytime soon because something came up my my life.

Have a star instead. GL

Oh, good luck with your irl stuffs~ thanks for the star!

Ethan wrote:
Hi from my q

[Easy]
make sure to look at AIMod for things you need to change. for example the DS errors which must be fixed else it is unrankable for this diff I tried fixing the three errors, but one of them seemed fine, the DS between it was alright, so I fixed the two others :3 I don't know why that other one still shows up as an error
00:09:981 (2) - Maybe redo the slider to look like this? So the wiggle thing is more to the middle like this I made it like this on purpose so that the sharp slider angles so along with the beat of the music
00:21:144 (2) - ^ (click for shape) same

sorry for such a quick mod but i was rushed bc of stuff IRL. good luck np, good luck with your irl stuff!

Thanks for the mod!

Snowy Dream

2,195 posts

Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2016-10-15T09:38:50+00:00

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

Red - Important or Issue
Blue - You'd better fix them
Black - Normal Suggestions

[Easy]

00:07:191 - Missing clap?
00:22:888 (3) - Shift+W sounds better.
00:38:586 - 00:44:167 - 02:27:423 - 02:44:168 - 02:49:749 - Unnecessary clap imo.
02:01:609 (2) - Not stack correctly?

[Firetruck's Normal]

Whistle on 00:01:260 - 00:01:958 - 00:03:353 (4) - 00:04:051 - 00:06:144 (4) -
00:20:098 (5) - Shift+R in order to add a drum sound effect.
00:23:935 - Missing clap ?
00:31:609 (1) - (Nazi)move to x:161 y:77, second anchor x:128 y:153, third anchor x:172 y:232 in order to blanket 00:31:260 (4) better.
01:24:632 (1) - In a Normal diff, there must be 750ms more or less space between next note. You can end the spinner at 01:26:725
02:17:656 (1) - The same problem as above.

[Hard]

00:17:481 (5) - What about this instead of this slider? This slider does not follow the vocal imo.
SPOILER

or you can exchange the sequence of (5,6)
01:05:098 (1) - The reverse arrow is hidden from sight, move the second anchor to x:268 y:213 could be better at least

[Insane]

00:17:481 (4,1) - A jump should be here 00:17:835 not 00:17:481 (4) imo, so I choose to move (4) to stack under the end of 00:16:958 (3), and for 00:17:830 (1) - just Ctrl+G
01:00:214 (3) - Move left a bit in order not to touch 01:01:086 (2).
02:16:784 (2) - Please stack 02:16:435 (2) instead of 02:16:609 (1) cuz the sudden stop really confuse me a lot. If you worry about the spacing of next note, you can try..
SPOILER
02:27:423 (1) - Ctrl+G, and of course 02:27:249 (6,7) - they also stack the beginning.
02:32:830 (7,8,1) - If you do the above one, do the same work here plz.

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That's all

Excellent mapset especially for insane diff! Hope it's helpful to you.

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nuolong 2016-10-15T16:24:32+00:00

Snowy Dream wrote:
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
Red - Important or Issue
Blue - You'd better fix them
Black - Normal Suggestions
[Easy]
00:07:191 - Missing clap? oops, yes, added!
00:22:888 (3) - Shift+W sounds better. I don't know what this did but I did shift+w on it~
00:38:586 - 00:44:167 - 02:27:423 - 02:44:168 - 02:49:749 - Unnecessary clap imo. I like this beat that I use on kiai~ to me when I removed it it sounded empty >w>
02:01:609 (2) - Not stack correctly? fixed!
[Hard]
00:17:481 (5) - What about this instead of this slider? This slider does not follow the vocal imo. ok, two people mentioned it now so I changed it!~
SPOILER

or you can exchange the sequence of (5,6)
01:05:098 (1) - The reverse arrow is hidden from sight, move the second anchor to x:268 y:213 could be better at least I made it horizontal so it can be seen better~ i thought that x:268 y:213 was too awkward >w<
[Insane]
00:17:481 (4,1) - A jump should be here 00:17:835 not 00:17:481 (4) imo, so I choose to move (4) to stack under the end of 00:16:958 (3), and for 00:17:830 (1) - just Ctrl+G I thought about it but decided I will not change it. But if in the future more people have problems with this part, I'll keep the way you suggested to change it in mind.
01:00:214 (3) - Move left a bit in order not to touch 01:01:086 (2). ok, fixed~
02:16:784 (2) - Please stack 02:16:435 (2) instead of 02:16:609 (1) cuz the sudden stop really confuse me a lot. If you worry about the spacing of next note, you can try.. Fixed to how the picture looks! I think I did it right..
SPOILER
02:27:423 (1) - Ctrl+G, and of course 02:27:249 (6,7) - they also stack the beginning. I like it how it is now
02:32:830 (7,8,1) - If you do the above one, do the same work here plz. same ^
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That's all Excellent mapset especially for insane diff! Hope it's helpful to you.

Thank you!! Really really helpful mod!!

Firetruck

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Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-10-15T16:40:00+00:00

ethan

Ethan wrote:
[Firetruck]
00:13:470 (3) - This overlaps with (1) lol that doesnt really matter does it

snowy dream

Snowy Dream wrote:
[Firetruck's Normal]
Whistle on 00:01:260 - 00:01:958 - 00:03:353 (4) - 00:04:051 - 00:06:144 (4) - got it
00:20:098 (5) - Shift+R in order to add a drum sound effect. got it
00:23:935 - Missing clap ? added
00:31:609 (1) - (Nazi)move to x:161 y:77, second anchor x:128 y:153, third anchor x:172 y:232 in order to blanket 00:31:260 (4) better. done http://prntscr.com/cu5wa6
01:24:632 (1) - In a Normal diff, there must be 750ms more or less space between next note. You can end the spinner at 01:26:725 o shi ok fixed
02:17:656 (1) - The same problem as above. ^

thx for modding

osu file format v14

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shizukanoto

61 posts

Joined November 2014

shizukanoto 2016-10-15T17:27:42+00:00

[Insane]
Wow! This map is already near perfect, honestly. I really enjoyed the triples and jumps in this map.

major

01:11:900 (5) - hard to read stream. maybe this? https://puu.sh/rJVWX/e342a4cb96.PNG
01:12:946 (7) - hard to hit on time, due to short pause from 6. Also, its distance from 8 makes 8 hard to hit.
02:34:574 (2) - awkward jumps. i find this much easier: https://puu.sh/rJWOZ/b44f3bc908.PNG

minor

00:06:144 (3) - spacing looks a tiny bit inconsistent
00:28:295 (1) - was not expecting all the 1's
01:01:958 (2) - random combo number
02:16:086 (2) - slightly hard to read this stacked. maybe better as a short jump?

I'll get to the other difficulty if I have time later.

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nuolong 2016-10-15T17:40:52+00:00

samcircus wrote:
[Insane]
Wow! This map is already near perfect, honestly. I really enjoyed the triples and jumps in this map. omg ty :3

major
01:11:900 (5) - hard to read stream. maybe this? https://puu.sh/rJVWX/e342a4cb96.PNG I think I'll have to keep it like this because if you set it to 25% playback speed (bottom right of screen) you can hear that every one of these circles follows the beat of the music, and I don't want to miss one~
01:12:946 (7) - hard to hit on time, due to short pause from 6. Also, its distance from 8 makes 8 hard to hit. Okay I moved 7 up a lil! Nice catch :3
02:34:574 (2) - awkward jumps. i find this much easier: https://puu.sh/rJWOZ/b44f3bc908.PNG
I think it is completely fine, but if other people mention it, I might eventually change it.

minor
00:06:144 (3) - spacing looks a tiny bit inconsistent Okie I moved the (4) a little tiny bit if that's what you meant :3
00:28:295 (1) - was not expecting all the 1's I really like this even if it is a lil consistent. I'm going to keep it unless a BN says it's not possible to.. xD
01:01:958 (2) - random combo number It actually isn't, if you check the inheriting sections (green lines), there are SV (slider velocity) changes for 01:01:609 (1) - , 01:01:784 (1) - , and 01:02:132 (1) - which thus need a NC but there is no SV changes between 01:01:784 (1,2) - .
02:16:086 (2) - slightly hard to read this stacked. maybe better as a short jump? I thought about it a while and checked how it would play out of I didn't stack this but for some weird reason it seemed awkward without the stack.... lol
I'll get to the other difficulty if I have time later. okay~

Thank you! Extremely nice mod as I can see this your first mod you're doing :3

shizukanoto

61 posts

Joined November 2014

shizukanoto 2016-10-15T18:09:27+00:00

Nuolong wrote:
samcircus wrote:
01:11:900 (5) - hard to read stream. maybe this? https://puu.sh/rJVWX/e342a4cb96.PNG I think I'll have to keep it like this because if you set it to 25% playback speed (bottom right of screen) you can hear that every one of these circles follows the beat of the music, and I don't want to miss one~

If you look at the screenshot again, you'll see I added a single tap at 5 overlapping 4, right before the stream. So you wouldn't miss a beat that way.

[Hard]
01:51:493 (2) - , 01:52:017 (4) - maybe I just can't read low AR, but this is hard for me to time lol

Sorry, I won't try to comment on the hard difficulty further. It is my first mod as you say, and that's why I didn't realize I don't have the skills to play AR7 maps.
Good luck with Insane!

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nuolong 2016-10-15T18:45:00+00:00

samcircus wrote:
If you look at the screenshot again, you'll see I added a single tap at 5 overlapping 4, right before the stream. So you wouldn't miss a beat that way.

[Hard]
01:51:493 (2) - , 01:52:017 (4) - maybe I just can't read low AR, but this is hard for me to time lol it is using DS so there is no problem

Sorry, I won't try to comment on the hard difficulty further. It is my first mod as you say, and that's why I didn't realize I don't have the skills to play AR7 maps.
Good luck with Insane!

Thanks again, but sorry I still don't see it in the screenshot. The stream must start at 01:11:900 (5) - . From your screenshot it looks like you start the stream at 01:12:074 (1) - , but you are skipping the stream note before it.

shizukanoto

61 posts

Joined November 2014

shizukanoto 2016-10-15T18:57:40+00:00

Nuolong wrote:
Thanks again, but sorry I still don't see it in the screenshot. The stream must start at 01:11:900 (5) - . From your screenshot it looks like you start the stream at 01:12:074 (1) - , but you are skipping the stream note before it.

no prob, what I did was replace the first two notes of the stream with a single tap at 01:11:900.

Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2016-10-16T04:11:48+00:00

Hello,for M4M
wow I like this song and RV

[General]

the size of this BG is little small, maybe you can use this
and change the combo color like.. if you want, just suggestion
SPOILER
```
Combo1 : 174,128,193
Combo2 : 240,230,104
Combo3 : 133,213,238
Combo4 : 242,135,147
Combo5 : 129,196,89
```
put this file into your song folder, and change the name of file to "soft-sliderslide"
https://puu.sh/rKsRB/538a486693.wav

[Firetruck's Normal]

00:42:772 (1,2) stack them well with 00:42:423 (4)
01:01:609 (1,2) deleting this two notes is better I think, the breaktime is too short in Normal diff
01:33:004 (1,2) same problem (I think this is copy-paste right? hh)
02:36:493 (3,4) ctrl+G
02:58:473 (3,4) ^ (still copy-paste)

[Hard]

AiMod has a problem in 03:02:654
00:18:005 delete
00:22:888 ^
00:31:260、00:34:051 +whistle like insane
01:24:284 +whistle
02:26:725 +clap
02:43:470 ^
02:49:051 ^

[Insane]

00:19:400 (2) stack with 00:18:528 (3)
00:31:260、00:34:051 +whistle
00:36:493 (1,1,1,1) +whislte in slider's head
00:39:284 (4) stack it well
the kiai part is quit overmap, i recommend to delete some note like
00:38:499、00:44:080、00:50:359 (if you dont want to change rhythm like the following,then delete this note)
00:49:051 change the rhythm in here like (because the most time you are following the vocal)
01:01:609 (1,2,2,1) change the hitsound of head like Addition-Drum + clap
01:24:284 (2) +whistle
01:33:615 delete note
01:54:720 i think this slider is ended in 01:55:243 will be better
02:03:353 change to 4 1/8 slider to follow the vocal sung "you you you you"
02:33:615 delete note
02:43:382 ^
02:46:871 ^
02:49:661 ^
03:09:981 delete two notes and add a 1/2 slider

that's all,good luck

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-10-16T15:38:29+00:00

Azure wrote:
[Firetruck's Normal]
00:42:772 (1,2) stack them well with 00:42:423 (4) yep
01:01:609 (1,2) deleting this two notes is better I think, the breaktime is too short in Normal diff yeah
01:33:004 (1,2) same problem (I think this is copy-paste right? hh) yeah i copy pasted chorus lolo pls no hate
02:36:493 (3,4) ctrl+G
02:58:473 (3,4) ^ (still copy-paste) imo it's much better as it is now ^

thanks for modding!

osu file format v14

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Title:Ice Cream Cake
TitleUnicode:Ice Cream Cake
Artist:Red Velvet
ArtistUnicode:Red Velvet
Creator:Nuolong
Version:Firetruck's Normal
Source:
Tags:kpop k-pop electropop icc sm sment irene seulgi joy wendy yeri 아이린 배주현 강슬기 웬디 손승완 조이 박수영 예리 김예림
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143,246,142887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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163,124,190330,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Ashton

Ashton 2016-10-16T18:00:40+00:00

Nuolong wrote:
Whirl wrote:

[General]

01:12:074 (1,2) - in the hard difficulty, these notes are concurrent oops thanks for pointing that out!

other stuff looks good!

[Timing]

Check!

[Easy]

your NC pattern is too difficult for an easy, I would suggest to NC every second downbeat rather than every downbeat

00:15:563 (2) - although this looks fine, it would be good if this was a soft pointed triangle because the sliders before hand and the sliders after it ( like 00:18:353 (2) - this one ) have no sharp points, and they are soft I agree except that making it soft will be even more repetitive than it already is, and also it's at the lalala part of the music so I want to emphasize it more.
01:30:214 (1,2) - soft pointed please there's nothing wrong with it, so I won't change it
02:28:818 (1,2) - so now all of a sudden you move to these sliders when you've been using 02:12:074 (1) - these kind through your whole diff up until now uh, there's nothing wrong with being inconsistent with slider shapes? I made them different on purpose.
02:37:191 (1,2) - this should be parallel Good point, but I did this on purpose, so that the tail of 02:38:586 (2) - stacks on the tail of 02:34:400 (1) - . Even though it doesn't seem to make sense, but it's my style.If more people point it out then I will probably change it~
02:51:144 (1,2) - again all of a sudden these sliders Yeah same as before, there's nothing wrong with using a different style slider.
02:53:935 (1) - this shape should be the same as 02:31:609 (1) - this seeing your whole diff is basically copy paste, copt paste, no effort put into it whatsoever It is the same shape. Just an FYI, the whole diff is not copy and paste. I put a lot of effort into creating this difficulty and clearly you didn't put effort into this mod if you think the whole thing is basically copy and pasting. I'm surprised that you have the audacity to make such a comment. I'd greatly appreciate if you refrain yourself from making such unnecessary critisism in the future. And yes, in case you decide to reply, the last two choruses are mirrors of each other.
02:59:516 (1,2) - parallel if future mods suggest

nice copy pasta diff correct me if i'm wrong If it's an easy difficulty, there isn't as much flexibility to make it as unique as you'd like it, especially if you're telling me to make sliders look like sliders I've used before when I try to use something new.

thats it, good luck. Thanks.

hahahahahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

here let me reply: when mapping you don't need to use the same idea over and over again, for example, if you mapped 10 seconds of one part of your diff, then did the same thing AGAIN 10 seconds after it, it becomes really boring

a different way you can express this is by changing the flow; the whole map is 3 minutes, I can see your point into why you wan't to use the same idea over again because it's just easier and consistant, about the 2 sliders, although yes your right you changed them up, you don't use them ever again in your whole map, while you use the other type of sliders throughout your whole diff except for that one point you decide to change it.

I said 'correct me if i'm wrong' if you copy-pasted or not (in most cases, copy paste is fine, but it looks as if your whole map is just copy paste) I said that because you use the same pattern beforehand were you could have done something totally new!

once again a person who can't handle one little comment, lol.

edit: you can make an easy diff unique by doing the following:

changing the way notes flow

changing slider shapes, or the way circles are placed (but don't just do it once, or it becomes inconsistant)

and actually, for your information I put A LOT of effort into making this mod, you just too lazy.

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-10-16T20:42:48+00:00

/me post meme

EscapeReality

133 posts

Joined September 2013

EscapeReality 2016-10-16T22:09:37+00:00

something dum

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nuolong 2016-10-16T22:55:15+00:00

Azure wrote:
Hello,for M4M
wow I like this song and RV this song is amazing~

[General]
the size of this BG is little small, maybe you can use this ok I changed it~ Firetruck showed me this suggestion before but now two people have same thought so I changed it, and made my own choice on color btw
and change the combo color like.. if you want, just suggestion
SPOILER
Combo1 : 174,128,193
Combo2 : 240,230,104
Combo3 : 133,213,238
Combo4 : 242,135,147
Combo5 : 129,196,89
put this file into your song folder, and change the name of file to "soft-sliderslide" i tried it but I don't like it because it removes the beats I made with the clap :3 thanks anyways though~
https://puu.sh/rKsRB/538a486693.wav
[Hard]
AiMod has a problem in 03:02:654 weird, fixed!
00:18:005 delete but then it is skipping over a sound (also fixed NC here)
00:22:888 ^ same, this is even a really big note to miss?
00:31:260、00:34:051 +whistle like insane same as before (i applied mod backward btw)
01:24:284 +whistle same
02:26:725 +clap no i want to keep kiai hitsounds consistent :3
02:43:470 ^ same
02:49:051 ^ same
[Insane]
00:19:400 (2) stack with 00:18:528 (3) good idea but I'm going to keep it the way it is because the slider has higher vocals, so going down from the circle is awkward ;w;
00:31:260、00:34:051 +whistle sorry I did this hs pattern on purpose ;w;
00:36:493 (1,1,1,1) +whislte in slider's head nice! I like, added!
00:39:284 (4) stack it well fixed, i think~
the kiai part is quit overmap, i recommend to delete some note like
00:38:499、00:44:080、00:50:359 (if you dont want to change rhythm like the following,then delete this note) sorry I don't think it is overmap, because overmap is when someone map and there is no sound in music, right? I hear a sound for these parts in the song, though~
00:49:051 change the rhythm in here like (because the most time you are following the vocal) here i followed the non-vocal parts, though~ i like the d&b feeling~
01:01:609 (1,2,2,1) change the hitsound of head like Addition-Drum + clap i didn't fix to what you said but i added some whistles~
01:24:284 (2) +whistle same as before ;w;
01:33:615 delete note this note is in the song though..
01:54:720 i think this slider is ended in 01:55:243 will be better i hear that it ends on the big white tick when i playback 25%
02:03:353 change to 4 1/8 slider to follow the vocal sung "you you you you" sorry I don't understand;; picture maybe? ;w; if what i am thinking is what you mean then i think it is a good idea~ i'll change it to what i think and maybe you can let me know?
02:33:615 delete note same for all of these comment v
02:43:382 ^
02:46:871 ^
02:49:661 ^
03:09:981 delete two notes and add a 1/2 slider i thought about it more and even though other mod mentioned it, i want to keep it this way because the whole end i follow the drums, so i think switching to vocal right at the end is awkward
that's all,good luck

Thanks for your mod, Azure! It was very helpful!

Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2016-10-17T08:05:04+00:00

Hello

about 02:03:353 , the idea you think is what I mean xD
and I checked your files in folder, the name "normal-sliderslide (1)" is meaningless
the hitsounds' names are normal-sliderslide 、normal-sliderslide2 、normal-sliderslide3...etc.
so delete "(1)"

I'm glad my mod is helpful to you, I like your mod,too

Good Luck~!

Ultima Fox

621 posts

Joined August 2013

Ultima Fox 2016-10-17T23:19:56+00:00

hiya~

[Hard]

00:00:911 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - This part you weirdly switch between the instruments in the background and the vocals, so maybe you should try to just stick to one or the other
00:11:900 (5) - Ctrl J for better flow (and it looks better )
01:02:307 (1,2,1,2,3) - Same thing here, its kind of weird to switch from vocals, to instruments, back to vocals
02:09:981 (3,1,1) - Why a double nc here?

[Insane]

01:01:609 (1,1,2,1) - Make the NCs consistent
01:48:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make an equal triangle
02:59:516 (1,2) - These sliders look out of place with the sharp angles, especially because of all the curves and waves you've done, so maybe make these something like the others.

That's all from me, good map!
Good Luck!~

Flezlin

200 posts

Joined December 2013

Flezlin 2016-10-18T03:02:12+00:00

mod from my queue
i did say i preferred 5*+....

[Easy]
there's a lot of blankets that are off in this diff, but im not sure if its intentional or not after reading your userpage x_x
example: 00:07:191 (2,1) - huh? what

[Hard]

01:51:842 (3) - NC?
02:03:353 (4,1) - rhythm feels off for some reason, maybe try something more like this?
03:03:702 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe space these out more similar to 02:17:656 (1,2,3,4) -

[Insane]
00:11:725 (5) - 00:22:888 (5) - maybe 1/8 sliders would fit this sound nicely
00:33:702 (1,2,1) - i dont really get why these are jumps when you stacked them here 00:30:912 (1,2,1) - , they sound the same to me
01:32:307 (4,5) - i feel like these shouldn't be stacked because you didnt do so 00:42:074 (4,5) - or 02:30:912 (1,2) - and that kinda throws off the structure
01:54:109 (3) - missing NC?
02:25:330 (1) - remove NC? you didnt at 00:42:074 (4) - or 01:32:307 (4) - and i dont see any particular emphasis here
02:47:656 (1) - ^

ok, well i tried but sorry for the low quality mod :l
nice map though, GL!

Nuolong

1,032 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nuolong 2016-10-22T15:56:18+00:00

Ultima Fox wrote:
hiya~ hai~

[Hard]

00:00:911 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - This part you weirdly switch between the instruments in the background and the vocals, so maybe you should try to just stick to one or the other valid point, but it doesn't seem awkward to me at all in this case so I'll keep it the way it is
00:11:900 (5) - Ctrl J for better flow (and it looks better ) did you choose the wrong slider by accident? ctrl+j places it too far ;w;
01:02:307 (1,2,1,2,3) - Same thing here, its kind of weird to switch from vocals, to instruments, back to vocals oo true but I also really liked the beat of this part omg ;w; xD It was the beginning of the music again after the first chorus, so I think it's fine to do it like this (starts off slower, then gets faster to the normal rhythm)
02:09:981 (3,1,1) - Why a double nc here? oops, I fixed!
[Insane]

01:01:609 (1,1,2,1) - Make the NCs consistent it's consistent with the SV changes~
01:48:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make an equal triangle I like the current spacing, an equilateral triangle would make it play too casually
02:59:516 (1,2) - These sliders look out of place with the sharp angles, especially because of all the curves and waves you've done, so maybe make these something like the others. not the first time someone mentioned this, so I changed it to something spicy :3
That's all from me, good map! thanks! I appreciate it!
Good Luck!~

Thank you for your nice mod!! :3

Flezlin wrote:
mod from my queue
i did say i preferred 5*+.... oops, thanks for doing it anyways though

[Easy]
there's a lot of blankets that are off in this diff, but im not sure if its intentional or not after reading your userpage x_x
example: 00:07:191 (2,1) - huh? what oops, that thing on the userpage was written when I got mad at a mod for only including blankets that were perfectly fine. As for the thing you pointed out, I didn't intend it to be a blanket at all.

[Hard]
01:51:842 (3) - NC? oops, I might need to readjust all the nc's on this diff lol, but I don't think it needs an nc here at this time~
02:03:353 (4,1) - rhythm feels off for some reason, maybe try something more like this? that is a nice suggestion, but when I changed it it did not seem correctly emphasized, it has like 6 lil beats here so I feel like it should be equally divided by pairs of 3 beats. I also don't want to begin one of the sliders on a red tick.
03:03:702 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe space these out more similar to 02:17:656 (1,2,3,4) - no, because in 03:03:702 (1,2,3,4,1) -there are no pauses between the sliders, and this follows the ds, while 02:17:656 (1,2,3,4) - there are pauses which makes me space them out

[Insane]
00:11:725 (5) - 00:22:888 (5) - maybe 1/8 sliders would fit this sound nicely this is something I may consider later ~~ I just like the simplicity right now but I might change it later :3
00:33:702 (1,2,1) - i dont really get why these are jumps when you stacked them here 00:30:912 (1,2,1) - , they sound the same to me true, i fixed it!
01:32:307 (4,5) - i feel like these shouldn't be stacked because you didnt do so 00:42:074 (4,5) - or 02:30:912 (1,2) - and that kinda throws off the structure true! I fixed it to the best
01:54:109 (3) - missing NC? fixed
02:25:330 (1) - remove NC? you didnt at 00:42:074 (4) - or 01:32:307 (4) - and i dont see any particular emphasis here fixed and also readjusted the jumps to make it more consistent with the other kiai parts for this vocal
02:47:656 (1) - ^i added nc but then it made the pattern look really ugly XD I'll keep it unless I must keep it consistent lol

ok, well i tried but sorry for the low quality mod :l it was actually pretty good~
nice map though, GL!

Thanks a lot for your help~

-sandAI

286 posts

Joined July 2014

-sandAI 2016-10-22T23:16:35+00:00

From m4m,

I'll see what I can do here, playing insane 1st try felt really good.
(try to get handsome's map in ur set :^) )

insane

00:28:121 (1,1,1,1) - not sure why these are NCed, it does match 00:36:493 (1,1,1,1) - and the next one, however 02:19:749 (1,2,1,2) - has only 2 NCs
Honestly I'd keep it as 2 different combos, up to you

00:40:330 (3) - kinda awkward to play when its a repeat slider

01:50:446 (2,1,2,1,2) - this adjustment to a different rhythm was kinda awkward, but it played fine. It was just a bit random to me, I'd reccomend img

01:54:720 (1) - what is the break snapped to here? I'd leave it how it was at default or maybe start it here 01:56:028

02:20:970 (2,3,4) - clean blanket

02:30:912 (1,2,3) - This pattern has a different structure than the rest of the jumps in the map, not sure how you could change but this does make the map inconsistent.

nvm what i said ^ 02:50:098 (2,3,4) - has the same jump, but I think it would work better with equal spacing here

hard

00:22:888 (4) - make this a "1/4" slider and then make 00:23:063 (5) - start on the white tick

01:35:098 (2) - I believe this is offscreen

01:54:720 (1) - same deal with the break

dummy's normal

Sup my nigga

00:25:330 (4) - y sharp slider when the whole section has been curved

00:34:400 (1,1) - unused green lines between these two

01:02:307 (1) - unused green lines

01:27:423 (1) - ^

01:48:004 (4,5) - these might be confusing to newer players, try to offset these a bit so they dont perfectly overlap

01:54:981 (4,5) - something tells me these shouldnt be here but idk

02:41:027 (4,5) - fix overlapping like 01:48:004 (4,5)

im not good with easy diffs so i tried my best D:

thanks, nice song and set

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-10-22T23:32:54+00:00

-Vanilla wrote:
dummy's normal
Sup my nigga i agree!

00:25:330 (4) - y sharp slider when the whole section has been curved did something cooler here

00:34:400 (1,1) - unused green lines between these two

01:02:307 (1) - unused green lines

01:27:423 (1) - ^ deleted all^

01:48:004 (4,5) - these might be confusing to newer players, try to offset these a bit so they dont perfectly overlap um idk from the testplays from people who play normal diffs it seems fine but i'll get a few more and see

01:54:981 (4,5) - something tells me these shouldnt be here but idk deleted one

02:41:027 (4,5) - fix overlapping like 01:48:004 (4,5) ^

thanks for modding :^)

osu file format v14

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Title:Ice Cream Cake
TitleUnicode:Ice Cream Cake
Artist:Red Velvet
ArtistUnicode:Red Velvet
Creator:Nuolong
Version:Firetruck's Normal
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Nuolong

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Nuolong 2016-10-22T23:40:45+00:00

-Vanilla wrote:
From m4m,

I'll see what I can do here, playing insane 1st try felt really good.
(try to get handsome's map in ur set :^) ) o snap that is good idea but I feel like that map was just for fun//too lazy to get even more mods ;w;

insane
00:28:121 (1,1,1,1) - not sure why these are NCed, it does match 00:36:493 (1,1,1,1) - and the next one, however 02:19:749 (1,2,1,2) - has only 2 NCs
Honestly I'd keep it as 2 different combos, up to you Idk why but I like having it as all those colors, so colorful *_* also 00:28:121 (1,1,1,1) - corresponds to 01:21:144 (1,1,1,1) - and then this sound doesn't really happen again for the rest of the song~ :3

00:40:330 (3) - kinda awkward to play when its a repeat slider true, I redid this part, I hope it's good now :3

01:50:446 (2,1,2,1,2) - this adjustment to a different rhythm was kinda awkward, but it played fine. It was just a bit random to me, I'd reccomend img since for both parts like this in the map I emphasized the drums, I'm going to keep it. Only if a lot of people start suggesting that I should switch to vocals will I change it :3

01:54:720 (1) - what is the break snapped to here? I'd leave it how it was at default or maybe start it here 01:56:028 yeah idk I think it is automatic ( i might be wrong with this but idk how to set it manually)

02:20:970 (2,3,4) - clean blanket I think I cleaned it well

02:30:912 (1,2,3) - This pattern has a different structure than the rest of the jumps in the map, not sure how you could change but this does make the map inconsistent. I think I did this because 1. it's a chorus near the end so I want crazier things to happen and 2. it's a different chorus from the other three (lyric wise)

nvm what i said ^ 02:50:098 (2,3,4) - has the same jump, but I think it would work better with equal spacing here I changed it but then put it back to normal, I don't really have a justification for why I didn't make it equal spacing but it just looks too crazy when it is.

hard
00:22:888 (4) - make this a "1/4" slider and then make 00:23:063 (5) - start on the white tick idk I'm being a bish but I like the way it is now.. I think several ppl mentioned something like this but I still didn't wanna change it lol

01:35:098 (2) - I believe this is offscreen shh idk how I would fix this and aimod doesn't say anything so lets consider it okay >w<

01:54:720 (1) - same deal with the break same deal with idk how to fix ;w;

im not good with easy diffs so i tried my best D: >w<

thanks, nice song and set thanx

Thanks for the helpful mod! I like the fixes I made in insane bc of this :3

Nuolong

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Nuolong 2016-10-22T23:51:08+00:00

Azure wrote:
Hello
about 02:03:353 , the idea you think is what I mean xD
and I checked your files in folder, the name "normal-sliderslide (1)" is meaningless
the hitsounds' names are normal-sliderslide 、normal-sliderslide2 、normal-sliderslide3...etc.
so delete "(1)"

I'm glad my mod is helpful to you, I like your mod,too
Good Luck~!

Oh I forgot to reply~ I fixed it :3 I do not know how that happened in the first place xDDD I'm glad my mod helped you too!~

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-10-23T14:34:11+00:00

Firetruck's Normal.
01:53:935 (3,4) - Check how other diffs handled the rhythm here, and listen to the song what the actual rhythm is. The current rhythm is highly unfitting. I recommend removing (4), reducing the reverse of (3), and starting the break from 01:55:330.

Hard.
00:03:005 (2,1,2) - The stack isn't good when you check in-game. You may want to use some manual stacks here.
Several downbeat hitsounds such as 00:49:400 - 00:50:098 (1) aren't being expressed. Seems like you've expressed them as claps in your insane.
01:44:167 (1,2) - Why is this 1.7x, instead 1.4x?

Insane.
01:01:958 (2) - What's happening with the new combo? Only this being not new comboed feels a little awkward since there isn't much difference, and you seem to use nc spam frequently.
01:21:144 (1,1,1,1) - I believe the placement of these objects could have some more meaning. It kinda feels randomly placed atm with only flows being in consideration.
02:03:353 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - The jumps feel way too intensed compared to the calm part of the music.
02:24:632 (1) - What is this single combo?
03:03:353 (7,8) - Having suddenly a small spacing didn't felt nice when it comes to playing, and didn't felt fitting since the strength of the beat of (8) is nearly the same with (5,6,7). Mind placing (8) at where (5) is?
The section of 02:00:563 ~ 02:17:481 - felt a bit too intensed compared to the song. The current one might work, but being that much intensed didn't really made the following kiai section strongly emphasized.

I sense the difficulty gab between Normal and Hard being a bit too wide. Considering Hard is mostly consisted of 1/4 rhythms and some 1/8 usages, having only 2 uses of 1/4 rhythm in Normal felt way too less. You'll want to make the normal harder.

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-10-23T15:10:00+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Firetruck's Normal.
01:53:935 (3,4) - Check how other diffs handled the rhythm here, and listen to the song what the actual rhythm is. The current rhythm is highly unfitting. I recommend removing (4), reducing the reverse of (3), and starting the break from 01:55:330. yeah, reduced the reverse and placed a slider afterwards with that dragging sound

also made the diff a bit harder

ayay

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 139749
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ice Cream Cake
TitleUnicode:Ice Cream Cake
Artist:Red Velvet
ArtistUnicode:Red Velvet
Creator:Nuolong
Version:Firetruck's Normal
Source:
Tags:kpop k-pop electropop icc sm sment irene seulgi joy wendy yeri 아이린 배주현 강슬기 웬디 손승완 조이 박수영 예리 김예림
BeatmapID:1102089
BeatmapSetID:494284

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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2,115530,119712
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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280,225,147073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Nuolong

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Topic Starter

Nuolong 2016-10-23T16:32:39+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Hard.
00:03:005 (2,1,2) - The stack isn't good when you check in-game. You may want to use some manual stacks here. ~~ok I tried fixing this but I just couldn't get it to not look like this .. I tried making stack leniency lower, nothing happened~~ okei, thanks for ingame help, fixed ~
Several downbeat hitsounds such as 00:49:400 - 00:50:098 (1) aren't being expressed. Seems like you've expressed them as claps in your insane. Okay, I added a finish 00:53:935 (1) - b/c I forgot, and all other parts for this in the kiai. As for the missing the downbeats, I made it all consistent with the insane hitsounding.
01:44:167 (1,2) - Why is this 1.7x, instead 1.4x? I disregarded DS here so that 01:44:865 (2) - creates a triangle with the ends of 01:44:167 (1) - , just for aesthetic :3

Insane.
01:01:958 (2) - What's happening with the new combo? Only this being not new comboed feels a little awkward since there isn't much difference, and you seem to use nc spam frequently. Oh, I thought I had to put NC whenever there is an SV change. Okay, I'll remove them! Removed NC's on 01:21:144 (1,2,3,4) - , 01:01:958 (2) -, and 00:28:121 (3,4,5,6) -
01:21:144 (1,1,1,1) - I believe the placement of these objects could have some more meaning. It kinda feels randomly placed atm with only flows being in consideration. I kinda wanted to emphasize a pair of jumps for this like 01:21:144 (1,2) - and 01:21:493 (3,4) - , and I wanted there to be more intense jumps compared to this 00:28:121 (3,4,5,6) - . To add a little bit more meaning I made it so this pattern only has 2 NC instead of 4, so it looks to have more structure now
02:03:353 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - The jumps feel way too intensed compared to the calm part of the music. okay, I made the distance between the notes smaller!
02:24:632 (1) - What is this single combo? hehe, I don't know why I had that, removed ~
03:03:353 (7,8) - Having suddenly a small spacing didn't felt nice when it comes to playing, and didn't felt fitting since the strength of the beat of (8) is nearly the same with (5,6,7). Mind placing (8) at where (5) is? true, okay I stacked (8) on (5)! It actually looks much neater now xD
The section of 02:00:563 ~ 02:17:481 - felt a bit too intensed compared to the song. The current one might work, but being that much intensed didn't really made the following kiai section strongly emphasized. Okay so starting here 02:06:493 (1) - I did not change anything, because I thought the level of intensity was fine, but I definitely agree with you for the parts before that. I remapped from 02:00:563 to 2:06:493

Thanks a lot for the mod~!

ColdTooth

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Joined June 2012

ColdTooth 2016-10-24T01:10:42+00:00

Hey heeey, from my queue

[Easy]

00:05:795 (2) - Blanket issue

00:37:191 (1) - Try and make the S curve a bit bigger, the bottum sliderpoint could go down a bit

00:48:353 (1) - I see what you did at 00:28:818 (1,1) - , and I was wondering "Since those are on beat, why aren't these?" You could try to make the anchor points like you did with 00:28:818 (1,1) - , but instead of every beat, it's 3/4th a beat. Disregard this if you want. You actually did this at 02:31:609 (1) - .

01:16:260 (1) - Careful with this slider. I think some people who play w/ a certain aspect ratio this slider doesn't show some of it on screen.

01:38:586 (1) - See 00:48:353 (1) -

You should map after 03:05:098 - , like what you did for your insane and for gd's normal

[Firetruck's Normal]

00:20:446 (1) - Blanket issue

01:02:307 (1) - ^

01:47:655 (3) - Stack on 01:46:260 (4) - 's sliderend and fix the triangle 01:46:260 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - create

01:53:935 (3,4) - I'unno if this is ok for a normal, talking about 01:54:749 (4) - 's placement. Try this

02:05:098 (3,4,5) - Make into triangle

02:13:470 (3) - Blanket

02:59:516 (1) - Stack onto 02:57:772 (3) - 's sliderend

03:01:609 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Fix triangle shape

03:05:098 (1) - Blanket

[Hard]

00:16:958 (3) - ctrl + g?

You should map after 03:05:098 - , like what you did for your insane and for gd's normal

Nothing else here

[Insane]

00:09:109 (6,1) - Fix the triangle shape

00:45:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't hear a stream here?

00:48:353 (1,2,3,4) - Or here

00:51:144 (1,2,3,4) - ^

01:20:795 (2) - ctrl+g

01:35:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - See 00:45:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

01:38:586 (1,2,3,4) - ^

01:41:377 (1,2,3,4) - ^

And so on

03:10:330: - add note

I like it, song and map.

chainpullz

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Joined June 2013

chainpullz 2016-10-25T04:30:18+00:00

From my queue:

*** Things I like
*** Things I dislike
*** Questionable
*** Unrankable

Insane

Playtests:
http://puu.sh/rUDPD/1625ee37bb.osr
http://puu.sh/rUDQH/358aa614e0.osr

00:40:504 (5,6,7) - *** There is nothing in the music on 6 so you shouldn't stick a harsh corner here. If you want a harsh corner do it on 5 where there is a percussion note. To me, changing the direction on 7 (which the slider already accomplishes) feels a lot better than preemptively doing so on 5. If you do go for corner on 5 I highly recommend putting a NC on the circle that corners as it's a pretty common practice to further highlight whatever the corner is supposed to be highlighting in the music and it further increases readability.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404620 note the DS in the top right corner ~ I had to shrink the stream spacing to make it fit on the playfield and adjust the placement of 8)
00:41:725 (2,3,4,5,6) - *** The spacing increase here feels more dictated by the hexagonal structure than the music itself. While a spacing increase is fine the song feels more suggestive of a smaller increase (ie. not doubling the spacing from 2-3 3-4).
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404643 something like this would fit well. The key points being the gradual increase of spacing with a notably larger spacing from 5-6 to emphasize the vocal climax on 6)
00:44:516 (2,3) - *** The emphasis on these two notes is backwards. The larger spacing should occur on the red and white ticks whereas the way you have it now you are emphasizing the weak beat on the blue tick.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404685 it was kind of tricky coming up with a fix for this because a simple ctrl+G puts to the 2 too far away from 1. I think moving the 2 a bit closer to the 3 restores the balance. You get an emphasis on 2, and the flow break from 3 to 4 makes up for the lower spacing in terms of emphasis/impact)
00:46:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - *** This felt a bit weak considering how strongly articulated these vocals come off. I do like the use of squares here to provide a bit of harshness as it does help though.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404719 simple 1.1x scale then re-position it back to where you had it)
01:10:330 (6,7,1) - *** Another case of emphasizing the blue tick where the emphasis should be more focused on the red/white ticks.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404737 In this case I feel like simply moving the 7 under the sliderend of 2 helps re-balance things. If you don't care for the perfect overlap then you can always shift this entire pattern/blanket upwards/left and tweak the 2-3-4 of the next pattern slightly to allow for this so you only end up with a partial overlap)
01:21:144 (1,2,1,2) - *** More blue tick emphasis issues. This one felt wrong enough that it was actually pretty noticeable during play testing which at this *rating for me says something. The difference here being there is actually stuff worth emphasizing on the blue ticks but its not as strong as the red/white ticks still.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404783 something along these lines where the red tick comes back down lower than the white tick. This helps ensure that the red tick gets slightly more emphasis than the previous blue tick. Also worth noting is that since the downbeat slider changes directions the spacing between it and the 2nd blue tick need not be as large to still get a desirable emphasis)
01:28:470 (5,6) - *** More blue tick issues but because of the direction of 4 I can't really come up with any clean suggestions so idk I guess it's fine to keep unless you think of something clever.
01:29:167 (2,3) - *** Same thing tbh.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404803 pre-exisiting structure makes it hard to get any emphasis on red tick but something like this might be useful for de-emphasizing the blue tick a bit. You also get a pretty nice white tick emphasis)
01:31:260 (6) - *** You ignore the strong beat here which isn't necessarily bad but there's a small touch that could help bring a bit of emphasis to it so might as well point it out.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404814 Slight bump up and back down on the aim doesn't really hurt your patterning but gives a bit more satisfaction/emphasis to this. You won't have a perfect overlap on a later note but you can still get an aesthetic overlap going)
01:34:749 (2,3) - *** You really like emphasizing non-syncopated off-beats for no reason

(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404875 similar sort of de-emphasis as the last suggestion where you don't get anything onto the red tick but you do get a lot of emphasis onto the white tick so it still balances out well imo. You also get a nice triangle going hehehe)
01:39:632 (6,7) - *** Same thing but can't really come up with a clever fix to suggest for this one so probably fine to leave it I guess
01:40:330 (2,3) - *** ^
01:51:842 (1,2) - *** Feels a tad overemphasized to me (very subjective here tbh). You already have an anti-jump from between the two beat pairings so you don't need quite as much spacing to still get a lot of emphasis imo.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404825 just shift this stack up slightly - not even a huge change)
01:54:109 (1,2) - *** ^ but replace antijump with low SV slider
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404844 having 2 equidistant from the sliderend as 1 reduces the spacing to something slightly more reasonable imo combined with the previous change you still have this pairing being slightly more spaced than the last)
02:16:260 (1,2,1,2) - *** similar comment to the last time you did one of these beat pairing high distance patterns but this time the structure make it difficult to come up with a clean solution so probably fine to keep I guess.
02:19:749 (1,2,1,2) - *** The spacing here is quite a bit out of proportions. It's clear that you are emphasizing the vocals leading into the chorus but the spike in distance when comparing these two pairings is really pushing it imo.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6404919 just shift the first note of the first pairing down a bit so that you still have a decent increase in spacing on comparing the two pairs but the difference isn't such a massive spike. Here I went for 3.4 which still provides contrast to the 3.8 of the 2nd pairing)

I'll finish up the rest of the mod tomorrow or something. I'm too mentally exhausted to do a good job modding the rest of the map right now. Feel free to hold off on the kds until I finish going through the last minute of the map.

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