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Chata - Winter Bells

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mjw5150
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月29日 at 15:28:24

Artist: Chata
Title: Winter Bells
Source: Shirokuma Bellstars
Tags: PULLTOP DarkRingSystem impossiblexu
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5852kb
Play Time: 04:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. DRS5150 (4.99 stars, 636 notes)
  2. Hard (4.61 stars, 510 notes)
  3. impossiblexu's Easy (2.5 stars, 223 notes)
  4. Normal (3.85 stars, 283 notes)
Download: Chata - Winter Bells
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Winter Bells♪
しろくまベルスターズ♪ OP

Easy:impossiblexu
Normal:mjw5150
Hard:mjw5150
DRS5150:2pc brother(DRS) and mjw5150 (rhythm set by mjw5150,mapset by DRS

Merry X'mas(Although it is March now XD
Hinacle
cute song~!!

✰⡓⡓⡢⡥⡶⡶⠗⠒⠂(פ'д 'פ) <shoot
lorvd
KEY君のbaka
subarasikibuta
又见好歌~!
S o r d a
I like this song~
star :)
Hinagiku
:D
digiaria
终于见到做完整版的了 :D
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

首先感谢selee提供timing……

bpm 158.000 offset 1,282
bpm 180.000 offset 15,421


DRS55150

01:22:749 (1,2) - 不建议贴这么近
02:15:083 (4,5,6,1) - 感觉这样在两个slider首尾之间做往返特别难读……
02:41:583 (5,6) - 这两个我建议你换个地方(比如左边)做和前边等距的jump,我打到这里以为间隔是1拍。
03:46:583 (5,1) - 这里建议不要jump……


Hard

00:17:583 - 感觉这里加个note好一点,或者是后面的那两个位置离前边有点近了?
04:02:249 (4) - new combo


Normal

AR+2


总体感觉不错的,不过似乎可以多用一些new combo,让排列的结构更清晰一些
Topic Starter
mjw5150
bpm 158.000 offset 1,282
这个感觉没什么必要吧。。。前15秒都没下节奏的~
其他的都改了
thx for your modding :)
Dotsu
做完了 XD

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Download: Chata - Winter Bells (mjw5150) [Easy].osu

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:D
DarkRingSystem
8-)
mod~
...


骗你的 star~
Potofu
star~~~
Holoaz
hihi~

[Timing]
offset 765

suggestion~

nice map! =~=d
Topic Starter
mjw5150

Holoaz wrote:

hihi~

[Timing]
offset 765

suggestion~

nice map! =~=d
after double check,i think the offset has no problem~
anyway thx for your modding:D
banvi
hi~

[impossiblexu's Easy]
at least HP +1
00:15:416 (T) this timing point is needless? o.o

[Normal]
00:17:250 (1) remove new combo
00:22:584 (1) ^
00:25:083 (1) add finish?
03:15:917 (1) remove new combo

[Hard]
00:25:083 (1) add finish?
01:24:083 (3) add whistle at the end?
01:34:749 (3) ^
01:45:416 (4,5) ^
03:12:083 (7) ^

[DRS5150]
00:25:083 (1) add finish?
00:44:083 (5) new combo
01:02:416 (8) move 1 grid right
02:10:749 (11) add finish?
03:12:083 (7) add whistle at the end?

really nice mapset!! :)
star~
Topic Starter
mjw5150

banvi wrote:

[Normal]
00:17:250 (1) remove new combo
00:22:584 (1) ^
00:25:083 (1) add finish?
03:15:917 (1) remove new combo

[Hard]
00:25:083 (1) add finish?
01:24:083 (3) add whistle at the end?
01:34:749 (3) ^
01:45:416 (4,5) ^
03:12:083 (7) ^

[DRS5150]
00:25:083 (1) add finish?
00:44:083 (5) new combo
01:02:416 (8) move 1 grid right
02:10:749 (11) add finish?
03:12:083 (7) add whistle at the end?

really nice mapset!! :)
star~
fixed thx a lot :D
and impossiblexu will check his easy diff later~
LaunchedthousandShip
impossiblexu's Easy
slider tick2或0.5,我建议2
01:47:916 (2) - 建议少repeat一次,在01:48:582 - 结束,然后可以适当把下面一个spinner开始的位置前调
03:10:582 (2) - ^
04:01:249 (2) - ^


Normal
slider tick2或0.5,我建议2
01:40:083 - 加个note
03:53:416 - ^
04:01:083 - ^

Hard
slider tick2或0.5
04:02:249 (4,5,6) - 音效感觉很空...

DRS5150
00:46:583 (4,5,6) - 我不会把这几个beat叠起来,而是分开像00:51:916 (1,2,3) - 一样,这几个东西本来在角落里就不是很显眼,叠在一起后更是
01:45:749 - 加个note
02:41:083 (3) - new combo
03:16:249 (4) - 换个位置,confused
03:56:749 (1,2,3,4) - ds缩小一些,或者换个排列
整体难度,很多意义不明的jump,不过在玩的过程中不会造成困难,只是给人感觉jump的很生硬,所以就没指出
Topic Starter
mjw5150

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

Normal
slider tick2或0.5,我建议2
01:40:083 - 加个note
03:53:416 - ^
04:01:083 - ^

Hard
slider tick2或0.5
04:02:249 (4,5,6) - 音效感觉很空...

DRS5150
00:46:583 (4,5,6) - 我不会把这几个beat叠起来,而是分开像00:51:916 (1,2,3) - 一样,这几个东西本来在角落里就不是很显眼,叠在一起后更是
01:45:749 - 加个note
02:41:083 (3) - new combo
03:16:249 (4) - 换个位置,confused
03:56:749 (1,2,3,4) - ds缩小一些,或者换个排列
整体难度,很多意义不明的jump,不过在玩的过程中不会造成困难,只是给人感觉jump的很生硬,所以就没指出
恩 大多数都改了 感谢mod
许哥的难度或许会迟1些改 最近都没看到他上线呐233
Fight69
Hoi o/

[General]

It looks much better if the kiai time start at 01:20:083

In your tag, I can read "DrakRingSystem"
I guess you mean "DarkRingSystem" right ? xD

[DRS5150]

00:42:416 (9) - Please don't put circles under slider, they're hard to see and frustrating when you miss them
01:03:749 (4) - You can make this slider nicer to see ! :) Just move the second waypoint 1 grid left and the last waypoint 2 grid right and 1 grid down, it should be better
01:08:416 (2) - 1 grid left
01:08:583 (3) - 1 grid left
01:08:749 (4) - 1 grid left and 1 grid up (you should get something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/80002 )
01:09:416 (5) - 3 grid up and 1 grid right (don't forget to fix the spacing for the next circles !)
01:40:583 (8) - New combo (because you've added jumps, they have a different spacing, that's why you should add a New combo IMO)
02:13:583 (2) - As I said earlier, don't put circles under slider, I haven't even noticed this one
02:42:249 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream don't fit very well with the song :|
02:52:916 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
03:48:749 (8) - Delete this circle, it don't fit with the vocals
04:02:750 (1) - Silence the last spinner

[Hard]

02:42:666 (6) - Delete this circle
02:47:416 (5) - ^
02:53:333 (6) - ^
02:58:083 (5) - ^
03:02:083 (3) - ^
03:39:749 (4) - ^
03:39:749 (1) - No new combo
04:02:249 (4) - New combo

[Normal]

01:20:084 (2) - Add a finish at the beggining
03:39:917 (3) - ^
03:52:084 (1) - Add a finish at the beggining, on the reverse arrow and at the end

[impossiblexu's Easy]

00:16:083 (T) - Uh ? Why a timing section here ?
00:16:083 (2) - Make this slider 1/2 shorter, it sounds much better
01:19:916 (T) - Useless timing section
01:29:082 (2) - Delete the clap at the beggining

I know that I've said a lot of stuff, but it's still a good mapset !
~Starz'd !
Topic Starter
mjw5150

Fight69 wrote:

Hoi o/

[General]

It looks much better if the kiai time start at 01:20:083

In your tag, I can read "DrakRingSystem"
I guess you mean "DarkRingSystem" right ? xD

[DRS5150]

00:42:416 (9) - Please don't put circles under slider, they're hard to see and frustrating when you miss them
01:03:749 (4) - You can make this slider nicer to see ! :) Just move the second waypoint 1 grid left and the last waypoint 2 grid right and 1 grid down, it should be better
01:08:416 (2) - 1 grid left
01:08:583 (3) - 1 grid left
01:08:749 (4) - 1 grid left and 1 grid up (you should get something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/80002 )
01:09:416 (5) - 3 grid up and 1 grid right (don't forget to fix the spacing for the next circles !)
01:40:583 (8) - New combo (because you've added jumps, they have a different spacing, that's why you should add a New combo IMO)
02:13:583 (2) - As I said earlier, don't put circles under slider, I haven't even noticed this one
02:42:249 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream don't fit very well with the song :|
02:52:916 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
03:48:749 (8) - Delete this circle, it don't fit with the vocals
04:02:750 (1) - Silence the last spinner

[Hard]

02:42:666 (6) - Delete this circle
02:47:416 (5) - ^
02:53:333 (6) - ^
02:58:083 (5) - ^
03:02:083 (3) - ^
03:39:749 (4) - ^
03:39:749 (1) - No new combo
04:02:249 (4) - New combo

[Normal]

01:20:084 (2) - Add a finish at the beggining
03:39:917 (3) - ^
03:52:084 (1) - Add a finish at the beggining, on the reverse arrow and at the end

I know that I've said a lot of stuff, but it's still a good mapset !
~Starz'd !
fixed,thx al lot and impossiblexu will check his diff later:D
Dotsu

banvi wrote:

hi~

[impossiblexu's Easy]
at least HP +1
00:15:416 (T) this timing point is needless? o.o Deleted

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

impossiblexu's Easy
slider tick2或0.5,我建议2
01:47:916 (2) - 建议少repeat一次,在01:48:582 - 结束,然后可以适当把下面一个spinner开始的位置前调感觉还是现在这样听起来好
03:10:582 (2) - ^
04:01:249 (2) - ^

Fight69 wrote:

[impossiblexu's Easy]

00:16:083 (T) - Uh ? Why a timing section here ? Deleted
00:16:083 (2) - Make this slider 1/2 shorter, it sounds much better
01:19:916 (T) - Useless timing sectionFor changing the volume
01:29:082 (2) - Delete the clap at the beggining Deleted
Thank you very much~ :D

Download: Chata - Winter Bells (mjw5150) [impossiblexu's Easy].osu
Lesjuh
Offset 14.760 on all difficulties!

DR
01:52:093 - End the spinner & kiai time here
04:05:426 - ^

Hard
01:52:093 - End the spinner & kiai time here
04:05:426 - ^

impossiblexu
01:52:083 - End kiai time here
03:14:749 - ^
04:05:416 - ^

That's it.

Contact me again, and I'll bubble it!

EDIT: bubbled!
LQX
:)
abalee
Hmm..

General guidelines wrote:

A maximum of three slider velocities may be used. This includes 1x, so for example you can have a single map using 0.6x, 0.8x, and 1x, or 1x, 1.5x and 2x.
Topic Starter
mjw5150

abalee wrote:

Hmm..

General guidelines wrote:

A maximum of three slider velocities may be used. This includes 1x, so for example you can have a single map using 0.6x, 0.8x, and 1x, or 1x, 1.5x and 2x.
i think the old guidelines are out of work for the maps now
and 4SV is very fit this song form 01:12:093 to 01:14:426
so i won't change it,sorry :(
Alace
<DRS>
00:19:426 (2,3,4) - 這三點加上softwhistle ?
01:48:926 (4,5,6) - 這邊有都打上whistle ?
03:11:593 (4,5,6) - ^
04:02:260 (4,5,6) - ^
04:02:260 (4) - 這個下new combo會好認點
03:36:093 (1,2,3,4) - 爽快的打上whistle吧!!

<Hard>
00:18:759 (1,2,3,4) - whistle whistle~
01:48:926 (4,5,6) - 這邊有都打上whistle ?
03:11:593 (4,5,6) - ^
04:02:260 (4,5,6) - ^
03:36:093 (1,2,3) - 同DRS

<Normal>
00:18:759 (1,2,3,4) - whistle whistle~
03:36:093 (1,2,3) - whistle (其實副歌的這部份也可以這樣加)

<Easy>
00:19:426 (1) - whistle加每個點
00:58:759 (1) - 這個部份開始,可以跟著1 3拍一直打whistle打到副歌前(聽音樂 在1 3拍很明顯有whistle的聲效) 不過其他難度已經加在2.4拍了~

EDIT:ok take my heart
DarkRingSystem
:(
DRS我真心FC不了这歌啊 TAT
(DRS me I can't fc this map TAT)

不要告诉别人这是我做的谱子
(Don't tell anyone that this made by me)
Topic Starter
mjw5150

DarkRingSystem wrote:

:(
DRS我真心FC不了这歌啊 TAT
(DRS me I can't fc this map TAT)

不要告诉别人这是我做的谱子
(Don't tell anyone that this made by me)
没事 开FL就能FC了
(you can FC it with FL,just you can XD)
DarkRingSystem

mjw5150 wrote:

DarkRingSystem wrote:

:(
DRS我真心FC不了这歌啊 TAT
(DRS me I can't fc this map TAT)

不要告诉别人这是我做的谱子
(Don't tell anyone that this made by me)
没事 开FL就能FC了
(you can FC it with FL,just you can XD)
:) 我诅咒你dota 天天掉线~
(I wish you off the line everyday when you play dota)
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