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Kraster - WishStar SYA MEI MARU

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Mercurius
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月2日 at 19:06:59

Artist: Kraster
Title: WishStar SYA MEI MARU
Source: Touhou
Tags: ZUN Syameimaru Aya Autumn Fall Mountain Faith
BPM: 190
Filesize: 4749kb
Play Time: 03:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.55 stars, 307 notes)
  2. Lunatic (5 stars, 542 notes)
  3. Normal (2.52 stars, 212 notes)
Download: Kraster - WishStar SYA MEI MARU
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Last edited by Mercurius , edited 51 times in total.
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
Hey~

[General]

Lunatic longer than the Normal and Hard..
You may be asked to make them identical.

Normal

And would not hurt to add hitsounds

00:39:538 (4) - move here 00:39:380
00:40:327 (1,2,3,4) - spacing. do so

00:49:170 (3) - remove the return. increase the slider to the to white tick. (or 2 circle here 00:49:170 and 00:49:485)

Hard

And would not hurt to add hitsounds - basically a whistle.
as here
01:19:801 (1,3)

[Lunatic]

And would not hurt to add hitsounds - basically a whistle.

00:39:696 (9) - closer to 8 slider
00:42:222 (1) - remove the new combo
00:52:170 (4,5) - spacing
02:15:064 - finish
02:15:696 - finish

star~
Mercurius
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ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hey~

[General]

Lunatic longer than the Normal and Hard..
You may be asked to make them identical.

Normal

And would not hurt to add hitsounds

00:39:538 (4) - move here 00:39:380 Fixed
00:40:327 (1,2,3,4) - spacing. do so Fixed
00:49:170 (3) - remove the return. increase the slider to the to white tick. (or 2 circle here 00:49:170 and 00:49:485) Fixed

Hard

And would not hurt to add hitsounds - basically a whistle.
as here
01:19:801 (1,3)

[Lunatic]

And would not hurt to add hitsounds - basically a whistle.

00:39:696 (9) - closer to 8 slider Fixed
00:42:222 (1) - remove the new combo Fixed
00:52:170 (4,5) - spacing Not Changed
02:15:064 - finish Fixed
02:15:696 - finish Fixed

star~
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Thanks for modding, and STAR!

[Lunatic]
00:52:170 (4,5) - spacing

Here is ignored , because , (5) will closer to (4) when PLAYING
So, I put them far.



At all , I put Hitsounds more better.
If you will recheck , I'm very happy :)


sorry , poor English :?:
Gamu
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Gamu
|つ star~

nice map!
Kirino Kousaka
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Kirino Kousaka
Hello! Just here for some suggestions... :)
[mods inside the spoilerbox]

SPOILER
[Overall]
I suggest you enable the countdown because there is enough time for it at the start of the song. [ignore this if you don't want]

[Normal]
00:36:538 (6,7) - Remove the "whistle" at the end of these sliders and replace it with "clap".
01:47:591 (1,2) - Put a "whistle" at the end of these sliders.
01:50:433 (4) - Put a "whistle" on this hit circle.
01:51:696 (6) - ^
01:52:643 (1,2) - Put a "whistle" at the end of these sliders.

[Hard]
00:45:380 (6) - Start a new combo on this one.
01:47:275 (1) - Put a "whistle" at the end of this slider.
01:48:538 (2) - ^
01:50:433 (4) - Put a "whistle" on this hit circle.
01:51:696 (6) - ^
01:52:327 (1) - Put a "whistle" at the end of this slider.
01:53:591 (2) - ^

[Lunatic]
01:26:906 (5) - Start a new combo on this one.
01:32:117 (5) - ^
01:47:275 (1) - Put a "whistle" at the end of this slider.
01:48:538 (2) - ^
01:50:117 (2,4) - Put a "whistle" on these hit circles.
01:51:064 (5,6) - Put a "whistle" at the end of these sliders
01:53:117 (1,2) - ^

Well, this is a nice map and song! :) I'll give it a star! :D
Mercurius
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Mercurius

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello! Just here for some suggestions... :)
[mods inside the spoilerbox]

SPOILER
[Overall]
I suggest you enable the countdown because there is enough time for it at the start of the song. [ignore this if you don't want]

[Normal]
00:36:538 (6,7) - Remove the "whistle" at the end of these sliders and replace it with "clap".
01:47:591 (1,2) - Put a "whistle" at the end of these sliders.
01:50:433 (4) - Put a "whistle" on this hit circle.
01:51:696 (6) - ^
01:52:643 (1,2) - Put a "whistle" at the end of these sliders.

[Hard]
00:45:380 (6) - Start a new combo on this one.
01:47:275 (1) - Put a "whistle" at the end of this slider.
01:48:538 (2) - ^
01:50:433 (4) - Put a "whistle" on this hit circle.
01:51:696 (6) - ^
01:52:327 (1) - Put a "whistle" at the end of this slider.
01:53:591 (2) - ^

[Lunatic]
01:26:906 (5) - Start a new combo on this one.
01:32:117 (5) - ^
01:47:275 (1) - Put a "whistle" at the end of this slider.
01:48:538 (2) - ^
01:50:117 (2,4) - Put a "whistle" on these hit circles.
01:51:064 (5,6) - Put a "whistle" at the end of these sliders
01:53:117 (1,2) - ^

Well, this is a nice map and song! :) I'll give it a star! :D

>Kirino Kousaka

WOW :)

Your Hitsounds MOD is nice ! All point Fixed

Thank you veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much !
Rare
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Rare
star:D
HeatKai
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HeatKai
[general]
cut the mp3 file ?
the starting =.= so long need to wait


=.= starred

cannot mod :3 so much , the BG makes my nosebleed :3
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Potofu
star---
nimba_old
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8-)
nicktoons
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nicktoons
bOObs...panties... MOAR!
General:
very good normal, liked playing it with dt.
normal:
00:39:380 (4) - 1 greed down (greed level 3)
00:39:696 (5) - ^
00:44:748 (4) - ^
01:01:801 (8) - maybe 1 greed up?
01:47:275 - till 01:54:222 - make hit sounds (sample volume) 40 ? think should sond wonderful
02:02:433 (1,2) - 1 greed up
02:16:327 (8) - 1 greed down
02:17:591 (1) - ^
hard:
seems fine, only one thing about 01:47:275 - till 01:54:222 - hit sound 40
Lunatic:
cleared it from second time... nice one... and again seems ok.

very very nice map. You will get it ranked, i am sure.
and star for boobs
Mercurius
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nicktoons wrote:

bOObs...panties... MOAR! Σd(^ω^)
General:
very good normal, liked playing it with dt.
normal:
00:39:380 (4) - 1 greed down (greed level 3) Fixed
00:39:696 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:44:748 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:01:801 (8) - maybe 1 greed up? Fixed
01:47:275 - till 01:54:222 - make hit sounds (sample volume) 40 ? think should sond wonderful Fixed
02:02:433 (1,2) - 1 greed up Fixed
02:16:327 (8) - 1 greed down Fixed
02:17:591 (1) - ^ Fixed
hard:
seems fine, only one thing about 01:47:275 - till 01:54:222 - hit sound 40 Fixed
Lunatic:
cleared it from second time... nice one... and again seems ok. Not Fixed

very very nice map. You will get it ranked, i am sure.
and star for boobs

Thanks!


[Lunatic] cleared it from second time Not Fixed

I will make only Lunatic full length. So, Normal and Hard are short.
If I should re-make for Ranked, I will make Normal and Hard full length.
But I think Playtime length is sure now.

I'll do my best !
wmfchris
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[general]
-preview time not unique.
-cut the mp3 shorter, e.g. start from ~ 0:32?
-mp3 @ 96 kbps < required 128~192?
-[Hard] can be made till the end~

[Lunatic]
00:36:854 (2,4) - stack properly
00:38:748 (6,7) - ^
00:44:117 (1,2) - ^
00:45:380 (1,3,4) - ^
00:53:591 (3,4,5) - ^
01:11:117 (2,3) - ^
01:50:748 (4) - left 1 grid
01:54:222 (2) - finish at the end?
02:45:854 (2,3) - stack
02:53:591 (5,7) - ^
03:08:117 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - quite loud for too many claps, also try finish every 4 beats?

[Hard]
01:10:643 (1,2) - finish only on beginning of (1) and ending of (2)?
01:55:801 (3) - right 1 grid

nice map lol
Driou
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Driou
Hi!

Already excellent beatmap !
Hope to see ranked soon !

☆~Star~☆
Mercurius
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Mercurius

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
-preview time not unique. Fixed
-cut the mp3 shorter, e.g. start from ~ 0:32? Not Fixed
-mp3 @ 96 kbps < required 128~192? Fixed
-[Hard] can be made till the end~

[Lunatic]
00:36:854 (2,4) - stack properly Fixed
00:38:748 (6,7) - ^ Fixed
00:44:117 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:45:380 (1,3,4) - ^ Fixed
00:53:591 (3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
01:11:117 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:50:748 (4) - left 1 grid Fixed
01:54:222 (2) - finish at the end? Fixed
02:45:854 (2,3) - stack Fixed
02:53:591 (5,7) - ^ Fixed
03:08:117 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - quite loud for too many claps, also try finish every 4 beats? Fixed

[Hard]
01:10:643 (1,2) - finish only on beginning of (1) and ending of (2)? Fixed
01:55:801 (3) - right 1 grid Fixed

nice map lol
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Thanks!


[general]

cut the mp3 shorter, e.g. start from ~ 0:32? Not Fixed
"cut mp3" ...... If I cut it, the balance of the song will be broken. Therefore, I didn't Fixed too.


[Hard] can be made till the end~

OK, nicktoons say too,I decided to make till the end.
n~, After all, I know that this is important point......


Your mod is GREAT! Example, stack (x0.01)→(x0.00)
I was surprised at your deftness.
Last edited by Mercurius , edited 1 time in total.
wmfchris
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wmfchris
normal, hard
PreviewTime: 60484

insane
PreviewTime: 60538

they should be the same otherwise it's unrankable ._.


(no kd
Mercurius
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wmfchris wrote:

normal, hard
PreviewTime: 60484

insane
PreviewTime: 60538

they should be the same otherwise it's unrankable ._.


(no kd
Changed preview time.
and, I Remake Normal and Hard to FULL !
-saku-
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good 8-)
S o r d a
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S o r d a
Fight~
Mercurius
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-saku- , S o r d a , Thanks!




:!: Problem occurred :!:
When Changed .mp3 file, offset is slip......
I tried to put accurately value, but I can't well......
Someone, Please HELP me !
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Suzully
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Suzully
modです。
SPOILER
General
  • offset -10~14
    他の方も言われてますが、最初の30秒の空白はやはり長いです。
    可能ならば出来るだけカットした方が良いように思います。
    もしくは12秒あたりから作り始めるなど。
Lunatic
  • 多いスタックでの連打がやや多用気味だと思います。
    なるべく別のパターンにしてみてはどうでしょう。
  1. 00:52:327 (5) - (1-4)とスペーシングを揃えてください。
  2. 00:55:170 (1) - 1grid下＆左に移動させたほうが形が綺麗になると思います。
  3. 01:06:528 (7,8) - ボーカルに合わせるのなら↓。好みなので参考までに。
  4. 01:35:275 (1,2,3) - そこまで迷いませんが、もう少しスペーシングを空けたほうがわかりやすく感じます。
  5. 01:53:591 (2) - finishの音でタイミングが取りづらいと思います。finishは実際に叩く01:54:380 (3,4)だけにした方が良いと思います。
  6. 01:56:275 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 単発はあまり重ねすぎないほうが良いです。
  7. 02:39:380 (5) - 意図的だとは思いますが、ココだけ赤支点でスライダーの形が急に変わっているのは気になりました。
  8. 02:49:485 (9) - ^
  9. 02:53:591 (5,6,7) - 叩くときの流れが少しぎこちなくなってしまう気がします。
  10. 02:58:643 (4) - ボーカルとズレているのが気になったのでスライダーの始点を(3)の時間へ。
  11. 03:01:959 (5) - new comboを入れたほうが親切だと思います。その後のスペーシング的に。
  12. 03:14:275 (2) - 削除してスピナーの始点をここへ。
  13. 03:15:696 (2) - ^
  14. 03:15:854 (1) - スピナーは03:19:485で終えた方が合っているのではないでしょうか。
Hard
  • HP+2
  1. 01:11:117 (2) - 終端ではなく始端にfinish。
  2. 01:10:643 (1,2,3,4) - 違和感があるので↓いずれかのパターンの方が合っていると思います。

  3. 01:19:327 (4) - 1gird下＆左に移動させた方が形が綺麗になると思います。
  4. 01:20:433 (3) - 削除してスピナーの始点をここに移動させてもいいかも。(スピナーの移動は好みで)
  5. 01:56:275 (4,5,6) - 音と合ってません。それと(4)はスペーシングも修正の必要があります。
  6. 02:04:959 (1) - スピナーの終点を02:07:170へ。
  7. 02:45:854 (2) - 終端ではなく始端にfinish。
  8. 03:06:065 (2) - ^
  9. 03:15:696 (1) - Lunaticと同様。
Normal
  • BPM190でSV1.0は一番下の難易度としては少し速すぎるかもしれません。
    ところどころ、一番下の難易度としては難しすぎるパターンがあります。その部分には☆をつけました。
  1. 00:39:380 (4,5) - それぞれ1grid上。
  2. 00:40:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ☆
  3. 01:54:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ☆
  4. 01:59:591 (4) - 1grid上？
  5. 02:07:485 (1)~02:16:327 (8) - まるごと前半のコピペではなく少し配置を変えてみては。
  6. 02:49:169 (2,3,1) - ☆
  7. 02:58:012 (1)~03:15:064 (4) - さすがにまるごとコピペしすぎです。

ファイト！　ミ☆
Mercurius
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Topic Starter
Mercurius

Suzully wrote:

modです。
SPOILER
General
  • offset -10~14 Fixed
    他の方も言われてますが、最初の30秒の空白はやはり長いです。
    可能ならば出来るだけカットした方が良いように思います。
    もしくは12秒あたりから作り始めるなど。 Not Fixed
Lunatic
  • 多いスタックでの連打がやや多用気味だと思います。
    なるべく別のパターンにしてみてはどうでしょう。 Not Fixed
  1. 00:52:327 (5) - (1-4)とスペーシングを揃えてください。 Not Fixed Importance
  2. 00:55:170 (1) - 1grid下＆左に移動させたほうが形が綺麗になると思います。 Fixed
  3. 01:06:528 (7,8) - ボーカルに合わせるのなら↓。好みなので参考までに。 Not Fixed
  4. 01:35:275 (1,2,3) - そこまで迷いませんが、もう少しスペーシングを空けたほうがわかりやすく感じます。 Fixed
  5. 01:53:591 (2) - finishの音でタイミングが取りづらいと思います。finishは実際に叩く01:54:380 (3,4)だけにした方が良いと思います。 Fixed
  6. 01:56:275 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 単発はあまり重ねすぎないほうが良いです。 Not Fixed
  7. 02:39:380 (5) - 意図的だとは思いますが、ココだけ赤支点でスライダーの形が急に変わっているのは気になりました。 Fixed
  8. 02:49:485 (9) - ^ Fixed
  9. 02:53:591 (5,6,7) - 叩くときの流れが少しぎこちなくなってしまう気がします。 Fixed
  10. 02:58:643 (4) - ボーカルとズレているのが気になったのでスライダーの始点を(3)の時間へ。 Fixed
  11. 03:01:959 (5) - new comboを入れたほうが親切だと思います。その後のスペーシング的に。 Fixed
  12. 03:14:275 (2) - 削除してスピナーの始点をここへ。 Fixed
  13. 03:15:696 (2) - ^ Fixed
  14. 03:15:854 (1) - スピナーは03:19:485で終えた方が合っているのではないでしょうか。 Not Fixed
Hard
  • HP+2 Fixed
  1. 01:11:117 (2) - 終端ではなく始端にfinish。 Fixed
  2. 01:10:643 (1,2,3,4) - 違和感があるので↓いずれかのパターンの方が合っていると思います。 Fixed

  3. 01:19:327 (4) - 1gird下＆左に移動させた方が形が綺麗になると思います。 Fixed
  4. 01:20:433 (3) - 削除してスピナーの始点をここに移動させてもいいかも。(スピナーの移動は好みで) Fixed
  5. 01:56:275 (4,5,6) - 音と合ってません。それと(4)はスペーシングも修正の必要があります。 Fixed
  6. 02:04:959 (1) - スピナーの終点を02:07:170へ。 Fixed
  7. 02:45:854 (2) - 終端ではなく始端にfinish。 Fixed
  8. 03:06:065 (2) - ^ Fixed
  9. 03:15:696 (1) - Lunaticと同様。 Not Fixed
Normal
  • BPM190でSV1.0は一番下の難易度としては少し速すぎるかもしれません。
    ところどころ、一番下の難易度としては難しすぎるパターンがあります。その部分には☆をつけました。
  1. 00:39:380 (4,5) - それぞれ1grid上。 Fixed
  2. 00:40:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ☆ Not Fixed
  3. 01:54:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ☆ Not Fixed
  4. 01:59:591 (4) - 1grid上？ Not Fixed
  5. 02:07:485 (1)~02:16:327 (8) - まるごと前半のコピペではなく少し配置を変えてみては。 Fixed
  6. 02:49:169 (2,3,1) - ☆ Fixed
  7. 02:58:012 (1)~03:15:064 (4) - さすがにまるごとコピペしすぎです。 Fixed

ファイト！　ミ☆
----------------------------------------------------
[Lunatic]

[*]00:52:327 (5) - (1-4)とスペーシングを揃えてください。
＞When playing, (4)-(5) space will be closer. So I put (5) far from (4).
＞連打の最初の(5)は、Playしたときに以後の連打と重なっているため、補正がかかって(4)に近くなってしまうので
＞補正を考えてわざとズラして配置しました。　Adviced by "val0108" on IRC Modding

[*]01:56:275 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 単発はあまり重ねすぎないほうが良いです。
＞自分の好みで置いてみました。以後指摘があれば考え直します。

[*]03:15:854 (1) - スピナーは03:19:485で終えた方が合っているのではないでしょうか。
＞今の位置の方がいいと思ったのでスルーします。


[Normal]
Not fixed は現状維持でいきます。

General
前奏長いけどそのままにしたいです・・・。
15秒ほど作って、Break挟むのはアリでしょうか？
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