1. Beuchi's Hard (4.5 stars, 158 notes)
2. Normal (3.28 stars, 120 notes)
3. pieguy's Easy (1.06 stars, 59 notes)
4. Taiko (4.83 stars, 372 notes)

animask wrote:

BPM seems fine.
Offset may be a bit off but that's fine for now.
Someone who experts at timing will fix it up when they see it.

[Easy]

Normal sampleset might sound better.

00:07:796 (5) - Add claps to the last 3 repeats.
00:11:362 (3) - Place the note on the previous red tick @ [00:11:153] and add a Finish hitsound
00:12:621 (1,2,3,4) - Select all and move to next white tick (full beat)
00:18:705 (1) - Add a Finish hitsound at the end.
00:20:174 (2) - Add a Clap
00:21:223 (1,2,3) - Add Whistles?
00:24:369 (3) - Add a Finish hitsound at the end.
00:30:244 (2) - Add a whistle
00:34:439 (2) - Add a whistle or clap here.
00:36:118 (5) - ^
00:37:796 (3) - ^
00:39:474 (1) - Add a Finish hitsound at the end.
00:41:153 (4) - Add a whistle or clap here.
00:43:251 (1) - Add a Finish hitsound at the start.
00:44:929 (1,2) - Finish hitsounds here.
00:45:768 (3,4) - Add whistles or claps here.
01:07:167 (2) - ^
01:09:055 (5) - ^
01:18:076 (3) - Add a Finish hitsound here

While using AIMod (First time actually using this o_O)

00:31:502 (1) - Spinner is too short. Also, too close to the slider after it.
01:16:817 (1) - It says this one is too close too. You could shorten the slider by 1 full beat and it will still sound nice.

[Taiko]

I wonder if this taiko map is good da-don~

It's better than the last taiko map I saw from you!

Overall, I thought this was a nice improvement. I thought that some notes could be added and changed around but that might change the whole map style. I didn't find anything wrong with the spacing. Good Job~

I don't like starring maps that aren't in Pending or finished all the way...

• 
  I think you don’t need lead-in time
  No BG?
  End the Kiai Time at 01:13:460 or 01:16:817

• 
  00:13:041 (1,2,3,4): A bit ugly. Make a flow if you can
  00:15:558 (4,1): This jump is too hard for an easy diff
  00:21:642 (3): Start this spinner at 00:21:852 and add a circle here
  00:33:181 (1): Too close to the spinner
  00:39:414 (1): This 1/4 repeat slider is a bit hard for easy
  00:46:607 (1): Finish
  00:52:062 (7): Symmetry would be better
  01:00:034 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  01:02:551 (4,1): Too far
  01:04:649 (4): Symmetry
  01:11:782 (3,5): Add whistle
  01:16:817 (1,2): Add finish

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

My suggestions:

[General]

• 
  I think you don’t need lead-in time
  No BG?
  End the Kiai Time at 01:13:460 or 01:16:817

[Easy]
I suggest CS and AS -1 And the hitsound feels a bit random

• 
  00:13:041 (1,2,3,4): A bit ugly. Make a flow if you can
  00:15:558 (4,1): This jump is too hard for an easy diff
  00:21:642 (3): Start this spinner at 00:21:852 and add a circle here
  00:33:181 (1): Too close to the spinner
  00:39:414 (1): This 1/4 repeat slider is a bit hard for easy
  00:46:607 (1): Finish
  00:52:062 (7): Symmetry would be better
  01:00:034 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  01:02:551 (4,1): Too far
  01:04:649 (4): Symmetry
  01:11:782 (3,5): Add whistle
  01:16:817 (1,2): Add finish

Send a PM to me if there are more diffs~

☆ STAR ☆

- S e k a i - wrote:

IRC modded :3

ErufenRito wrote:

You shouldnt have gave me kudosu for such an useless post as that one... >_>

Beuchi-chan wrote:

o3o/

[attachment=0:63702]NYC - Yuuki 100 (HeatKai) [Beuchi's Hard].osu[/attachment:63702]

Joshua Lost wrote:

Hi~Here's my mod.All my words are just suggestions~^^
But you'd better to fix the red ones.

[General]
●Firstly..Moving your map to WIP will be better..>_>
●As the other modders' words, this map doesn't need lead-in time.(BTW,the beginning of the song feels like to be cut? @_@)

[Beuchi's Hard]
●No Kiai time?
It's a nice diff~>w<

[Easy]
Looks like normal I guess >_>
●Too many circles for a easy diff.Try to map more sliders? (For example ↓)
00:13:040 (1) - Plays weird.The note doesn't follow the vocal.I'll map like this:
[attachment=0:3056d]for heatkai.jpg[/attachment:3056d]
00:30:663 (3) - Move to 00:30:453
00:38:635 (5) - End at 00:38:845
00:44:090 (2) - Move to 00:43:880
(Hitsound is difficult to map according to the current arrangement.)

Sorry I can't mod taiko ><
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Numbers 596108 wrote:

Mod Request from Random

If you have PM me to mod,i'll mark the name which PM me to mod it :3
If no,i'll random to mod and use Pink to mark


Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color

Color Help

Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect Timing or Move Notes
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern

thanks
but still not gonna map the early part =3

Taiko

Timing :

00:00:00 104.00 BPM - N - -> Add
00:06:32 143.00 BPM - N - -> OK
00:32:76 0.75x - N - -> OK
00:38:84 1.0x - N - -> OK
00:46:60 1.0x - K - -> Great
01:15:13 1.0x - N - -> Great

Notes :

00:06:537 (2) -
00:09:265 (17) -
00:10:104 (20) -
00:10:943 (24) -
00:14:719 (47) -
00:17:656 (64) -
00:20:174 (77) -
00:31:083 (139,140.....151) - Remove some note?

Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 5 -> 6~7
Circle Size - 2 -> Max
Approach Rate - 5 -> Max
Overall Difficulty - 5 -> 3~4

HeatKai wrote:

Numbers 596108 wrote:

Mod Request from Random

If you have PM me to mod,i'll mark the name which PM me to mod it :3
If no,i'll random to mod and use Pink to mark


Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color

Color Help

Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect Timing or Move Notes
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern


Taiko

Timing :

00:00:00 104.00 BPM - N - -> Add
00:06:32 143.00 BPM - N - -> OK
00:32:76 0.75x - N - -> OK
00:38:84 1.0x - N - -> OK
00:46:60 1.0x - K - -> Great
01:15:13 1.0x - N - -> Great

Notes :

00:06:537 (2) -
00:09:265 (17) -
00:10:104 (20) -
00:10:943 (24) -
00:14:719 (47) -
00:17:656 (64) -
00:20:174 (77) -
00:31:083 (139,140.....151) - Remove some note?

Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 5 -> 6~7
Circle Size - 2 -> Max
Approach Rate - 5 -> Max
Overall Difficulty - 5 -> 3~4

pieguy1372 wrote:

Done.

AngelHoney wrote:

all suggestions~

All

add " pieguy " to tags ?
Title should be " Yuuki 100% " ?

Beuchi's Hard

00:28:355 (7) - remove whitstleslide?

Normal

00:10:733 - add a note ?
00:15:768 (4) - move to 00:15:978 ?
00:17:866 - add slider ? (end at 00:18:286
00:29:404 (1,2,3) - spacing ?
00:39:474 (1) - move far ?

pieguy's Easy

fine~

La Cataline wrote:

star, k

LunaticSHIKI wrote:

offset 4653 (the old offset just a little bit late for me :p)


Hard
00:12:205 (1) - remove new combo
00:12:625 (2) - new combo
00:39:268 - add a note

Normal
overall diffculty +1 or 2
00:12:625 - add a note?
00:20:597 - add a note
00:30:247 (2,3) - spacing?
00:31:086 (1,1) - too close.spin maybe end in 00:32:345?
01:09:684 (1,2) - 1 gird right

Easy
00:15:562 (3) - 1 grid right

nice map
and this song reminded me about my childhood DD!
star
edit: i cant mod taiko maps sorry

Joshua Lost wrote:

[Beuchi's Hard]
●No Kiai time? I'm sorry I don't like Kiai ;w;
It's a nice diff~>w<

AngelHoney wrote:

Beuchi's Hard
00:28:355 (7) - remove whitstleslide? Ooooh nice catch! Fixed :3

LunaticSHIKI wrote:

Hard
00:12:205 (1) - remove new combo It's a change of pattern/spacing so... no sorry =x
00:12:625 (2) - new combo Same reason as above~
00:39:268 - add a note Sounds cool, but I'll think about it, I like the mini-break before the stream. If mine would be the hardest diff I don't have any problems to add more notes but until we guess if there's going to be a harder diff I'll leave it as it is xP

y u c a wrote:

only Hard not set Music Track Lead-in Is it really needed? There's a part of song without any mapping, there's even a countdown D: I'll add it if it's really needed, but for now I'll leave it as it is, sorry =x

Beuchi's Hard
00:39:897 (5) - add finish I tried adding a finish while I was mapping it, but I didn't like how it sounded ;~;
01:15:981 - add finish end of spiner(volume -5 tick)? Added~

beuchi-chan wrote:

Thanks for the mods! Sorry for not updating earlier, I've been pretty sick these days >.<
Anyways all mods applied~

pieguy1372 wrote:

00:15:562 (3) - Fixed

00:53:324 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think it's fine

00:38:848 (5) - Done
00:39:897 (1) - Done

00:29:824 (1) - Changed a bit
00:41:572 (3) - I think it's fine as is
00:56:677 (1) - ^

ErufenRito wrote:

Beuchi's:

Why the audio lead in? Besides the fact that it is totally unnecessary, the audio lead-in makes the drastic start of the mp3 worse imo.

The only complaint i have about this diff is 00:26:048 (1), where that instrument goes way too offbeat, and actually fits more at 00:25:946, but seeing that you are also mapping to the main beats, i guess its okay then. :l

Normal:

00:21:432 (5) - Consider deleting this.
00:43:883 (2) - Random 1/2, and it doesn't even fit well with the song imo. I suggest you to move it 1/2 beat later (00:44:093 - ), and prefarably without the clap.
01:02:551 (4) - Consider deleting this.

I guess this is all.

Definitely don't kudose me. You already gave me one for nothing at all.

kanpakyin wrote:

[Beuchi's Hard]
00:15:981(x)-I think add a note here might better. Hmm I'm following the lyrics here sooo no, sorry =x
00:18:708(1)-Not suggest to change the slider speed here but..whatever.. xD Is it THAT weird?
00:39:478(1.2.3.4.5)-What?The only 1/4 stream in this difficulty?Remove this to consistent your map T^T Same as above.
01:06:541(2.3)-Put a whistle on (2)- then remove whistle on (3) No, sorry, I'm following a certain pattern here.
01:10:107(3)-Remove whistle(I mean this whole slider) I feel it is really noisy. Done~
Pretty nice map >W<

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

star~

lkp wrote:

:)