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mod out of nowhere because fuck you that's why
[General]
I think AR5-6-7 spread would be nicer.
[Cup]
00:09:505 (4) - Stronger distance would be nice, whilst it's already stronger than the last note, it's not really a noticable difference, but the pitch on this indicates that it should be, so try x:464.
00:12:213 (1) - x:208, the extra emphasis works well in my opinion.
00:20:061 (2) - Some kind of repeat movement here because of the way the instrument structure repeats here with lowering in pitch would be pretty cool, try ctrl+H and moving it onto x:464.
00:23:143 (1,2,3) - 1 could have a stronger distance for more emphasis on the start of the kiai and the new instrument being introduced in is also pretty strong. Try moving 1 to x:48, 2 to x:16, and 3 to x:224.
00:25:887 (1,2) - x:208 would be nice on this section, both for a bit higher distance to 1, and for distance consistency with previous part from 2 to 3.
00:29:594 (3) - Maybe split this into 2 circles and have a stronger movement to the end of this slider currently, as it's actually a pretty nice note to emphasise a bit more.
00:31:360 (2,3) - x:48 would be nice for more emphasis on 2 here whilst keeping similar flow.
00:34:071 (3) - A tiny bit strong right now, try x:416 for similar distancing to your other strong movements.
00:35:434 (2) - x:64, this note's pretty strong, more emphasis would be pretty cool.
00:36:798 (4) - Again on x:64, I think a repetition in the distance here would nicely repeat the intensity in the music, and the backforth motion here would also help to incorporate it. (An even higher distance would work if you think more emphasis would be nice, that can work too).
00:39:525 (4) - This one's stronger than the previous notes, so a higher distance would be nice, try x:432.
00:42:252 (1) - A tiny bit more emphasis would be nice, try x:32.
00:44:961 (2) - x:240 would be a nicer distance here to better emphasise the pitch change.
[Salad]
00:02:291 (2) - I don't think you should use dashes this early in the map, and these notes aren't really particularly strong, especially if you consider later on in the map, so reducing it to x:384 would be nice.
00:05:054 (2) - x:144 here for the same reason.
00:09:505 (4) - x:496 to make the distance change more prominent for the pitch change?
00:11:531 (2) - Strength on this is a bit too strong considering notes aren't too prominent, maybe just do x:256 on this.
00:13:215 (4) - Same as the beginning of the mod, x:432.
00:15:976 (2) - Again here, x:144.
00:20:402 (4) - I think here, a dash isn't really necessary,but you could still emphasise it with a strong direction change, x:448 would be great.
00:23:160 (1) - Dash to this would be nice, try x:496 maybe?
00:25:205 (4) - x:448 would work pretty nicely on this, try doing that, lowers distances so a dash doesn't feel as necessary to the next note and also lowers emphasis on the weak note here.
00:26:526 (2) - Very strong distance, especially considering the backforth movement here, try x:368.
00:29:594 (3) - Same suggestion as in cup.
00:31:360 (5) - Dash to this would be nice considering the strength on this note and violin here, try moving it to x:448 and 00:32:041 (6) - to x:160.
00:33:389 (3,4) - I think moving this to the left to x:368 would be nice, for less strong movement to 3 to better show the pitch changing here, and also to add a dash to the next note.
00:35:093 (2) - x:144 here would be nice, dash doesn't really seem necessary to me.
00:39:525 (1,2,3) - A stronger distance would be nice to 1, for emphasis on the pitch, however the other notes have a bit too strong distance right now, and they can feel difficult with normal movement. Try 1 on x:496, 2 on x:240, and 3 on x:160.
00:41:571 (4) - If you did my previous suggestion, move this to x:448 to add more distance to it and also add a dash to the next note. If you didn't, then increase the distance to add a dash to 1 in a different way.
00:43:275 (6) - Decrease slightly to make it easier without dashing, try x:352.
00:44:961 (2) - x:448 would be nice for a dash here, distance is possible without dashing how it is now.
00:47:007 (4) - Kinda strong for a 1/1 backforth, reduce slightly to x:320.
[Platter]
00:08:142 (2) - How small the distance is to this throws me off, I think you could ctrl+> and move it to x:72, it'd be great.
00:11:531 (2) - Movement to this feels a bit too strong right now, maybe do x:152 instead.
00:13:215 (2) - Consistency in timeline with the start of the map please? The fact this is different just feels really strange.
00:15:976 (2) - ^
00:20:061 (3) - A bit too strong for a normal dash movement, maybe try x:384, would feel nicer.
00:25:205 (3) - Do x:112 instead, this cross screen movement, whilst easily possible without dashing, could throw off a platter player slightly, and so a light reduction on it would make it easier for them.
00:31:360 (6) - Hmm, maybe do x:96 and curve it around a bit more, it'd be nice, and then it'd be a better dash distance.
00:33:389 (2,3,4) - HDash to 3 makes a lot more sense than a HDash to 2, 3 is the strong note there, so try 2 as a horizontal slider to the left on x:176, 3 on x:496, and then 4 on x:400 to keep similar flow afterwards.
00:35:434 (6,1) - Doesn't really feel strong enough for a HDash to this in my opinion, x:192 would work fine on it, and then also add a stronger distance to the strong note on 2.
00:37:480 (3) - x:248 would be nice for a weaker distance to this, as it's weird without dashing right now, and also a stronger distance to make a dash to 4.
00:38:843 (5) - On this you could have a double dash to emphasise the pitch getting stronger a bit better, do x:24 on it.
00:40:207 (2) - A bit strong for a non-dash, just do x:240 instead.
00:41:571 (4) - Double dash again would be nice here, x:128 would be cool.
00:44:280 (1) - Maybe do a horizontal slider to the right at x:400? Increase the distance to this whilst keeping it as a non-dash, and then also add a HDash to the next note, which is strong and emphasises the end of the kiai.
00:46:325 (3,4,5) - Maybe do normal distance from 3 to 4 and then a dash to 5 to emphasise how that note is stronger in this slow part? Could do 3 on x:368, 4 on x:56, and 5 on x:496.
Alright, done.
mod out of nowhere because fuck you that's why
[General]
I think AR5-6-7 spread would be nicer.
[Cup]
00:09:505 (4) - Stronger distance would be nice, whilst it's already stronger than the last note, it's not really a noticable difference, but the pitch on this indicates that it should be, so try x:464.
00:12:213 (1) - x:208, the extra emphasis works well in my opinion.
00:20:061 (2) - Some kind of repeat movement here because of the way the instrument structure repeats here with lowering in pitch would be pretty cool, try ctrl+H and moving it onto x:464.
00:23:143 (1,2,3) - 1 could have a stronger distance for more emphasis on the start of the kiai and the new instrument being introduced in is also pretty strong. Try moving 1 to x:48, 2 to x:16, and 3 to x:224.
00:25:887 (1,2) - x:208 would be nice on this section, both for a bit higher distance to 1, and for distance consistency with previous part from 2 to 3.
00:29:594 (3) - Maybe split this into 2 circles and have a stronger movement to the end of this slider currently, as it's actually a pretty nice note to emphasise a bit more.
00:31:360 (2,3) - x:48 would be nice for more emphasis on 2 here whilst keeping similar flow.
00:34:071 (3) - A tiny bit strong right now, try x:416 for similar distancing to your other strong movements.
00:35:434 (2) - x:64, this note's pretty strong, more emphasis would be pretty cool.
00:36:798 (4) - Again on x:64, I think a repetition in the distance here would nicely repeat the intensity in the music, and the backforth motion here would also help to incorporate it. (An even higher distance would work if you think more emphasis would be nice, that can work too).
00:39:525 (4) - This one's stronger than the previous notes, so a higher distance would be nice, try x:432.
00:42:252 (1) - A tiny bit more emphasis would be nice, try x:32.
00:44:961 (2) - x:240 would be a nicer distance here to better emphasise the pitch change.
[Salad]
00:02:291 (2) - I don't think you should use dashes this early in the map, and these notes aren't really particularly strong, especially if you consider later on in the map, so reducing it to x:384 would be nice.
00:05:054 (2) - x:144 here for the same reason.
00:09:505 (4) - x:496 to make the distance change more prominent for the pitch change?
00:11:531 (2) - Strength on this is a bit too strong considering notes aren't too prominent, maybe just do x:256 on this.
00:13:215 (4) - Same as the beginning of the mod, x:432.
00:15:976 (2) - Again here, x:144.
00:20:402 (4) - I think here, a dash isn't really necessary,but you could still emphasise it with a strong direction change, x:448 would be great.
00:23:160 (1) - Dash to this would be nice, try x:496 maybe?
00:25:205 (4) - x:448 would work pretty nicely on this, try doing that, lowers distances so a dash doesn't feel as necessary to the next note and also lowers emphasis on the weak note here.
00:26:526 (2) - Very strong distance, especially considering the backforth movement here, try x:368.
00:29:594 (3) - Same suggestion as in cup.
00:31:360 (5) - Dash to this would be nice considering the strength on this note and violin here, try moving it to x:448 and 00:32:041 (6) - to x:160.
00:33:389 (3,4) - I think moving this to the left to x:368 would be nice, for less strong movement to 3 to better show the pitch changing here, and also to add a dash to the next note.
00:35:093 (2) - x:144 here would be nice, dash doesn't really seem necessary to me.
00:39:525 (1,2,3) - A stronger distance would be nice to 1, for emphasis on the pitch, however the other notes have a bit too strong distance right now, and they can feel difficult with normal movement. Try 1 on x:496, 2 on x:240, and 3 on x:160.
00:41:571 (4) - If you did my previous suggestion, move this to x:448 to add more distance to it and also add a dash to the next note. If you didn't, then increase the distance to add a dash to 1 in a different way.
00:43:275 (6) - Decrease slightly to make it easier without dashing, try x:352.
00:44:961 (2) - x:448 would be nice for a dash here, distance is possible without dashing how it is now.
00:47:007 (4) - Kinda strong for a 1/1 backforth, reduce slightly to x:320.
[Platter]
00:08:142 (2) - How small the distance is to this throws me off, I think you could ctrl+> and move it to x:72, it'd be great.
00:11:531 (2) - Movement to this feels a bit too strong right now, maybe do x:152 instead.
00:13:215 (2) - Consistency in timeline with the start of the map please? The fact this is different just feels really strange.
00:15:976 (2) - ^
00:20:061 (3) - A bit too strong for a normal dash movement, maybe try x:384, would feel nicer.
00:25:205 (3) - Do x:112 instead, this cross screen movement, whilst easily possible without dashing, could throw off a platter player slightly, and so a light reduction on it would make it easier for them.
00:31:360 (6) - Hmm, maybe do x:96 and curve it around a bit more, it'd be nice, and then it'd be a better dash distance.
00:33:389 (2,3,4) - HDash to 3 makes a lot more sense than a HDash to 2, 3 is the strong note there, so try 2 as a horizontal slider to the left on x:176, 3 on x:496, and then 4 on x:400 to keep similar flow afterwards.
00:35:434 (6,1) - Doesn't really feel strong enough for a HDash to this in my opinion, x:192 would work fine on it, and then also add a stronger distance to the strong note on 2.
00:37:480 (3) - x:248 would be nice for a weaker distance to this, as it's weird without dashing right now, and also a stronger distance to make a dash to 4.
00:38:843 (5) - On this you could have a double dash to emphasise the pitch getting stronger a bit better, do x:24 on it.
00:40:207 (2) - A bit strong for a non-dash, just do x:240 instead.
00:41:571 (4) - Double dash again would be nice here, x:128 would be cool.
00:44:280 (1) - Maybe do a horizontal slider to the right at x:400? Increase the distance to this whilst keeping it as a non-dash, and then also add a HDash to the next note, which is strong and emphasises the end of the kiai.
00:46:325 (3,4,5) - Maybe do normal distance from 3 to 4 and then a dash to 5 to emphasise how that note is stronger in this slow part? Could do 3 on x:368, 4 on x:56, and 5 on x:496.
Alright, done.
Ikkyoku Ikaga? "Yurenu Omoi" sorry (with quotations)
