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Umeboshi Chazuke - Owari to Hajimari no Oto

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fattypikachu
507 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
fattypikachu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on August-06-17 at 6:05:59 PM

Artist: Umeboshi Chazuke
Title: Owari to Hajimari no Oto
Source: VOEZ
Tags: rayark mobile ios android runnigwind Lokidoki
BPM: 201
Filesize: 5080kb
Play Time: 02:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (3.01 stars, 315 notes)
  2. Easy (1.36 stars, 95 notes)
  3. Ending (4.83 stars, 493 notes)
  4. Hard (3.56 stars, 365 notes)
  5. Loki's Insane (5.04 stars, 544 notes)
  6. Normal (2.2 stars, 209 notes)
  7. Runnigwind's 16-bit Sound Wave (6.29 stars, 632 notes)
Download: Umeboshi Chazuke - Owari to Hajimari no Oto
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Redownload if your version is from before 19 Jun, 2017!

Please do not disable the custom skin, otherwise the storyboard will look weird.

Feedback is appreciated, as always! :)

Thanks runnigwind and Lokidoki for the GD!

Skinning elements were taken from Project VOEZ, I highly suggest you use the full skin with this map!

Thank you all for the mod!
  1. DigiDrake
  2. gaston_2199
  3. Miryle
  4. Arutsuki
  5. bezbashn
  6. -NekoNya
  7. Plush
  8. Dron4nik_G
  9. Ohwow
  10. PolkaMocha
  11. TequilaWolf
  12. Lokidoki
  13. ColdVolcano
  14. lilligantEX
  15. -Fluffy
  16. FiddleBlue
  17. Lama Poluna
  18. paydayzvool
  19. Blan_C
  20. ReFaller
Last edited by fattypikachu , edited 44 times in total.
runnigwind
9 posts
Joined February 2016
runnigwind
Hey I saw the easy map and tried to help out [I hope :? ]



1 Slider 00:12:992 Should be moved to 00:12:695

2 Slider 00:15:380 Should be moved to 00:15:081

3 Slider shortened to 00:20:305

4 Slider added at 00:20:753 to 00:21:052

5 Spinner shortened to 01:34:554

6 Slider shortened to 01:58:982

7 Circle added 01:59:261

8 Arrow added to slider at 02:17:768

9 Spinner spaced back one tick [02:18:514]

10 Optional Slider shortened to 01:29:559
fattypikachu
507 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
fattypikachu
Hi! ^_^ (Note: Anything with a blue comment or nothing has been fixed.)

runnigwind wrote:

Hey I saw the easy map and tried to help out [I hope :? ]



1 Slider 00:12:992 Should be moved to 00:12:695 ]Did this, though I added a reverse arrow to it

2 Slider 00:15:380 Should be moved to 00:15:081 ^

3 Slider shortened to 00:20:305

4 Slider added at 00:20:753 to 00:21:052 I think I'll just put a circle here.

5 Spinner shortened to 01:34:554 ...there's no spinner here :?:

6 Slider shortened to 01:58:982

7 Circle added 01:59:261

8 Arrow added to slider at 02:17:768

9 Spinner spaced back one tick [02:18:514]

10 Optional Slider shortened to 01:29:559 I don't think I'll do this one.
Thanks for the mod, runnigwind! :)
Lokidoki
374 posts
Joined June 2015
Lokidoki
GD accepted :)
DigiDrake
257 posts
Joined February 2016
DigiDrake
Just some suggestions (My First Mod Sorry If It Sucks ;'O)



Hard
00:23:589 (3,1) - small change but consider moving circle and slider over like this
00:23:738 (1,2,3) - consider this :O
00:27:320 (1,2,3,4) - pattern flows better imo ??
00:31:052 (1,2) - slight placement change :J
00:52:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - space these out, flows better uwu
01:01:201 (7) - consider redirecting slider
01:26:126 (2,3,4,5) - maybe NC on these

Sorry for short mod >_>

I wish you luck on getting this ranked :D
fattypikachu
507 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
fattypikachu
Hi! ^_^ (Note: Anything with a blue comment or nothing has been fixed.)

DigiDrake wrote:

Just some suggestions (My First Mod Sorry If It Sucks ;'O) Don't worry, you're fine! :D



Hard
00:23:589 (3,1) - small change but consider moving circle and slider over like this
00:23:738 (1,2,3) - consider this :O
00:27:320 (1,2,3,4) - pattern flows better imo ?? It's nice, but I do have to edit it because of DS.
00:31:052 (1,2) - slight placement change :J
00:52:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - space these out, flows better uwu That feels a bit weird of me to not have done this `>_>
01:01:201 (7) - consider redirecting slider
01:26:126 (2,3,4,5) - maybe NC on these
That's actually a really good idea! It's also been added to some other areas.

Sorry for short mod >_>

I wish you luck on getting this ranked :D
Thanks for the mod, DigiDrake! :)
gaston_2199
1,140 posts
Joined February 2015
gaston_2199
Hi!
Mod from my queue :D

[Hard]

General

  1. I suggest gather more notes when you do this: http://prntscr.com/cutc60
  2. Adjust inherited points

Composition

  1. 00:21:545 (1,2,3,4) - This change in distance is very unexpected. I suggest: This Put this 00:21:545 (1) on top of this 00:21:695 (2) and Replace this with slider 00:21:993 (3,4)
  2. 00:29:754 (3,4) - - Check distance
  3. 00:31:098 (1) - Put this on top this 00:31:247 (2)
  4. 00:31:098 (1) - Put on of this 00:31:247 (2)
  5. 00:47:963 (2,3,4) - - One above the other in 3 parts
  6. 00:48:859 (1,2,3,4,5) - in line
  7. 00:50:053 (1) -
  8. 00:52:739 (2,3,2,3) - So hard for this diff, cut distance
  9. 01:09:754 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5) - Same rason ^
  10. 01:15:127 (4,5,6,7) - ^
  11. 02:09:456 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5) - ^
[Insane]

General

  1. I suggest use CS in 4,2 o less. In my opinion, 5 is so hard for this diff
  2. Adjust inherited points

Composition

  1. 00:19:605 (3,4,5,6) - NC and Convert to stream
  2. 00:21:545 (1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/cutzhi
  3. 00:24:978 (4) - NC
  4. 00:27:963 (6) - Adjust and add NC
  5. 00:29:754 (5) - NC
  6. Here 01:21:769 - and here 01:21:919 add note for convert to stream
  7. 01:23:486 (1,2,3,4) - Cut distance
  8. 01:28:262 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remap this, so hard for Insane (for me same)
  9. 01:50:799 (3,4) - What is this? Add note here 01:50:650 and add slider here 01:50:948
  10. 01:51:844 - Add note
  11. 01:53:038 - Add note
  12. 01:53:336 - Add stream or sliders 1/4 until here 01:54:456
This is all, sorry for my bad english. Good luck! ;)
fattypikachu
507 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
fattypikachu
Hi! (Note that everything with a blue comment or nothing has been fixed.)

gaston_2199 wrote:

Hi!
Mod from my queue :D

[Hard]

General

  1. I suggest gather more notes when you do this: http://prntscr.com/cutc60 Hmmm... that's not really easy, but I tried.
  2. Adjust inherited points

Composition

  1. 00:21:545 (1,2,3,4) - This change in distance is very unexpected. I suggest: This Put this 00:21:545 (1) on top of this 00:21:695 (2) and Replace this with slider 00:21:993 (3,4) Turns out this was mostly a general DS problem, so that got fixed!
  2. 00:29:754 (3,4) - - Check distance
  3. 00:31:098 (1) - Put this on top this 00:31:247 (2)
  4. 00:31:098 (1) - Put on of this 00:31:247 (2)lol repeat
  5. 00:47:963 (2,3,4) - - One above the other in 3 parts That does sound a lot better than what I had >_<
  6. 00:48:859 (1,2,3,4,5) - in line I think that's a little too much for this section...
  7. 00:50:053 (1) -
  8. 00:52:739 (2,3,2,3) - So hard for this diff, cut distance
  9. 01:09:754 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5) - Same reason ^Sure, but it's not by much
  10. 01:15:127 (4,5,6,7) - ^^
  11. 02:09:456 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5) - ^^
[Insane]

General

  1. I suggest use CS in 4,2 o less. In my opinion, 5 is so hard for this diff
  2. Adjust inherited points

Composition

  1. 00:19:605 (3,4,5,6) - NC and Convert to stream Yeah, that part was too difficult
  2. 00:21:545 (1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/cutzhi I like your idea, but the jump doesn't feel right...
  3. 00:24:978 (4) - NC
  4. 00:27:963 (6) - Adjust and add NC
  5. 00:29:754 (5) - NC
  6. Here 01:21:769 - and here 01:21:919 add note for convert to stream The second one I didn't add, since there was a oause in the melody.
  7. 01:23:486 (1,2,3,4) - Cut distance
  8. 01:28:262 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remap this, so hard for Insane (for me same)
  9. 01:50:799 (3,4) - What is this? Add note here 01:50:650 and add slider here 01:50:948 I trying to map the bass, though I did change it slightly to make it a little more intuitive.
  10. 01:51:844 - Add note
  11. 01:53:038 - Add note
  12. 01:53:336 - Add stream or sliders 1/4 until here 01:54:456 I think that this section is too calm to use streams here.
This is all, sorry for my bad english. Good luck! ;) Don't worry, I unsterstood you loud and clear ^-^
Thanks for the mod, gaston_2199! :)
Mir
osu! Alumni
2,151 posts
Joined July 2016
Mir
M4M~ I'm pretty late with this, sorry!

Beginning

Easy

  1. 00:14:232 (3) – Note here? I don’t get why there’s a pause.
  2. 00:19:008 (3) – Super scrunched up. I don’t really think it looks nice. ;-; Make it more fluid? Also strong note on this downbeat that’s on a slider end. Not really a fan of that. ._.
  3. 00:36:919 (3,4) – Blanket is pretty off.
  4. Okay so most of the strong beats that you yourself emphasize with snares and finishes etc are on downbeats, which really isn’t satisfying to play.
  5. 01:16:322 (1) – NC cuz downbeat. Do this for pretty much everywhere in the map unless there’s a stronger note that should be new combo’d.
  6. 01:28:262 (3) – I get it. I really do. But this many reverses is a bit monotonous. Consider adding more sliders with reverses?
  7. 02:07:665 (3) - ^
  8. 02:11:247 (3,4) – Blanket looks off.
  9. 02:16:023 (3,4) – Blanket here perhaps?

    Overall not a fan of the slider shapes, but that’s personal preference.

Hard

Hard

  1. 00:23:635 (3) – DS inconsistency.
  2. 00:31:247 (2,3) – Make these more similar.
  3. 01:02:516 (3) – Straighten this out a bit more.
  4. 01:09:754 (2,3,4,5) – Err, a straight line may look nicer. Same for 01:10:948 (2,3,4,5).
  5. 01:13:784 (4,5,2) – Overlap. Actually there were a lot of overlaps before, but because of that I was too lazy to mention them all so I’ll say it now: So. Many. Overlaps. It’s a hard difficulty so you can switch up DS a bit to avoid them.
  6. 01:25:874 (1,1,1,1) – Why is this the only instance of this section’s every note being a new combo?
  7. 01:28:262 (1,1,1,1) – Why all new combos? Same at: 01:35:426 (1,1,1).
  8. 01:38:560 (6) – Active note on end would be more powerful.
  9. 01:58:113 (1) – Really short spinner. Is it really necessary? You could map what it covers honestly.

Good luck.~
fattypikachu
507 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
fattypikachu
Hi! ^_^ (Note: anything in blue or with nothing has been fixed.)

Miryle wrote:

M4M~ I'm pretty late with this, sorry! Don't worry, I take a long time with modding too :roll:

Beginning

Easy

  1. 00:14:232 (3) – Note here? I don’t get why there’s a pause. Huh? There is a note here.
  2. 00:19:008 (3) – Super scrunched up. I don’t really think it looks nice. ;-; Make it more fluid? Also strong note on this downbeat that’s on a slider end. Not really a fan of that. ._.
  3. 00:36:919 (3,4) – Blanket is pretty off. It's hard, but I tried .-.
  4. Okay so most of the strong beats that you yourself emphasize with snares and finishes etc are on downbeats, which really isn’t satisfying to play.
  5. 01:16:322 (1) – NC cuz downbeat. Do this for pretty much everywhere in the map unless there’s a stronger note that should be new combo’d.
  6. 01:28:262 (3) – I get it. I really do. But this many reverses is a bit monotonous. Consider adding more sliders with reverses? I hate 3/2 spacing, but there's nothing much I can do...
  7. 02:07:665 (3) - ^
  8. 02:11:247 (3,4) – Blanket looks off.
  9. 02:16:023 (3,4) – Blanket here perhaps? Nope. It's too far away.

    Overall not a fan of the slider shapes, but that’s personal preference.

Hard

Hard

  1. 00:23:635 (3) – DS inconsistency.
  2. 00:31:247 (2,3) – Make these more similar.
  3. 01:02:516 (3) – Straighten this out a bit more.
  4. 01:09:754 (2,3,4,5) – Err, a straight line may look nicer. Same for 01:10:948 (2,3,4,5). Ended up putting a wavy line first.
  5. 01:13:784 (4,5,2) – Overlap. Actually, there were a lot of overlaps before, but because of that I was too lazy to mention them all so I’ll say it now: So. Many. Overlaps. It’s a hard difficulty so you can switch up DS a bit to avoid them.
  6. 01:25:874 (1,1,1,1) – Why is this the only instance of this section’s every note being a new combo? That was a suggestion from another modder, but I get your point. I put in an NC every 2 beats for those sections.
  7. 01:28:262 (1,1,1,1) – Why all new combos? Same at: 01:35:426 (1,1,1).^
  8. 01:38:560 (6) – Active note on end would be more powerful.
  9. 01:58:113 (1) – Really short spinner. Is it really necessary? You could map what it covers honestly.Meh. I like spinners, but I see your point.

Good luck.~
Thanks for the mod, Miryle! :)
Arutsuki
630 posts
Joined December 2015
Arutsuki
hi from q

sound wave
•00:09:456 (3) - you used sliders to map this sound, you should keep that up. same sounds should be mapped the same
•00:11:844 - I see you're trying to prioritize sounds here but that doesnt mean mapping only those sounds exclusively. this way it just looks like a rhythmically wrong normal with weird difficulty settings
•00:13:933 (2) - slider starts should be on important sounds, such as 00:14:232 -. putting it on a non-prioritized or a quieter sound than the sliderend/return point can be misleading and doesnt go well with the music
•00:16:620 - you could easily just put 1/2 sliders here, makes it more fun to play
•00:19:381 (2,4) - no sound on these, delete
•00:40:501 - this doesnt seem to suitable for kicksliders imo, jsut use regular 1/2's
•00:57:814 (5,6,7) - these have almost the same spacing despite being different rhythm, space (7) more. it's better to read if you do
•overall the map just lacks structure and has loads of rhythm errors. I reckon you should watch some of these. They'll help ya understand better.

good luck
runnigwind
9 posts
Joined February 2016
runnigwind
hi from q

sound wave
•00:09:456 (3) - you used sliders to map this sound, you should keep that up. same sounds should be mapped the same Yep
•00:11:844 - I see you're trying to prioritize sounds here but that doesnt mean mapping only those sounds exclusively. this way it just looks like a rhythmically wrong normal with weird difficulty settings
•00:13:933 (2) - slider starts should be on important sounds, such as 00:14:232 -. putting it on a non-prioritized or a quieter sound than the sliderend/return point can be misleading and doesnt go well with the music Fixed
•00:16:620 - you could easily just put 1/2 sliders here, makes it more fun to play This definitely works but not of how I wanted it to.
[/color]•00:19:381 (2,4) - no sound on these, delete No from what I am hearing there definitely are sounds here.
•00:40:501 - this doesnt seem to suitable for kicksliders imo, jsut use regular 1/2's Yep
•00:57:814 (5,6,7) - these have almost the same spacing despite being different rhythm, space (7) more. it's better to read if you do. Yep
•overall the map just lacks structure and has loads of rhythm errors. I reckon you should watch some of these. They'll help ya understand better.





Thank you soo much for this and I definitely saw what you had to offer!!! I will continue to redo this map until get this down
bezbashn
181 posts
Joined June 2015
bezbashn
hi from q

[Loki's Insane]
00:34:307 - Slider is starting on the tick without strong beat. If you still want to keep it do it like this.

00:38:635 - Same thing but with the end of the slider. Like this.

01:18:710 - Starts here 01:18:747
01:24:381 - New combo
01:30:053 - New combo till 01:31:098
01:31:247 - new comdo
01:58:598 - Slider starts here

[Runnigwind's 16-bit Sound Wave]
Just one note here.
Pls lower those hitsounds my ears bleeding.
Lokidoki
374 posts
Joined June 2015
Lokidoki

bezbashn wrote:

hi from q

[Loki's Insane]
00:34:307 - Slider is starting on the tick without strong beat. If you still want to keep it do it like this. Yeah

00:38:635 - Same thing but with the end of the slider. Like this. No, it's pretty strong.

01:18:710 - Starts here 01:18:747 Yeah
01:24:381 - New combo Yeah
01:30:053 - New combo till 01:31:098 True
01:31:247 - new comdo Yeah
01:58:598 - Slider starts here Actually not, this is a different sound there.
up
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59261
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11888,30902,59559,108514,119261
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Owari to Hajimari no Oto
TitleUnicode:おわりとはじまりのおと
Artist:Umeboshi Chazuke
ArtistUnicode:梅干茶漬け
Creator:fattypikachu
Version:Loki's Insane
Source:VOEZ
Tags:rayark mobile ios android 梅干茶漬け runnigwind Lokidoki おわりとはじまりのおと
BeatmapID:1160060
BeatmapSetID:490887

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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-NekoNya
195 posts
Joined June 2015
-NekoNya
Hai~ this is the M4M you asked for! Sorry for late mod because my internet crashed. ;w;

Hard

    1. 00:20:202 (1) - The slider here. I think you should end it here: 00:21:098 - Because there's still a note there. and adding a circles seems a little too hard for a Hard diff.
    2. 00:23:187 (2,3) - The jump here. Since this song has a constant BPM i think you shouldn't make jumps. and the diff is only Hard. i think you should just move this 00:23:784 (1) - to 296x 256y for nice DS
    3. 00:30:202 (1,2,3) - This may seem a little hard. because this is a spaced stream and it's curved also.
    4. 00:30:948 (5) - move this to 240x 64y
    5. 00:35:127 (5,6,1) - DS is weird. Fix it. It's doesn't have the same DS.
    6. 00:54:530 (2,1) - ^^^
    7. 01:09:754 (2,3,4,5) - This may seem a little too hard for Hard.
      01:10:948 (2,3,4,5) - ^^^
      01:12:142 (2,3,4,5) - ^^^

      {8}01:55:725 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the curve

    Insane (Since i'm not fond for old map styles i'm still going to try and mod it.)
  • 00:42:590 (7) - move this to 240x 304y so that the triangle is shaped correct. Then stack 00:43:486 (3) - to that.
  • 00:56:919 (4,5,6,7) - Fix the curve of the stream.
  • 00:58:560 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
  • 01:12:590 (3,1) - Fix blanket.
  • 01:23:187 (4,5,6,7,1) - fix the stream's curve.
Loki's Insane (I hope you understand my simple explanation) >.<
00:19:307 (2) - It's much better if you just blanket this then move 00:19:605 (3,4,5,6,7) - according to the DS.
00:39:008 (1) - too much overlapping makes the map uglier. move this somewhere else.
00:41:993 (7,8) - Blanket for more fun.
00:44:978 (9,1) - blanket these properly.
01:38:933 (1) - End the slider here 01:40:202
01:56:545 (9,10,11,12) - Fix the curve.
02:08:486 (1) - Remove NC
02:18:113 (4) - I think there's no need for a 1/8 slider here.

Runnigwind's 16-bit Sound Wave (The title is Dope. xD)
00:10:053 (1) - NC
00:16:620 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is a little strange aesthetic... i think you should put more Distance to each note here.
00:19:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream is not recommended. You can just do a normal stream.
00:20:799 (2) - Move this somewhere else. It overlaps with the previous notes.
00:30:799 (1,2,3,4) - This overlaps! move them further from each other.
00:48:560 (3) - This overlaps. Move this upward a little
00:51:993 - Put note here.
00:55:426 (1) - this one's DS is different from the next parts. please align them perfectly.
00:58:262 (7) - This overlaps and the slider is ugly. i hope you can think of other slider styles.
01:01:247 (9) - Overlaps. seems ugly if you ask me. You can change this into a note.
01:06:620 (4) - move this to 300x 160y
01:08:262 (3) - overlaps and the slider's end is overlapping
01:10:202 (5) - move this to 144x 192y
01:11:396 (5) - ^^^^
01:15:874 (5) - the distance is soooo small please move this to somewhere else.

Uguuuuu... I'm finally finished~
i tried to match your mod so i think this is alright. And i only do short maps ;w;
Wow! nice map. just a little more mods and i think this'll get ranked~ :)
runnigwind
9 posts
Joined February 2016
runnigwind
Runnigwind's 16-bit Sound Wave (The title is Dope. xD) Thanks
00:10:053 (1) - NC Yep
00:16:620 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is a little strange aesthetic... i think you should put more Distance to each note here. It's on purpose

00:19:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream is not recommended. You can just do a normal stream.^^^
00:20:799 (2) - Move this somewhere else. It overlaps with the previous notes. Yep
00:30:799 (1,2,3,4) - This overlaps! move them further from each other. If you are talking about 00:33:187 then I moved that instead but if not then I didn't.
00:48:560 (3) - This overlaps. Move this upward a little ok
00:51:993 - Put note here. Made into a slider instead.
00:55:426 (1) - this one's DS is different from the next parts. please align them perfectly. Yep

00:58:262 (7) - This overlaps and the slider is ugly. i hope you can think of other slider styles. :cry: Poor slider, but I changed it to a normal rounded slider.

01:01:247 (9) - Overlaps. seems ugly if you ask me. You can change this into a note. Nope just a strait up nope.
01:06:620 (4) - move this to 300x 160y I changed it to 324x 168y

01:08:262 (3) - overlaps and the slider's end is overlapping Yep

01:10:202 (5) - move this to 144x 192y I fixed all of them

01:11:396 (5) - ^^^^ ^^^^^^

01:15:874 (5) - the distance is soooo small please move this to somewhere else. On purpose.



Thank you for spending you time so you could help me be a better mapper.

Sincerely Runnigwind (why is this a letter)
fattypikachu
507 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
fattypikachu
Hello! ^-^ (Note: anything in blue or nothing has been fixed.)

-NekoNya wrote:

Hai~ this is the M4M you asked for! Sorry for the late mod because my internet crashed. ;w; No worries! Can't worry about things out of your control.

Hard
  1. 00:20:202 (1) - The slider here. I think you should end it here: 00:21:098 - Because there's still a note there. and adding a circle seems a little too hard for a Hard diff. ...You realize this is a spinner, right? Anyways I still did this.
  2. 00:23:187 (2,3) - The jump here. Since this song has a constant BPM I think you shouldn't make jumps. and the diff is only Hard. I think you should just move this 00:23:784 (1) - to 296x 256y for nice DS
  3. 00:30:202 (1,2,3) - This may seem a little hard. because this is a spaced stream and it's curved also.
  4. 00:30:948 (5) - move this to 240x 64y
  5. 00:35:127 (5,6,1) - DS is weird. Fix it. It doesn't have the same DS. Slight mistake on my part. Fixed.
  6. 00:54:530 (2,1) - ^^^ ^
  7. 01:09:754 (2,3,4,5) - This may seem a little too hard for Hard. No, I think this is fine.
    01:10:948 (2,3,4,5) - ^^^ ^
    01:12:142 (2,3,4,5) - ^^^ ^

    {8}01:55:725 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the curve

Insane (Since i'm not fond for old map styles i'm still going to try and mod it.) Is this actually an old map style? I never thought it was.

  1. 00:42:590 (7) - move this to 240x 304y so that the triangle is shaped correct. Then stack 00:43:486 (3) - to that.
  2. 00:56:919 (4,5,6,7) - Fix the curve of the stream.
  3. 00:58:560 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
  4. 01:12:590 (3,1) - Fix blanket.
  5. 01:23:187 (4,5,6,7,1) - fix the stream's curve. I'm pretty sure the curving is good, but I tried.

Uguuuuu... I'm finally finished~
I tried to match your mod ,so I think this is alright. And I only do short maps ;w;
Wow! nice map. just a little more mods and I think this'll get ranked~ :)
Thanks for the mod, -NekoNya! :)
Lokidoki
374 posts
Joined June 2015
Lokidoki

-NekoNya wrote:

Loki's Insane (I hope you understand my simple explanation) >.<
[*]00:19:307 (2) - It's much better if you just blanket this then move 00:19:605 (3,4,5,6,7) - according to the DS. This is actually better to stay like this due to flow being nicer this way.

[*]00:39:008 (1) - too much overlapping makes the map uglier. move this somewhere else. Welp, yeah. I messed up a bit

[*]00:41:993 (7,8) - Blanket for more fun. They are?

[*]00:44:978 (9,1) - blanket these properly. sure

[*]01:38:933 (1) - End the slider here 01:40:202 Sure

[*]01:56:545 (9,10,11,12) - Fix the curve. It's fine.

[*]02:08:486 (1) - Remove NC Yeah

[*]02:18:113 (4) - I think there's no need for a 1/8 slider here. There is due to song being faster.
Thanks for the mod.
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8,176,109754,2,0,P|40:192|64:192,2,45.0000017166138
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248,184,110799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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344,344,111844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,360,111993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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88,248,112889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,113038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,136,113187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,113336,2,0,B|96:80|96:80|128:64|128:64|168:64,1,90.0000034332277
216,72,113784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,78,113858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,79,113933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,74,114007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,32,114530,6,0,P|408:80|424:152,1,102.000001945496
472,184,114978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,240,115127,2,0,P|440:288|432:352,1,102.000001945496
352,296,115575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,115725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,312,115874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,296,116023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,116172,2,0,P|136:280|136:344,1,102.000001945496
112,352,116545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,354,116619,1,0,0:0:0:0:
61,348,116694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
39,335,116768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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48,168,117217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,112,117366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,117516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,117590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,117665,2,0,P|184:72|216:64,1,51.0000009727478
248,24,117963,2,0,P|280:16|312:16,1,51.0000009727478
360,56,118262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,76,118336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,101,118411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118486,12,0,119307,0:0:0:0:
104,104,119605,6,0,P|96:144|112:224,1,120
168,160,120053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,120202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,32,120351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,32,120501,2,0,P|200:72|232:88,1,60
320,144,120799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,120948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,56,121098,2,0,P|360:64|384:80,1,60
320,144,121396,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,72,121545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,208,121695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,80,121844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,121993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,144,122142,5,0,0:0:0:0:
488,144,122217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,144,122292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,296,122441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,336,122590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,288,122739,2,0,B|312:304|264:288,1,60
312,216,123038,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,296,123187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,296,123336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,123486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,123635,2,0,P|176:336|208:360,1,60
168,144,123933,2,0,P|144:120|120:104,2,60
208,216,124381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,124530,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,124605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,124680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,224,124829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,124978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,125127,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,125277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,136,125426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,32,125575,5,0,0:0:0:0:
488,248,125725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,328,125874,2,0,P|432:312|384:312,1,60
336,344,126172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,126322,2,0,P|256:272|272:232,1,60
296,136,126620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,126769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,104,126919,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,104,126993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,104,127068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,280,127217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,136,127366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,127516,2,0,P|128:184|96:152,1,60
200,104,127814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,127963,2,0,P|76:69|72:24,1,60
200,104,128262,2,0,P|224:121|253:128,1,60
272,128,128486,6,0,L|312:128,3,30
368,64,128859,6,0,P|376:104|392:128,1,60
424,136,129083,2,0,P|432:176|424:208,1,60
392,216,129307,2,0,P|360:232|344:264,1,60
320,328,129605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,129754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,304,129904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,240,130053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,232,130127,6,0,P|152:200|144:160,1,60
120,144,130351,2,0,P|120:104|128:72,1,60
224,128,130650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,48,130799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,200,130948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,40,131098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,131247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,131322,6,0,P|368:176|368:208,1,60
376,232,131545,2,0,P|416:216|448:216,1,60
424,296,131844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,131993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,352,132142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,248,132292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,132441,6,0,L|232:152,4,30
288,96,132889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,83,132963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,79,133038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,84,133112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,133187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,103,133261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,103,133336,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,96,133410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,80,133486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,64,133560,2,0,L|16:40,3,30
48,120,133933,6,0,P|48:160|32:192,1,60
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144,208,134530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,134680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,134829,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,134978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,336,135127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,135277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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240,72,135799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,72,136023,6,0,L|312:152,1,60
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440,221,137291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,250,137366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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394,345,137888,5,0,0:0:0:0:
364,344,137963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,349,138037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,360,138113,2,0,L|280:368,6,15
256,192,138560,12,0,141098,0:0:0:0:
Plush
60 posts
Joined August 2012
Plush
Hey! Thanks for doing a GD for my map. I happen to like this song too and I want to help it out but I think I would suck at GDs (I run out of ideas pretty quick) so I'll do a mod xD

[Beginning]
  1. 01:10:351 (1) - add Finish at slidertail? you were doing Finish every two downbeats (and the song's tone is high at that part) maybe more interesting?
Actually I can't mod easy ;w; so, uh hi

[Normal]
  1. 00:28:859 (3) - I think a reverse is somehow not quite fit, how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198262
  2. 00:31:844 - this feels empty, feels weird when you have triples here 00:30:948 (1) and there seems to be a strong note? also there's nothing here 00:32:142 (3) so I think something like this will be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198277
  3. 00:43:486 (2) - remove clap? sounds weird to me somehow
  4. 01:15:874 (3) - remove whistle at slidertail?
  5. 01:53:486 (4) - this note is not strong enough, not stronger than 01:53:336 (3) so I think changing the order would be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198449 (whistle at 3 start, clap at 4)
  6. 02:02:889 (3) - remove clap at slider tail? stronger hitsound makes it feel like there will be no notes shortly after
[Hard]
  1. 00:47:963 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - whoa this is too hard, it's 7 1/2 singletaps at once at 201bpm xD try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198534
  2. 01:03:336 (6) - remove this? there doesn't seem to be a strong note there, or make 01:02:889 (5) reverse sliders, I think it's a little bit hard
To be honest this map plays like Light Insane, since the song is 201bpm? I think maybe you can make this difficulty a little bit harder (increase distance?), make this Light Insane, and then create Hard or find a Hard GD, it's like... much harder than normal, but ehh idk, hi

[Ending]
AR 8.5 or 9? AR8 is too low for 201bpm I think
This map is a little bit too hard for the Star Rating, since the streams are 201bpm but the jumps are very close. Usually players at around this skill level (201bpm bursts/streams) can do jumps quite far enough, so maybe add some jumps on some parts? Just Ctrl+Shift+S ing also works sometimes xD I think this rhythm pattern can be mapped to around 5 stars :o
  1. 00:36:919 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - it seems you're mapping different instruments here 00:36:919 (4,5,6,7) and here 00:38:113 (1,2,3,4) - maybe turn 00:37:814 (7) into a circle?
  2. 00:41:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - at AR8 this is completely unreadable ;w; the zigzag pattern would be much easier to read http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198655 but if you change the AR high enough (to 9?) you can keep the pattern
  3. 00:47:963 (2,3,4) - I think all these sliders should be 1/2 instead of 1/4
  4. 00:50:053 (1) - It's really hard for players to know when to stop here, I think two doublereverse sliders are better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198712
  5. 01:15:127 - here you can create a jump to increase Star Rating http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198769
  6. 01:28:113 (6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - feels like technical part you get when playing on extra map ;w; try something easier like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198800
  7. 01:28:710 and 01:29:008 - remove clap, I think it feels weird in this pattern
  8. 01:20:799 (1) - the part near here, I think this can be mapped like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198851
  9. 01:31:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as above 00:41:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) mod
  10. 01:37:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - potential jump here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198868 (made the map 4.8* but not really harder)
  11. 01:50:948 and 01:53:336 - please make most downbeats clickable, there's also a strong note on both
  12. 01:53:486 (4) - move it to the big white tick? since it's really strong I think leaving later parts empty for a while feels good
  13. 01:50:948 add the note on the white tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198909
[Loki's Insane]
  1. 01:10:426 (1) - I think there's nothing on the blue tick in the map, so make it not clickable? 01:10:575 (2) this blue tick has something on the song, so Ctrl+G? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7199027
  2. 01:11:545 (8,1) - Ctrl+G ^
  3. 01:15:277 (2,3,4) - potential jump?
  4. 01:17:516 (1) - end the spinner at the white tick and start the second spinner at the blue tick, since starting the spinner doesn't emit sounds http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7199010
  5. 02:10:053 (7,1) - Ctrl+G - same with 01:10:426 (1)
  6. 02:11:247 (7,1) - Ctrl+G ^
To my surprise I think this map is easier to play than Ending ver xD

[Runnigwind's 16-bit Sound Wave]
CS 4.5? CS 4.9 is too small, I think songs rarely go near CS5 even at this star rating xD
HP drain 9?.. I think 7 would be much better
I think AR9 also works better than AR8.5!
  1. 00:07:963 (1,2) - 2 overlaps with 1, it was hard to read, Move 2 up or down
  2. 00:13:635 (1) - make the slider end on the white tick
  3. 00:20:202 (1) - make this a circle with Finish hitsound?
  4. 00:30:799 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you're mapping this to the other instrument in the song, but I think the normal instruments override that instrument by large margin, since 00:31:247 - suggest there's a note there, but I think maybe it's ok as is
  5. 00:44:083 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make all of these further away from each other? mainly the early ones because players build up a lot of heat here 00:40:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) so the players expect to click the notes fast (especially if they're near)
  6. 00:59:307 until 01:19:904 - sv too fast, could be a little bit shocking, in timing point try 1.2 - 1.3?
  7. 01:47:366 (1) - make this slider shorter and end it on the white tick
  8. 01:48:502 - for this timing point I suggest lowering the sv, same as 00:59:307
  9. 01:48:560 (2) - I don't think there's a reason for SV to be directly really high from the previous one here
  10. 01:59:307 - don't use 2.0x slider velocity at timing, I think 1.5x is enough : 1.8 is already too fast; the main SV is 1.4 so if you set to 2.0x in timing then it's 2.8x, use 1.5x so it's 2.1x
  11. 02:04:083 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this pattern is very hard to read at AR 8.5. Consider AR 9 / changing patterns
  12. 02:17:814 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't turn on all the hitsounds here? :/
Round 2 mod (this post was updated)
  1. 00:57:963 (6) - change to hitcircle instead of a slider, doesn't seem to be anything here? 00:58:038
  2. 00:59:605 (3) - ^
  3. 01:02:516 (2) - I don't think hitsound in a blue tick is a good idea
  4. 01:15:127 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm suggests jumps, imo. I know it's intentional from previous mod but consider making the space bigger
  5. 01:28:411 - 01:28:784 - 01:29:232 - from the spacing you created on the map, players won't know there's an empty part there. map those ticks using circles, especially 01:28:411 because I think the player expects a note there. or create spacing so that the players know there's nothing on the tick.
  6. 01:29:605 (1) - please end the pattern on a white tick.
  7. 01:38:859 (12) - end is not snapped to any tick?
I hope this mod helps, thanks again for doing a GD on my map! xD btw I shot a star already, nice song and BG lol
fattypikachu
507 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
fattypikachu
Hi! ^_^ (Note: Anything in blue or nothing

Plush wrote:

Hey! Thanks for doing a GD for my map. I happen to like this song too and I want to help it out but I think I would suck at GDs (I run out of ideas pretty quick) so I'll do a mod xD

[Beginning]
  1. 01:10:351 (1) - add Finish at slidertail? you were doing Finish every two downbeats (and the song's tone is high at that part) maybe more interesting?
Yeah, fixed, along with some others.
Actually I can't mod easy ;w; so, uh hi

[Normal]
  1. 00:28:859 (3) - I think a reverse is somehow not quite fit, how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198262 I don't like having 2 1/2 circles next to each other, so it's changed to a single circle.
  2. 00:31:844 - this feels empty, feels weird when you have triples here 00:30:948 (1) and there seems to be a strong note? also there's nothing here 00:32:142 (3) so I think something like this will be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198277 Sure, though I changed the shape of 2.
  3. 00:43:486 (2) - remove clap? sounds weird to me somehow
  4. 01:15:874 (3) - remove whistle at slidertail?
  5. 01:53:486 (4) - this note is not strong enough, not stronger than 01:53:336 (3) so I think changing the order would be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198449 (whistle at 3 start, clap at 4)
  6. 02:02:889 (3) - remove clap at slider tail? stronger hitsound makes it feel like there will be no notes shortly after
[Hard]
  1. 00:47:963 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - whoa this is too hard, it's 7 1/2 singletaps at once at 201bpm xD try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198534I don't like your fix though... changed it to something different.
  2. 01:03:336 (6) - remove this? there doesn't seem to be a strong note there, or make 01:02:889 (5) reverse sliders, I think it's a little bit hard
To be honest this map plays like Light Insane, since the song is 201bpm? I think maybe you can make this difficulty a little bit harder (increase distance?), make this Light Insane, and then create Hard or find a Hard GD, it's like... much harder than normal, but ehh idk, hi Not gonna change the Hard difficulty, but I will make an Advanced difficulty. I feel like this plays like a Hard... though this is someone who enjoys playing Light Insanes...

[Ending]
AR 8.5 or 9? AR8 is too low for 201bpm I think
This map is a little bit too hard for the Star Rating, since the streams are 201bpm but the jumps are very close. Usually players at around this skill level (201bpm bursts/streams) can do jumps quite far enough, so maybe add some jumps on some parts? Just Ctrl+Shift+S ing also works sometimes xD I think this rhythm pattern can be mapped to around 5 stars :o
  1. 00:36:919 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - it seems you're mapping different instruments here 00:36:919 (4,5,6,7) and here 00:38:113 (1,2,3,4) - maybe turn 00:37:814 (7) into a circle? No, I like having it as a slider because of the pattern it makes with 1, 2 and 3
  2. 00:41:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - at AR8 this is completely unreadable ;w; the zigzag pattern would be much easier to read http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198655 but if you change the AR high enough (to 9?) you can keep the pattern
  3. 00:47:963 (2,3,4) - I think all these sliders should be 1/2 instead of 1/4 They're supposed to be kick sliders, though I changed them to 1/8ths.
  4. 00:50:053 (1) - It's really hard for players to know when to stop here, I think two doublereverse sliders are better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198712
  5. 01:15:127 - here you can create a jump to increase Star Rating http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198769 Not really a fan of deliberately increasing SR, though I'll change it slightly.
  6. 01:28:113 (6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - feels like technical part you get when playing on extra map ;w; try something easier like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198800
  7. 01:28:710 and 01:29:008 - remove clap, I think it feels weird in this pattern Yeah, have no idea why I put it there.
  8. 01:20:799 (1) - the part near here, I think this can be mapped like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198851
  9. 01:31:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as above 00:41:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) mod
  10. 01:37:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - potential jump here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198868 See the one for 01:15:127 -(made the map 4.8* but not really harder)
  11. 01:50:948 and 01:53:336 - please make most downbeats clickable, there's also a strong note on both
  12. 01:53:486 (4) - move it to the big white tick? since it's really strong I think leaving later parts empty for a while feels good
  13. 01:50:948 add the note on the white tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7198909
I hope this mod helps, thanks again for doing a GD on my map! xD btw I shot a star already, nice song and BG lol Huh? Why the strike?
Thanks for the mod, Plush!
_sponez
75 posts
Joined January 2015
_sponez
Hello! I am from mod queue.

  • [Beginning]
  1. 00:41:396 (2) - Move it to x=160 and y=376.
  2. 01:17:516 (3,1) - The distance here must be the same as here 01:15:127 (3,1).
  3. 01:29:605 (4) - It must begin here 01:29:456 (4), becouse it active note.

    [Hard]
  4. 00:14:232 (1) - Move to x=168 and y=136.
  5. 00:16:620 (5) - Move to x=120 and y =96.
  6. 00:34:381 (2) - Move to x=263 and y=233. It looks better.
  7. 00:45:874 (2,3,4) - Do not lie on the line.

    [Runnigwind's 16-bit Sound Wave]
  8. 00:08:859 (1) - Move end to x=280 and y=116.
  9. 00:13:635 (1) - The slider is too long.
  10. 00:30:799 (1,2,3,4) - White tick - a strong note. On these sliders do not want to press, when they are on the red ticks. This prevents play during. But I do not know what to do.
  11. 01:03:187 (5,7) - The ends need to align.
  12. 01:04:830 (1,2,3) - Other space. Of course, if the idea is not so.
  13. 01:15:575 (4,5) - Better stack.
  14. 01:29:754 - Add circle. (active note)
  15. 01:51:247 - ^.
  16. 01:52:963 (4) - According to music does not fit.
  17. 02:02:889 (5,7) - Overlap is ugly.

    Good luck!
Ohwow
1,193 posts
Joined July 2013
Ohwow
sry late m4m, From my roasting queue

[Easy]
00:35:127 (1,3) - blanket?
sorry can't mod low difficulties that well.

[Normal]
00:13:038 (3,4) - blanket would be nice here. sliders are a bit too curved imo
00:15:426 (3,4) - ^
01:05:277 (3,5) - try to make this farther apart
01:22:292 (3) - make this slider less curvy
02:07:665 (3,4) - make them symmetrical (copy 1 slider, paste &rotate 180)
02:17:814 (5,6,7) - try to make the equal spacing, and maybe make the jumps wider instead of 90 degrees
02:18:411 (7) - NC?

[Advanced]
00:50:053 (1) - Make this slider curve the other way so it point towards the next circle.
01:18:113 (3,4,5,6,7) - make this prettier pls https://i.gyazo.com/d7465328b5eb4d65bb0 ... d8d304.jpg
01:31:695 (4,5,6,7,8) - ctrl+G? optional
I notice a lot of slight spacing inconsistencies here, like 01:24:381 (3,4) - has slightly smaller spacing than 01:24:530 (4,5) , 01:25:874 (1,2) - has smaller spacing than 01:26:471 (3,4) , 01:28:113 (8,1) - is slightly overlapping. It would look a lot cleaner if spacing was consistent
00:57:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overlaps but 01:37:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - doesn't. Also i don't know why you separate them here 01:38:113 (3,4) - when all the sounds there are the same
01:38:859 - should be clickable imo
02:15:127 (2) - place at x419 y 151 for better flow (so that previous slider point towards this circle)
02:17:814 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks messy again.

[Hard]
00:19:008 (1,2,3,4) - Make the angles of the jump equal (60 degrees) https://i.gyazo.com/e9b7c2399f935f9a9b5 ... a58c17.jpg
00:30:202 (1,4) - slightly overlapping
00:48:560 (6) - Why not also make this a 1/2 double like 00:47:963 (2,3,4,5) -
00:54:829 (1) - rotate this a bit more counter-clockwise so it has more flow towards the next slider.
01:13:933 (1,2) - blanket can be slightly better
01:15:127 (1,2,3,4) - zig zag can be slightly better. place (4) at x394 y299
01:17:516 (6) - NC maybe? (same with other difficulties)
01:22:292 (4) - ^
01:31:844 (5) - ^
01:34:232 (5) - ^
02:17:217 (6) - ^
02:06:471 (1,2) - blanket can be slightly better
02:12:292 (5,1) - weird flow

[Ending]
Change difficulty name, only the hardest difficulty is allowed to have a custom difficulty name
00:17:814 (1,2,3) - make the sliders blanket the (3). It would look a lot nicer
00:38:262 (2) - make slider less curvy
00:45:277 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't know why you decide to miss out on the 1/2 beats all of the sudden
00:57:814 (5,1) - stack?
00:57:814 (5,1) - blanket could be better
01:09:157 (1,1,1) - I don't really support this NC spam. NC should (most of the time) emphasize new combos. (same with the second kiai)
01:38:859 - Still think that this red tick should be clickable, it's literally the loudest noise in that little section there.

[Loki's Insane]
00:15:426 (5,6) - Blanket maybe?
00:52:142 (5,6,1) - spacing is too small compared to 00:51:695 (2,3,4) -
01:17:516 (1) - This part should be mapped instead of a spinner, it's like the most intense part of the whole kiai
01:26:919 (5,6,7,8) - These repeating sliders should all start at the white ticks since those are the loudest parts.
01:28:113 (1) - start at white tick as well.
01:34:157 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - This whole thing needs to be shifted 1 tick forward. I don't know why 01:34:456 (5,5,6) - are all starting at blue ticks when the white ticks are the ones that need to be emphasized
01:53:336 (5) - NC
01:55:725 (5) - ^
02:07:665 - should be clickable imo
02:08:486 (1) - delete NC

[Runnigwind's 16-bit Sound Wave]
Not too good modding gimmicks, i'll try my best
00:11:247 (1,1) - stack?
00:13:635 (1) - end at white tick (not blue tick)
00:33:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - remove the hitsounds :/
00:42:889 (1,2,3,4) - make this some sort of square pattern instead of a triangular pattern (since you are dealing with 4 sliders)
00:52:441 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - should be 5-note streams
00:58:262 (7) - NC (velocity change)
01:00:053 (4) - should start at the red tick since that's where the sound starts.
01:03:784 (7,8) - make the blanket like how you did for 01:04:082 (8,9) -
01:16:172 - there should be a triple here
01:28:113 - there is still sound to be mapped in this little break
01:29:829 - ^
01:34:680 (8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - spacing is inconsistent in this part of the stream
01:37:814 (7) - NC
01:38:411 (11) - Should just be 2 circles, not a slider. No change in music so it shouldn't be different than 01:37:814 (7,8,9,10) -
01:47:366 (1) - I suggest you do something else instead of this slider, cause theres a sound on this white tick here 01:47:963 - but, the slider only goes up to the blue tick, which is really weird.
01:48:560 (2) - NC the slider at least (velocity change), but imo I think you should do 4 3/4 sliders on the white ticks to make those sounds clickable
01:51:247 & 01:51:396 - missing a beat here
01:53:784 - stream should start here
01:54:381 (8,9,10) - spacing change is too much, it doesn't reflect the song. and it makes 01:54:754 (1) - look like it's part of the stream.
02:00:352 (5) & 02:04:382 (1) - - unrankable slider.
02:01:397 (5,6) - should make it blanket each other.
02:13:486 (7,8) - inconsistent spacing within the stream.
02:14:008 (2) - start at red tick.
02:17:217 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - split stream is too split :/

That's it. gl.
polka
1,125 posts
Joined March 2014
polka


[General:]

  • The sound effects are loud and kind of annoying. Turn them down and maybe match them to the music better.
[Beginning:]
  • Call this easy. Definitely not for beginners x)
    00:38:113 (4) - Make this a circle. Slider is kinda unattractive and isnt really mapping anything anyway.
    00:47:665 (3) - You dont need these sound effects on this slider.
    01:21:098 (1) - Finish it on white tick. Red tick to next object gap is awkward.
    01:22:292 (2,4) - Overlap is unattractive
    [list:1337]01:49:754 (1,2) - ^
01:33:038 (1,1) - Blanket needs work.
01:49:754 - Remove SV change
01:54:530 (1) - Start kiai here instead
02:18:486 (1) - Silence spinner end.[Normal:]
  • 00:21:396 - Remove SV Change
    00:47:963 (1) - These samples are kinda pointless. They feel misused here.
    00:52:441 (1,1,1,1) - <3
    01:38:859 (3) - Spinner works better.
    02:12:441 (3) - Ehhhhhh no I think this slider might be DQable but I'm not 100% sure.
fattypikachu
507 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
fattypikachu
Hi! ^-^ (Note: Anything in blue or with nothing has been fixed.

Dron4ik_G wrote:

Hello! I am from mod queue.

  • [Beginning]
  1. 00:41:396 (2) - Move it to x=160 and y=376.
  2. 01:17:516 (3,1) - The distance here must be the same as here 01:15:127 (3,1).
  3. 01:29:605 (4) - It must begin here 01:29:456 (4), becouse it active note.I'm trying to go for the notes that come every 1.5 beats, like you'll see in the Hard diff.

    [Hard]
  4. 00:14:232 (1) - Move to x=168 and y=136.
  5. 00:16:620 (5) - Move to x=120 and y =96.
  6. 00:34:381 (2) - Move to x=263 and y=233. It looks better. I moved it, but somewhere else.
  7. 00:45:874 (2,3,4) - Do not lie on the line.

Ohwow wrote:

sry late m4m, From my roasting queue

[Easy]
00:35:127 (1,3) - blanket?
sorry can't mod low difficulties that well.

[Normal]
00:13:038 (3,4) - blanket would be nice here. sliders are a bit too curved imo
00:15:426 (3,4) - ^
01:05:277 (3,5) - try to make this farther apart
01:22:292 (3) - make this slider less curvy
02:07:665 (3,4) - make them symmetrical (copy 1 slider, paste &rotate 180)
02:17:814 (5,6,7) - try to make the equal spacing, and maybe make the jumps wider instead of 90 degrees Decided to make a triangle out of it instead
02:18:411 (7) - NC?

[Advanced]
00:50:053 (1) - Make this slider curve the other way so it point towards the next circle.
01:18:113 (3,4,5,6,7) - make this prettier pls https://i.gyazo.com/d7465328b5eb4d65bb0 ... d8d304.jpg Tried to make a good-looking pattern originally... oh well that didn't turn out well.
01:31:695 (4,5,6,7,8) - ctrl+G? optional Doesn't look right to me, so I'll skip.
I notice a lot of slight spacing inconsistencies here, like 01:24:381 (3,4) - has slightly smaller spacing than 01:24:530 (4,5) , 01:25:874 (1,2) - has smaller spacing than 01:26:471 (3,4) , 01:28:113 (8,1) - is slightly overlapping. It would look a lot cleaner if spacing was consistent
00:57:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overlaps but 01:37:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - doesn't. Also i don't know why you separate them here 01:38:113 (3,4) - when all the sounds there are the same I hear this a 2 sets of 3 beats, hence the separation.
01:38:859 - should be clickable imo
02:15:127 (2) - place at x419 y 151 for better flow (so that previous slider point towards this circle)
02:17:814 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks messy again.

[Hard]
00:19:008 (1,2,3,4) - Make the angles of the jump equal (60 degrees) https://i.gyazo.com/e9b7c2399f935f9a9b5 ... a58c17.jpg
00:30:202 (1,4) - slightly overlapping There's no overlap... maybe it's from an earlier version.
00:48:560 (6) - Why not also make this a 1/2 double like 00:47:963 (2,3,4,5) - An earlier mod told me having 7 taps in a row was too tiring, so I put that there.
00:54:829 (1) - rotate this a bit more counter-clockwise so it has more flow towards the next slider.
01:13:933 (1,2) - blanket can be slightly better
01:15:127 (1,2,3,4) - zig zag can be slightly better. place (4) at x394 y299
01:17:516 (6) - NC maybe? (same with other difficulties)
01:22:292 (4) - ^
01:31:844 (5) - ^
01:34:232 (5) - ^
02:17:217 (6) - ^ Fixed all of them. Does seem to follow earlier/later patterns now that I see it.
02:06:471 (1,2) - blanket can be slightly better
02:12:292 (5,1) - weird flow Brought the slider out, it should be fine now.

[Ending]
Change difficulty name, only the hardest difficulty is allowed to have a custom difficulty name Maybe, if more modders say so.
00:17:814 (1,2,3) - make the sliders blanket the (3). It would look a lot nicer
00:38:262 (2) - make slider less curvy
00:45:277 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't know why you decide to miss out on the 1/2 beats all of the sudden Me trying to emphasize the melody. Might change if more people say so.
00:57:814 (5,1) - stack?
00:57:814 (5,1) - blanket could be better
01:09:157 (1,1,1) - I don't really support this NC spam. NC should (most of the time) emphasize new combos. (same with the second kiai)
01:38:859 - Still think that this red tick should be clickable, it's literally the loudest noise in that little section there.

PolkaMocha wrote:



[General:]

  • The sound effects are loud and kind of annoying. Turn them down and maybe match them to the music better. I guess you're right after listening to them for a while, especially on the lower difficulties.
[Beginning:]
  • Call this easy. Definitely not for beginners x) Trying to reference the title (Hajimari => Beginning) Might change it if more people say so.
    00:38:113 (4) - Make this a circle. Slider is kinda unattractive and isnt really mapping anything anyway.
    00:47:665 (3) - You dont need these sound effects on this slider.
    01:21:098 (1) - Finish it on white tick. Red tick to next object gap is awkward.
    01:22:292 (2,4) - Overlap is unattractive
    [list:1337]01:49:754 (1,2) - ^
01:33:038 (1,1) - Blanket needs work.
01:49:754 - Remove SV change
01:54:530 (1) - Start kiai here instead That feels way too early to start it.
02:18:486 (1) - Silence spinner end.[Normal:]
  • 00:21:396 - Remove SV Change
    00:47:963 (1) - These samples are kinda pointless. They feel misused here. Trying to use them in the same fashion as Hard and Ending.
    00:52:441 (1,1,1,1) - <3
    01:38:859 (3) - Spinner works better.
    02:12:441 (3) - Ehhhhhh no I think this slider might be DQable but I'm not 100% sure. Tried to strech the front out, hopefully it works.
Thank you all for your mods! :)
runnigwind
9 posts
Joined February 2016
runnigwind
[Runnigwind's 16-bit Sound Wave]
CS 4.5? CS 4.9 is too small, YepI think songs rarely go near CS5 even at this star rating xD
HP drain 9?.. I think 7 would be much better Changed to 8
I think AR9 also works better than AR8.5! Yep
[/color]
00:07:963 (1,2) - 2 overlaps with 1, it was hard to read, Move 2 up or down That mess up the flow pattern
00:13:635 (1) - make the slider end on the white tick Yep

00:20:202 (1) - make this a circle with Finish hitsound?
00:30:799 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you're mapping this to the other instrument in the song, but I think the normal instruments override that instrument by large margin, since 00:31:247 - suggest there's a note there, but I think maybe it's ok as is I think it is ok too.

00:44:083 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make all of these further away from each other? mainly the early ones because players build up a lot of heat here Yep

00:40:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) so the players expect to click the notes fast (especially if they're near) ok I think I did this?

00:59:307 until 01:19:904 - sv too fast, could be a little bit shocking, in timing point try 1.2 - 1.3? I did this on purpose if too many people want me to change it I will, but not now.
01:47:366 (1) - make this slider shorter and end it on the white tick Yep
01:48:502 - for this timing point I suggest lowering the sv, same as 00:59:307 I did do this though
01:48:560 (2) - I don't think there's a reason for SV to be directly really high from the previous one here
01:59:307 - don't use 2.0x slider velocity at timing, I think 1.5x is enough : 1.8 is already too fast; the main SV is 1.4 so if you set to 2.0x in timing then it's 2.8x, use 1.5x so it's 2.1x ^^^ same as 00:59:307^^^
02:04:083 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this pattern is very hard to read at AR 8.5. Consider AR 9 / changing patterns ^^^ at the beggining
02:17:814 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't turn on all the hitsounds here? :/ ok


Thank you Plush :)
runnigwind
9 posts
Joined February 2016
runnigwind
[Runnigwind's 16-bit Sound Wave]
00:08:859 (1) - Move end to x=280 and y=116. This messes up flow
00:13:635 (1) - The slider is too long. No it starts and ends on a strong note.
00:30:799 (1,2,3,4) - White tick - a strong note. On these sliders do not want to press, when they are on the red ticks. This prevents play during. But I do not know what to do. These notes are on the sounds in the background and are definitely playable
01:03:187 (5,7) - The ends need to align. That is very specific but ok.
01:04:830 (1,2,3) - Other space. Of course, if the idea is not so. If the idea is not so what? I don't understand the question. I also don't have a 01:04:830 but I have a 01:04:829 did you mean something else?
01:15:575 (4,5) - Better stack. No I don't think this works here.
01:29:754 - Add circle. (active note) The end of the slider takes care of this
01:51:247 - ^.^
01:52:963 (4) - According to music does not fit. I have changed this.
02:02:889 (5,7) - Overlap is ugly. Ok


I can see that our mapping styles are very different, but thank you for your help Dron4ik_G :)
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