Giga & suzumu feat.Kagamine Rin - Undead Enemy

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kanor
[normal]
00:31:731 (2,3) - 这个平行放厚不厚呀
[hard]
00:15:129 (2,3) - 和00:15:888 (5,6) - 都这么叠会不会有点误导呀
00:23:641 (4,5,1) - 4的滑条尾,5的头和1组成的三角形感觉正一点更舒服?
00:24:652 (4,5,6) - ^
00:25:326 (6,1,2) - ^感觉还是摆正一点好
00:45:888 (1,2,3) - 这里是不是也没摆正呀(懒得改就无视这个吧)
00:48:585 (1,2) - 2的滑条中间那个白点最好往下挪一格,blanket更舒服
00:10:832 (4) - 这里是不是NC一下更好?因为你00:08:135 (1) - 也NC了
00:12:180 (1) - 和00:17:573 (1) - 这两个NC很好玩,nice job
00:31:056 (5) - NC一下感觉更好?
00:40:326 (6) - 在这里NC感觉比00:40:832 (1) - 更舒服?
[妙芙的insane]
00:15:551 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这里节奏应该是xx xxxx或者是xx xx x这样的吧?
00:45:719 (4) - 这里是故意不叠起来的?感觉有点迷
00:55:326 (1) - 这个建议改成折返四次接个二分之一的滑条,这个折返莫名感觉手感不好
[Insane]
good job 没什么特别要说了
[咕的Insane]
00:49:933 - 这里开始那个梗的旋转角度能不能拉大点呀,感觉应该是最梗的地方,这么放表现力不够的样子.......而且难度好像也不够
00:53:893 (5,1,1,1,1) - 这里5接1和接后面那个1太误导人了吧......第二个1和5靠近点感觉更好,要不就把第二个1叠在前一个1后面

nice song and map!
GL :)
__Ag

kanor wrote:

[hard]
00:15:129 (2,3) - 和00:15:888 (5,6) - 都这么叠会不会有点误导呀不会的,很常见的梗
00:23:641 (4,5,1) - 4的滑条尾,5的头和1组成的三角形感觉正一点更舒服?并没有刻意要做三角
00:24:652 (4,5,6) - ^^
00:25:326 (6,1,2) - ^感觉还是摆正一点好^
00:45:888 (1,2,3) - 这里是不是也没摆正呀(懒得改就无视这个吧)^
00:48:585 (1,2) - 2的滑条中间那个白点最好往下挪一格,blanket更舒服调整了
00:10:832 (4) - 这里是不是NC一下更好?因为你00:08:135 (1) - 也NC了
00:12:180 (1) - 和00:17:573 (1) - 这两个NC很好玩,nice job
00:31:056 (5) - NC一下感觉更好?
00:40:326 (6) - 在这里NC感觉比00:40:832 (1) - 更舒服?这里不用
感谢mod
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_MiaoFUuU_

kanor wrote:

[妙芙的insane]
00:15:551 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这里节奏应该是xx xxxx或者是xx xx x这样的吧?
00:45:719 (4) - 这里是故意不叠起来的?感觉有点迷
00:55:326 (1) - 这个建议改成折返四次接个二分之一的滑条,这个折返莫名感觉手感不好 折返白线结束
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Lilyanna


Hello.

Kitty's Easy

00:06:787 (1,3) - can make symmetrycal for better looking
00:22:292 (4,1) - can be better blanket
00:25:663 (1,3) - ^
00:29:708 (3) - ctrl-j and readjust with the ds for better flow
00:33:753 (1) - i think if u make spinner end here 00:37:798 - will be better
00:41:169 (4,1) - if u put the tail in the center will look nice and cleaner like this -->
00:52:629 (1) - not important but making it less curved will look flow better imo
00:55:326 (1,2) - drag the last white node little down to blanket well with 00:56:337 (2) -
00:58:023 (1,2) - i know it flows but avoid 1/2 snap in easy maybe end this slider here 00:58:697 -

Normal

00:39:146 (1,2) - blanket can be better
00:51:955 (7) - nc should be here
00:59:708 (3) - ctrl h and replace there for better flow and direction to the next object
01:00:382 (4) - can nc

Ag's Hard

00:10:832 (1) - this sounds part of the last combo so i suggest nc here 00:11:169 (2) - not here 00:10:832 (1) -
00:12:180 - not needed sv change imo if u wanna emphasize it better u space it a little from the previous object
00:16:899 (3,1) - it overlap imo
00:22:967 (1) - there is pretty much strong beat there so i dont think stacking these notes 00:22:798 (3,1) - is pretty good idea
00:32:405 (1,4) - change nc to slider number 4
00:47:068 (5,1) - doesnt look appealing like that the note touching the slider's tail

I hope i helped Good luck!
Topic Starter
Lobelia

Lilyanna wrote:



Hello.

Normal

00:39:146 (1,2) - blanket can be better fix
00:51:955 (7) - nc should be here i nc on the second big white line
00:59:708 (3) - ctrl h and replace there for better flow and direction to the next objectfix
01:00:382 (4) - can nc↑ ↑

I hope i helped Good luck!Thanks for your help :)
Lily Bread
M4M

[Kitty's Easy]
nothing

[Normal]
也没什么说的

[Ag's Hard]
00:14:877 (1,2) - 00:15:551 (4,5) - 1/4和1/2的DS区别不明显
00:27:011 (1,2) - 00:27:349 (3,4) - ^
00:41:843 (1,2) - 00:42:180 (3,4) - ^

00:22:545 - 建议这样,clap不要漏
http://puu.sh/qzvgl/ed11653c10.jpg

00:47:573 (2) - 主歌里类似的地方你都用三连了,副歌没理由不三连的... - 00:19:090 (2,3,4) - 00:32:573 (2,3,4) - 00:37:124 (3,4,5) - 等等

00:57:770 (3,4,5,1) - 1分

[MiaoFUuU's Insane]
节奏看不懂..摸不动

[Insane]
00:54:652 - finish在滑条尾,怪怪的...

[Gu's Insane]
00:38:978 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 是不是太小心了一点..可以跳大一点

gl
Topic Starter
Lobelia

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M

[Insane]
00:54:652 - finish在滑条尾,怪怪的...好,改啦

gl
SuperBox
Gu's Insane
00:10:158 (5,6,7,8) - 感觉拉两个滑条更合适
00:43:192 (1,2,3,4) - 这里跳的感觉有点大,感觉改成钝角排列会更舒服
00:53:642 (4,5,1) - 间距太大了吧

Insane
完美,大佬果然可怕
MiaoFUuU's Insane
00:27:686 (4,5) - 再折回一次…吧
00:33:416 (3) - 跳出来一个note应该更美观
Ag's Hard
完美,大佬果然可怕

NM和EZ不会看。。。

QAQ摸图新人,摸得不好请见谅
_MiaoFUuU_
@SuperBox 这个难度不推荐折回2次,note跳不跳出来没什么关系的,而且要控制住难度,no change thx.
_IxApplePie_
Hi~ NM req from my WQ

[ Ag's Hard ]
  1. 00:53:978 (1,1,1,1) - would be better to split them up as they have up and down vocal voice while 00:49:933 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - all have the same sound so this pattern is fine


That's all I found .-.
No fix no kds~

Really nice maps :P
Good luck ranking it :)

*EDIT.

You might want to have custom combo colours.
Topic Starter
Lobelia

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

Hi~ NM req from my WQ

Really nice maps :P
Good luck ranking it :)
Thanks for your help :)
pw384
via forum pm

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Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.


[General]
  1. ok
[Gu's Insane]

  • 卧槽屁股

  1. 00:11:253 (3) - 把它变成1/4然后在00:11:422 - 处加个note?
  2. 00:22:040 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 间距可能要小一点,来突出00:22:545 (9,10,11,12,13,1) -
  3. 00:51:955 (3,4) - 换成4个note,这样会更好地突出人声
  4. 00:53:642 (4,5,1) - 有点坑...
  5. 01:00:719 - 这边不准备放东西吗
  6. nice diff
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:652 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 最好摆整齐一点
  2. 00:14:371 (5,6,7,1) - 这个很难看也很难打(变距的大钝角)。可以把00:14:203 (4,6) - 叠在一起然后移到x=176,y=228处
  3. 00:26:000 (2,3,4) - 这里打起来也不好,可以把4和6交换一下位置
  4. 00:46:394 (3) - 不太适合和前一个滑条尾stack(和之前stack在滑条头不统一&&不符合音高),可以移到x=0,y=136试试
  5. 00:47:573 (1) - 这样带过这里复杂的节奏有点浪费了大好节奏...参考一下最高难度
  6. 00:58:023 (1) - 考虑加一次折返;或者这个滑条缩短1/4、然后在00:58:528 - 到00:59:034 - 摆一个滑条。因为能很清楚地听到这里的人声到00:59:034 - 才结束
  7. 01:00:719 - 这里不放点东西吗
[MiaoFUuU's Insane]
  1. 00:07:461 (1) - blanket
  2. 00:08:978 (2) - 00:09:146 (3,4) - 换一下位置
  3. 00:09:652 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 间距最好大一点,因为这里电音的1/4比较强烈
  4. 00:33:079 (1,2,3,4) - 摆个折返跳会好玩一些
  5. 00:46:225 (1,2) - stack起来有点难受,因为这里音高发生了变化,最好加个小跳
  6. 00:58:023 (2) - 考虑加一次折返;或者这个滑条缩短1/4、然后在00:58:528 - 到00:59:034 - 摆一个滑条。因为能很清楚地听到这里的人声到00:59:034 - 才结束
  7. 01:00:045 (1) - 往下走一点(x=340,y=316附近),flow会更好
[Ag's Hard]
  1. 00:11:169 (2,3,4) - 放hard里好难啊
  2. 00:20:270 (1) - 同上,容易读错成三次折返、和下一个物件有1/2的时间间距。真要这么下节奏的话,1和2应该overlap起来
  3. 00:37:967 (8) - NC
  4. 00:58:023 (1) - 最好加一次折返,因为能很清楚地听到这里的人声到00:59:034 - 才结束
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:933 (6) - normal里慎用stack尾部
  2. 01:00:719 - 加点东西吧
[Kitty's Easy]
  1. 00:24:315 (3,1) - You can try to make the blanket perfect here
  2. Nothing else to say, nice

~~
__Ag

Lilyanna wrote:

Ag's Hard

00:10:832 (1) - this sounds part of the last combo so i suggest nc here 00:11:169 (2) - not here 00:10:832 (1) - I did it at the long white line,so I think no pro
00:12:180 - not needed sv change imo if u wanna emphasize it better u space it a little from the previous object I changed sv on this vocal parts of all
00:16:899 (3,1) - it overlap imonot really,I think:)
00:22:967 (1) - there is pretty much strong beat there so i dont think stacking these notes 00:22:798 (3,1) - is pretty good ideaif this is an EX diff I will do another,but in hard diff this is fine
00:32:405 (1,4) - change nc to slider number 4why?? :(
00:47:068 (5,1) - doesnt look appealing like that the note touching the slider's tailfixed

Lily Bread wrote:

[Ag's Hard]
00:14:877 (1,2) - 00:15:551 (4,5) - 1/4和1/2的DS区别不明显fixed
00:27:011 (1,2) - 00:27:349 (3,4) - ^fixed
00:41:843 (1,2) - 00:42:180 (3,4) - ^

00:22:545 - 建议这样,clap不要漏这里还是保留好了
http://puu.sh/qzvgl/ed11653c10.jpg

00:47:573 (2) - 主歌里类似的地方你都用三连了,副歌没理由不三连的... - 00:19:090 (2,3,4) - 00:32:573 (2,3,4) - 00:37:124 (3,4,5) - 等等这里本来想跟着vocal,但是想想还是保险一点走鼓点算了

00:57:770 (3,4,5,1) - 1分 :(:(

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

Hi~ NM req from my WQ

[ Ag's Hard ]
  1. 00:53:978 (1,1,1,1) - would be better to split them up as they have up and down vocal voice while 00:49:933 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - all have the same sound so this pattern is fine
I think fine now:)

384059043 wrote:

[Ag's Hard]
  1. 00:11:169 (2,3,4) - 放hard里好难啊fixed
  2. 00:20:270 (1) - 同上,容易读错成三次折返、和下一个物件有1/2的时间间距。真要这么下节奏的话,1和2应该overlap起来fixed
  3. 00:37:967 (8) - NCfixed
  4. 00:58:023 (1) - 最好加一次折返,因为能很清楚地听到这里的人声到00:59:034 - 才结束fixed
thx~

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__Ag
source和tags应该加点什么呢,source应该是VOCALOID吧,tags可以加专辑名之类的,问问骏马
Topic Starter
Lobelia

384059043 wrote:

via forum pm

modding format information:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.

[Insane]
  1. 00:09:652 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 最好摆整齐一点
  2. 00:14:371 (5,6,7,1) - 这个很难看也很难打(变距的大钝角)。可以把00:14:203 (4,6) - 叠在一起然后移到x=176,y=228处
  3. 00:26:000 (2,3,4) - 这里打起来也不好,可以把4和6交换一下位置
  4. 00:46:394 (3) - 不太适合和前一个滑条尾stack(和之前stack在滑条头不统一&&不符合音高),可以移到x=0,y=136试试
  5. 00:47:573 (1) - 这样带过这里复杂的节奏有点浪费了大好节奏...参考一下最高难度我觉得这样蛮好看的ORZ不是很想改
  6. 00:58:023 (1) - 考虑加一次折返;或者这个滑条缩短1/4、然后在00:58:528 - 到00:59:034 - 摆一个滑条。因为能很清楚地听到这里的人声到00:59:034 - 才结束QWQ感觉这个人声在红线那里就唱完了,后面那种延伸的感觉不想对上打击感
  7. 01:00:719 - 这里不放点东西吗
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:933 (6) - normal里慎用stack尾部
  2. 01:00:719 - 加点东西吧

~~
Topic Starter
Lobelia
Source tag 还有circle colours 我习惯留在找摸找的差不多的时候一次性加上=W=
_MiaoFUuU_
@384 25点保留,其他fixed

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TitleUnicode:Undead Enemy
Artist:Giga & Suzumu feat. Kagamine Rin
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Creator:[ Abhor ]
Version:MiaoFUuU's Insane
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Tags:__Ag No_Gu _MiaoFUuU_ KittyAdventure
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204,120,37967,6,0,B|172:108|148:100|148:100|124:104|88:116,2,121.499996292114,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,196,38978,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,196,39146,6,0,L|336:304,2,99.0000030212403,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,112,39652,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,112,39820,2,0,L|432:210,2,99.0000030212403,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,44,40326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,44,40410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,44,40495,6,0,P|309:33|257:49,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,196,40832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,132,41000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,100,41169,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,100,41253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,100,41337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,220,41506,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,220,41590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,220,41674,6,0,P|260:280|248:336,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,272,42011,2,0,L|344:332,2,49.5000015106202,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,344,42349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,272,42517,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,208,42686,2,0,B|488:144|472:88|472:88|428:104|380:84,1,198.000006042481,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,28,43191,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,164,43360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,152,43528,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,28,43697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,200,43865,2,0,B|116:232|52:208|52:208|64:176|56:128,1,198.000006042481,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,92,44371,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,244,44540,6,0,P|284:196|267:151,2,99.0000030212403,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,316,45045,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,360,45214,2,0,P|346:344|374:304,2,99.0000030212403,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,316,45719,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,200,45888,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,224,46056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,304,46225,5,8,0:0:0:0:
373,304,46393,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,120,46562,2,0,B|412:107|412:107|368:120|368:120|324:103|324:103|296:115|261:112,1,198.000006042481,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,72,47068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,47236,6,0,L|76:264,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,308,47573,2,0,L|160:244,2,49.5000015106202,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,202,47910,2,0,P|277:188|318:212,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,213,48163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,213,48247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,315,48416,6,0,P|409:317|448:288,1,99.0000030212403,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,180,48753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,272,48922,2,0,L|256:376,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,224,49259,2,0,L|176:112,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,308,49596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,308,49933,6,0,P|98:320|53:304,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,224,50270,2,0,P|232:256|240:320,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,228,50607,2,0,L|92:128,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,56,50944,2,0,L|237:155,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,39,51281,6,0,P|275:11|323:1,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,155,51618,2,0,P|177:147|137:107,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,108,51955,2,0,L|320:224,1,99.0000030212403,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,316,52292,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,316,52461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
415,211,52629,6,0,P|470:288|422:368,1,198.000006042481,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,316,53135,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,268,53304,2,0,B|208:216|192:168|192:168|220:136|274:128,1,198.000006042481,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,140,53809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,248,53978,5,8,0:0:0:0:
392,292,54315,5,8,0:0:0:0:
164,88,54652,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,364,54989,5,8,0:0:0:0:
364,96,55326,6,0,L|424:80,4,49.5000015106202,4|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,128,55832,2,0,L|324:256,1,99.0000030212403,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,168,56169,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,308,56337,2,0,P|269:285|249:240,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,284,56674,6,0,B|400:360|340:388|340:388|304:380|264:384,1,198.000006042481,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,248,57349,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,248,57686,2,0,L|72:192,3,49.5000015106202,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,288,58023,6,0,B|132:296|132:296|168:284|168:284|212:288|212:288|256:276,1,168.750006437302,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,58528,2,0,B|196:232|192:184|192:184|228:156|239:110,1,202.500007724762
288,24,59202,5,8,0:0:0:0:
288,24,59540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,59708,2,0,L|352:204,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,110,60045,5,2,0:0:0:0:
460,156,60382,1,4,0:0:0:0:
460,156,60719,5,8,0:0:0:0:
Hanazawa Kana
老司机带带我
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Hanazawa Kana wrote:

老司机带带我
- Angelia
[insane]

00:39:062 (2) - 可以试着删除
00:40:832 (3) - 间距有点。。
00:59:203 (1) - 这个滑条我要报警了。。

[hard]

00:12:180 (1) - 是不是有点急了。。一下子突到1.3x
00:14:202 (2,3,4,5) - 梗
00:14:877 (1) - 推荐这个再往左边移点
00:39:820 (4) - 扳歪
00:48:585 (1) - 上移

[miaofu]

00:06:787 (1,2) - 互换
00:07:461 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:15:804 (2,3) - 稍微出来点 x 404 y 64左右
00:24:315 (1) - 太靠下了
00:25:663 (1) - 妙芙的滑条依旧x 难道就不能扳成这样的吗00:27:011 (1) -

00:48:332 - 漏音 起其实是三个滑条连一起的 但是不用0.75x 听不出来

[gu's / easy / noraml]
不会摸 :(
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